Fan fiction for the week 29th Aug-4th sep - Page 5

Great story Kiran! 👏

Thanks for the dedication... 😳

BTW, if Ronit is playing Mayank, who's Rishab??? 😕

👏 too good yaar keep up the good work.😃

pink

gr8....farah yeh archie chipkali type hai kya???????
and kiranu r too good....

plzzz some1 aamna di plzzz continue Pyaar to hona hi ta
and some1 continue keep it goin!!...

thanks!
da stories here really rock!!!!....
we got some real nice talent here!!...u guys rock!!..
u all need a very big 👏

ok......i'll continue my next part..........(do naam ek jaan)

..........the class had finished aur sujal aur kashish ki baatein bhi.........it was chuti time.............and everyone went home...........luckily kashish too went home on time....

kashish house.
kashish: mama. kal mein zara jaldhi jaongi....principle ne meeting bulwayi hai....isliye muje thodi jaldhi utha dena...ok
tulsi: kashish......yeh sab kya hai.........do din baad tumhari mangni hai aur ek hafte baad shaadi.......tum kal kahin nahi ja rahi ho..........balke charu keh haath application bhej wa do 1 mahine ki chuti ki...........shaadi ki tayariyan humein milke karni hongi............aur waise bhi mera nahi khayal woh log chaheinge keh garewal khandaan ki bahu kaam kare...............isliye.......
kashish: par ma...........abhi se kyun........mein mangni ke baad leave ke liye apply karongi
tusli: nahi....mein ne kaha na keh kal se hi to kal se hi! warna mein tum se kabhie baat nahi karungi!
kashish: (hugs tusli) oh ma....acha theek hai...manli apki baat........nahi jaongi kal..........ab to naraz nahi hain na!
tulsi pats her on her cheek lightly..........

so kal kashish ki college se chuti! yani.....ab woh aur tulsi sakoon se shaadi ki shopping pe ja sakte hain!!!!!!

raat ko hi sinha's keh yahan phone ata hai!
kashish: (sees it is from the garewal house aur bina soche usne phone uthaya aur kaha) Sujal..........tumne chain nahi hai! aur kitni baatein karni hain.........
from the other side ek aurat ki awaaz ati hai: hello.....beta kashish......mein veena.........
kashish: (totally embarrased): aa............aaaunnty...aap ....woh mein samjhi......
veena: (was smiling on the other side) acha....to ab mein samjhi keh yeh sujal itni raat raat bhar kyun jaag ta hai aur kisse baat karta rehta hai.......
kashish: nahi....woh.....mein.....woh sujal (uff totally confused)
veena: .........koi baat nahi! acha tulsi jee hain paas mein
kashish: jee....mein deti hon
...................
tulsi: namaste veena ji!
veena: namaste..kaisi hain aap!
tulsi:bilkul theek.....aap sunaye! khariyat se phone kiya!
veena: jee. woh asal mein meri nanad ayi hui hain....mumbai se........woh aap logon se zara milna chahti thi.....to kya hum log kal......
tulsi: jee muje to bahut khushi hogi agar aap log ayen......likin shaadi ki tayariyan bhi karni hain aur beech mein sirf ek hi din hai...........waise agar aap ana chahey to......
veena: (gets the point) nahi nahi! aap sahi keh rahi hain.......waise bhi do din baad to milna hi hai..............koi baat nahi, aap log tayariyan keejeeyi!
tulsi: apko bura to nahi.......
veena: tulsi jee kaisi baatein kar rahi hain! mein samajh sakti hon,,,,,mere ghar beti nahi to kya...........ma ki pareshani to har ma samjh sakti hai!
tulsi: aap se baat karke bahut acha laga
veena: mujhe bhi! theek hai to phir purso milte hain........
call ends

sorry....yeh kisi ki farmayish peh aaj mein ne likha hai.........sorry zara chota hai,,,,par majboori hai! so vasu aur sinha's ek baar phir se milte milte reh gaye..........ab yeh mulaqat hogi mangni keh din............us din kya tamasha hoga..........wait.....hope to write a long part next time!!! until then.....issi se kaam chala lo pink!!!

love farah

too good farah 👏👏👏👏👏.maza aa gaya.thankx 4 writing it buddy 😊😊😊.plz agli baar thoda bada ok 😃.kashish bechari 😆😆😆

pink

Well done Farah👏. .Next time plzz write a longer part😳.
Lovely part Kiran👏.I can't wait to read the next part.Please post it ASAP😳.

farah jii woh to thek hai
likin rishi nay jo kashish ka accident kia tha woh case kab samnay aaye ga
waisay nahin aana chaiyee
rishi itni mushkiloon say to theek howa hai

great part
likin farmaish kiss ki thi 😉

where is mere dharkanoon ko qaraar doo?????

Kiran Dearest - you are simply the best ... i absolutely loved your part to TPHA .... 👏

and Farah Sweety - ur story is utmost fantastic...... 👏

other writers who have postings stories they are amazing ... ARMAAN ... KEEP IT GOING .. LOVE STORY ... and all the others they are just marvelous .... keep on writing ....... 😉

with love and best wishes
Jaanvi