do naam ek jaan (a fan- fic) - Page 7

ok so the next day begins!
its now 7.30am , kashish and charu are ready for college. they take the blessings from tulsi and as alwayz tulsi gives no response to kashish!!!

AT THE COLLEGE:

charu goes to the class while kashish is going to the staffroom when she turns the corner and hears some guys.
boy #1: yar rishi, college shuru ho gaya par kuch maza nahi aya, koi ragging shagging ki jaye in juniors keh saath
rishi: nahi yaar, is saal ka plan kuch aur hai!
boy #2: kya plan hai?
rishi: is bar kisi student ko nahi balke teacher ko bakra banaye gein!!!! (he was wearing goggles and slowly brings then down with his finger)
boy#3: par kisko. kon se professor ko?
rishi: wohi, jisne kal rishi garewal ko challenge kiya tha..........Mssss Sinhaa!
boy #1: pagal ho gaya hai, woh bari tez cheez maloom hoti hai
Rishi: (while touching that boys face) kyun daar gaya, agar woh tez cheez hai to hum bhi kaam nahi. kal ke challenge ka jawaab to mein donga!!! aur woh bhi yaad rakhe gi! lets go guys!

kashish yeh sab sunleti hai, thoda sa dar jati hai magar phir.....usko woh baatein yaad ati hai jo usne sujal ko kahin thi...she builds her confidence and says to herself: tum mujhe kya yaad dilaoge...aaj to mein tumhari class lungi!
picks up her stuff from staffroom and heads towards the class

the class has started, everyone in the class is seated and kashish has marked their attendence. after 15 minutes......rishi arrives with his gang!
as he was entering kashish sees him and now the fight begins:

kashish: class shuru huwe 15 minute guzar chuke hain, role mark ho chuka hai, ab tashreef lane ki koi zaroorat nahi, aap ja sakte hain............magar haan kal se time par ana. (yeh keh kar she turns towards her students)

rishi: oh really! you'll stop me? waise meri ghari mein to abhi theek 8.30 huwe hain! kyun guys?//
his freinds agreed with him!
kashish ab kya kehti, ek student ko parne se mana to nahi kar sakti thi. so she let him come inside
likin itni jaldhi har woh bhi nahi manne wali thi, so she thought of a plan!!!

kashish: ok, so before i begin i want you guys to intrduce yourself to me..........so who should be first................ok yes you.........rishi.
rishi: main? (surprisingly)
kashish: jee aap. plz come in front and introduce yourself!
rishi: they all know ne....i'm RISHI GAREWAL.
kashish: kya mein ne aapse kaha keh aap in sab introduction dein. i said keh intruduce yourself to me! to plz bahir ayen......stand here..........pointing beside her and tell me about yourself.

one of rishi's friend spoke up: madam jee, yeh college hai school nahi!
kashish: acah student jee, to aap bhi student hain is school keh malik nahi.
the guys got embarrassed.
kashish: agar college mein parne ka shauk hai to behave like adults, class mein time peh ayen aur dosron ki respect karein. atleast college students ko itna to ana hi chahiye.
the guys were feeling insulted (khair insult hi to kar rahi thi kashish)
kashish: and now.......rishi introduce yourself.
rishi: (uske andar aag to lag hi gayi thi magar woh confuse tha keh ek larki usse is tarah se insult kar rahi hai) mmmm......mein.......i........i'm...............
kashish: oh ho lagta hai aap daar gaye!
the students started to giggle!
rishi: Wrong, na rishi ne daar na sikha hai aur na hi harna!
kashish: oh really. to meri class attend kar lia karein.....ap darna aur harna dono sikh jayienge.
rishi was totally messed up. somehow he wasnt able to compete in words with kashish, so in anger he pushed the table and kicked the chair and left in a huff!
rishi pointing at kashish: tumhe to mein dekh longa
kashish: agar roz class mein ajao to mein zarror dekhongi!!!!!

as rishi left the students started to laugh!
kashish: stop it plz. mein ne yahan koi mazak nahi kiya tha. magar aapke samne yeh sab karne ka maksad rishi ki insult nahi magar apko yeh sikhana tha keh dar dar keh jeena is wrong. agar aapke aas paas kuch ghalat ho raha hai to face it....dont run away...............aur yeh rishi jaise larke kisi ka kuch nahi bighar saktein..........yeh sirf bolna jante hain, so next time i want you all to face the situations.......understand!
sab ne kaha jee but charu stood up and started to clap. everyone looked at her and the bell rang (yani class time over, oh ho aaj to kuch par haya hi nahi)

college day finishes.................................

