Fan fiction for the week 29th Aug-4th sep

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi members

Here is the sticky topic about the fan fiction of KTH show. You can post your stories and fan fictions on KTH. If you are continueing your last posted story then plz provide the link, So that memebers can enjoy from begining. The last week's weekly fanfiction link is

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kahiin-to-hoga/75996/fan-fictions-21st-27th-august-2005

Plz note that you can give comment to a fanfiction but refrain posting from thank you and good one notes.

So start postinghttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kahiin-to-hoga/75996/fan-fictions-21st-27th-august-2005😊

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Chocolate, Sujalfan and Megha_Desai

The development group for KTH.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi...ok so next weeks episodes!!! heres my part.......(do naam ek jaan)...i am not posting the link as it is already been posted by choco! 😊

tulsi tells kashish breifly about her mother.........
......tulsi and kashish both have tears rolling down their cheeks.
kashish: (holding tulsi's hand) mama, i ......i am sorry.......
tulsi looks at her with questioning eyes
kashish: kahin na kahin......mein bhi to aapke dhuk ka karaan hoon.......aur apni mama ki taraf se bhi i m really.....ss....
tulsi: kashish, tum sirf meri beti ho, aur tumhari ma khelane ka haq sirf mujhe hai! aur ma beti keh rsihte mein yeh maafi kaisi!
itne saalon mein jo kuch bhi huwa woh humari kismat thi.........likin ab.........ab mein apni kismat ko tumpe nahi thupon gi.........tumhe sari khushiyan dil waon gi!! (they hug each other)..............just then the phone rings....cell phone!
kashish sees its sujal's number and holds onto the mobile in a hurry.......
tulsi: kya huwa....kiska phone hai....
kahish: (wipes her tears...) woh ...um......meri friend hai!
tulsi :(gets up from the bed and walks towards the door) acha theek hai .....baat karo........
kashish smiles and nods..
.......tulsi: ..........magar apni friend se kehna keh itni betabi kyun.....kuch dino mein tum uske ghar hi arahi ho..........(tulsi gives a sweet smile and kashish blushed)
kashish: mama!
tulsi: ahaan....sujal! (she leaves the room)....

kashish picks up the phone gives a sigh.....
sujal: hello...kashish!
kashish: haan bolo sujal
sujal: itni der kyun lagayi....
kashish: are....mama kamre mein thi.....kaise utha thi
sujal: to kya huwa....keh deti keh mama, excuse me......mere hone wale unka phone hai!
kashish: sujal! (laughs) tum yeh keh sakte ho kya apni mama ko.....
sujal: beshak.......main tumhari tarah daarta thodi na hon
kashish: acha! to phir zara baat to kar wana aunty se
sujal: ....abhi....
kashish: haan abhi
sujal: woh asal mein......kuch busy hain........warna kar wa deta
kashish: ya ya! kamse kam mein sab ke samne daarti hon.....tum to apna daar andar hi dabaye bhete ho
sujal: aye kashish! sujal garewal kisi se nahi daarta!
kashish: ha! acah ab agar daar ki baat khatam ho gayi ho, to kya mein puch sakti hon....my would be pati jee, keh is waqt phone kyun kiya....
sujal: haan...dekho na tumhari in baaton mein bhool hi gaya!
kashish: meri baatein....hmmmmm.
sujal: acah baba...meri baatein.........khair yeh kehne keh liye phone kiya tha keh aaj raat ki flight se meri bua aur unki beti mumbai se arahe hain.
kashish: really (excited)
sujal: itni excitement.....i am sure jab tum unse milo gi to sari excitement khatam ho jayegi!
kashish: woh kyun?
sujal: yeh to unse milne keh baad mein tumse pochon ga!
kashish: kya itni buri hai woh.....
sujal:..........nahi.........tum jo itni achi ho........
kashish: sujal
sujal: kashish!
kashish: acha aur koi baat ya mein rakhon
sujal: mein ne bata di apni baat ab tum batao
kashish: mein kya bataon......bus kal college jana hai.....are haan,.....aaj mein pata hai kiske saath ghar ayi
sujal: rishi keh saath
kashish: are wah! ussne bata bhi diya!
sujal: haan.....aaj mein waqai bahut khush hoon
kashish: aur mein bhi....tumhari khushi mein khush hoon!
sujal:........i love you kashish!
....................................age kya baatein hui.........well.........main nahi batane wali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AIRPORT...
rishi airport a chuka hota hai! he sees two ladies are coming towards him. both had red coloured hair, ghar ka sara makeup chehre peh laga huwa, short hair.............the only difference was that one was younger than the other!
rishi: hi bua!
bua (played by vasu): oh my my.......rishi! tum kitne bare ho gaye ho (slaps him on his cheek)
rishi: bua (touches his cheek) ....mein bara kafi saalom se ho chuka hon,,,,,,,shayad apne abhi notice kiya!!!!!! oh ...hi archie!
archie: (played by urvashi).um.......hi..........sujal nahi aya!
rishi: nahi.....big b.....busy the!
archie: oh well........chalo ghar jake usse pakar longi! (she liked sujal a lot and was very chipku but sujal hardly gave her any attention)
rishi: pakar lo gi ( and gave a teasingful laugh)....big b ko kisi aur ne pakar liya hai archie!!!!
archie took some deep breaths: Can we plz leave this place now!
rishi: plz...... (showing them the way!)


