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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991
It was a nice One shot way to go gal.. it look so beautiful that i was kept glued to it...

thank you so much! 😳

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

. . . Wow.

That was amazing, I swear. Okay, 'amazing' sounds lame for this masterpiece, but I can't find a word that would do justice. Thank God you're writing a sequel! I can't wait to read it, and I'm not kidding. Just... I can't even comment anymore, this is too much.

*dead*

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
amazing os

thank you 😊

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo
. . . Wow.
That was amazing, I swear. Okay, 'amazing' sounds lame for this masterpiece, but I can't find a word that would do justice. Thank God you're writing a sequel! I can't wait to read it, and I'm not kidding. Just... I can't even comment anymore, this is too much.
*dead*

Haila! "masterpiece"?! 😲 But eeeps! Your comment! Made me so so so SO happy! Thank you for such kind words! Yeah..the sequel-ish will be up soon-ish, In Sha Allah! 😳

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: lostmymusic.

It's really a rare occurrence to see a female being all passionate, in a positive way. Nandini is a tigress..I can see her doing this. That would totally make Manik go all stunned and speechless and only Nandini has the copyright to make Manik feel that 😉

Thanks for the comment! Sorry, I don't send out PMs..

seriously!! I can so imagine her doing that...this girl has tremendous power..she can transform from an innocent little baby to a wild cat any moment😳 no wonder Manik can't control himself around her
PM na sahi koi nhi...just continue it...will love to read more😊

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Sparks-galore

@Sparks-galore

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: lostmymusic.

UFF! Just the kind of comment I was hoping for while writing! I'm such an angsty writer that sexy doesn't come all that easy to me...so happy that efforts were appreciated! Glad! I loved the intensity the pair shared and the fact that she initiated it.. wild! <3

I just want a scenario like this in the show I'll fall off my chair, I promise! Maybe pen an FF too :D

#ProperMaNanKissNeeded Amen to that!

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

*Puts all my homework away and reads the FF*

I am so done with life. Can you please continue this? I think I have decided what I want in life...

Okay, jokes apart...this was fabulous Mais! I am going crazy over their slightest interaction and here you give me a full-fledged kiss! What am I suppose to do of this heart now? This was fantastic! I know this is an OS but damn, write another one! And another one! And another one again!

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Oh damn! ☺️☺️

eeeks! Planning to set the forum on fire with this OS or what?

I love the conversation between Nandini and her "friend"

Don't we all those conversations with our sub-conscience! Now don't look around all innocent😛... That was her sub-conscience right? Oh God, I am doubting myself now

But damn gurl! This is some OS you have here! I love the way you have portrayed the Nandini! Slightly bold and impulsive! Wouldn't you love to see this in any show? When the girl initiates the physical proximity! The way you have not really included much of Manek, makes me think the next part might be more on him? Who knows, the reigns are in your hand after all!

But you killed me when you wrote about how he lifted her with one arm!

*DEAD*

No words! I actually died and just rolled on the carpet! 😆

Aaah! Intimacy, why you do this to me?

I think every girl day dreams about jawlines <3

It is something about that feature

Okay, I shall stop now! Just update ASAP! Now, this very minute!

Do it!

Pari☺️

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

it was amazing dear

the difference...yet the closeness...the thought of kissing him...the jawline☺️...the intimacy...the lingering sensation😳...SPLENDID is the word👏

continue soon😛

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ForeverForU

seriously!! I can so imagine her doing that...this girl has tremendous power..she can transform from an innocent little baby to a wild cat any moment😳 no wonder Manik can't control himself around her
PM na sahi koi nhi...just continue it...will love to read more😊

I love it how Nandini has this childlike innocence to her but at the same time when provoked, she can rip the other person to shreds with her unwavering strength. I love it how she's grown to be. Despite facing so many ugly behaviors from her peers, she is still the girl who loves the fireflies and looks forward to when they'd glow for her soul mate <3

Yea...soon. Pakka se..soon! 😆

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