KASHISH"S HOME

charu apne kamre mein thi , tulsi kitchen mein aur kashish kuch files check kar rahi thi. dinner was ready, kashish table par ati hai!
kashish: are charu kahan hai?
tulsi: apne kamre mein (bura mun bana kar)
kashish: acha mein usse bula keh lati hon
tulsi: koi zaroorat nahi hai
kashish: magar kyun mama! khana thanda ho jayega
tulsi: kashish plz. stop it. itna interfere mat kiya karo meri aur meri beti ki zindagi mein! (scolding her)
kashish: meri beti? kya matlab mama, kya mein nahi hon aapki beti!
tulsi: tum se to baat karna hi fazool hai.
kashish: (thoda chirte huwe) aap karti hi kab hain mujhse baat. bachpan se le kar aaj tak apne khud ko mujhse dur rakha. hamesha se dekhti ayi hon keh meri wajah se aap aur papa larte rahe! mujhse baat nahi karti aap, meri baat sunti nahi aap............aur ab charu ko bhi mujhse dur kar rahi hai. woh meri choti behen hai.............kyun ma kyun.......kya ghalti hai meri........

tulsi: kiski galti hai yeh mein nahi janti....bus itna janti hon keh tum humse dur raho to behtar hai (she said this and left the table)
kashish: (holding her hand).....kyun dur rahon............koi wajah to hogi? aap mujhe zindagi bhar ki saza de rahi hain, magar saza dene se pehle meri ghalti kya hai yeh to baateyein ma, mera kasur kya hai ma.........kuch to bolo ma plz...............ma? (she was almost begging)
tulsi: (apna haath churate huwe) nahi hon mein teri ma! (furiously aur phir rona shuru ho gayi) nahi hon mein teri ma................nahi hon, tu meri beti nahi hai!

tana tana taana (kashish in skock)
tulsi: jana chahti hai apna kasur, tumhara wajood hi tumhara kasur hai, tumhara guzra huwa kal tumhara kasure hai..........tumhari shakal mein mujhe us aurat ki shakal nazar ati hai..............tumhare papa ki bewafai nazar ati hai.........................
kashish was in tears.........: mama aap jhoot bol rahi hain!
tulsi: yeh hi sach hai. tum ....haan tum meri zindagi ka ek aisa sach ho jisse mein cha keh bhi mita nahi sakti! meri nafrat tumhe dekh keh aur bharti hai . tum ek dhooka ho.......chali jao yahan se...........chordo mujse akela............jaoo! (pushed her towards the main door, aur khud apne kamre mein chali gayi!)

charu was still sleeping and didnt hear a word!
kashish toot chuki thi, ankhon se ansoo to bhe hi rahe the magar dil bhi ro raha tha.
kashish to herself: nahi aisa nahi ho sakta...mama mujhse jhoot bol rahi hain....mein..unki..........beti......nahi nahi (yeh sochte sochte woh ghar se bahir nikal gayi, on the main road now)

rishi and the gang were coming out of a near by pub......
rishi's friend : are woh dekh rishi........mssss Sinha!
rishi: really! lets go guys....aj maza chaka hi dein,,,,yeh bhi kya yaad karegi!
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............tulsi ki awaaz kashish keh kano mein gunj rahi thi. "tumhari shakal mein us aurat ki shakal nazar ati hai!!!!" " tum ek dhooka ho" " tum ek aisa sach ho jisse mein cha keh bhi nahi mitaa sakti" .......................keh achanak............................


SUJAL....
sujal was coming back home from office,,,still thinking about kashish, nazrein kahin thi aur dehaan kahin aur keh achanak woh gari rokta hai...bahut rush laga huwa tha sarak par, traffic block thi.
sujal to a man passing by:kya huwa hai, itna rush kyun hai
the man: koi accident huwa hai sahib
sujal: accident?
sujal gari se utarta hai dekhne keh liye, aur accident site peh pohanchta hai.
sujal: kisi ne ambulance ko bulaya?
another man: haan phone to kiya hai , ati hogi
sujal thoda aur age jata hai and finally age tak pohanch jata hai, aur dekhta hai keh khoon mein lipti ek larki pari hui hai..................................................
sujal goes close to her and he is terribly shocked at what he sees

sujal: KAAASSHHIIIIIIIIIISHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well...zara aaj kuch zadia emotional ho gayi kahani......koi baat nahi kabhie kabhie udaas bhi ho jana chahiye......kyun? ab kashish.....bach payegi ya nahi?kya iske peeche rishi ka haath hai? what will sujal do? milte hain break keh baad!

farah

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It was a FABULOUS story.U r TOO good and this story is just SUPERB.I only read u'r fan-fic.I feel i select a FABULOUS story.Plz write soon. 😳 😳 😳Especillay i am waiting for U'R story..... 👏 👏 👏

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phir 😲😲😲 jaldi batao.i have eaten kitkat during break.