Garewal place.............
rishi, vasu bua and archie enter
veena: are vasu...tum agayi.....
vasu: nahi....abhi nahi ayi (trying to mock veena)
rishi felt irritated by this behaviour!
veena (trying to avoid any misunderstanding) um....kaisi ho? aur archie tum kaisi ho? ao na andar!
vasu: hum to bilkul theek hain. CG kahan hai? aur sujal bhi nazar nahi raha. suna hai tum ne uski shaadi teh ki hai,,,,,kis ke saath ki hai, kon hain woh log, kya karti hai larki aur iske parents........

veena: uff vasu....itne sare sawaal...........tumhare bhai bus ate hi honge, sujal apne kamre mein hai, haan uski shaadi teh kardi hai....char din baad uski mangni hai............larki ka naam kashish hai...........sujal ki pasand hai...........rishi keh college mein teacher hai aur uske pita nahi hain......mama hain aur ek choti behen............kafi hai ya aur bhi kuch!!!

vasu gives her a weird look: kashish! hmmmmmm

archie: aunty sujal ka kmara wohi upar wala hai na!

rishi: haan....likin woh neeche ajayenge.......

archie: no...mein upar jake usse surprise dongi..............(she runs upstairs while rishi shakes is head)

rishi: sooo irritating!

vasu: kya kaha tumne

rishi: unnnnn....kuch nahi...mein abhi ata hon

sujal's room,
sujal is still chit chatting with kashish, lying on the bed when archie enters and jumps on him
archie: SUJAL!!!!!
sujal,(gets shocked )TUM....yahan.............
archie: haan, de diya na surprize.....
sujal: (gives a weak smile) haan....par mere upar se to utho.............................

kashsih on the other end is listening to this.............
kashish to herslf: archie,..........................

well. ok enough for now! i hope aapko pasand aya ho...na bhi aya ho to..........keep reading lol!
coming up...lots more and more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv.........farah
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I loved it Farah!!
Please post the next part soon!
And Kiran please post Thoda sa Pyar
soon
I have been waiting for ages please!!
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Hi everyone..i am back again..well nids i got ur meaning..thanks for reminding i totally forgot..thanks a lot!! so here is the next part of Thoda Sa Pyaar Hua Hai....plz give ur comments!!!

