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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello all! I'm back again. Sorry I couldn't update sooner - I came down with a nasty cold this weekend so spent most of it coughing away while trying to watch Jhalak Dikhala Ja and Nach Baliye for the hundreth time 😆 (Every time I started to watch them I would take a coughing fit. 😕 Don't think I saw Mini's perfomance yet 😕 ) Anyways, here is my installment. It seems very short, but I will update it ASAP I promise 😊 :

Chapter 9 – Dev's Fright

3 months later...

A large ray of sunlight cast a hazy beam across the kitchen as Dev walked into it early one morning. He was in a half-awake state and the brightness of the sunshine as it streamed through the window hurt his eyes. Putting a hand up to sheild his vision he saw a blurred figure moving about amidst the sunbeam. At first he thought he was still dreaming; the figure seemed to be merged with the sunlight, an indistinct flutter of golden rays here and there before his eyes, but when he rubbed his eyes and stumbled further into the room, so that the sun was no longer in his eyes, he realised that there was indeed a figure rushing about the room: Kaajjal. Instantly anxiety began to claw at his senses and his heart gave a startled jolt, a frown furrowing his brow slightly. Kaajjal looked a vision of loveliness in a sunny yellow sari with shimmering sequences along its border and dotted here and there across the main body of the material. Her face glowed with healthiness and happiness and her chestnut hair had never shone so richly before. She was like a goddess and for a moment Dev nearly forgot his concern at seeing her dashing about, mesmerised by her beauty. Before that could happen however she happened to turn round and spy him. Her face broke into a bright smile that made her eyes sparkle with delight and when she spoke there was a chirpiness to her voice.
"Arre, Dev, tum yahan par? I thought you were still asleep. Take a seat," she told him, laying a plate down on the table. "I've made aloo parathe."
"What happened to you resting?" he asked her as he crossed the room.
He placed his hands on the back of the chair and stared at her with raised eyebrows and quizzical eyes. She rolled her eyes and gave a naughty giggle, turning with more nimbleness than one in her condition would normally possess and taking up another plate she began to rub it slowly with a towel, gazing dreamily out of the window at the azure sky.
"Subah bahut khoobsurat hai, don't you think?" she asked Dev. "It looks as if the whole world has come out to celebrate today, nah?"
"Don't change the subject Kaajjal," he replied. "What made you get up so early today? After what happened yesterday..."
Dev was refering to an incident where a child had run mistakenly into Kaajjal as she was walking down the school corridor and made her stumble. She had fallen and just managed to catch onto a chair before she hit the ground. Her first reaction had been one of concern for her unborn child, but after being checked by the doctor she had been assured she was perfectly well. After that she had thought nothing of it and it had completely slipped her mind by the time Dev arrived home from work. She had greeted him with her usual smile and asked him how his day had been when he grabbed her by the arms and demanded to know why she hadn't told him she had been hurt. Baffled she hadn't known how to reply when he explained that he had met Mr Tejwani on the way home and he had told him about her fall. Kaajjal had laughed gaily and told Dev not to worry, that the doctor had assured her nothing was wrong and to sit down and wait for dinner, but Dev was not for backing down. Every minute of every hour his mind was filled with anxiety for Kaajjal and their unborn child and this news had frightened him. His heart had still been pounding in trepidation at that moment. He had refused to let her do anyhting strenuous all night, making her lie on the bed while he kept a check on her tempearture and was ready to phone the doctor should she so much as sneeze. That was why seeing her scurrying back and forth across the kitchen this morning had alarmed him so greatly.
"Uff Dev!" she sighed, hitting a palm against her forehead in exasperation. "How many times have I told you? There is nothing wrong either with me or our baby. Now come on, sit, or the paratha will get cold."
Dev sighed but he knew when to give in to her insistence. Although it didn't please him to see her rushing about and his heart still had a misgiving gnawing away at it, he sat down as she brought the parathas over and placed them down before him. Smiling at him in her sweet manner she took her seat and broke a piece off, holding it over to him.
"Here, eat," she told him.
Dev folded his fingers over hers and she smiled contentedly, a soft glow in her eyes, but instead of bringing the morsel to his own lips he turned her hand round and pushed it towards her. She frowned at him in puzzlement and refused to take it.
"Dev, what is this?" she asked him.
"I won't eat until you do," he told her firmly.
"Paar Dev..." she began, half-laughing, half-surprised.
"Kaajjal please eat," he implored her. "I won't be happy until you do. I mean it, I won't touch a mouthful before you."
The very thought of Dev going hungry filled her heart with dread and without a further word she took the paratha from his hand. Seeing her chew made his face soften into an adoring smile, making his brown eyes glimmer with that fascinating light that always took her breath away. Satisfied that she was going to eat he took a paratha onto his plate and started his own meal. Kaajjal watched him in awe, losing herself in gazing at his face. With his hair still slightly tumbled from sleep and the shadow of stubble along his jaw line he looked rugged yet handsome and when the sunlight glinted across his eyes they glowed as if two flames had ignited in them. What captivated her the most was seeing the expression of enjoyment in the lines of his face as he ate. It comforted her heart to know that he was taking care of himself for once. Much as she delighted in his concern for her there was a greater worry in her mind and that was that in looking after her health he was neglecting his own. That was why she got annoyed with him when he fussed over her too much. If only once he would remember himself, she thought at those times.
Just then Dev happened to glance up and saw her sitting with her hands folded under her chin, watching him with that far away glow in her eyes. He frowned and snapped his fimgers under her nose, making her jump back to the present. She shook her head and looked at him with wide, astonished eyes. A mirthful grin was on his lips, bringing out his dimples, and his eyes were shining with amusement as he gestured with his hand in enquiry.
"Where were you lost?" he asked her.
She shook her head with a smile and began to eat. When the breakfast was over she rose and took the plates to the sink before Dev could protest. He rose to his feet and watched her with increasing alarm as she scurried here and there. He desperately wanted to say something to her but she ensured her couldn't by chattering away to him the whole time about his work and what she had prepared for his lunch. Every now and again he would open his mouth but seeing this she would just raise her voice and he would have to bite his tongue, though inside he was writhing with anxiety. The more she spoke the more out of breath she seemed to be getting and at last Dev had to grab her by the shoulders and meet her surprised gaze with his stern eyes.
"Dev, choro mujhe!" she laughed. "I have to get ready for class."
"Class?" he repeated incredulously. "Kaajjal, aaj nahin. Kal kuch bhi hua uss ki baad..."
"I have to go Dev," she interrputed him. "It won't be for much longer now and I promise you if I feel unwell I will come straight home."
As she said this she managed to free herself from his grip and she turned away to gather more stuff of the table. Dev's frustration was building up inside him like air gathering in a balloon and he had to restrain himself from marching her into the room and locking her in. Breathing deeply he tried to talk calmly to her, running an agitated hand through his hair as she skipped blithely about.
"Kaajjal, mere baat sunno," he pleaded. "Dekho, I never said don't go back to school, lekin aaj? Zaroori kya hai?"
"There is no need Dev, bas meri marzi," she responded breezily. "Aur waise bhi, what would I do here all day? Sit about? I have plenty of time for that yet. It's good for the baby to get out too."
"Lekin Kaajjal..." he began.
"Lekin lekin kuch nahin Dev!" she cried, walking away as her temper began to increase. "I'm going, bas! Aur you can say whatever you want; it won't make a difference to me. I know when I am well and when I am sick and I feel fine. There is nothing..."
Just then she let out a little cry of startlement and she placed a hand on her stomach, her eyes widening and her mouth falling open. Dev's heart slammed in his chest and a cold shiver of fear rushed down his spine, chilling his blood. He turned pale and all he could do was watch Kaajjal hold her stomach, that stricken look on her face. He had never seen that expression on her face and it made his heart contract into a tight ball of fear. Every nerve in his body screamed at him to move, but all he could do was stand there, his fear stalking across his limbs and laying its icy fingers on them, paralysing him. Kaajjal gave another of her strange cries and waved her hand at him, as if beckonening him, her eyes widening all the time. It was the jolt he needed and with a thumping heart he bounded towards her, crying out frantically,
"Kaajjal!"

