Fan fiction for the week 29th Aug-4th sep - Page 3

farah it was damn good part yaar
archie is a complete chipkoooo
likin is main us ka bhi koi dost nahin akhir hamara sweetoo itna cute hai
mehraal jii app kahan reh gain
divr-e-dil kay liye hum bekarar hain
or kiran and amna jii itna intazaar karwana accha nahin hota
mehraal and natz armaan ko likh kay hamaray armaanoon ko poora karain
hey genious jii dharkanoo ko karaar to humain bhi chaiyee jaldi say kahain heart attack na ho jayee
plz
plz

ARMAAN

Okay, so they were hugging when I hit the brakes last time. Now the continuation, it's boring coz I'm not in a good mood… my apologies in advance.

Kashish had said 'isse pyaar kehte hain' and hugged him, now Sujal's reaction:

Sujal: 'nahii! aisa kuch nahii hai! main raat ke aik aise mor par aagaya hoon jahan dhoop aur chandni ka farq hi mit gaya hai!'

Kashish: (in a philosophical manner) 'raat ka kiya hai? kisi bhi tarha guzar jaey gii, soote…jaagte, karvatein letey… subha aakhir main ho hii jaey gi'

Kashish: (to herself) 'raat ab itni gehri hochuki hai ki bas ab kisi bhi vaqt subha ho jaey gii!'

Sujal: (angry & depressed) 'main kisi aur ki amaanat hoon… ishq ki galyun main rehta hoon, aanson ban kar us ki aankhon main jeeta hoon, voh bhi shaayad meri hamrahi hai kyunki main har pal usse apne paas mehsoos karta hoon!'

Kashish: (angry & exasperated, ready for a fight!) 'aur aisa kiya hai us main?'

Sujal reaches for his wallet, takes out a small piece of paper and hands it to Kashish saying: 'ye usne tab diya thaa jab mujhe officially propose kia thaa…'

Kashish reads it out loudly:

'raaz ki tarha is duniya main aaye hoon main, bohot akele bohot be sahara, aur tumhe aik farishte ki soorat main dekhti hoon jo apni mohabbaton ka saya meray upar leay khara rehta hai, ye sahara mujh par hamesha rahe ye dua hai meri!'

Sujal: 'uski dua hoon main, uskay jeeney ki wajah… main uski dua ko bad-dua main kaise badal doon? meray marne ke baad kia hoga main nahii jaanta, bas itna jaanta hoon kii meray jeetay ji, meri qasam nahii tootay gii'

Kashish: 'aur is sab main main kahan hoon? meri kya galti hai? kis baat ki saza dii ja rahi hai mujhe??? kya pyaar pane ka mera haq nahii?' (her voice is choked & she has tears in her eyes)

Sujal: 'hai… bilkul hai… magar mujh se nahii, main ne pehle hii sab baatein saaf kar dein thii… behtar hoga kii tum mujh se koi umeed na rakho, aur ham is barey main aur koi baat naa karen…'

Saying this he walks away, leaving a depressed… shattered Kashish…

Cut to the party hall…

Song time… 'dedaar de' (DUS) open up your MP3's!!!

But this time, no dancing around!

TP was trying to impress Niki when Chetan calls him in a corner…

Paddy: 'kaam hogaya?'

TP: 'I've done my part of the job, ab Chetan kii baari hai'

Chetan: 'bas phone aata hii hoga…'

Paddy: 'finally! is din ka mujhe kab se intezaar thaa!'

TP: 'to isi baat par… hojaey kuch champagne?'