Iss sab key baad aglay din Kashish SUjal ko call karti hai...Sujal office main hai..
Kash: hi sujal...
Sujal: kashish!! hi kaisi ho...pata hai main abhi tumhain hi yaad kar raha tha..
Kash: acha?? jhoot bhut burra boltay ho..main janti hun keh abhi tum B-channel ki report parh rahay ho...
Sujal: tumhain kaisey pata?
Kash: bass dekh lo...tumhari secretary ne bataya...
Sujal: hmmmm.....(checking file)
Kash: lagta hai tum busy ho...main baad main call karroon??
Sujal: nahi main busy nahi hion...tum bolo...
Kash: pata hai kal mumma ko pata chal gaya tha keh main tumsey Milnay gayi thi..
Sujal: acha...unhain kaisey pata chala?
Kash: pata nahi...main ney un sey kaha keh tumhari tabiyat kharab thi...
Sujal: acha...hmmm...
Kash: Sujal??
Sujal: haan kashish
Kash: woh uss din amin poochna bhool gayi...woh uss din jab main beyhosh hui thi tab Doctor ney kya kaha tha?
Sujal: haan woh Doctor...uss ney kaha keh tum bhut weak ho aur tumhain apna khyal rakhna chahiye warn problem ho jaye gi...
Kash: weakness?? lekin main to brabar diet kar rahi ho aur khana bhi kha rahi hoon...lekin kaisi problem?
Sujal: woh...Kashish...woh doctor ney kaha keh shadi ke baaad..woh kaha keh...(he is getting shy in telling her abt her supposed probs in pregnancy)
Kash: kia kaha Sujal??
Sujal: tum Docotor se khud pooch lo na
Kash: ab main doctor ke pass jaon? batao an kia Sujal?
Sujal: Kashish woh..arey haan woh tumhari medicines garri main hi reh gayi thi...aik kaam karta hoon tumharay ghar aker dey jata hoon phir baat hogi...
Kash: ok...jaldi ao...bye
Sujal: bye!
after two hours Sujal completes his work and goes to Raheja's Villa...darwazay per Prerna milti hai
Prerna: arey Sujal tum yahan?
Sujal: Namaste mumma...woh main Kashish ko...
Prerna: ahan...tum logon ko to milna manna hai...
Sujal: theek hai mumma...phir main chalta hoon
Prerna: arey nahi nahi..ab kahan ja rahey ho? ajao andar
Hall mainGunn,Akshat,Kashish aur Sneha bethey hotay hain...Sujal ko dekh ker Gunn uthati hai aur bhagti hui uss ke gallay lag jati hai
Gunn: Sujal bhaiya! tnay dinnon baad aye hain..uss din bhi darwazay sey hi chalay gaye...
Sujal: Bulbul! kaisi hai tu?? doctor ke pass gayi an chek-up ke liye?
Gunn: jee hazoor...lekin ab sey jannay ki zaroorat nahi hai main theek hoon...
Sujal: hmm....
Akshat: Sujal bhaiya...ayie na baithiay...
Sujal: nahi Akshat woh mujhey kuch kaam hai...
Sneha: arey Sujal...tum harr waqt kaam hi kartay rehtay ho...kabhi humain bhi time dia karo...
Sujal smiles
Sneha: aur waisey bhi yahan kuch log aissey hain jo ap sey na milley to pani binna machli jaisey ho jatay hain (glancing at Kash)
Kash: chup....pagal..kuch bhi bolti rehti hai...
Suajl: hi Kashish!
Kash: hi...kaisey ho tum?
Sujal: mainn theek hoon aur tum?
Kash: main bhi theek hoon...
Sneha: Akshat...tum in donon ko dekh ker batao keh kahan sey lagtta hai keh do din baad in ki shadi honay wali hai??
Akshat: arey Sujal bhaiya...ap na acting bhut burri kartay hain..aik ghanta pehley ap ne Di sey baat kia aur ab aissey Kaisi Ho pooch rahay hain jaisey pooray haftay sey baat nahi hui...
