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cont.......................................😊n😡😡😡 for leaving us at tht point
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U R GR8 ConTINUE FAST


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it's really good story....plz post fast.....


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awwww jinku...i cant believe u have written it kiddo....u r so creative must say👏👏...luv it...m waitin 4 the next part....n esp after the point u left us at...
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Ok I'll post another part... there goes the last of my written parts... Tomorrow I'll have to start writing again😆

Part 6

As soon as they reach Switzerland and go out of the airport, Angad takes Kripa to a doctor.

Doctor: Well, she's fine. I would advise against taking her on any flights for a few days.

Angad: Thank you, doctor.

Angad takes Kripa to their hotel, Powder. He goes to the receptionist and asks her for the card to the room 6021. She gives him the card and he goes with Kripa.

Kripa: Angad?

Angad: Yeah?

Kripa: I've been thinking, and I – I guess I've been really – really – I insulted you despite all the things you've done for me.

Angad: That's OK, Kripa. I guess I need to repent for what I did to you.

Kripa: No, Angad. I've already forgiven you for that.

Angad: I love you.

Kripa smiles. She goes and hugs him.

Kripa: Angad?

Angad: Hmm?

Kripa: How soon can we go skiing?

Angad: No way are you going skiing, Kripa!

Kripa: Why?

Angad: You've got your safety to think of! I won't let you!

Kripa: Angad?

Angad: How about you skiing, and me watching?

Angad smiles and takes her outside. Angad gets skis and Kripa gets jackets. They both go on the slopes.

Angad: 1-2-3!!

Kripa smiles at seeing Angad skiing. Then she sees that he is about to crash into a tree!

Kripa: Angad! ANGAD! Watch out –

Angad sees the tree and moves to the side to avoid it. He loses his balance and goes tumbling down the mountain!

Kripa: ANGAD!!

Kripa runs down the mountain and looks around, but doesn't see Angad! Then she sees his hand poking out of the ground. She runs to him and grabs his hand. She tries to pull him out. She finally does it. Angad gasps for air.

Kripa: If that was skiing, then I'm never going to do it!

Angad laughs and they both go back to the hotel. Kripa comes to Angad with a mug.

Angad: What's this?

Kripa: Hot chocolate. Drink it. You'll feel better.

Angad starts to sip it.

Angad: Kripa?

Kripa: Yeah?

Angad: This is really tasty.

Kripa smiles.

Back in Mumbai

Prithvi takes Aliya to the cinema.

Prithvi: So which movie do you want to watch?

Aliya: That horror film.

Prithvi: Sure! Two tickets for Horrorfest.

Aliya and Prithvi take the tickets and go inside. Prithvi buys popcorn and they go inside. After the movie is over, Prithvi takes Aliya to a restaurant.

Aliya: Hmm… Nice place, Prithvi!

Prithvi: Let's get a big pizza.

Aliya: OK.

Prithvi: I'll go to order. It might take some time, there's a long line.

Aliya: That's fine.

Prithvi goes. Aliya is humming when somebody sits down at her table.

Aliya: Excuse me? Who are you?

Girl: Don't you remember me?

Aliya: No.

Girl: Well, you should. Remember Kripa's friend?

Aliya: Oh! It's you! Harshini!

Harshini smiles.

Harshini: That's right.

Aliya: So, what's happening?

Harshini: Nothing much. But a lot could happen to your life.

Aliya: What?

Harshini: I just want to say something.

Aliya: What's that?

Harshini: Don't get too close to Prithvi.

Aliya: Excuse me?

Harshini: He's not a nice guy. He flirts with lots of girls.

Aliya: He doesn't seem like that sort of person.

Harshini: You can't judge a person by first sight.

Aliya: Look, he's just a friend. I don't care if you like him; just don't bother me like this.

Harshini is shocked to see that Aliya can tell that she is after Prithvi.

Switzerland

Kripa is walking in their hotel room. She goes to get something from the cupboard and falls!

