FF:A-M:Inevitable Destiny:FINALE! Pg41! - Page 30

Hey
Whoa dat is long...hmm lemme get bak to u
I think i mite be here for a awhile 😉

Cheers

Edited

Ok..dat was MESMERISING

I was hanging on to each & every word. It was so beautifully written....

WOW wat an ending but so tragic...😭

I loved how u got Mets to read his thesis and how she went after him.😃

This story flowed so well dat I wud have never guessed the ending wud be like dis...i mean u had me stumped!!!

It was great reding ur FF and thank you for sharing ur words wif us

Overall it was excellent!!👏

Cheers

Pretz

that was fantastic breath takin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by da way who died??????????

i jus read ur entire fanfic over a span of 2days...i would've finished it in one but...exam time...had sum studying to get dun..lol...but OMG OMG OMG i dunno wht to say...tht was prolly da best fanfic i've ever read...as anxious as i was to kno wht happens i was jus as sad knowing tht is was gonna end soon...all the adi mets scenes were sooo.... well cute is the only word i can think of right now, but tht is such an understatement...they were freakin awsome 😳 😳 ...u were so descriptive it jus made it tht much easier to visualize evrything...n the whole adi's shabby hair...awww...i could jus picture him w/ his hair like tht 😳 😳 but really really great job on the FF...i loooooooooooooooved it ...wht more can i say...ur awsome 😳 😃

omg wow 👏 👏
im sooo speechless
they way u wrote is jus wow
and the way u ended shocked me coz im kinda confused it was it adi dat died 😕 out all the fanfic i have read this fanfic had a different ending sumthing dat seemed unexcepted well dat wat i felt lol
im gona miss dis ff
and hoping dat u will write many more magical stories 😳

Originally posted by: tsamhita

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG i have no other words to say!!! this part was soooooo beautiful....the whole way in which you described maihtili runnign to adi...confessing her love for him...;

and the ending just broke my heart....beautiful and breathtaking story.....
one quiery - is adi the one who died...i'm sure he is...

i'm just so...mesmerised by the whole story....words refuse to express my hearts feelings.... 👏 👏 👏

THANK YOU SO MUCH! For all the amazing things that you always seem to find to say after every chapter, I really, really appreciate it! You have always been so encouraging! Words refuse to express the gratitude I feel! All I can say is thank you, thank you, AND THANK YOU!!!
You are so young and yet you display such creativity and potential, I hope you continue to maintain the integrity of your work. Good luck with all your endeavors!!

Originally posted by: sidsk

OH.MY.GOD.................I'm in so much awe right now.I mean,I cannot even begin to describe how beautiful and poignant that was.Cant believe it ended.
The whole Haaji Ali sequence was done sooo well.Absolute brilliance! 👏 👏 👏 The way shez searching for him,her feelings when she spots him,the way you described him praying and when they kiss. 😳 👏 👏 You described it so well,I felt I was actually watching all that happening.
And the church part too! 👏 👏When Prem said "Mukti",I almost cried. 😭 😭
Adn the last part was so beautifully written 😳 😭 😭
I think both Mets n Adi died.....Am I right??

Thats funny, I was listening to A.R Rahman's Piya haji ali while writing that scene and was so lost in that song and the movie that I forgot for a moment that we were in Capetown and not actually in Haji Ali. It is my favorite scene, so I am extra happy that you all like it too! 😛 😆 Lol and I just had to bring PM in some how, they are iconic.

And my god!!!! Thank you for the beautiful words that you have always so generously shared! I am so extremely humbled I dont know what to say!!!! You are brilliant and talented and you should know what you say is extremely meaningful!!! Thanks a lot for the beautiful words!😛 THANK YOU!!!

Originally posted by: tsamhita

did adi adn maithili die??? if so...then insha allah! at least they are together by death 😳 😳

😆 Lol, your funny!!! I enjoy your humour! But I am going tease you and make you find the answer for yourself. Look at the post beneath the last chapter. I edited it. 😉

Originally posted by: Pretz

Hey
Whoa dat is long...hmm lemme get bak to u
I think i mite be here for a awhile 😉

Cheers

Edited

Ok..dat was MESMERISING

I was hanging on to each & every word. It was so beautifully written....

WOW wat an ending but so tragic...😭

I loved how u got Mets to read his thesis and how she went after him.😃

This story flowed so well dat I wud have never guessed the ending wud be like dis...i mean u had me stumped!!!

It was great reding ur FF and thank you for sharing ur words wif us

Overall it was excellent!!👏

Cheers

Pretz

WOW! Thank you so much!!!! I hope it was a good stumped and not a 'oh my where did that come from, that doesnt make sense, kind of one! 😉
I am glad you liked the thesis bit, I felt like we would come full circle with the story if I added that, and ofcourse unlike in the soap, my Janki Devi had to have some hand it A-M uniting, after all she's his Lady-D!

But seriously, you guys have been so so awesome, it was a great pleasure, writing this FF for all of you!! So thank you for making it memorable! Really! 😛

Originally posted by: catafly

that was fantastic breath takin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by da way who died??????????

Thank you so much my dear!! Who died....? Hmmm.....this seems to be the universal question on everybody's mind! And the answer is.........I dont know...........!!!!😆
And my explanation for that is in my post below the FF. 😉

Thanks a tonne, once again!!

Originally posted by: mbenjamin

i jus read ur entire fanfic over a span of 2days...i would've finished it in one but...exam time...had sum studying to get dun..lol...but OMG OMG OMG i dunno wht to say...tht was prolly da best fanfic i've ever read...as anxious as i was to kno wht happens i was jus as sad knowing tht is was gonna end soon...all the adi mets scenes were sooo.... well cute is the only word i can think of right now, but tht is such an understatement...they were freakin awsome 😳 😳 ...u were so descriptive it jus made it tht much easier to visualize evrything...n the whole adi's shabby hair...awww...i could jus picture him w/ his hair like tht 😳 😳 but really really great job on the FF...i loooooooooooooooved it ...wht more can i say...ur awsome 😳 😃

I am so overwhelmed right now, I dont know what to say! Firstly I would like to say I am so impressed that you could finish the FF in just 2 days! I mean, its my own writing, but I cant even do that! 😆😆
And secondly, I am so so humbled by your words, I just really have no words left...thank you so much for taking the time out to read my rambles and comment on them, it means a lot! Oh n I love his long shaggy hair too! Its makes me picture him as rugged, unshaved, muscular and a total bad boy turned good! 😉

Thanks once again!!