Kash: Akshat..bhut bolnay lagay ho tum
uss per aik cushion phenki hai, Akshat side per ho jata hai aur cushion Sujal ko lagta hai...uss ka nokila side Sujal ki ankh main lag jata hai...aik damm sey ankhon main panni ajata hai aur red ho jati hai...
Kashish jaldi sey uss key pass jati hai...
Kash: so sorry Sujal...tumhain lag gayi (ankh main phoonk marti hai)
Sujal: nahi its ok...
Kash: kaisey kuch nahi?tumhain lag gayi na
woh apnay duppattay sey uss ki ankh ko saik deti hai aur phir phoonkti hai, phir jab confirm hota hai keh Sujal theek hai to chain sey bethati hai...all along SNeha, Akshat aur Gunn yeh concern dekh ker hans rahay tay hain
Gunn: Akshat bhaiya...ap ko pata hai kal main ney aik serial dekha...pati ki ankh main kuch chala jata hai aur patni aissey pareshan ho jati hai jaissey ussey koi bhut barri chot ayi ho
Sneha': i tell u...aj kal ki larkian apnay husbands sey itna pyaar karti hain na aur itni possessive hoti hain...zara si chot ajaye pati per to patni ki jaan nikal jata hai
Akshat: yeah...u r absolutely right! aissa hi hota hai...ab humaray ghar main hi aik misaal hai...Di!!
Kash: urao! aur urao mazak...bhut maza araha hai na...Sujal, mujhey tum sey bhut zaroori baat karni hai, zara iss kamray main ao
Sujal uss key saath doosrey kamray main jata hai...
Sujal: kia baat hai?
Kash: woh sab choro..baad main bataon gi..tum mujhey woh report aur medicines dey do...
Sujal: haan yeh rahi medicines...
kash: aur report..
Sujal: woh kahiin misplace ho gayi hai..
Kash: acha mujhey ab to bata do keh kia problem hai?
Sujal: dekho Kashish...hum logon ki shadi honay wali hai aur hum mai n itni frankness to hai hi keh hum shadi sey pehley yeh baat kar sakain...actually Doctor ney kaha hai keh tum bhut weak ho gayi ho...neend bhi poori nahi hai aur proper khana nahi ley rahi..abhi to yeh problem hai hi lekin agay ja ker ziada problems ho sakti ahin...maslan ke pregnancy ke doran agar tum eny koi tension li ya apna khyal na rakha to iss sey complications h sakti hain iss liye tumahin poori tarah sey apna khyal rakhna chhaiye
Kash: bass?? itni si baatko itna bara bana dia...tum bhi na Sujal...acha chalo main tum sey vaada karti hoon keh apna poora khyal rakhoon gi aur koi carelessness nahi karoon gi..ok?
Sujal: sure...Kashish main dekh raha hoon tum kuch dinnon sey areshan ho?
Kash: nahi to...aissa kuch nahi hai
Sujal: jhoot matt bolo Kashish...tumhain koi tension hai iss liye tumhain woh weakness bhi hai..aur bhut dinnon sey kuch disturbed nazar arahi ho...plz batao mujhey...tum mujh per trust karti ho na?
Kash"khud sey ziada\
Sujal: theek hai phir tumhain meri qasam hai mujheu batao
Kash: theek hai...waisey bhi main tumhain yeh baat aj batanay hi wlai thi...Sujal...yeh baat main tumhain iss liye batana zaroori samjhati hooon kyunki hhumara rishta pyar aur vishvas ki buniyad per bana hai...aur humain aik doosrey sey koi baat nahi chupani chahiye..tum bhallay hi iss baat per ghussa ho lekin main tumhain batana zaroori samajhti hoon...Actually uss di jab hum shopping gaye thay uss key aik din pehley main shopping centre gayi thi shopping karnay:

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Kashish kuch shopping karnay key liye market ja rahi thi...woh market main enter ho ker aik barray sey shopping centre main jati hai...kuch shopping kartay huay uss ki tabiyat kharab ho jati hai aur woh restroom main jati hai...rest-room sey bahir nikalti hai to ussay rest-room ke bahir Rishi nazar ata hai...woh ussay ignore karti hai lekin Rishi uss ka haath pakar leta hai..woh aik damm ussay murr ker dekhti hai
Kash: RISHI!!! mera haath choro..
Rishi: anhi choroon ga...
Kahs: tumhari himmat kaisey hui mera haath pakarnay ki? mera haath choro warna main guards ko bulaon gi..
Rishi uss ka haath chor deta hai
Rishi: Kashish please meri baat suno...
Kash: mujhey tumhari koi baat nahi sunani Rishi...
woh aggay aggay chal rahi hoti hai aur Rishi uss key peechay peechay hota hai...now they are out of the centre and in a deserted part of teh road
Rishi: Kashish please meri baat to suno...
Kash: main ney kaha na mujhey tumhari koi baat nahi sunani...meri sab se pyari dost ka gahr ujaar ker tum chahtay ho keh main...
Rishi: main sirf tum sey dosti karna chahta hoon...
Kash: dosti?? dosti ka matlab samajhtay ho tum...dosti ka matlab hta hai vishvas, pyaar aik doosrey per bharosa...aur main tum sey in sab main se kuch nahi kar sakti...na vishvas, na pyaar aur na hi bharosa
Rishi: lekin main ney aissa kia hi kia hai??
Kash: kia kiya hai?? meri dost ki zindagi tabah ker keh poochtay ho keh tum ney kia kiya hai?? tum ney gunnah kia hai Rishi gunnah
Rishi: ajb main uss sey pyaar nahi karta tha to ussey chor ker kia burra kia?
Kash: chor kar nahi ussey apna kar ghalti ki...tum uss ke laiq hi nahi ho...
Rishi: Kashish...dosti karna burayi nahi hai..
Kash: ajnti hoon main..lekin tum jaisey papi sey dosti karna burayi hai Rishi..
Rishi: Kashish tum nahi janti yeh sab kyun kia main ney?
Kash: janana bhi nahi hahti...janti hoon tumharay kaalay kartooton ki niatain
Rishi: kia janti ho tum?janti ho kehj main ney yeh sab kyun kia?
Kash: haan tum ney yeh sab daulat ke liye kia hai....
Rishi: nahi...MAIN NEY YEH SAB DAULAT KEY LIYE NAHI KIA HAI...MAIN NEY YEH SAB KYA HAI TUMARY LIYE...SIRF TUMGARAY LIYE KASHISH...
Kashsih murr ker ussay ghussay sey dekhti hai
Kash: kia kaha tum ney?
Rishi: haan main n yeh sab kuch tumharay liye kia hai..college ke dinnon se main tum sey pyaar karta hoon...graduation ke baad main tum sey apnay dil ki baat karnay hi wala tha lekin tum eny RnG join ker li aur ksii kaam se mujhey Mumbai jana para...jab amin wapis aya to tumhain tab hi apnay dil ki baat batana chahi..lekin tumhara koi ata pata hi nahi tah...phir main ney tumhari dost Sneha sey tumhara pata manga lekin uss ney mujhey bataya ke tum aur woh Sujal aik doosrey sey pyaar kartay ho...yaad hai na tumhai..tumhari engagement per bhi main Simla main hi tah lekin nahi aya...yunki main tumhain kisi aur ka hotay hauy nahi ndekh paya...phir main ney aik plan socha..main ney socha keh shayed tumhari dost Sneha ke zariye main tumharay qareeb asakoon..lekin Sneha America settle hogayi...main ney phir socha keh tum shayed Sujal sey uss ki daulat aur izzat ki wajah sey shadi kar rahi ho..iss liye main ney Sneha ki property seize ki...main ne socha keh agar main bhi daulat kama loon ga to tum meri ho jao gi..aur yeh sab kuch main ney sirf tumharay liye kia hai Kashish...ab merey pass paisa hai shaan hai..Nanda Industries ka maliq hoon main...ab to tum meri ho jao gi na Kashish...kyunki main janta hoon keh tum Sujal sey pyaar nahi karti...pyaar to tum mujh sey karti ho...hain na Kashish..chalo shadi ker letey hain Kashish...
Kashish yeh sab kuc shock main sun rahi hai...woh yeh sab sunanay key baad Rishi key moun per zorr sey slap karti hai (jaisey Gurri ko)
Kash: merey pyaar ko mazaq samajh rakha hai tum ney! TUM APNAY AP KO SAmAJHTAY KIA HO (SLAP)...TUM NEY SOCHA KE MAIN SUJAL SEY USS KE PAISEY KI WAJAH SEY SHADI KER RAHI HOON