Hehe another cliffhanger😈

Edited by JinK - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks

that was very very good.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😊Plzz continue!! U did a great job!!
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Originally posted by: JinK

Ok, I'm posting it. 😛


<P><B><SPAN>Part 5<?:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p><SPAN> </SPAN></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi and Aliya go to the caf.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>This is where I used to come.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya: </SPAN><SPAN>It?s a nice place.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi and Aliya sit down at a table.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>What?ll you have?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya: </SPAN><SPAN>I guess, I?ll have a coffee with whipped cream on top?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>Black coffee for me? I need to stay awake to talk to you!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya laughs.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi calls the waiter over and tells them their order.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya: </SPAN><SPAN>You know, Prithvi, you?re really a nice guy.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>Are you just trying to embarrass me?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya: </SPAN><SPAN>No, really. Other guys I?ve met ? they run after me, try to impress me. You?re not like that. You?re really decent.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>They take their coffees. Prithvi takes a sip.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>Well, for now I?ll try impressing you with this caf. How?s your coffee?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya: </SPAN><SPAN>Mm? one of the best I?ve ever had!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>See? Told you.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya: </SPAN><SPAN>Prithvi?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>Yeah?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Aliya: </SPAN><SPAN>Friends?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Prithvi: </SPAN><SPAN>Most definitely.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>In the morning ? actually, 5.40 am<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p><SPAN> </SPAN></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad wakes up with Kripa next to him.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Mm? Why does it seem like I?m forgetting something? Oh no ? we have a flight to <?:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:country-region w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">Switzerland</st1:place></st1:country-r egion> at 7.30!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa doesn?t say anything.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Zz? Mm? What?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Go take a shower.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>What, now? <o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Yes, now.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>So mean of you ? you shouldn?t wake up a ? hmm? zz? pregnant woman like this? she might? yawn!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa, get into the bathroom!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>No.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad picks up Kripa and puts her in the bathroom and closes the door. When she opens her eyes she?s shocked to see herself in the bathroom, but then gives in and takes a shower.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad is waiting, and Kripa comes out dressed in two towels.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>So you finally decided to come out of the bathroom!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>What?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>You only took hour, you know, Kripa.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Hey, don?t rush me ? I?m pregnant, you know!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Oh, God ? now she is going to use that on me for the next seven months.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa laughs and hits him with a pillow. (She?s still sleepy you see!)<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Anyways, I?ll go take a shower now ? you get dressed here.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad goes inside the bathroom. He comes outside 15 minutes later and sees Kripa fast asleep on the bed after changing! He picks her up, puts her feet in a pair of shoes, and carries her downstairs and to his car. He puts her inside and drives to the airport. She remains fast asleep, and then wakes up when they reach the airport.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Where are we?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>We?re at the airport.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Airport? But why?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Remember? Switzerland?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Ohhh?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Now get out of the car, I?m bringing our clothes. <o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>You did all this just last night? Packing, tickets, seats, visas?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa, it?s no big deal. It?s really easy for me. Now get out of the car.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa goes out of the car. They both pick up their suitcases and go inside. They get their passports checked and stamped, and then they see that their flight has been delayed and they go to the lounge.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa, you?re hungry.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>No, I?m not.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>I know you are. <o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Anyway, there?s nothing here. All the shops are closed from 5am-7am.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad goes to each shop and sees that they are, in fact, closed. Angad is frustrated and then sees a vending machine. He goes to it and sees that it has lots of chocolate bars and a sandwich, and some juice packets.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa doesn?t like chocolate. I?ll get her that sandwich and some juice.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>He puts coins in the vending machine and gets the food. He takes it to Kripa.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Won?t you have some?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>No.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Why?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Your health is much more important to me than my own. Now eat it all!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa smiles and eats the sandwich and drinks the juice. She looks up at Angad and smiles. He smiles back at her. Then they hear the boarding call for their flight. They go to the gate and board their flight. <o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa, you can have the window seat.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>No, you take it.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>No, you take it.<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Kripa: </SPAN><SPAN>Angad?<o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad sits in the aisle seat and looks at her. She finally takes the window seat. Then, later on in the flight, she suddenly faints! <o:p></o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN><o:p> </o:p></SPAN>
<P><B><SPAN>Angad: </SPAN><SPAN>Kripa!<o:p></o:p></SPAN>

Hehe... I'm so mean na... leaving you at this point...😈



Mean u are not mean u are a devil... lolz just kidding that was AWESOME! cant wait 4 the next part! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#49
that was awesome too... i think u love cliff hangers
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good job jinko, I just all of it today.

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