Aashiq banaya apne-fanfic 4 Zaib-kripa

This is my new fanfic. The character Sketch....


Zaib:Interested in music.Wants 2 b a rock star.But an average student.Crazy about luv.

Misti:Zaib's lady luv.

Kripa:The girl who changed Zaib's outlook

Prithvi:Kripa's childhood friend

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Part-1…Zaib runs hurrily 2 a place.there Misti was waiting 4 him.
She was angry:why did u become late?
Z:I'm sorry misti.My watch is slow.
M:nice excuse.
Z:plz don't b angry misti
M did'nt mind him
Z becomes sad.
It starts raining.
He buys sum flowers from the shop nearby & goes near M.M did'nt care.
Z kneels down & gives it 2 misti.M did'nt receive.
Z sings:marjava…[Aashiq banaya apne}
M smiles & takes the flowers from his hand.
They both dance 2 this song.

Zaib on the lap of naina.
N:u really luv Misti?
Z:yes mom.i want 2 marry her
N smiles

Ph rings.Naina picks up the ph.
N:Zaib,misti' ph
Z runs 2 take it
M:zaib,I want 2 see u urgently
Z:what misti?
M:u cum fast 2 the park
Z:ok,I'm coming

Zaib reaches with a smiling face.Misti comes.Z goes & hugs her.M was standing as a doll.
Z:why misti?
M:what?
Z:nothing…but a difference.u r standing as a stranger,not as my gf
M:that's true.bcoz from this moment onwards I'm not ur gf
Z:what?
Z was shocked


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Part-2......Zaib:u r joking right?i no that u r ...
Misti:no,i'm serious
Z:misti?
M:yes.its better 2 b away from each other
Z:what r u telling?
M:i mean it
Z:what do u mean?
Z keeps his srms on her face
M:leave me zaib
Z:u don't like me touching u
M:no,since u r nobody 2 me now
Z:what did u say?look at my eyes & tell
M:zaib...my dad has fixed my wedding with another guy.
Z was shattered:what?then what did u say?
M:i said ok
Z:what?but we were planning 2 marry each other no
M:marriage with u?i was not all serious about it.but ya i did'nt mind marrying u.but when a better proposal comes how can i reject?u r just a degree.not so bright.but my guy is smart.has got a nice job in states.its natural that when a better guy comes we will go 4 ...
Z:enuff misti.plz don't tell anything more.plz don't go away misti
Tears cum out from his eyes
M:u r boy.then also u r crying?shame zaib.my guy is not cheap 2 cry like this like girls
Z wipes his tears:misti...plz don't go
M:i'm sorry zaib.bye....
Misti goes.
Zaib goes crying 2 naina.he hugs her:mom....i lost everything
N:what happened beta?
Z:misti left me 4 another guy.he's very brilliant,she said.not a muff like me
N:don't cry zaib.that girl is ignorent.Everything happens 4 gud.u'll get a better girl who understands u.she'll luv u
Z:but she won't b my misti
N:but she'l b better than misti

Months passed....Zaib becomes really an irresponsible & useless guy.Goes out with friends.Drinks,smokes,comes home late,wakes up according 2 his wish.His parents r upset about it

Zaib's dad Dileep gets a letter from his childhood friend
Suryabhan.He is thrilled.
D:naina,Suryabhan & gayathri r going 4 a gulf tour.That time his only daughter kripa is coming 2 stay here
N:really?we've seen her when she was a baby
D:ya,now she has grown big
N:she is brought up at USA.will she like this place?
D:she is Suryabhan's & Gayathri's daughter.she'll hav gud culture
N smiles.
WAIT 4 KRIPA 😛

yaa plz cont am so happy that kripa is coming n i dont kno y 😆 😆 😆

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its turning out good