A cliffhanger ending for a change 😃 Hope you all enjoyed it and please do leave a comment for me. I'm always so touched by the lovely words you write in response 😊 Oh, and do excuse my Hindi if it's gone haywire - it's my cold's fault! 😆

Anu 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part really gud 👏 soooo cute when dev is concerned 4 her kaajjal tht much 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww Woww what a lovely part Anu 👏 ...Dev is so concerned and caring about kaajjal and the baby 😳 ..just loved the way he was so possesive and wanted kajal to eat the parathas at any cost 😛 😛 ...such a adorable husband 😳 😳 ...Now I m really jealous of kaajjal 😳

Anu Just outstanding 👏 ...the way u hv described each and every scene with so much emotion and passion that I could actually visualize everything 😳 ...Great Narration 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehreemmirza

great part really gud 👏 soooo cute when dev is concerned 4 her kaajjal tht much 😳

Thank you for your comments and for taking the time to read it 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Aww Woww what a lovely part Anu 👏 ...Dev is so concerned and caring about kaajjal and the baby 😳 ..just loved the way he was so possesive and wanted kajal to eat the parathas at any cost 😛 😛 ...such a adorable husband 😳 😳 ...Now I m really jealous of kaajjal 😳

Anu Just outstanding 👏 ...the way u hv described each and every scene with so much emotion and passion that I could actually visualize everything 😳 ...Great Narration 👏 👏

Even I am jealous of Kaajjal, Jyoti...I mean, what girl in her senses would not long for a husband like DPS 😉 Thanks for taking the time out to read it and for your very kind words 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow Nimmo!! Brilliant part again. Sigh I can understand his concern and love for her. Awww do continue soon. Suspense is too much... 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Wow Nimmo!! Brilliant part again. Sigh I can understand his concern and love for her. Awww do continue soon. Suspense is too much... 😊 😊