Paddy: 'abhi nahii… not until he's gone…'

Cut to the bar…

Sujal is drinking, mimosas (orange juice + champagne, high alcohol concentration for those who don't know)

His cell rings

Sujal: ji… ji… abhi? Okay…

He goes over to where Pratab, Neha, Nandani & Akash are standing (Kash has also joined them)

Sujal: 'Dad, mujhe factory se call aaye hai… urgent kaam hai, I have to go'

Neha: 'tumhari shaadi ka reception hai aur tum… bilkul nahii… keh dein is sey' (she says to Pratab)

Pratab: 'haan, aaj koi kaam nahii…'

Sujal is determined, plus the alcohol is taking it's toll on him and he has to get out of that place

Sujal: Dad, jaana to main bhi nahii chahta… but it's urgent… I'll be back in an hour…

He goes away without waiting for a reply…

Kashish: (to herself) 'chalo acha hai Sujal chala gaya, yahan party main har pal darr laga rehta kii ye log koi harkat naa karlein… ab I can relax and enjoy…'

Sujal leaves a place with a bottle of wine, starts the car and drives off, half drunk, he's driving and drinking simultaneously… the car's speed is 120 km/hr… it's increasing… 130… 140… 150… (guys, is story main Sujal's from a rich family, he doesn't drive a Ford or a Hyundai… it's a Ferrari 360 Spider that he's driving… and well, Ferrari and speed go together… for those of you who'll argue ki India main Ferrari kahan? Well, banda ameer hai, he imported the car!!!) anyways, so the speed goes upto 190 km/hr… fast really very fast!!! And he's drunk!

Cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Three champagne glasses clink!

Paddy: 'now get over with the suspense, batao tum logon ne kiya kia?'

TP: 'well, main ne Sujal kii gaari main se brake oil nikaal diya… aur'

Paddy: 'yaani ke brakes fail?'

Chetan: 'obviously mom! aur main ne factory main already problem create kar dii thii, coz I knew the manager would call Sujal… aur voh chala gaya!'

Paddy: 'arey vah CD! tum bohot intelligent hogaye ho!'

Chetan: 'mom! stop calling me CD!'

Paddy: 'and you stop calling me mom… main dekhne main abhi bhi young hoon!'

They laugh… hysterically!

Varun hears this, he's shocked! He runs to Kashish and tells her, she's panicked… they decide to follow him…

Okay guys, ab Varun is also from the same family, but he doesn't have as good a car as Sujal… he has a Mercedes C150 (it's a cool car, but the Ferrari's better!) okay, so they follow him… speed 150 km/hr…

Kashish: 'drive faster Varun, main Sujal ko jaanti hoon, 150 is his warm up speed, voh kam se kam 190 gaya hoga…'

Varun: 'bhabhi, maximum hai… is se zyaada nahii jaey gii'

Well, ye Fast & the Furious ki shooting to hai nahii, so I'll cut the crap…

They reach a point where they see Sujal's car, against a huge tree, all smashed up… Varun fears the worst while Kashish doesn't have the guts to go near the wreck…

Just as they gather all their courage…

The driver's door is kicked open, out comes Sujal, drunk… but un-hurt!!!

Kashish runs up to him and hugs him hard… she's crying: 'main kitna darr gayee thii!'

Sujal asks for some water, Varun gives it to him… he drinks a bit, and puts chewing gum in his mouth to get the alcoholic effect out of his head…

He sits on the road side…

Serious… angry… and very angry!!!

Sujal: 'okay… koi mujhe bataey ga kii tum log yahan kaise pohche?'

Varun: 'voh bhahiya…'

Kashish: 'tum bina hamari baat sunay party se chaley aaey… is leiy main ne Varun se kaha kii ham chalet hain tumhe wapis…'

Sujal: 'BULL SHIT!!! You call it a coincidence, I smell something fishy… pehle mujhe aise waqat factory se call aata hai jab dad ne strictly manager ko keh diya thaa mujhe koi call na karey… phir meri gaari ke brakes fail hojaate hain… ye Ferrari hai! gadha gaari nahii… is ke brakes kaise fail huay? Then you guys follow up… what's the gig? kia chuppa rahe ho tum log mujh se??? saaf saaf batao!'

