Pyar Hai, Nafrat bhi: Part 9 ADDED!

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Another new fanfic! This idea just occured to me. I know it's not too good, but please read!

The story starts with Angad coming down the stairs.

Naina: Angad? Why aren't you getting ready?

Angad: Why, mom? What's so special today?

Naina: It's your wedding with Mishty, of course! What else!

Angad is surprised.

Angad: Mom, I - I guess I forgot. Anyways, the wedding is at 10 o'clock, and it's only 11 in the morning now. Mind if I leave?

Naina: Sure. Just be back early.

Naina goes. Angad leaves for a jog in the park. He is jogging when he sees a bench. He stops and sits on it, and his mind wanders back to when he went to Goa with Kripa. Then he thinks of how she tricked him for money, and two-timed him with Prithvi. He gets angry.

Angad: Why did you do this, Kripa? If you wanted money, then why did you pretend to love me and then go to Prithvi? I'm lucky that Anita, Harshini and Mom finally told me the truth about you. I hate you, Kripa. I hate you.

A motorcycle rider is sitting on their bike, wearing a helmet. They take their helmet off - and it's Aliya. She is shocked to hear what Angad is saying.

Angad gets up and goes jogging again. Aliya rides the bike home in a daze and gets off, still thinking about what she heard. She goes inside and is going up the stairs when she hears Anita's voice.

Anita: Masi, I still can't believe that our plan was successful.

Naina: Be quiet, Anita. Speak low. Anybody could hear us.

Anita: Why do you worry, Masi? Now our plan is successful, Angad will marry Mishti and -

Naina: Well, I suppose that there's no harm in celebrating. The way we got that Kripa out of Angad's life... First we made Angad believe that Kripa had wanted 25 lakhs from Kartik, and blackmailed him. Then we made him believe that she was two-timing him with Prithvi. It was just too much!

Aliya has recorded all this on her camcorder. Anita turns around, away from Naina, and gives her the thumbs-up! Aliya realizes that Anita knew that she would be listening, and therefore made this plan.

Meanwhile, Kripa is leaving Prithvi's house.

Prithvi: Kripa, where are you going? You know it's not safe for you to be driving!

Kripa: Please, Prithvi. You've done so much for me. Today it's your sister's wedding. Let me go.

Prithvi looks at her sadly as she leaves.

Angad is combing his hair when Aliya walks in.

Aliya: Angad, I need to talk to you.

Angad: Please, Aliya. I need to change now. Can we talk later?

Aliya: It's urgent. But - at least watch this tape before you go.

She leaves her camcorder there and goes. Angad presses play and sees the entire video there. He is shocked, angry, and goes outside. Naina tries to stop him, but he storms past her.

Angad calls Prithvi while driving.

Angad: Kripa? Where is she?

Prithvi: What do you want with her now?

Angad: It's none of your business, OK.

Prithvi: Nor is it any of your business as to where Kripa goes. OK? Today is your marriage with Mishty. And -

Angad cuts the phone and continues driving.

Meanwhile, Kripa is also driving. There is an oil puddle on the road, which her car's tires slip on and her car swerves out of control. She screams. Angad sees her car out of control and he follows her. He follows her car to the cliffside, and tries to stop it. But the car is out of control and passes right off the cliff!

P.S. I might just continue. If I could have my way, I'd make Angad fall off the cliff - but, oh well. That's the way it is.😆

Edited by JinK - 20 years ago

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suganain thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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it's so awesome you have got to continue👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏👏👏

awesome JInku!...luved it!

but hey dont have ur way this time..dont make angad of the cliff plzzz...wont sum1 4m da Godzilla gang suffice😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey jink it is great plz continue......😊
JinK thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I would continue, but it seems like nobody likes it😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Jink, thats an awesum fan fic!......i can't wait to read the next part but plz don't kill kripa😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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its very very good

please continue

JinK thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Will continue tomorrow! Thoda sa suspense is always good!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was great👏...but please dont make kripa die...
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
Cant wait 4 the next part!

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