My desire to make you mine RoNakshi SS Last part pg7

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My desire to make you mine Part 1

I dedicate this FS to my sweet friend palchin2995 as she suggested me to write a RoNakshi story on the Kannada movie Gowramma which is there is there in telugu as Nuvvu Naaku Nachav and tamil as Vaseegara.



Suman on phone call with her best friend Veena:Veena...it's sad that you cannot come for Sona's engagement.

Veena:What to do Suman?Even I am sad.But I am not able to avoid certain prior commitments.

But as you know on my behalf Rohit will come there.He will help you in every way.

Suman:I know and I am waiting for Rohit's arrival.

Veena:As you know,Rohit wants to settle in India.Till he arranges an accommodation will you let him stay in your house?

Suman:Veena...we are best friends.I can't forget how much you helped me when I was struggling alone with my daughters.Why this formality with me?Rohit can stay here.He is like my own son.

Veena smiled.

Suman entered Sonakshi's room.

Sonakshi was with her little sister Pari.

Pari:Sona di,you are going to get married to a NRI guy.You should look the best.You need to visit beauty parlours more often.

Suman:Sona does'nt need any beauty treatment.My Sona is a natural beauty.

They all smiled.

Sona:Mumma..is it necessary to get married so early?In fact I don't even know Sumit properly.

Suman:Sona,you have met Sumit.Right?He is a nice boy.He has a good job abroad.You can also enjoy your life there.You won't get a better proposal.After marriage you will get to know Sumit properly.So be optimistic about this.Ok?

Sona:Ok mumma.

Sona said in her mind:Why I don't feel happy to marry Sumit?

Suman:By the way I just spoke to Veena aunty now.Rohit is coming soon.

Pari:Wow!

Sona:Veena aunty's son Dr.Rohit Sippy?

Suman:Yes.

Sona:I have not seen him since many years.Is he the same funny guy now also?

Suman smiled:We will see.

Rohit reached the Rastogi house.Suman hugged him happily.

Suman:Rohit...my cute boy.You look so different now.You look fit and handsome now.

Rohit:After all I am a doctor now.I have to maintain my health.

Pari:I also like to be fit and healthy.

Rohit:Seeing you at first sight itself I understood how much health conscious you are.

Pari smiled.

Pari showed a room to Rohit.

Pari:This is your room Rohit.

Rohit:Very nice room.By the way where is the to be bride Sonakshi?

Pari:Sona di is in her room.I will call her.

Rohit:No need.You tell me where her room is.I will go and give her a surprise.

Pari smiled:Ok.

Sonakshi was sitting and reading a book.Rohit came from behind and made a sound:Bhlooooooo

Sonakshi got up and turned back with fear.

Rohit was laughing.

Sona:Who are you?

Rohit:Rohit Sippy.

Sona:You mean..you are sent by Rohit Sippy?Why did'nt he come?Veena aunty said that he will come.Guess he is so busy that he sent his assistant here.Is he still fat?

Rohit gritted his teeth angrily.

Rohit:Can you please stop it?Don't imagine too much.Rohit Sippy can spare time for Suman aunty and her family.By the way Rohit Sippy is not fat anymore.He is a handsome man now.And for your kind information I am Rohit.

Sonakshi was stunned:What?You are Rohit?

Rohit:Yes.Am I not looking cute and handsome?

Sona:Now I believe that you are Rohit as your self boasting habit still exists.

Rohit:I am not boasting.Everyone knows that I am handsome and girls always come after me.

Sona:Not again.I agree that you have lost weight and you look quite good.But you are not any Bollywood star for all the girls to come after you.

Rohit:All the girls say that I look like a Bollywood actor.I even got film offers from big directors.But I rejected all the offers as I am interested only in the field of medicine.

Sonakshi felt like laughing:Oh..not again.

Rohit:I am saying the truth.

Sona:You can never change Rohit.Anyways we will go down.

While walking towards the door Sonakshi slipped and Rohit held her from falling.

Sona:Thanks.