Varun is scared and nervous… Kashish feels sorry for him: 'kuch nahii hoga Varun, main sab batati hoon Sujal ko…'

She tells him the whole story A-Z…

He starts laughing… Kashish & Varun look at him strangely

Sujal: 'in logon ka pehla plan to bohot acha thaa, meri qismat kii main bach gaya… magar doosra plan? ghatya!!! bakwaas! meri gaari main do brake pumps hain, aik emergency ka hai… lagta hai uss sey oil nikaalna bhool gaya ye Mr. Tushaar Pandey…'

Kashish is relived…

Sujal: 'well, hamein ab yahan 6 din aur rukhnaa hai… phir main aur Kashish US chaley jaen gey 6 months ke liyay, ghar kii baat hai… isleye ham 3 main rahe to behtar hai, I'll be careful… that is all I'll do… ab party main chaltey hain, main driver ko bol doon ga voh is khatara ko mechanic ke paas ley jaey ga… waisey Varun… tumhari gaari key brakes to kaam karte hain naa???'

They all laugh as they sit in Varun's car…

To be continued

Kiran... please let us know when you hear from Amna, hope she's okay...

Jasmine... thank God no divorce took place, we've had so much of divorces from Ekta that we try and stay away from them in our fan-fic's and stick to the happier part of their lives... 😆

All of you are doing a great job!!!
Keep it up!!!

kiran u r too good 👏 👏 👏 and farah u also 👏 👏 👏 plz continue soon

all the stories are marvelously done ... 👏
there are such neat talents ... 😳
please all ... continue soon 😉

Good job natz👏.Please continue. Farah,keep up the great work👏. Where's rameena😕.I'm dying to read the next part of rah-e-ishq😳. And Kiran plzz continue thora sa pyar hua hai😛

wow natz....yaar this was not boring balke fast and furious ki tarah .....very exciting....hehehehe, sujal kya chill banda lagta hai!! 👏
very nice....continue........ 👏 👏

kiran you too...awesome part!!!! plz continue 👏 😳 ...golu ...i am still waiting 😛 😛 ............aur genious420..........kuch likho bhi........tehmoor bhai ko pyaar karna sikhaooo!!!! 😉

by the way....juhi...where's your new fanfic gone 😛 .....plz plz likho na!

natz i thnk u have got the definatton of "boring" wrong.... wat i tell ur fan fic is awesum... xciting

Thanks for the compliments guys, someone please continue...

Where's Rameena? uska computer phir kharaab hai kya??? 😕 Rameena please continue your story...

dosto... main apni story post kar raha hu.... fir se par fan-fiction main.....

aapne pahle meri shayd story padh hogi...jo ki lock ho gayi thi...

"Ek kahani..sirf sujal ki...."

yanha par wo part hain...

kahani yanha se shuru hoti hai....

meri yah kahani wanha se shuru hoti hai jab kashish, piyush se shadi karne ke liye haan kah deti hai... aur sujal is bat se anjan business ke silsile main out of town hota hai...

jab wo aata hai.. aur jab use pata chalta hain to wo seedhe kashish ke ghar jata hai usse milne... kashish ghar par akeli hai.... sujal ne wahi black shirt pahan rakha hai.. kashish opens the door....

kashish;- sujal.... tum....?

sujal;- {khamosh hain par uski aankhe nam hain...} ................

kashish;- kya hua sujal..? tum chup kyun ho...?

sujal;- main tumhari khamoshi ko mehsus karna chahta hu.. par kyun aaj pahli bar main tumhari khamoshi ko samzne main nakamyab ho raha hu...

kashish;- oh.. iska matlub tumhe sab kuch malum chal gaya.. sujal main tumhe batane hi wali thi ki...

sujal;- ki main kisi aur ki hone ja rahi hu...

kashish chup ho jati hai.. aur uski aankho main aansu aa jate hain..

sujal;- mujko lagta hain kashish ki tumse jyada tumhare aansu mujse pyar karte hain... jo muje dekhkar hi aa jate hain....

kashish;- ..sujal..pls..

sujal;- aaj kyun muje mera naam tumhare muh se sunake khushi na hui.. aakhir kya bat hain kashish..?

kashish;- main tuhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab nahi de sakti sujal....

