My desire to make you mine RoNakshi SS Last part pg7 - Page 3

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Accha now coming to the update it was FAB with a lack of a better word but yaar why is Rohit being such a knucklehead he knows that sona loves him and he also knows that he loves sona so why is he denying?

But I have to say that your FS has got me hooked I wait patiently wait for every update and in the meantime imagine the future story but you are very much not predictable I mean I imagine so much but every time it is something else and trust me I throughly enjoy that.

Love your work u write very well continue writing .

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My desire to make you mine Part 4

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Pari went to Rohit's room.

Rohit was stunned:Pari,why are you here at this time?

Pari:Rohit..I am straight forward.So I am telling you directly that I saw everything.

Rohit:What did you see?

Pari:I know that there is something between you and Sona di.

Rohit was shocked.

Rohit:Nothing like that Pari.

Pari:Even though Sona di did not tell anything I can read her heart.She loves you.I don't know why you are ignoring her love.But please don't hurt my Sona di.She is too good Rohit.

Pari went out painfully.

Rohit's eyes were full of tears.

Rohit:Yes Pari..Your Sona di is too good.

Raima came to Sonakshi's room.

Sonakshi wiped her tears.

Raima:You were crying.Right?

Sonakshi faked a smile holding her hand:No.Why should I cry on this happy occasion?

Raima:Even if your hide your tears I can see it as I am your best friend.

Sona's tears rolled down her cheeks.

Raima:Is Rohit the reason behind your tears?

Sonakshi was silent.

Raima:You love Rohit.Right?

Ronakshi was silent.

Raima:I know that something is wrong between you both.You talk to him and sort it out.Before marrying Sumit you should need clarification from Rohit.You atleast deserve to know what's in his mind.

Sona:I think Rohit is too good for me and that's why he is avoiding me.

Sonakshi hugged her crying.Raima caressed her emotionally:Nothing like that Sona.You both are perfect for each other.Rohit will realize that.

They all returned to their house.

Veena came there.Rohit and Suman were really happy.

Sonakshi entered Rohit's room.

Rohit:Why are you here Sona?

Sona:As you know within few days my wedding is going to take place.Before that I want to know one thing.

Rohit:What do you want to know?

Sona:I just want to know whether you have at least one drop of love for me in your heart.

Rohit was stunned.

Sona:I will not pressurize you to marry me.If you say that you love me I will live the whole life with that sweet memory.If you say that you don't love me I will not disturb you anymore.I will marry Sumit.

Sona's eyes were full of tears.

Sona:But please say something.

Rohit became upset.

Rohit:I have nothing to say Sona.You just leave.

Sona:Rohit!

Rohit:Please Sona..please leave.

Sonakshi ran out crying.Veena was over hearing everything.She was shocked.

She entered the room.Rohit hid his tears seeing her.

Veena:I heard everything.

Rohit was shocked.

Rohit:She is mad Maa.

Veena:You did not tell her that you love her,at the same time you did not tell her that you don't love her.What does it mean Rohit?

Rohit became upset:Nothing Maa.

Veena:Rohit..I am your mother.You tell me the truth.Do you love Sonakshi?

Rohit hugged her bursting into tears.

Rohit:Now it's too late Maa.

Veena caressed him tearfully.

Sumit and his dad visited Suman.

Sumit's dad Rajender:We heard that a boy is staying in this house.

Suman:Yes,he is my friend's son.

Rajender:There are rumours that your daughter and he are having an affair.

Suman was shocked:What are you saying?He is our family friend.That's it?

Sumit:But that's not outside world is saying.There are many people who saw them together.

Suman:They attended some function together.

Sumit:A boy and a girl are staying under one roof.They are roaming about and you are saying that they have no affair?Unbelievable.

Rajender:Sorry to say that we don't want a characterless girl for our son.

Suman was shocked.She lost her control too.

Suman:How dare you call my daughter characterless?Good that you don't want to marry her Sumit.You don't deserve my daughter.She deserves someone better.So get out.

Rajender:So arrogant.

Suman:Get out.

They went out.

Suman turned back.Sonakshi was standing there with a shocked face.Pari was also standing there.She was upset.

Suman:Don't worry Sona.Those gossip believers can stay away.I will find the best person for you.

Sona:Mumma....They are right.I love Rohit.

Suman was shocked:What?

Sona:But trust me mumma..there is nothing more than that.There is no affair.Rohit rejected my love.That's why that day he decided to leave our house.

Suman was shocked.

Pari went to Rohit's room.