Rohit:You know why you slipped?Because you have no balance.Do you know why you have no balance?Because your body has no enough strength.Do you know why?Because you have calcium deficiency.You need to have more milk and eggs.You can take calcium supplements also.

Sona:Oh no Rohit.You are talking like a typical doctor.

Rohit:I am a doctor.So naturally I will talk like a doctor.Right?

Sona:Ya.But stay here as our family friend,not as a doctor.Please spare me Dr.Rohit Sippy.

Rohit:This is the problem.You guys do not listen to doctors and take their advise..But when the health gets ruined they blame doctors.

Sonakshi smiled.

Sonakshi -Sumit got engaged by exchanging rings.

Sumit took Sonakshi to an isolated room.

Sona:Why did you bring me here Sumit?

Sumit looked at her deeply:You look so hot Sonakshi.

Sumit tried to hug her.The shocked Sonakshi walked backward.

Rohit who passed by happened to see this.

Sona:Sumit...what are you doing?

Sumit:Come on Sonakshi..we are engaged now.

Sona:Ya..but...

Sumit:But what Sonakshi?Be more romantic.We will create a romantic world together..we can romance like Edward Bella and make our love story eternal like Jack and Rose.

Sonakshi gave him a weird expression.

Rohit walked towards them:Hi Sumit...

Sumit:You..?I can't recognize you.

Rohit:I am Rohit..Suman aunty's best friend's son.You look handsome like a hollywood star.

Sumit:Ya..everyone in London says the same.

Sona smiled thinking:Self boasting just like Rohit.

Rohit:Oh really?I got a good company.Come..we will chat.

Rohit dragged him away.Sonakshi smiled with relief.

After the engagement party got over Rohit went near Sonakshi.

Rohit:By the way Sonakshi...you are lucky to have a guy like Sumit.He is so romantic.Usually girls complain that their boy friend or husband is not romantic.But you will not need to complain as Sumit is over romantic.Now itself he has no control.

Rohit chuckled.Sonakshi stared at him angrily.

Sona:Bad joke.

Rohit:His filmy dialogues to you were so cheesy.Very funny.

Sona:Stop joking Rohit.

Rohit:Seriously Sonakshi.He is very romantic.By the way we can't blame Sumit for getting romantic with you as you looked very beautiful in your engagement attire.

Sonakshi blushed.

Rohit:But I was observing you.I realized that you have Vitamin D deficiency.Morning walk is good for that.Good sunlight is needed for you.

Sona:Not again Rohit.Calcium defiency..Vitamin D deficiency.Don't make me a patient.

Rohit:But Sonakshi...

Sona:Go and treat your patients.Not me.

She walked away.

Rohit:Why no one listens to my good advises?

A car arrives.A stylish girl comes out of the car.Rohit's eyes fell on her.

Seeing her Sonakshi came and hugged her:Raima!

Raima:I am sorry Sona.I could'nt attend your engagement as I was out of station.

Sona:It's ok.But for my wedding you have to be there.

Raima:Sure.How can I not attend m best friend's wedding?

Suddenly Raima's eyes fell on Rohit.

Radhika:Who is that handsome man?

Rohit came towards them.

Rohit:See Sonakshi..I told you that all girls praise my looks.You did not believe me.Now do you believe me?

Sonakshi was quiet.

Raima:You are handsome as well as funny.By the way who are you?

Sona:This is my mom's best friend's son.He is staying here now.

Rohit:Hi..I am Rohit Sippy.

Raima:I am Sona's best friend Raima.

They shook hands.

Rohit:By the way you look fit and healthy.Looking beautiful.

Raima:Thank you.

Rohit:See how our friend is maintaining herself.Your marriage is fixed.Still you are not bothered.You should learn from your best friend how to be fit.

Sona:I hate going to gym.

Rohit:This is the problem.

Sona:Stop it Rohit.Why are you bothered about my figure and health?

Rohit:What to do?I am a doctor.So when I see people careless about their health I can't tolerate it.

Raima:You are a doctor?Cool.

Sona:Whatever!You care only about my patients.Don't bother me.

Rohit-Sonakshi were arguing.