sujal;- aaj nahi kashsih.. aaj nahi... yah sujal grewal khamoshi se apni jan de sakta hai.. par apni jindgi ko kisi aur ke hatho main jate nahi...maine aaj tak tumse kuch nahi pucha.. maine aaj tak apne pyar ko har sawalat se dur rakha.. par aaj nahi... agar aaj sujal chup raha to shayad kabhi na bol payega.. aaj tumhe kahna padega kashish...

kashish;- main majbur hu sujal...

sujal;- majbur... kitni aasani se tumne apni bewafai ka naam majburi de diya kashish... aakhir aisi kounsi majburi hai jo tumhe mujse alag kar rahi hai..?

kashish;- main nahi kah sakti..

sujal;- tum kah nahi sakti... ya kahna nahi chahti....

kashish;- pls sujal... kyun mera imtihan le rahe ho...

sujal;- me le raha hu imtihan..? imtihan to tumne liya hai mera.. mere pyar ka.. mere vishwash ka...

kashish;- pls sujal main tuhare aage hath jodti hu.. mujse kuch na pucho...

sujal;- kuch na puchu..? chupchap rahu...? nahi kashsih nahi.. bachpan se lekar aaj tak sujal apni har khushi dusro ko deta aaya hai.. par wo chup raha.. bachpan se le kar aaj tak main apna hak khota aaya hu par ye sujal chup tha.. par aaj.. aaj jab sujal ki jindgi kisi aur ke hatho main ja rahi hai aur tum kahti ho ki main chup rahu... nahi kashish nahi... ITNA MAHAN NAHI HU MAIN...

kashish doud kar apne aapko kamre main band kar deti hain...

sujal;- kashish...kashish..darwaja kholo.. muje itna majbur mat karo kashish ki ye sujal us sujal ko bhulne par majbur ho jaye.. jise tumhare gusse par bhi pyar aata tha.. kashish.....

kashish;- pls sujal chle jao.. chle jao yanha se.. tumhe meri kasam ...

sujal;- chla jaunga kashish chla jaunga.. kyuni yeh sujal aaj bhi tumse bahut pyar karta hai.. main aaj bhi tumhare aankh main aansu nahi dekh sakta... par mere jane se kisi galatfahmi ka shikar mat ho jana... main wapas aaunga kashish... aur tab koi muje na rok payega...tumhari kasam bhi nahi... main ja raha hu kashish..

sujal chla jata hain... kashish use jate hue dekhti hai khidki se....sujal bhi use dekhta hain.. aur dosto beckgroud music aata hain..

"jo hain hotho pe uske..kya wahi uske dil main...

kuch abhi wo lagti hain..kuch wo ho jaye pal main...

rah main chalte chalte, wo kanhi bhi mud jaye...

ban gayi hai paheli..ab ulazti hi jaye...

dhup ki tarah jale.. ban ke saya wo chle....

wo samaz main na aayi...

apno ko yar kiya tha...chout hain khayi....

thoda sa pyar hua tha...ab bhi hai baki...

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part-2

sujal fir kashish ke ghar se nikal kar bridge par jata hai. {Apni favorite jagah par}

sujal apne aap se;-"... kyun .. kyun bhagwan kyun..? aakhir har bar main hi kyun…? Kyun har bar main harta aaya hu kyun.? Kyun aaj ek khushi bhi tujse dekhi na gayi.. aakhir kab tak sahta rahunga main.. kab tak apni kismat ke hatho harta rahunga main…? Kis galti ki saza mil rahi hai.. kya kisi ko pyar karma galat hai..? kisi ko chahna galat hai…? Bachpan se lekar aaj tak ek khushi tune muje na di.. par muje koi shikwa nahi tha tujse… kyunki tune muje kashish naam ki jindgi de di….. kashish se milkar hi muje jine ke mayne mile… usse milkar maine jana ki khushi kya hoti hai.. abhi khushi ke chnd lamhe bhi na bite the ki tune fir se use chin liya….!"

Now sujal's dailouge with music..{fast music..u hav listen many time in KTH }

"..Bus…. Ab nahi … is bar main tuje apni jindgi se nahi khelne dunga… kashish sirf meri thi aur hamesha meri hi rahegi… is bar sujal chup nahi rahega…!!!"