Pari:Rohit...Sumit and his dad left.They said Sona di is having an affair with you,so Sumit does'nt want her.

Rohit and Veena were shocked.Both of them ran out to follow Sumit and his father.

Sumit and Rajender had reached the air port.

Rohit went near them.

Sumit:How dare you come before me Rohit?You snatched my fiancee from me.

Rohit:You are misunderstanding us Sumit.Sona is pure like Gold.You will be the most luckiest person to get a wife like Sona.

Pari came there with Suman.

Rohit:Please Sumit...I beg of you.Please don't cancel the wedding in the last moment.It will affect Sona's future.

Pari and Suman became emotional seeing Rohit begging Sumit for Sonakshi.

Sumit:I don't want a characterless loose girl like Sonakshi.

Rohit could not bear anymore and slapped Sumit:How dare you call Sona characterless?If you insult her again I will not leave you.

Suman called him:Rohit!

Rohit looked at Suman.Rohit and Veena were shocked to see Suman.

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Beautiful Part

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So so sweet hope rohitpatches up with sona in the next part waiting for some happy memories.

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Part 4

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My desire to make you mine Part 5

Dedicated to Palchin who wants Pari to have a love interest.I had'nt planned Pari's love track.But for Palchin I started Pari's love story in brief.

Sumit and Rajender reached the air port.

Rohit went near them.

Sumit:How dare you come before me Rohit?You snatched my fiancee from me.

Rohit:You are misunderstanding us Sumit.Sona is pure like Gold.You will be the most luckiest person to get a wife like Sona.

Pari came there with Suman.

Rohit:Please Sumit...I beg of you.Please don't cancel the wedding in the last moment.It will affect Sona's future.

Pari and Suman became emotional seeing Rohit begging Sumit for Sonakshi.

Sumit:I don't want a characterless loose girl like Sonakshi.

Rohit could not bear anymore and slapped Sumit:How dare you call Sona characterless?If you insult her again I will not leave you.

Suman called him:Rohit!

Rohit looked at Suman.Rohit and Veena were shocked to see Suman.

Suman:Rohit..leave him.Your slaps won't change such black hearted people.

Rohit tried to control his temper.Sumit and Rajender left.

Rohit looked at Suman painfully:I am sorry aunty.Because of me Sona's wedding got called off.

Suman:Don't blame yourself Rohit.Let those idiots leave.That's better.But I want to know one thing.Do you love Sona?

Rohit was silent.

Veena:Rohit..tell her the truth.

Rohit nodded:Yes.

Suman:Then why did you reject her love proposal?

Rohit:Because you had already fixed Sona's wedding with Sumit happily and I did'nt want to break it .I did'nt want to bring humiliation to the family.I even feared whether it will affect your friendship with my Maa.

Suman-Veena became very emotional.

Suman:Would you like to marry her?

Rohit was surprised by her question.

Suman:Tell soon.Otherwise I will find another boy for Sona.

Rohit:No aunty.I want to marry Sona.Please don't bring another villain in our love life.

Pari,Veena and Suman laughed.

Suman:Veena..we are going to be relatives.

Veena:Yes Suman.

Suman and Veena hugged each other.

Sonakshi was shedding tears in her room.Rohit came near her.

Rohit:Sona..

Sona wiped her tears and asked him:Why did you come here?

Rohit:You had asked me whether I love you or not.I came here to answer your question.

Sonakshi looked at him.

Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon
Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi rooh ka sukoon

Cupping her face he said emotionally:I love you Sona.I always loved you.

Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi jaanu

Sonakshi looked at him emotionally:Then why did'nt you tell me this earlier?

Rohit:Because I was stupid.

Sona:You really hurt me because of your stupidity Rohit.

Rohit:I know.But I promise that I will never hurt you.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

He held her face and they joined their foreheads together.

Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi.. haiiiiii : (Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi)

Veena,Suman and Pari reached there.Hearing their foot steps Rohit and Sonakshi moved away from each other shyly.

Suman:Veena...let us not make them wait too much.Shall we conduct their wedding soon?

Veena:Sure.Why not?

Rohit-Sonakshi blushed.

Suddenly Raima entered:Hi guys...I am here.

All were surprised.

Raima:Pari invited me to witness this beautiful union.

Rohit-Sonakshi smiled.

Pari:Guess what?Sona di and Rohit jeeju are getting married.

Raima:Wow..great!Then why this distance between you both?

Raima held their hands and joined them making them happy.

Raima:Always be together like this.

They smiled.

Rohit's father Naren Sippy also came there to bless Rohit-Sonakshi.