Raima:If you guys stop arguing can I tell something?

Sona:My birthday is on coming Sunday.You,Pari and handsome doctor also come.

Rohit:Sure.How can I not accept the special invitation from a healthy and fit gorgeous woman?

Raima smiled while Sonakshi did not care.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome start

Love it

Continue soon

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Congrats on the Ronakshi FS!

awesome start!

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Loved Suman telling Veena that Rohit is like her son. Suman has a plan to get Sona married to an NRI. Sona agreed to marry Sumit on her mom's insistence. Somit got engaged. It seems that Sumit does not understand Sona's feelings. I guess it is going to be pardes way.

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Hiii Jasmine.. 🤗

Sorry for the delay...


Just loved the start..... Continue sooonnnn...

A small suggestions - don't make a love angle between Raima nd Rohit.... Pleaseee....

I can't stand Raima near Rohit... 😆

It's your story... So take as you wish... 😘❤


So far it's awesomeeeee 😘😘❤❤

waiting for the next part ❤

Thanks for the pm.

Love, Alisha ❤️

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Thanks a lot.Don't worry. There is no love triangle


Originally posted by: sohit-mishbir

Hiii Jasmine.. 🤗

Sorry for the delay...


Just loved the start..... Continue sooonnnn...

A small suggestions - don't make a love angle between Raima nd Rohit.... Pleaseee....

I can't stand Raima near Rohit... 😆

It's your story... So take as you wish... 😘❤


So far it's awesomeeeee 😘😘❤❤

waiting for the next part ❤

Thanks for the pm.

Love, Alisha ❤️

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Congratulations on your new FS


Fabulous Start

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Thank u very much friends.



My desire to make you mine Part2

Pari and Sonakshi got ready for Raima's birthday party.

Sonakshi had tied her hair in a bun.Rohit observed her.

Sona:Now don't tell me that my face is pale due to Vitamin C deficiency.

Rohit:No...today you don't look pale.

Sona:Finally Dr.Rohit Sippy found me normal.Not bad.

But...

Rohit removed her hair clip keeping her hair loose.

Sona:What did you do?You spoiled my hair style.

Rohit:You look better with open hair.

Sona:But I will tie my hair.

Rohit:You do whatever.

Rohit walked away.

Pari:Sona di..don't tie your hair.What Rohit said is true.Your hair looks better now.

Sonakshi did not say anything.

They reached the party venue.

Raima welcomed them.

Sona-Rohit-Pari wished her:Happy birthday Raima.

Raima:Thank you guys.

They gave a big flower bouquet as the gift.

Raima:Wow..it's so beautiful.

Rohit:By the way you look gorgeous.

Raima:Thank you Rohit.

Unknowingly Sonakshi felt jealous as Rohit did not give her any compliment,but he gave compliment to Raima.

Raima cut her birthday cake and fed everyone.

They put music.Raima,Sonakshi,Pari and Rohit were dancing.

While dancing

suddenly Sonakshi's eyes fell on Rohit dancing with Raima.Her face became dull.

After the dance Sonakshi went to take soft drinks.Rohit went near her.

Sona:Now what?

He smiled.

Rohit:Today you look healthy.You look gorgeous.

Sonakshi blushed.

Chalte chalet raho pe naa jane kab

Hum dono ek huye…

Sehra tu samandar main phir yun


Hum kaise mil gaye

Ulje huye the ishq ke dhaage

Aabb se raah tumse jud gaya…


Dhundla huwa thaa

Zindagii ka manjar

Jeene ka tu

Maksaat ban gaya…

Kahan hum…

Kahan tum…

Pari,Sonakshi and Rohit were sitting together and chatting.

Rohit:What's your biggest dream Pari?

Pari:I want to be a famous model.I will start an advertising company also.

Rohit:Superb.What about you Sonakshi?

Sona:Nothing much.I will go abroad with my husband and find any job which is available.I will put my 100 percent into it and find happiness in that.

Rohit:Not bad.

Sona kept her hand on his shoulder:What about you Rohit?