Ab sujal apne ghar jata hai… veena uska intzar kar rahi hoti hai….

Veena;- aa gaya tu… kab se tera intzar kar rahi thi..chal aaja khana kha le…

Sujal mumma ki taraf dekhta hai par kuch kahta nahi…

Veena;- kya hua.? Tu chup kyun hai…?

Sujal;- ye aap puch rahi ho mumma.? Aap to meri aankhe dekhkar hi sab samaz leti thi na..? kya ab aapne bhi muje samzna chod diya…?

Veena;- ..sujal.. main to….

Sujal;- kya chupane ki koshish kar rahi thi aap..? kya samaz rahi thi aap..?. ki meri jindgi chin jayegi aur muje pata bhi na chlega..

Veena;- jo hua muje uska afsos hai sujal….

Sujal;- ..afsos to muje bhi hai mumma..par kashsih ko khone ka nahi… balki iska ki aap kuch na kar payi…

Veena;- mere hath main kuch nahi tha sujal.. kashsih ne apni marji se shadi ke liya haan kaha hai…

Sujal;- .aur aap man gayi… ek pal ke liye bhi nahi socha ki mera kya hoga… wo sujal jo sirf kashish ke liye jita hai uska kya hoga.. jiski dhadkne sirf kashish ka naam leti hai uska kya hoga..?

Veena;- ..aur main..? kya main kuch nahi lagti tumhari..?

Sujal;-.. mumma aap ne muje jindgi di hai… lekin ssanse kashish ne… muje is duniya main aapne laya hai.. par meri duniya kashish hai… KASHISH HAI TO MAIN HU… VARNA MERA KOI WAJOOD NAHi...

Veena;- kyun karta hai usse itna pyar…?

Sujal;- " KABHI SOCHA NAHI MUMMA…" main itna janta hu ki main is duniya main.. sirf kashish ke liye aaya hu.. aur wo mere liye…

Veena;- aur wo hi kashish kisi aur se shadi kar rahi hai…

Sujal;- ….shadi hui to nahi…

Veena;- [with surprised] …sujal…..???

Sujal;- nahi mumma … ab nahi… ab sujal ko rokne ki koshish mat karna.. aaj tak main aapki har bat manta aaya hu.. par aaj nahi… agar aaj aapne muje rok diya..to shayad jindgi bhar ke liye…

Veena;- lekin bete..

Sujal;- nahi mumma…. Main aapko na nahi kar paunga.. aur jee bhi nahi paunga.. I M SORRY MUMMA..

Sujal kamre se bahar chla jata hai…

Veena;- hai bhagwan… mere sujal ki raksha karna…

Sujal apne kamre main… apne aap se bat karta hai…

Sujal;- main janta hu mumma..ki aap mujse bahut pyar karti hai… par main bhi kashish se bahut pyar karta hu.. aur usko pane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu… shayad aaj wo sujal jo apka beta hai … aaj har gaya …. Jindgi main pahli bar usne apni mumma ki bat nahi mani… leki agar aaj aapka beta jit jata to mumma wo sujal ..jo sirf kasish ke naam pe jita hai… mar jata …! Aur aap muje marta hua to nahi dekh sakti na mumma… main janta hu ki aap muje maaf kar denge… par agar aaj main khamosh raha to shayad jindgi bhar apne aap ko maaf na kar pau….! Ye SHADI TO MUJE ROKNI HI HOGI…

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part-3

next day morning…. Sujal kashish ko phon karta hai par kashih phon nahi uthati… sujal kashish se milne ka vichar banata hai…. Ab aage….

Sujal kashish ke ghar jata hai…. Door ko knock karta hai..

Kashish;- aa jao piyush.. darwaza khulla hai….

Sujal;- tumhare muh se kisi aur ka naam achcha nahi lagta kashish..

Kashish;- {with surprised} …sujal tum….??? Yanha…?

Sujal;- ….yanha nahi ..to kanha kashish…? kanha hona chahiye muje…? Tum hi batao…?

