Aashiq banaya apne-fanfic 4 Zaib-kripa - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz go on im dyin 2 c wut happens when kripa cums 2 india
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-3.....Zaib is drinking in the club near 2 his house.His mind is full of misti's parting words.
He weeps.song of his painful memories:thadap....
He goes near the window.he sees a girl coming out of the car & walking.
He remembers naina's words that he'l get a girl who wil luv him.
He goes 2 his friends:hey,a pretty girl...
His friends:wow!where?
Z:look out thru the windows

They look.they see no1.they become irritated:no1 is there
Z looks:she was there.i saw her.she had soft hair.
1 pal:soft hair?4 that did u touch & feel?
Every1 laughs.
Z:jeans & top
1 guy:u r drunk.so u feel so
Z:no,defenetely i saw.i feel that this is the girl whom my mom talked about.
THey feel pity 4 him.
They:yes zaib,u'll get a better girl than mishti who cheated on u.but we do not no who that girl is

It was kripa whom zaib saw.she is given a grand welcome by zaib's parents.
Naina:u've become so big.that time u were tiny.a cute baby.i used 2 carry in my arms.
Kripa smiles:i miss those period eventho i don't remember that
Dileep:kripa beti,u r brought up at USA.will u like this place
K:no,there is no question about it.bcoz i already liked this place
All smile.
K:very beautiful place.naturality is filled up in this air.Eventho i was in USA i kept up our culture.
N:we r going 2 giv a wonderful dinner
K:no aunty.2day's dinner is by Kripa sharma
They were surprised.
K goes 2 the kitchen.
N:what a sweet & luvly girl!
D:ya...

THey all taste kripa's dinner.they r impressed
Dileep:so tasty
Naina:u cook nicely like ur mom Gayathri.
K:thanks a lot.by the way where is ur son zaib?when wil he cum?i want 2 meet him
D:he'll cum after midnight.gets up in the noon.u can see him 2morrow kripa.

Next morning...
Kripa:zaib did'nt get up?
Naina:now he won't
K:let me go & giv him a surprise

Kripa knocks his door.Zaib who was sleeping gets irritated.
Z:don't u allow me 2 sleep?
K knocks again.
Z gets fed up & he opens the door.K slips & falls on him.both of them hav fallen down.K on Z's chest.


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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
hey it really amzing plz contttttt 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
plz plz plz plz continue soon i want to know what's next !!!


take care
Laiba
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
hey its brilliant
great work
pllzzz continue 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
hey its really gd
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
plzz carry on
its turning out good
luv it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
Part-4.....Kripa gets up.Zaib was surprised:who r u?
Suddenly naina cums.
Kripa pretends 2 b crying.
N:what happened?
K:this guy pushed me down.i fell down
N becomes angry:zaib!u did it bcoz she tried 2 wake u up
Z:no mom,she is lying.i dunno who she is
K:no aunty..i told him that i'm kripa sharma,suryabhan's Gayathri's daughter from USA
Z:so this is the girl mom told about?
N:u r taliking as if u dunno anything.she is the 1 who is staying here
Z:ok
N:i'll tell his dad.he'll giv him nice punishment
Z:oh mom...
K:no need aunty.its ok.
Kripa winks at Zaib b4 going.Z was embarassed.suddenly he thinks:this is the girl whom i saw yesterday evening
Z smiles:mayb she is the dream girl of mine.lets see
Z smiles.


Zaib tells his friends:u ppl teased me that the girl I saw is only an imagination.she is kripa Sharma.My dad's best friend's only daughter.she stays in my house now
Friends:what?really?
Z:ya.2day morning she holded my arms & told that she'll wait 4 me
They:really?u r so lucky


Zaib looks 4 the licker bottles & cigerrettes in his cupboard.He did'nt find anything.
Kripa cums :what r u looking 4 zaib?
Z was speechless
K:I no .i destroyed everything
Z was shocked:how dare u get into my room in my absense?I'll complain
K:o! really?if u tell,I'll tell ur parents that u smoke & drink.ur dad will kick u out of the house
Z was tensed:plz kripa,don't tell them
K:ok,but on 1 demand.u've 2 get up early & cum with me 4 jogging
Z was very lazy.but since there was noother option he:ok..
K:good boy


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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice!!!
awesome!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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take care Laiba

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