Rohit:My dream is to have a hospital of my own.I want to be a busy doctor with lots of patients around me.

Sonakshi giggled:Such a weird dream!To fulfill your dream guess all the healthy people also should fall sick and get admitted in your hospital.Stupid.

Rohit was embarrassed:I did'nt mean it.

Sona:Then what Dr.Rohit Sippy?

She laughed.Pari too laughed.

Rohit:Hey girls...I don't want normal people to fall sick.I meant that I will give free treatment to the poor sick people.

Sonakshi-Pari smiled.

Pari:Wow..you are great Rohit.You are a sincere Doctor.

Sonakshi smiled looking at Rohit.

Rohit got a job in a government hospital.

Everyone congratulated him.

Sonakshi:Congrats Rohit.

Rohit:Thank you Sonakshi.

Sona:But why did you choose to work in a government hospital?If you work in a private hospital you may get a better payment.

Rohit:I did not become a doctor to make money.Money is secondary for me.Even with the so called low salary which I will get from the present hospital I can satisfy all my needs as I am not a spendthrift.I can still enjoy my life.Then why should I need extra money?I want to give good treatment to my patients...I want to save many lives.When my patients get alright because of me the happiness which I get can't be expressed.That's enough for me.

Sonakshi looked at him emotionally.

She thought:I always considered Rohit as a crazy man.This guy has another face which I failed to see before.

Rohit:Well..Sonakshi...Suman aunty told us to get ready to go to the shopping complex.

Sona:Call me Sona.That's how all my dearest ones call me.

Rohit smiled.

Rohit:So..I am your dearest person?

Sona looked at him deeply.

Sona:You are my dearest friend.

Rohit:At least now you accepted me as your dearest friend.

She smiled.

They all went to the shopping complex.

Rohit bumped into a girl and caught her when she was about to fall down.

Rohit:Are you alright?

The girl smiled:Yes Handsome.

Rohit blushed leaving her.The girl winked her eye at him.Rohit was blushing.

Sonakshi was burning in anger seeing it.She came towards them.

Sonakshi held Rohit's hand:Hi Rohit...

Rohit:Hi Sona.

The girl:Who is this girl?

Rohit:She is...

Sona:I will tell you who I am.I am his wife.

The girl and Rohit were shocked.

Sonakshi looked at Rohit smiling:Am I right Rohit?

Rohit smiled artificially.

That girl went away angrily.

Rohit:Why did you lie that you are my wife?

Sona:You were enjoying too much with that girl.So I lied like that to drive her away.

Rohit:But why?I was enjoying her attention.

Sona:Don't think of enjoying any stupid girl's attenion.Because I don't want you to spend time with any other girl.I can't tolerate it.

Rohit:Why?

Chalte chalet raho pe naa jane kab

Hum dono ek huye…

Sehra tu samandar main phir yun

Sona:Because I love you Rohit.

Rohit was shocked:Sona!

Hum kaise mil gaye

Ulje huye the ishq ke dhaage

Aabb se raah tumse jud gaya…

Sona:I don't want you to look at any girl other than me.If you do so I will kill you.Understand?

Rohit was stunned.


Dhundla huwa thaa

Zindagii ka manjar

Jeene ka tu

Maksaat ban gaya…

Kahan hum…

Kahan tum…(KHKT)

Sonakshi walked off.

Rohit was in his room.His mind was disturbed because of Sonakshi's confession.He remembered his moments with Sonakshi.

Rohit remembered Veena telling him not to do anything which can cause trouble to Rastogi family.

Rohit packed his luggage.Sonakshi saw this.

Sona:Rohit...why are you packing your luggage?

Rohit:It's better that I leave this house.

Sonakshi was shattered.

Sona thought:Just because I confessed my love to him he is leaving.Rohit does'nt love me?

Suman came there:Rohit...come for break fast.

Suddenly she saw the packed luggage of Rohit.

Suman:What is this Rohit?Are you leaving this house?

Rohit:Yes aunty.

Suman:But why?

Rohit looked at Sonakshi.She was nervous.

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Very nice

Please continue soon😊😍

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Superb update

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