do naam ek jaan (a fan- fic) - Page 4

hahaha, i know yaar, kuch zaida hi sachayan ho gayi hain!!!!! chalo khair, its time to reveal some.............

Veena is now all alone in her house, sab chale gaye hain apne apne kaam par. veena keh kano mein abhi bhi chetan ki awaaz gunj rahi thi keh " kuch nahi hoga, bhool jao". veena ja kar sofe par bhet jati hai while still crying and now time for some flashbacks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FLASHBACK......... sujal abhi teen mahina ka tha jab chetan aur veena ne uske paida hone ki khushi mein ek party rakhi, unke sare doost bhi aye huwe the aur veena ne apne ek jane mane pandit ko bhi bulaya tha for the pooja.
Ab it was time for the pooja aur pandit ji ne veena se kaha keh sujal ko layein. jab veena sujal ko layi to pandit ji ne veena se pucha
pandit: putre ka naam kiya hai? aur kundli de di jiye
veena: yeh le li jiye pandit ji .(handing over the kundli) iska naam Sujal hai.
yeh sun kar pandit ne veena ki taraf dekha, phir thodi der kundli parhi aur veena ki taraf phir se dekha aur kaha
Pandit: is ke jeevan mein bahut dukh ayenge........aur ek waqt asia bhi ayega jab ya to iski zindai ek naye morr par chal pare gi ya phir zindagi keh sare morr hi kahatm ho jayeinge.
veena: pandit jee...yeh aap kya keh rahe hain?
pandit: bilkul sahi keh raha hon. iski zindagi mein ek aisa toofan aye ga jo ise apni taraf kheeche ga aur yeh cha kar bhi us toofan se bach nahi paye ga.ab woh sirf ek hadsa hogaya ya tumhare bete ki zindagi ki ek dardnak haqeeqat, yeh to waqt hi bataye ga...... magar us toofan mein bahut kashish ho gi, yeh bhe jaye ga, yeh bhe jaye ga
End of flash back.
veena was still sitting on her sofa aur pandit jee ki awaaz uske kano mein gunj rahi thi."us toofan mein bahut kashish hogi......us toofan mein bahut kashish ho gi....yeh beh jayega.....................nahiiiii. (she came back to reality) nahi aisa nahi ho sakta. mere sujal ko kabhie kuch nahi hoga, mein hone nahi dongi, mein hone nahi dongi.


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Kashish: Charu bhet jao, abhi.
Charu: magar di..yeh
Rishi: oh i see, to yeh ms Chalu ki di hain (he used to call her chalu to irritate here)
charu: haan hain. and i'm charu not chalu
Rishi. no no no, your name is charu but you are ChaaLLuu, kyun guys? (his friends started to laugh)
kashish: enough. tum dono abhi isi waqt, apni apni seats peh bheto and start behaving like adults.
Rishi: aaj tak rishi ne koi kaam kisi keh kehne par nahi kiya. ( woh kashish ki taraf barha, aur apna pura haath attendence keh register par rakha and rotated the register towards himeslf, phir table peh se pen uthaya and said: umm.....rishi garewal.....present (he marked himself present)
yeh dekh kar kashish ko bahut ghusa aya. magar pehla din tha woh kuch aisa nahi karna chahti thi keh baqi students ko bhi koi problem ho,isliye woh chup rahi.
Rishi: aaj tak rishi ko koi class mein nahi rok paya, to tum kon hoti ho haan? (he shook his head and went out of the door and his chela'z(freinds) followed him).
kashish ignoring rishi's behaviour decided to start the class............................ ............end of class. everybody was leaving when charu came up to kashish: di...ap theek hona?
kashish: haan mein bilkul theek hon, sorry woh tumhe danta...
charu: di plz, kaisi baatein kar rahi ho, acah chalo ghar chalein
kashish: tum chalo mein thodi der tak aongi, staffroom mein kaam hai
charu: ok theek hai, apna khayal rakhna. (yeh keh kar woh bahir jane ke liye bari likin phir darwaze ke paas se muri aur kashish ko kaha: di.....you were awesome today and winked at her
kashish smiled and waved at her!
kashish class pack up kar ke staff room gayi aur ja kar kuch files check karne lagi, check karte karte uski ankh kab lagi yeh usse pata hi nahi chala. TANG!! the clock struck, kashish ki ankh foran khuli.
kashish: OMG, 6 baj gaye, aur mein.....yahan.......ghar jana chahiye (guys its winter to abhi andhera hone hi wala hai). kashish apna bag utha ti hai aur files sameit kar ek side par rakhti hai and leaves for home.......likin bahir to toofan aya huwa hai.............zor se barish ho rahi hai............kashish kisi bhi tarah kar ke college ke main gate tak pohanch jati hai, magar toofan ki wajah se koi taxi ya rickshaw dor dor tak nazar nahi araha hota hai. woh ghabra jati hai, ab kya kare woh..............keh achanak..................well, achanak keh baad ki kahani thodi der baad.

kya is toofan mein koi uski madaat karega.....kya is toofan ka taluk sujal se ho sakta hai!!!!!!!! well wait and watch.....i mean read
i hope this part was not so boring..................c yous

nice part
keep it up 👏 👏 👏

well 2 good 👏👏👏 but kekta mai twist na daal dena 😆plz continue

pink

bahut kasish hogi kya kashish cyclone hai 😆

yaar why are you guys so scared........ekta ke style se itna dar kyun rahe ho 😆 😆 . dont worry, nahi dalongi.........aur agar kuch aisa ho bhi gaya to .............Plastic surgery hai na!!! 😆 😆 😛

nahin wapis nahin plastic surgery pleasee

Nahii..nahii yaaar no PLASTIC SURGERY!! I hope tum jo bhi story likhogii..woh ekta ke ghatiya serials se hat kar hee hogi...!! THNK GOD TUMNE EK SACHAAYEE TO REVEAL KI..Tumne mera maaaaan rakh liya LOL 😉
Warna main toh ghabra hee gayee thii k najane kya hone wala hai ab..
anyways..Nice..keep writing..im waiting 4 MORE!!!
Rajeev ka scene bhi toh aye koi!! IM WAITING 4 MY JANUU!! 😉 😆

Wow, great story 👏 👏 👏 Plz continue...

Originally posted by: rajeev1

yaar why are you guys so scared........ekta ke style se itna dar kyun rahe ho 😆 😆 . dont worry, nahi dalongi.........aur agar kuch aisa ho bhi gaya to .............Plastic surgery hai na!!! 😆 😆 😛

hum dathey nahi hai... bas hum us se intna nafrat karty hain ke use hum jitna door rahe utna uskey liye acha hai...and u 4 sure dun wanna ur frndz 2 b murderers ryte... 😉 aur haan plastic surgery ke concept se memberz ka kuch zyada banta nahi hai.. 😉 so better stay away from it...