ff DK’s New Life part 20 pg39 5th Jan - Page 12

Originally posted by: hira_786

Oh anu...srslii ive no words to describe how much i loved it yarr 👏 👏 tht was jus superb..n yeh sry foe replyin a bit late..i jus finished readin da part where i left last tyme...omg tht was jus gr8 yaar..very well narration!!it seems like everythin is happenein in real 😳 the part wen dev told kajjal to eat or he wont even touch da food 😳 soo sweet.. n they both fitin bout if its guna be a boy or a gurl..awwww 😳 dev kabhi nahi sudhrega..he always tease kajjal..even though in the end he nows tht kajjal is guna win 😳 n tht wht always bring a smile of mi face 😃 continue soon anu...i realli enjoyed it..
cant wait for da nex part 😉

lotssa luv:Hira 😊

Thanks Hira for your comments and don't worry about replying later...all that matters to me is you took the time to read it and enjoyed it and felt you had the time to leave a comment. 😊😳 I really appreciate your lovely words and I'm glad that you liked seeing Dev teasing Kaajjal. 😳 I promise to update real soon.

Anu 😊

Part 10:
Again mindblowing girl!!!! 👏

Its truly a gift from God whenever the baby kicks... I am sure if there was a video made for this, Dev's smile would have killed us all.... 😳
The smile the relief both Dev and Kaajjal would have on their faces would have made us DK-ians even happier....

*Sigh*....I am glad to read all ur FFs jaan...And yea thanks for the PM...U were right...I would have killed you if you hadnt!!!!...lol... 😆 😆 😆

Pls do con.t soon!!!!! 👏

~Mona 😛

Hi,

Just read your FF Part 10 and it was sooo sweet,
Wish we could have gotten to see this in the actual serial.
Keep up the good work and looking forward to next Part.

Originally posted by: mona18

Anu I am back with my comments!!! Missed reading ur mindblowing FFs girl!!!!

K heres the comment for Part 9:
Excellent girl!!! Very nice!!! Dev is leaving no stone unturned to take care of Kaajjal....But she??? Uff Kaajjal...he is ur husband dammit!!! The father of ur child!!! Why Kaajjal why? 😕 😕

Yet a fight always brings two people closer to one another even more....Love their fights and chit pits!!! Your reminded me of the old DK days...those golden days where the hatred was there....And they never knew....when this hatred turned into love..... 😳 😳 😳

~Mona 😛

Hey Mona you're back with your comments!!!! 😃 I tell you, I was really missing seeing your comments. They're always so sweet and make me smile 😃 (and I need cheered up after all that history this afternoon 😕)

So glad you liked seeing Dev taking care of Kaajjal. And whenever I imagine how DK's married life would be I always think they would have small spats like this. 😳 I always liked their love-hate relationship and so I try to incorporate some of that into my ff. But at the end of the day jaan, all that matters is you liked it.

Anu 😃

Originally posted by: mona18

Part 10:
Again mindblowing girl!!!! 👏

Its truly a gift from God whenever the baby kicks... I am sure if there was a video made for this, Dev's smile would have killed us all.... 😳
The smile the relief both Dev and Kaajjal would have on their faces would have made us DK-ians even happier....

*Sigh*....I am glad to read all ur FFs jaan...And yea thanks for the PM...U were right...I would have killed you if you hadnt!!!!...lol... 😆 😆 😆

Pls do con.t soon!!!!! 👏

~Mona 😛

Mona, you have no idea how much I wish I could have a video for this part. It's what I always longed to see. I can picture it very well in my head, so knowing you can too makes me so happy. 😃 I hope I described Dev's smile in enough detail for you. 😉 I know it's not on screen but hopefully it still makes your heart skip a beat. 😉 Now you have loads of time to dream about that smile, hai na? 😆

Ah-ha, so now the truth comes out eh? You would kill me, your dear sweet friend who spends all her time thinking of ways to describe Dev for you 😉 , for not sending you a pm? Well they do say it's the quiet ones you have to watch! 😆

Anu😃

Originally posted by: newmoon

Hi,

Just read your FF Part 10 and it was sooo sweet,
Wish we could have gotten to see this in the actual serial.
Keep up the good work and looking forward to next Part.

*Sigh*, newmoon, I also wish we had seen this in the serial. How often I wished they would do a track like this but alas it wasn't to be. 😭 I hope that in some way my ff can fulfil your wishes and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting. 😊

Anu 😊

Originally posted by: thesaint148

when r u coming with ur next update dearie. i love reading ur work. continue soon 😊

aww thanks Kashish! 😳 It will be here around 5pm UK time, that is a promise. Got too many lectures to get it done before then 😕😭 but it will be a nice way of unwinding after them. 😊