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hey thanx guys.......i really appreciated it.bus thodi der aur break khatam hone mein! 😉

it makes me really happy to read your comments golu, sonia and specially shinymoon 😳 and i will definetely continue it for you guys!!!! 😳
hey by the way welcome to the forum shinymoon and sonia_sanya 😃 😛

and yes keep reading! 😃

IM SAYING IT TOTALLY FRUM MY HEART THT UR STORY IZ COMPLETELY DIFFERE RAJEEV1 I JUST LUV YUR IDEAS.....KEEP WRITING......ITS TOO EXCITING 😊

rajeev 1 ur really a fantastic writer , i just started reading ur story today and i just couldnt stop!!!!! excellent work!!

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by the way plz post the next part soooooon 😳

hey samreen, our avatars are the same. i get confused at times 😆 😆

and ruby, real thanx from the bottom of my heart for likin my story! i am just typing up the next part and will post it in a couple of minutes 😉 😃

cheers
farah

ab break khatam!!!!!!next part...............

sujal was horrifed: KASSSHHIIIISH!!!! (he shouted) kashish hosh mein ao. kashish plz meri taraf dekho!
but there was no response from kashish!
sujal picked her up from the ground and started to walk towards his car
a man pulled him back: suniye, ambulance ati hogi
sujal confronted him: mein ambulance ak inetzar nahi kar sakta.....agar meri kashish ko...............(he stopped in btw and walked faster towards his car.)

sujal placed kashish in the car and started to drive to the hospital!

...................meanwhile rishi and the gang were in a car driving really fast
rishi's friend: rishi gari roko
rishi stopped the car at once: kya huwa (he sounded scared)
friend: yar yeh humne acha nahi kiya
rishi: is keh ilawa aur koi chara nahi tha
freind: likin yaar, usse ........is halat mein hum log................nahi nahi. humein waapis jana chahiye, madaat keh liye
rishi: pagal ho gaye ho?
another friend: rishi likin usne humare saath jo bhi kiya so kiya, humein unko aisi halat mein chor ke nahi ana chahiye tha.
rishi: dekho mein is accident keh case mein nahi phas na chahte. tum logon ko itni fikar ho rahi hai to get down from my car and go help her!
third friend: yaar yeh tum log kya keh rahe ho.hum ne jo kuch kiya theek kiya. ab bus bhool jao sab kuch and lets go home!
they all agree and rishi drops them home and then he also goes home!

KASHISH"S HOUSE

it was now around 10pm. charu ki ankh achanak khuli.
charu to herself: are dus baj gaye. mein ne khana bhi nahi khaya, bahut bhook lagi hai. chalo neeche chal keh dekhti hon kya bana hai.
she goes down, likin wahan na hi usse kashish milti hai aur na nahi tulsi. she looks around for them in the kitchen, living and drawing room, but couldnt find both
charu: shayad di apne kamre mein hongi, wahan ja ke check karti hon
charu quickly went upstairs and opened kashish's room: diiiiiiii! dii aap kahan ho? washroom mein? (she knocks on the washroom door.....no reply.......she moves the handle and opens the washroom.........no ones there) are yeh di kahan chali gayi. (she was now getting tensed, charu phir tulsi keh kamre mein bhagi bhagi jati hai to ask her)
charu: mama! di kahan hain, sare ghar mein dhundha magar woh kahin nahi mili!
tulsi who was holding sinha's photo and looked at charu with a "what are you saying look" (ok guys this is the old proffessor sinha, not amar talwar coz he looks a bit older for tulsi)

tulsi: yeh kya keh rahi hai
charu: haan mama, kya di aapko bata keh nahi gayi
tulsi remembers keh it was her who pushed her out of the house, she suddenly realizes what a blunnder she has made: hey bhagwaan! yeh mein ne kya kar diya. ab kashish ko kahan dhundo........kahan gayi hogi???? (agar tulsi keh dil aur dimaag mein kashish keh liye nafrat thi to itne saalon mein kashsih keh pyaar ne uske dil mein kahin ek soft corner bhi bana liya tha, isliye na chahte huwe bhi tulsi ko kashish ki fikar thi)

charu: mama dont worry, mein dekh thi hon, paas mein hi gayi hongi!

charu goes out in search for kashish............................magar woh kahan janti thi keh kashish zindagi aur maut keh beech mein jhul rahi hai..................................

