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Awesome Finally they Kissed

how I wish that could've happened in the show. Anyways I visualised it in my mind

Really a sweet, lovely OS <3ed it. Please do write more..more on ManaN

Originally posted by: RKDramebaaz

*Puts all my homework away and reads the FF*

I am so done with life. Can you please continue this? I think I have decided what I want in life...

Okay, jokes apart...this was fabulous Mais! I am going crazy over their slightest interaction and here you give me a full-fledged kiss! What am I suppose to do of this heart now? This was fantastic! I know this is an OS but damn, write another one! And another one! And another one again!

Ye main kya dekh rahi hoon? Are my eyes deceiving me? Is it actually you who's commenting on my OS? 😲

*reads the line about homework again*

Yup, definitely you 😆

They be teasing us with going so close but not doing the deed! That was initially my plan as well but while writing, I just went ahead and did it! I take all the credit for your racing hearts which want more xD Mera dimag is a bit out..dunno what I'm saying. But aaah! It feels SO DARN GOOD to see you commenting on my OS again! 😳 InShaAllah will write more, hopefully they'd be good enough for you comment again! 😃

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Oh damn! ☺️☺️

eeeks! Planning to set the forum on fire with this OS or what?

I love the conversation between Nandini and her "friend"

Don't we all those conversations with our sub-conscience! Now don't look around all innocent😛... That was her sub-conscience right? Oh God, I am doubting myself now

But damn gurl! This is some OS you have here! I love the way you have portrayed the Nandini! Slightly bold and impulsive! Wouldn't you love to see this in any show? When the girl initiates the physical proximity! The way you have not really included much of Manek, makes me think the next part might be more on him? Who knows, the reigns are in your hand after all!

But you killed me when you wrote about how he lifted her with one arm!

*DEAD*

No words! I actually died and just rolled on the carpet! 😆

Aaah! Intimacy, why you do this to me?

I think every girl day dreams about jawlines <3

It is something about that feature

Okay, I shall stop now! Just update ASAP! Now, this very minute!

Do it!

Pari☺️

No no, my intentions were completely pure 😳 Ab aag lag gayi tou main kya karoon? xD

I have conversations with myself all the time..but here, Nandini's friend was a legit person 😆 The girl we saw in the first episode? The one whose patch with her boyfriend happened cuz of Nandini and Nandini got her fireflies afterwards. Yeah..wohi girl.

I am someone who loves physical proximity and doesn't mind PDA, much. And I honestly don't like that only males, specially on Indian telly, have the right to initiate intimacy and the female's job is to shiver and be shy. Girls are as much humans as boys, we have the same needs and desires...we are just taught not to show them much. Before this takes a feminist note, what the main idea behind this OS was Nandini giving in to her desires and forsaking all logical thoughts to do just as she desired to do.

You be right, next part is focused on Manik :P

Manik LURVES lifiting Nandini and the guy has enough strength to do so with one hand..she's so tiny in front her..gaaah! HOT!!

Parth's jawline turns me on..I never really noticed jawlines before him xD

Sabar bacha, sabar. Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai 😛

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

it was amazing dear

the difference...yet the closeness...the thought of kissing him...the jawline☺️...the intimacy...the lingering sensation😳...SPLENDID is the word👏

continue soon😛

thank you so much!! 😳

Originally posted by: ArchanaRM

Awesome Finally they Kissed

how I wish that could've happened in the show. Anyways I visualised it in my mind

Really a sweet, lovely OS <3ed it. Please do write more..more on ManaN

Lol, they finally kissed somewhere 😆 Show mein tou I guess we'd be only having teases and never the real deal...I had to satisfy myself in some way at least! Glad you liked it! 😳

wooow,it was awesme,their desires,their feelings very well described!!!!!!! loved it😊

it waaas awesome👏

Stop it. Mais. No.

Just Loved it <3
Their kiss
Continue soon :)

Dear Mais, won't u write a sequel to it? I've waiting for 12 days! Kab update karogi?