Aashiq banaya apne-fanfic 4 Zaib-kripa - Page 3

Part-5.....The next morning.
Kripa:Zaib did'nt cum yet?
Dileep:Zaib will get up only in the afternoon.
Surprisingly Zaib cums.
D:its already 12?oh!i slept
Kripa:no uncle.Its not u got up late.Zaib got up early
Dileep & naina r surprised.
D:what made u get up early?
K looks at Z.Z was tensed.K smiles
K:2day onwards everyday zaib wil cum with me 4 jogging
D:nice habit.zaib,learn sum good habits from kripa
Kripa smiles.Z thinks:what does she think of herself?

THey go 4 jogging.Zaib gets tired.
Kripa:zaib,don't b lazy.cum...
Z:no way.i'm fed up
K:oh..this guy...anyways i liked this place.I'm fed up of the life in USA.
Z was surprised:u r fed up of the stlylish life in usa?surprise!
K:ok,cum ...run...get up zaib...
Z runs along with K with half mind.
Z thinks:this girl is bossing.i'll show her who i'm .
He hits her leg with his leg.K falls down.Z laughs.
K:zaib,help me 2 get up.
while Z holds her hand 2 get her up,she pulls him down.When Z falls K laughs.
K:Zaib,don't b naughty with me.i'm also smart
Z was embarassed.
K:Zaib,i did'nt hav good friends at all.Even my paents did'nt hav enuff time 2 spend with me.Lets stop fighting & b friends
K extends her arm.Zaib holds her arm with a smile.K smiles.

great part!! plz continu soon waiting for the next part!!

Take car eof urself
Laiba

Part-6.......Kripa's mobile rings.K takes it:hi prithvi.
P:how r u?
K:I'm fine
P:how is the new place?
K:Very nice place.
K hears a music.
K:ok.i'l call u later.


K follows the music.it reaches her Zaib's room.
Z was singing Aashiq banaya…
K:zaib
Z:hi kripa.i was composing music
K:u sing well
Z smiles:music is my life.but no 1 accepts me as a singer
K:what?how can others don't accept u as a singer?u sing well
Z:others tel that I sing well.but I cud'nt become a famous singer.i did'nt even try 2 .bcoz every1 tells that it's a waste.i did'nt become anything.so I lost my luv Mishti.
K feels sad 4 Z.
K:I don't think music is a waste.i luv it very much
Z smiles.

Dileep tells kripa while all r having food:zaib is a lazy guy.he does'nt study well.all the time music which brings nothing.why can't he look after our business?
D turns 2 Z:zaib,u learn from kripa.how smart she is.she manages everything.Suryabhan has told me how kripa manages their business.
Z becomes moody & he goes away without having food.
Naina:what was the use of telling this while having food?my son cud'nt eat well
D:oh!kripa,plz teach zaib business.
K:uncle,each person has his own taste.Zaib's taste is music.we've 2 encourage that
D:but whats the use of that beti?
K:its not useless uncle.ppl always admire gud singers.i heard Zaib's song.he is very much talented.in Usa singers & musicians r having gr8 demand
D:is it?
K:ya uncle.Zaib is gud as a singer & a music director.i promise that b4 returning,I'll make him a well known singer.
D-N smile.
What wil kripa do?

awsome part plz continue soon

Take care of urself
Laiba

nice! U've got to CONTINUE! I love it!

yaar fanfic achi hai to continue bhi karo na 😆

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Part-7………Kripa looks 4 zAib.she sees him sitting worried.
K:whats the matter zaib?
Z:matter?nothing.what r u talking about?
K:I no u r worried about what ur dad said.but u've 2 prove that ur dad is wrong.ur dad shud b prowd 2 b ur dad.
Z:that'll never happen kripa.i'm an unlucky person.
K:that r u simply thinking.ya man…cum smile.
Z smiles.
K:gud boy


Zaib-kripa go out.Z sees his friends.They tell each other:that's the girl he told about.zaib is so lucky.tho mishti left him,he got a better girl
Z-K cum near 2 them.
Z:this is kripa
K:hi guys !I no each of u.zaib has told about u all..that…u guys r always trying 2 impress girls.but always fails.
They were embarrassed.
1 whispers 2 Z:when u got a pretty gf,see ur headweight…
Z smiles.
They were thrilled 2 K.
K:since u guys r zaib's friends,I'll consider u all as my friends
They were thrilled:really?
K:ya…..
They all jump with joy.


A party.Unexpectedly K announces:Zaib is going 2 entertain with his song
All r shocked including zaib.

part-8.....Kripa:cum zaib,sing plz...we all r waiting 2 hear ur sweet voice.
Zaib hesitates.K calls him with her eyes.He goes.
He sings:Aashiq baNAYA.....hE DREAms of his luv scenes with kripa.
Every1 liked his performance very much.they all went around him appreciating...
Dileep's & naina's eyes rose.
D tells kripa:thanks a lot beti.its bcoz of u ,i realsed my son's talent..how he can shine...
K smiles.
D hugs zaib.
D:i'm sorry son.i did'nt no that u can shine like this
Z:kripa,thanx a lot
K winks:welcum
Z smiles


Zaib gets offers 2 sing outside,slowly he becomes popular.

Zaib tells his friends:actually i was lying that kripa luvs me.
They were shocked:then?
Z:i dunno whether she luvs me or not
They:we r sure that she luvs u
Z smiles.
They:on the fewb 14,u giv her a valentine's gift & open ur heart
Z smiles.


Zaib goes 2 a shop.He sees a smALL TEDDY BEAR WITH A HEART WRITTEN "I LUV U'".zaib buys that along with the valentine's day card.
Z goes home.there he was surprised 2 see a party.it was kripa's b'day party.he was surprised:2day is kripa's b'day?
Z givs that gift 2 kripa.K smiles:i'm surprised that u new that 2day is my b'day.bcoz b4 sum time only i revealed that 2 every1 here,u bought b'day gift too.surprise.Zaib,will u sing a song 4 me 4 my b'day?
Z:sure
He sings:kyunki itna...:{kyunki}
K:wonderful zaib
Z thinks:kripa did'nt no that i was opening my heart b4 herthru this song

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