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Robin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#581

😆 omg that was toooooo funny! i just about choked laughing!!!!! bharat is such a brat! poor mets, i felt embarassed for her! hehe and poor adi, stuck having to goto office! well, it seems like mets is gonna have him whipped in no time 😆 so excited for more, continue soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: Robin_M
😆 omg that was toooooo funny! i just about choked laughing!!!!! aww lol! 😆bharat is such a brat! lol yeah! poor mets, i felt embarassed for her! hehe😆😆 and poor adi, stuck having to go to office! lol yeah! well, it seems like mets is gonna have him whipped in no time 😆 so excited for more, continue soon!

lol...adi's not gonna be whipped that easily!😆

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#583

^^Yo. Um could u do a FF, almost like this one, with AM, AK, KA, LKT, Neev -Prachi?

When are u continuing???? 😡

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72968

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Posted: 17 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: *Shifali*
^^Yo. Um could u do a FF, almost like this one, with AM, AK, KA, LKT, Neev -Prachi?

When are u continuing???? 😡

haha!! patience dear!!!😆

adn about the ff....hmmm you don't mind Michi do you?

coz i'm planning 2 write an ff called Chori Chori! look at my sig!😉

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: tsamhita

haha!! patience dear!!!😆 Hehe..thas what I don't have!

adn about the ff....hmmm you don't mind Michi do you? No...Don't like MICHI...like NP...

coz i'm planning 2 write an ff called Chori Chori! look at my sig!😉

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72968

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Posted: 17 years ago

#586

Awww!! soz shifali!!! i like MP and NA...and i'm writing a ff on the five couples in my sig! 😆 looks like you won't like that ff! 😆

well here's the part!

Chapter 39

Adi went downstairs to meet Shikhar.
A: uh dad, I'm ready to go to office!
S: beta…today's Sunday
A: oh! Yeah, i..i forgot! Umm bharat said you wanted to talk to me
S: me?? No beta! I didn't want to talk to you!
Stupid Bharat!!! Wait till I get my hands on you!!

Adi turns to go but shikhar stops him
S: beta! There is one thing I wanted to tell you
A: yes dad
S: beta, stay at home for a few days! Enjoy! Be with maithili!
A: but dad,
S: beta, I'm asking you this, will you answer truthfully?
A: yes dad…
S: is everything allright between you and maithili?
Adi looked worried, he didn't want to tell shikhar anything, but at the same time he promised he would speak the truth
A: dad…we need time…
That was all adi could say, it was the safest thing possible to say.
Shikhar smiled: thankyou beta…now that I know, I can give you that time.
A: thanks dad.
Adi smiled and went into his room. He saw maithili setting things in his room. He genuinely smiled.

Maithili turned round
M: so what happened? Why did dad call you?
A: bharat lied! Dad didn't call me…
M: oh! Umm I'm sorry I shouted at you, I didn't mean it!
Adi smiled warmly and walked upto her
A: well, at least it made me realise that you are right.
M: wow!! Vikram-Aditya Mehra teling me that I'm right!! That calls for a party!!!
Adi laughed a little
A; a party it is then!
He turned round to take out clothes from his wardrobe
M: woah woah! Wait! I said it like a joke! I didn't mean…like..i don't like parties!
A: oh come one metz!
M: maithili ! she said sharply
A: ok maithaaaaailiii!!
M: just pronounce it right!
A: ok! Adi said getting annoyed
A: you can stay at home if you want! I'm going then!
M: where are you going?
A: not your business!!!
Maithili frowned: stupid! Just when I thought you'd turn nice!

Adi went downstairs and met shikhar there
S: adi beta…where are you going?
A: uh who dad, theres a small party at my friends place, its in celebration of his marriage!
S: mayuri! We have to have that for adi!! How about a reception tomorrow night?
M: of course shikhar! That's the best idea!
A: uh hello here! My wedding's happened and you're planning the party?
M: so what beta! That's what family does!
Adi sighed
A: very well then! Let the whole world come to know I'm married to Her! Adi grumbled
S: did you say anything beta?
A: uh no dad!..i've got to go!
M: take maithili with you beta!
Adi froze mid way
A: uh maithili!…uh she's not feeling well1
M: adi! How can you go to the party if your wife's not well!
A: no! mom…she is feeling fine! She just…just..
Mai: I'm here mamma!
Maithili said coming down the stairs
Adi sighed and then frowned
A: great! Now she's going to come!
Mai: ok bye mamma! Bye papa!
Aid and maithili left in the car.

