MaNan OS: Sun And The Moon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My first try, it is so random. Don't throw stuff at me after reading this.😆 criticism appreciated.

Chachi Chacha have called Manik for dinner after he saves Rishabh.

~Sun And The Moon~

The slow music playing in the background and the soft sound of the birds chirping...there I was standing alone in the middle of the night staring out of my window. It was a full moon today. I had liked looking at moon for as long as I had fallen in love with fireflies.

The softness, the tenderness and yet, the glow makes it look so powerful. The weird thing is that even though it lights up the night sky, the glow is not it's own.Is it? It is that of the Sun, which it just tends to reflect.

Jeez...how much I was in love with the relation these two shared--the Sun and the Moon. Not a really easy one to describe. I always failed to put it in words as to why I like it. The unsaid relation these two shared---Moon glowing because of the light that Sun owned. This is how pure relations are supposed to be. The one in which the other one glows because of the light of the other one.

But today the whole feeling while looking at it was different. I was staring t the moon and not appreciating the beauty of it's relation with the Sun but thinking about someone---someone who I think makes me glow.

Yes, I think he makes me glow...not too sure about it. Was I ? how can I like Monster...he has ill treated me enough to even think that I can fall for him out of all the guys left in the big place called Earth.

The moments I had spent with him flashed across my eyes in a jiffy and what remained was him singing while sitting right next to Rishabh. That moment seemed to make other memories blurred...not because they were any less humiliating or because I have forgiven him for all that he did to me THEN, but because I wanted to make them go blurred because of what he did for my Rishabh.

Shit, was even Rishabh mine now? I feel helpless,don't I when I look at my brother going through all the pain and yet I choose to stand still and just weep. Rishabh was not mine anymore. The Monster had saved his life...Rishabh was now HIS. And that is why Manik was more mine now.

While turning around and seeing Manik sitting with my Chachi Chacha on the table having(rather hogging) chole and smiling (shit,was I dreaming?) I could only pass a smile. He made it to the dinner just because of Rishabh. How he says, it wasn't Rishabh but my fault that he couldn't make it at time for singing.We were never friends, we are not enemies anymore. And now I realise we were always the Sun and the Moon.

He is my Sun and I am his Moon. Today when I stand here it again strikes me, I glow because of him now however weird the reasons and explanations may be.

----Zoha😃

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Rhydima thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG absolutely loved it.. great job👏 👏 👏
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This is soo unfair here I'm trying to catch some sleep and u put up this beautiful OS..I'm sure now I won't be able to sleep today!! 😳
Girl, how well have u written this..absolutely loved it especially the last few lines gave me so much feels..Keep writing more yaar 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rhydima

OMG absolutely loved it.. great job👏 👏 👏


thanks dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .ishqbulava.

This is soo unfair here I'm trying to catch some sleep and u put up this beautiful OS..I'm sure now I won't be able to sleep today!! 😳

Girl, how well have u written this..absolutely loved it especially the last few lines gave me so much feels..Keep writing more yaar 👍🏼

thank u so much Greeshu (I hope I can call u that) means a lot to me <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a beautiful written piece of writing 😃
totally loved it!
The words, feelings, emotions, everything is described beautifully
This is what you call short and sweet
keep writing 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is really amazing OS. I loved how you showed the relation between Sun and Moon and also how you connected it with fire flies. Nandini's pov was penned down so beautifully and this OS is so relatable to the show too. Fabulous👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The last few lines of this OS gave me the jitters! That was brilliant gurl! Hope to see you writing more on this show😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing OS👏 I just loved the whole sun and moon concept, Nandu the moon and Manik the sun makes so much sense😳 I really loved the last line, it was beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww that's really very sweet ... Sun and moon ... Yes infact they r like sun and moon :)

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