Kashish;- ..i m sorry…sujal..main samji piyush hai…

Sujal;- koi bat nahi kashish… par piyush ko apni soch main shamil mat karna… sah nahi paunga…

Kashish;- .. tum yanha… kuch kaam tha…?

Sujal;- muje tumse milne ke liye kisi bahane ki jarurat nahi hai kashish..

Kashish;- ..tum muje galat samaz rahe ho sujal….

Sujal;- ..aur tum..? tumne to muje kabhi samza hi nahi kashish.. na muje na hi mere pyar ko…. Tum to mujse ab bat karna bhi pasand nahi karti..{ phon wala metter}

Kashish;- muje tumhara phon sunai nahi diya…

Sujal;- tumhe to zuth bolna bhi nahi aata… tum bhle hi mujse dur chli jao kashish..par mere khyalo se tum dur nahi ja sakti… tum bhle hi mujse bat na karo… par meri yadoin se nahi nikal paogi.. tum janha jaogi wanha muje hi..sirf muje paogi….tum sujal se alag ho sakti ho par un dhadkno se kaise alag hogi…jo sirf sujal ke liye dhadkti hai.. un saano se kis tarah juda hogi jo sirf..sujal ka naam lekar chalti hai..nahi kashish tum lakh koshish kar lo to bhi mujse juda nahi ho sakti….

Kashish;- .sujal pls..main is meter main tumse koi bat nahi karna chahti…. Aakhir kyun tum bar bar muje pareshan karne aa jate ho..? kyun..?

Sujal;- ..PYAR KARTA HU TUMSE…. KYA YE KAFI NAHI…? Kya yah hak bhi ab tum chinna chahti ho..?

Kashish;- main koi hak nahi chinna chahti… bus… muje akela chod do..

Sujal;- akela chod du…? Jisko jindgi bhar sath dene ka wada kiya tha use akela chod du….? Jo meri pahchan mera wajood meri jindgi hai use chod du…? Jiski sirf ek muskrahat se ye sujal ji uthta hai use chod du…? Tum meri jarurat ho kashih… main tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi akela nahi chod sakta…

Kashsih;- ab in bato ka koi fayda nahi sujal.. sach to yahi hai ki meri shadi ho rahi hai..

Sujal;- nahi manta main is sach ko… main sirf itna janta hu ki tum sirf meri ho …

Kashish;- ..muje jo kahna tha maine kah diya….

Sujal;- bu..kashish bus…. Bahut kah diya tumne aur bahut sun liya maine… ab tum sunogi aur sirf main bolunga.. tum chahe lakh koshish kar lo par main tumhe piyush se shadi nahi karne dunga… tumne sujal ka pyar dekha hai us payr ki had nahi… KUCH LOGON
KE LIYE PYAAR EK EHSAAS HOTA HAI, KUCH LOGON KE LIYE PYAAR EK JASBA
HOTA LEKHIN MERE LIYE MERA PYAAR EK JUNOON HAI AUR JUNOON SE BADKAR
KUCH NAHI HOTA…. Tum sirf meri ho aur sirf meri hi rahogi.. duniya ka koi shaksh is sach ko nahi zuthla sakta… tum bhi nahi…

Tumhe jo karna tha tumne kar liya… ab meri bari hai..ab main karunga aur duniya dekhegi… agar yahi mere pyar ka imtihan hai to ...muje mazur hai… aur yakin mano kashih… jeet sirf meri hogi… sirf…meri…

Chlta hu… par main fir aaunga kashish….

Sujal kamre se bahar chla jata hai…par yah koi nahi janta ki ek shaksh un dono ki sari batein sun raha tha… wo koun that ha…..? jee haan doto wo tha piyush.. jo sari bate sun raha tha…

Ab aage kya hoga…? Kya piyuh sujal se bat karega…? Kya piyush I shadi ke liye mana karega..? jaan ke liye dekhte rahiye…

"Ek kahani….sirf…sujal ki…"

shukriya dosto..........

aapka apana ....tarang