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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
WOW.......!!
FARAH!!
U R TERRIFIC....!! AMAZING!!!
U HAVE WRITTEN SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY!!
WOW!!!!!!
U R GR888!!
U HAVE MADE MY DAY!!!
U KNOE WHD??
JAB BHI MAIN APNA PC ON KARTHI HUN..I JUS CANT RESIST READIN UR STORY!! AND THE NEXT PART!!
PLZZZZZZ.....WRITE MORE!!!!!!
IM WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
hahaha, and you know what you made my day. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
mein jab bhi story likhti hon i wait for your comment!!!!! πŸ˜› πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜‰

so for now, tc. story inshallah will progress tomorrow. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
AWW THANKS FARAH!! UR GR88!!!
CANT WAIT 4 DA NEXT PART!! πŸ˜›
THANK GOD THT U HAVE REVEALED TULSI'S SECRET!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
Wow Farah, that was just too good yaar! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
awesum rajeev1..... BALAJI MEMORIAL HOSPITAL?????? service is good na???? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† v cant risk kashish's life coz he is our sweeto suajl(Rajeev) life..... 😳
Edited by sangi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
wow great keep on yaar great story.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
hi guys...yes sangi definelty kashish ki life ka risk nahi liya ja sakta us hospital mein πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ...so i better get her discharged πŸ˜†

thanx fallen angel for your for your soppurtive comments and same to you ambarina....... so i am contiuning the story for you all! 😳 πŸ˜ƒ

keep commenting πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
ok guys......next part!

tulsi left the hospital as she remembered her past and got depressed. while charu and sujal were left shocked!

Charu: yeh sach kaise ho sakta hai......mama keh thi hain keh di unki beti nahi.............di........jo humare liye apni jaan bhi de sakti hain..............jo apni khushi ko bhula keh meri khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain.......jo mama ko mujhse zaida pyaar karti hain.....................zaida izzat karti hain................jinhone apni ab tak ki zindagi mama ki ek pyaar bhari nazar ka intezaar karte guzari..............woh di......woh kashish, humari kuch nahi lagti..........(she is crying helplessly and sujal holds onto her)

sujal: charu, sambhalo khudko
charu: kasie sambhalon, kyaa yeh ek sach humein di se alag kar deta hai, kya woh sari qurbaniyan bhoolne ki ijazat de deta hai.................hargiz nahi!!!!
......mama kuch bhi kahien, di meri di thi aur hamesha raheingi, (wiping off her tears)
charu: aur mama ko yeh baat mani hogi,,,,,,,,,,,,to kya huwa agar unka di ke saath janam ka rishta nahi, khoon ka rishta nahi.................mamta ka rishta to hai na! jiska ehsaas unhe dilna hi hoga.

sujal: tum theek keh rahi ho charu! yeh to aunty bhi janti hain keh is sab mein kashish ka koi kasur nahi.....phir janne anjane woh ussi ko chot pohancha rahi hai, ab tumhe khud ko bhi sambhalna hai aur apni mama aur apni di ko bhi!

charu: (looking up at sujal) bhaiya, mein aapse ek baat puchon?
sujal: haan pucho
charu: (a little hesistent) agar kabhie di......
sujal: bolo
charu: mere kehne ka matlab hai, agar kabhie mein kamzor pari to kya aap di ko...............
sujal: (though she didnt complete her sentence magar uski ankhon mein sujal par leta hai keh woh sujal se kya chahti hai)
sujal: pata nahi yeh theek hai keh nahi.............magar ab yeh meri zindagi ki sab se khoobsurat haqeeqat hai...............kashish keh pass koi ho na ho.......mein hamesha uske saath rahonga!!!!!!!
charu: (khush hote huwe) thanx bhaiya...........mujhe aap peh pura bharosa hai!
sujal pats her on the shoulder.
charu: mein abhi ati hon, mama ko dekh keh (she leaves).........................................

sujal goes towards the ICU and sees her lying there. she is in deep sleep.
sujal: kal ki subah tumhare liye sirf khusiyan layegi...........kasshhish!


NEXT MORNING:

kashish ko hosh ajata hai, charu was still with her in her room, woh kashsih keh paas ja kar uska haath tham thi hai and makes kashish sit up.
charu: di, ab aap kaisi ho?
kashish: kuch bhetar hon.....magar mein yahan kaise
charu: woh............(before she could complete sujal and the doc enters)
doctor: so ms. kashish, kaisa feel kar rahi hain ab aap?
kashish: better,likin mujhe huwa kya tha, aur mein yahan kaise ayi?

sujal: (before anyone could say anything) oh noooo! please ab tum yeh mat kehna keh mein bhool gayi!! (making a funny face)
kashish: haan!....aur tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? (asking sujal)
sujal: mein.....haan.........mujhe ICU ke kamron keh bahir bhetna bahut acha lagta hai......mera part time kaam hai!
charu and the doc start to laugh!

kashish: sujal, tum kabhie mere sawalon ka seedha jawab nahi de sakte.
sujal: de sakta hon na, likin agar tum koi seedha sawaal pucho to. ab mein yahan hospital ki safai to karne nahi aya aur na hi doctor ka haal puchne aya hon. is kamre mein khara hon.........aur yahan sirf ek hi patient hai,,,,,,to obvioulsy tumhe dekhne aya hon

kashish: feel shy!

charu: di, aapka accident huwa tha, aur sujal bhaiya aapko yahan laye the
kashish looks at sujal (with respect and love aur nazrein neech kar leti hai)
sujal was smiling all the way through!

doc: charu aap mere saath ajayein, kuch papers sign kardein aur phir kashish ko discharge kar diya jayega!

the doc and charu leave.
kashish to sujal: thanx, aap mujhe yahan layein...ap na hote to....shayad......
sujal: (still smiling at kashish at staring at her constantly)
kashish: aise kyun dekh rahe hain?
sujal: nahi,......mein soch raha tha.
kashish: kya? (innocently)
sujal: yehi keh, keh kahin yeh chot ka asar to nahi
kashish: asar? chot ka? kya matlab?
sujal: bhai...aj aap itne pyaar se jo baat kar rahi hain............
kashish feels so shy and blushes, while sujal sits beside her on the bed.
sujal: waise thanx ki zaroorat nahi, mein ne aapki nahi khud apni madaat ki thi
kashish: jee?....mein samjhi nahi
sujal: (shakes his head) mein............mein tumse.................
...............before sujal could continue......................kuch interruption ho jati hai!!!!!!!

so kya sujal apni baat puri kar paye ga, kya kashish sujal ki undhri baat samajh paye gi...............well wait guyz........i am thinking !!!! hehehehe
coming up......tulsi, kashish and charu's talks and sujal with his mama!!!!!!!
so until then take care guys and thanx to each and everyone for liking my story!!!!!!!!!!mmuuuuuuuwwwaaahhhh\
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ cool awesum....the ICU joke was too good.... i was laughing like mad.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
great work πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ plz continue

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