(SLAP) TUMHARRI HIMMAT KAISE HUI..MEREY PYAAR KA MAZAQ URAYA TUM NEY, MEREY PYAAR KA ATMAAN KIA TUM NEY (2 SLAPS) MERI DOST KI ZINDAGI TABAH KI MEREY LIYE (SLAP)...TUM SEY ZIADA SELFISH AUR BEYSHARAM INSAN MAINEY AJ TAKK NAHI DEKHA MR.RISHI NANDA...TUM NEY MUJHEY ITNA GIRRA HUA SOCHA KEH MAIN SUJAL SEY PYAAR KA NATAK KAR RAHI HOON (SLAP)...TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISEY HUI MEREY PYAAR KA MAZAK URANAY KI (SLAP)...AIK BAAT KAAN KHOL KER SUN LO...MERA PYAAR BAZAAR MAIN BIKNAY WALI KOI CHEEZ NAHI HAI JO JO CHAHAY KHAREED SAKTA HAI...MERA PYAAR MEREY LIYE MERI SA SEY AHEM CHEEEZ HAI...TUM NEY TO PYAAR KO HI MAZAK BANA KER RAKH DIA..TUM MUJH SEY PYAAR KARTAY HO?(SLAP) BARAY AYE..AREY TUMHAIN TO PYAAR KARNA BHI NAHI ATA, PYAAR KA MATLAB NAHI JANTAY TUM AUR TUM NEY MEREY PYAAR PER SHAQ KIA (SLAP)...ITNI ZINDAGIAN BARBAAD KI TUM NEY SIRF APNAY SAWARTH KE LIYE (SLAP)...TUM MEREY PYAAR KO BIKAO SAMJAHTAY HO?? MR.RISHI NANDA..TUM JANTAY BHI HO MERA PYAAR KIA HAI?? MERA PYAAR MERI AATMA, MERI KHUSHI, MERI ZINDAGI, MERA WAJOOD, MERA FAKHAR HA...MERA PYAAR MEREY LIYE MERI IBADAT, MERI POOJA HAI AUR SAB SEY BHAR KER MERA PYAAR MERA GHAROOR HAI...AUR MERA PYAAR SIRF AUR SIRF SUJAL HAI!! TUM ISS JANAM MAIN TO KIA HAZARON JANAM MAIN BHI MERA PYAAR NAHI BAN SAKTAY KYUNKI HARR JANAM MAIN KASHISH SIRF SUJAL KI RAHAY GI!! (slap)
Rishi: Kashish meri baat suno...
Kash: ab sunanay ko baqi kia raha hai Rishi!! aur aik baat kaan khol ker sun lo...ainda ke baad tum mera naam apni zubaan sey nahi lo gay!
Rishi: loon ga! agar tumhara pyaar tumhari ibadat hai to mera pyaar mera janoon hai...KASHISH...KASHISH...KASHISH...KASHISH...KASHISH
Kash: tumhari himmat aksiey hui mera naam leney ki (5 slaps for syaing Kashish 5 times) iss naam per sirf Sujal ka haq hai..ainda ke baad tum mujhey Kashish naahi Mrs.Kashish Sujal Garewal kaho gay
Rishi: tumhari shadi abhi hui nahi hai Kashish
Kash: do din baad meri shadi ho jaye gi Sujal sey...main hamesha ke lye Sujal ki ho jaon gi aur tum jitni bhi koshish kar lo iss shadi ko nahi roq pao gay...
Rishi: shadi o abhi do din baqi hain Kashish...lekin main tumhari shadi nahi todunga...main tum donon ki shadi hnay doon ga..lekin shadi ke baad tum donon kabhi chain sey nahi jee pao gay....main Sujal ko tabah kar doon ga
Kashish uss ko bhut KARAKAYDAR AUR ZABARDAST thapar marti hai
Kash: BHUT BARRA NAAM LEY LIYA APNI ZUBAAN SE TUM NEY RISHI NANDA!! BHUT BARRA NAAM...TUM JITNI BHI KOSHISH KAR LO...TUM SUJALKASHISH KO ALAG NAHI KAR PAO GAY...POORI DUNIYA HUMARA NAAM ALAG ALAG NAHI AIK SAATH LEY GI,,,SUJALKASHISH!!
Rishi: tum poori koshish kar lo apnay Sujal ko mujh sey bachanay ki aur main poori koshish karoon ga tum donon ko tabah karnay main...ab amin na sirf ussey balkay tumhain bhi tabah kar doon ag...tum ney merey pyaar ko thukraya hai na...aur yeh jo thapar tum eny mujhey aj marray hain na Kashish...aik aik kar kay sab ka hisaab loon ga
Woh wahan sey chala jata hai aur Kashish wahan sey ajti hai ghar

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ab iss key baad Sujal ka kia reactio n ho ga yeh jananay key liye wait for the next part...plz plz pzl give ur comments i have dne a lot of effort...love ya all kiran!
princess here it is..enjoy
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kiran its lovely! awesome......so woh jo photos thi woh bhi rishi ne hi kiya tha?......write the next part soon.... 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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great part rajeev1 👏 👏 plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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farah n kiran awesum.... kiran u dialouge"...HARR JANAM MAIN KASHISH SIRF SUJAL KI RAHAY GI!! "..awsum dialouge....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lovely part kiran
thanks alot for posting it
cant wait for the next part!! 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Great part Kiran👏.Itney zyada thappar😆.
Farah,please continue your story.I loved this part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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great farah and kiran both the stories are rocking.

Also jasminerahul ur story is going great jst love to read it.

Abt my story wl post the next part of A LOVE STORY on Friday. Really busy till then. I am really sorry.

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