A: so you're coming?
M: no!
A: what do you mean?
M: I'm meeting my friend Rohit at the cinema!
A: WHAT!!! You're meeting a boy!!
M: yes!! Why are you getting so paranoid!! You meet girls all the time! Even in the party you're gonna go to! You'd probably kiss one of the girls and what not!
A: what do yo mean!! I…I wasn't getting paranoid! And I…I wasn't going to kiss any girls!
M: yes you were!
A: no I wasn't!
M: yes!
A: NO NO NO NO!!!
Adi stopped outside the threatre and got down
M: uh ok bye!
A: no! adi said holding maithili's hand
M: uff!! What is it now!
A: I'm coming with you!
M: what!?
A: its been a long time since I've seen a film! I'm coming in
M: but you don't' have a ticket!
A: now I do!
Adi said buying a ticket in black
M: adi that's illegal!
A: who cares!

Adi held maithili's hand and walked along with her.
M: wait adi!! Wait for Rohit!
A: why should I wait for him!!
M: ok at least let me wait!!
A: No!! you're MY wife!! Come with ME!!
M: you are sooo…argh!
Adi didn't seem in the mood to argue back, he felt like a child. He was even acting like a child. He felt so possessive and didn't like the feeling of something being didstant from him.
Adi and maithili sat next to each other in random seats.
M: adi! This isn't our seat!
She hissed at him
A: who cares! Its good view!
Maithili rolled her eyes
M: me and you are sooo different!!
A: I'm your north honey! He said winking at her
Maithil rolled her eyes

The horror film started – Darna Zaroori Hai
Maithili was scared at the beginning of the film
M: uggh!! Why did Rohit pick this film!! And he's not even here!!
Adi however, was enjoying the film.
Everything was quiet in the theatre as there was a suspence scene going on. Maithili held her breat, and closed her eyes. There was a bang and she grabbed adi's arm.
Adi stopped and turned towards her.
Maithil slowly opene dher eyes and both stared at each other
Maithili slowly removed her grasp from Adi's hand and turned away.
Adi smiled slightly at her.
A tall man came and sat next to maithili.
She turned to him
M: uff!! How late are you" she hissed
Adi looked at the man
"rohit!" the man put his hand forewards
Adi wasn't too pleased
A: adi..he said shaking rohit's hand

Adi noticed how maithili was seated, she inclined towards Rohit and Aid didn't like that one bit. He was worried that if a horror scene came and maithili gripped Rohit's hand instead of his.
Adi looked around and did the classic yawn and stretch move. He placed his arm round maithili's seat and she looked at him. He however looked away, pretending nothing at all happened. Maithili tunred back to the screen and adi's hand fell on her shoulders
She shot him a glance but he ignored it.
He slowly sunk into his eat and moved his head closer to hers. Maithili got annoyed and looked angrily at him. Sh elbowed him and he gasped
A: ok ok! Adi hissed..i get the point!
Adi took his hand off from maithili's shoulders and looked around. He smirked to find a girl next to him.
The girl looked back at him. Adi smiled, and she smiled back.
"hey.." adi spoke softly into her ear
She smiled "hey…I'm Dhristi"
"adi!" adi spoke
Maithili looked at both of them from the corner of her eye, she seemed to get irritated and didn't knw why.

Adi once again did the classic yawn and stretch move and this time maithili noticed his hand moving towards Dhrishti.
She gripped adi's arm tightly and he looked at her, stopping mid way
M: uh..i..i was scared…
A: It's a song going on! There's nothing to be scared about!
M: uh!..maithili realised he was true
M: umm…. Yes there is! I..i'm very scared…
Adi raised his eyebrow at her
He inched his head closer and whispered in her ear
A: admit you're jealous!
M: ME!! Maithili spoke loudly
The people in front of her turned round
M: uh sorry!
M: me!! She hissed at adi
M: I'm not jealous!!
A: ok then! I'll just put my arm round Dhrishti!
Maithili grabbed adi's armand put it round her shoulders.
Adi grinned at her.
She frowned and pretended as if she had done the most casusual thing ever

Adi's head dropped on maithili's shoulder slightly and his nose caressed her bone. She blushed a little and pushed him away. Adi grinned and leaned against her
A: I love you he whispered.
Maithili's breath caught in her throat.
Adi looked gob smacked at what he said himself

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#587

Hehe...yes...wont read it...and long part...will comment after i read it.

Read it.

OMG! AM theatre is like million bucks! Love it!

LOL! M jealous and so is A! Both are jealous but wont say it! How stupid can they be?? Explaintion here please!😆

Anyways, last line when Adi said ILU to Mets made me jealous! I want to be her!😡

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago

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JennyPenny

@JennyPenny

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#588

FANTABLOUS 👏 👏 👏 Haii, just rocking part 👏

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catafly

@catafly

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#589

.WOW!!!!!!! finally adi said 'i love u' 2 methali but will she take it siriouse? hope she n adi do.ny way do cont asap!!!!!! 👏

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maplez13

@maplez13

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Posted: 17 years ago

#590

Did I just imagine him saying that? How's he gonna get himself outta this one eh?! 😆
Awww bless, they both gettin jealousssss haha.
Continue soon. Cheers.

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