Sonakshi wore a red lehenga for the engagement.She was struggling hard to tie the necklace from behind.Rohit started tying the necklace.

While tying the necklace his fingers and lips brushed against the skin giving her goosebumps.

Sonakshi looked at him.

Sona:Rohit..like you suggested I am having healthy food for calcium.I am joining you for morning walk from tomorrow onwards for Vitamin D also.

Rohit:Wow..that's cool my Sona.

Rohit cupped her face softly and they shared a romantic eye lock.

Rohit-Sonakshi exchanged rings in the engagement function.

Raima and Ranvijay clapped their hands.

Ranvijay:I always knew that you both will get together.

Raima:We are very happy for both of you as we always wanted you both to be a couple.

Rohit-Sonakshi were very happy.

Rohit-Sonakshi did a soft romantic dance.

Ankhiyan de kol reh jaane de
Kehna hai jo keh jaane de...

Tere khayalon mein beete yeh raatein
Dil mera maange ek hi dua
Tu saamne ho aur karun main baatein
Lamha rahe yoon thehra hua
Pehle toh kabhi yun mujhko na aisa kuch hua
Deewani lehron ko jaise saahil mila...

O... Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga

O mere sohneya ve
Chhad saari galiyan main
Naal tere tur chaleya main
Le chal mujhko duniya se tu door

Chori chori jad tenu takkeya main
Khud ko sambhal na sakeya main
Chadh gaya sajna tera yeh fitoor...
Langh jaani ve
Marjaani raat
Kehni jothi
Keh de woh baat

Langh jaani ve
Marjaani raat
Kehni jothi
Keh de woh baat
Ho... Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga

("Ek Ladki Ko Dekha Toh Aisa Laga")

While walking and talking to guests Pari bumped into a cute guy.

Pari looked at him:I am sorry.

He smiled at her:It’s ok.Even I have to say sorry to you.It’s my mistake also.

Pari smiled:No need to say sorry.

Suddenly Veena came.

Veena:You guys met?This is Pari.Sonakshi’s younger sister.

He:Oh Sona bhabhi’s sister…I never thought so as there is no resemblance.

Veena:Pari…this is my nephew Akhil.Rohit’s cousin brother.He just came from Australia just for the wedding.

Pari:O!Nice to meet you.

They shook hands:Nice to meet you too.

Sonakshi was applying make up in front of the mirror.She saw Rohit's reflection on the mirror.

She looked at him:Rohit!

Rohit:I was bored.So I thought to come here and chat with you.

Sona:Ok.

Rohit-Sonakshi sat on the sofa.But they did not talk at all.

Rohit:Why are we not talking anything Sona?

Sona:You talk na.

Rohit:I am not in a mood to talk.

Sona:Then?

Rohit got up from the sofa holding her hand.

Rohit:You want to know my current mood.Right?

He pinned to the wall and leaned towards her romantically.

Chalte chalet raho pe naa jane kab

Hum dono ek huye…

Sehra tu samandar main phir yun

Sona:Rohit..what's your intention?

Rohit:You will know it soon.

She was shy.

Hum kaise mil gaye

Ulje huye the ishq ke dhaage

Aabb se raah tumse jud gaya…

Sona:Rohit..you are so naughty.

He smiled.

Dhundla huwa thaa

Zindagii ka manjar

Jeene ka tu

Maksaat ban gaya…

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Kahan hum…

Kahan tum…

She pushed him and ran away blushing.He smiled.

Raab se mangu

Tujhe haar dum

Kahan hum…

Kahan tum…

Rohit knelt down before Sonakshi with a ring.

Rohit:Sona...Will you tolerate me forever?

Sona smiled:Yes.Rohit.I am ready to tolerate you forever.

They both giggled.

Rohit:Sona,will you marry me?

Sona:Yes Rohit.I will marry you.

Chalte chalet raho pe naa jane kab

Hum dono ek huye…

Sehra tu samandar main phir yun

He slipped the ring onto her finger and pecked her palm.

Hum kaise mil gaye

Ulje huye the ishq ke dhaage

Aabb se raah tumse jud gaya…

He held her closer romantically.

Sona:Thank you Rohit for proposing me.

It was my dream to get proposed by you.It as my desire to make you mine.

Rohit:I am yours Sona..only yours.

They smiled at each other.

Dhundla huwa thaa

Zindagii ka manjar

He held her closer.

Jeene ka tu

Maksaat ban gaya…

He pulled her to his lap and embraced her romantically.

Kahan hum…

Kahan tum…

Raab se mangu

Tujhe haar dum(KHKT)