OPERATION THEATRE

sujal was standing outside the operation theatre, his shirt was soaked in kashish's blood. he looked helpless aur uska pyaar uski ankhon se ansoo ban kar bhe raha tha!

the red light goes off and the doc comes out. sujal holds the doc and asks him : aab kaisi hai woh?
doctor: dekhiye, kuch kaha nahi ja sakta, chot to itni gheeri nahi thi magar kuch sadma pohancha hai jiski wajah se brain par asar huwa hai.......she is still unconscious................jaise hi hosh ata hai i'll let you know (the doc leaves)

kashish ko bahir late hain operation table peh to be shifted in ICU...............

sujal goes to meet kashish: tumhe kuch nahi hoga.............mein hone nahi donga..............na hi mera pyaar hare ga aur na tum apni zindagi se! mein ne khud se wada kiya tha keh ek din tum meri bano gi.............aur woh waada mein kabhie tutne nahi donga..... (kashish was still unconscious) he kissed her lightly on her hand and then left the ICU.
bahir ja kar he calls at her house!! (number...........directory se lia tha. heheheh)
charu ab tak ghar a chuki thi......tring tring!!
charu: hello! (she was still tensed)
sujal: charu! mein sujal bol raha hon
charu: bhaiya..ap......bhaiya di pata nahi kahan chali gayi hain, unka kuch pata nahi chal raha
sujal: charu ghabrao mat. kashish ka accident ho gaya tha.
charu: KYYYAA?
sujal: mein usse hospital le aya hon, operation hogaya hai magar wo abhi bhi under observation hai.
charu: kon se hospital
sujal: Balaji memorial hospital (hheheheheh)
charu: theek hai mein aur mama ate hain

AT THE HOSPITAL
..........sujal was still waiting. it was past midnight. he called home and said keh uske freind ka accident huwa hai, and he is in the hospital isliye aaj ghar late aye ga...........

charu and tulsi arrive,
charu: mama, woh rahe sujal bhaiya. (pointing at sujal, who was leaning against the wall.......all worried)
tulsi: beta.....kashish kahan hai..........
sujal: umm....andar
tulsi and charu rush inside to see kashish.
charu: di...yeh ....di aapko kya huwa....ap kuch bolti kyun nahi??? (she was in tears)
tulsi sat beside kashish, she couldnt see kashish in such condition! and a tear fell from her eye on kashish's hand................ek dum filmi style!!!!

sujal noticed some movement in kashish and ran to call the doc.
the doc checked her up and said.: congratulations, unhone hosh to agaya hai magar mein ne neend ka injection diya hai....she still needs proper rest....ap log plz sab bahir ajayein....................

outside, sujal still standing, charu and tulsi were sitting next to each other.
tulsi: yeh sab meri wajah se huwa. mein aapse apna wada nahi nibaah payi......aaj kashish ki is halat ki zimidaar mein hon...

charu: mama yeh aap kya keh rahi hai?
tulsi: sahi keh rahi hon,na mein ne kashish ko sab sach bataya hota aur na hi woh ghar se bahir jati aur na hi yeh sab hota
charu: kaisa sach mama.....baataiye na aisi kya baat thi..
tulsi is confused......she doesnt know whether she should tell charu or not...........
charu: mama apko mere sar ki kasam! plz baataiye

after a thought tulsi tells her about what happened in the evening..................................................... .......................
sujal bhi udhar hi khara sun raha tha...both charu and sujal are shocked after hearing tulsi
charu: kya? di.....aapki beti.........nahi?
tulsi: haan....nahi hai woh meri beti.............(tulsi ke purane zakham phir taza ho gaye) woh tumhara papa ki najayaz..................( she went away without completing her sentence)

aur peeche reh gaye sujal and charu in complete shock!!!!!!!!


kal ki subah kya rang laye gi......kya kashish us sach keh saath reh payegi...........(what a ryhme..hehehhe)..kya sujal kashish se kabhie apne pyaar ka izhaar kar paye ga..................kya tulsi kabhie apna guzra huwa kal bhool paye gi...........well hopefully next part will touch these points

ok guys, hopefully kal se thodi lightness ayegi story mein......melodrama zaida ho gaya hai.
anywayz,,thanx everyyyyyyone for liking my story and i hope you guys like it further on too!!!

luv .....farah