Thanks autumnleaf for taking the time out to read my ff 😳 I know you are busy right now so it means a lot for me to read your comment. I'm glad you liked seeing Dev caring for Kaajjal and I will definately update soon to end the suspense for you all. 😃

Anu 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: hmala

Anu, Please don't mind for my delayed reply,

and your FF, ofcourse we are enjoying, what you are mentioning bw DK during her pregnany time, dev is overemotional and kaajjal feeling uneasy with his extracare,anu its so natural and pure and it almost happens bw all the couples, its amazing part anu.. and kaajjal gazing at her Dev, Can anybody think of anything else, if Dev is standing right there 😳
and suspense in the last..I wish kaajjal and babydev both are safe
Continue soon anu, dev is also very much worried, just tell him kaaju burfi is very much safe and the baby too

love you
mala 😊

Mala it's totally okay hun, please don't apologise for not replying sooner - I know how busy a lot of you are right now; I'm just honoured that you took the time out to read my ff 😳 Thank you for your sweet words and never fear, Dev won't have to worry about his Kaaju for too long (though he will always worry about her safety, hain nah? 😳) My next part is coming up real soon and I hope it eases all your fears.

Anu 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys, I know a lot of you haven't had time to read my last installment yet, so I wasn't sure whether to post this yet, but I think this part is more interesting than the last so I will and hopefully you can enjoy both parts as a whole. 😳 Thanks again for all your comments and can I just say thank you for taking time out to read my ff updates. 😳 I know how busy life can get so I really appreicate you all sparing some time to come here and look at my ff.

Here is the next installment and I hope it's better than the last (I think it was too short and too repetitive 😕 ):

Chapter 10 – A Special Moment

Dev rushed forward and grabbed Kaajjal's shoulders, staring frantically at her wide eyes and stunned expression. He had never seen her eyes so dilated or so vibrant. She was scaring him and he shook her, trying to get her to speak.
"Kaajjal, tell me, kya baat hai? Why won't you speak?" he demanded, his brow furrowing into a deep frown of anxiety.
Instead of answering him she pulled one of his hands from her shoulders and brought it down to her stomach. He gave her a puzzled look but she met his gaze with an intense stare that told him to do what she wanted him to. He was at a loss to understand the excitement in her face and he opened his mouth to speak when suddenly he felt a strong vibration against his hand. For a moment he became breathless and his heart skipped a beat. Kaajjal was still staring into his eyes and she saw them dilate with wonder and then she glimpsed the dawning light in them as he realised what had just happened. Her lips curved into a soft smile and her eyes shone as he looked from her to their hands joined over her stomach and back again. She could see the question in his eyes, as if he couldn't quite believe what had happened and she nodded once, unable to speak for the emotion choking her throat. Tears of joy were welling up behind her eyes and as she saw the elation brightening Dev's eyes she felt the first droplet spill from her eye and trickle slowly down her cheek.
"B..baccha?" Dev stammered.
"Haan," she managed to say.
Dev's face broke into a wide smile and he let out a small laugh of amazement. The baby kicked again, and they simultaneously turned their eyes towards each other, glowing with the wonderment of the moment. The twin smiles on their faces were like mirror images and anyone who had happened to see them at that moment would have been touched by the joy in their countenances. Forgetting all their earlier annoyance with one another and the rest of the days work they took it in turns to guess when the next kick would come, laughing delightedly when the baby answered their request. It was a magical feeling, and Dev could not resist from bringing his ear down to Kaajjal's stomach to listen. She stood smiling down at him, overwhelmed by the sensation of her baby moving and the ecstasy on Dev's face.
"He's going to kick again any moment," Dev told her, placing his ear flat against her stomach.
"He?" she repeated. "And who told you our baby is a boy. Ho sakta hamari bacchi ek larki hai."
Dev rolled his eyes and straightened, placing his hands on her shoulders and looking down at her the way a teacher might at a pupil.
"Larka hai," he insisted. "Trust me, I know."
"Oh!" she exclaimed with a scoffing tone. "Is that so? Just don't tell me you only want sons. If you do you can find yourself some other wife."
So saying she waved him away with her hand and began to walk away, head held huffily in the air. She had only walked a few paces when she felt his fingers curl about her wrist, causing her heart to skip a thrilled beat. The next thing she knew her breath went whooshing from her lungs as he spun her back towards him and she found herself wrapped in his arms, his face only inches from hers and those intense brown eyes staring directly into hers. She gazed up at him in astonishment, reading the solemnity in his eyes but discerning a glint of mirth underneath the surface. She could not tell if he was being entirely serious though when he spoke it there was no trace of humour in his voice.
"Haan mujhe ek beta chahiye," he told her. "There has to be someone to carry on my name after me."
Kaajjal pouted at him and tried to push his arms away from her.
"I knew it from the beginning that you were a chauvinist," she told him. "Why did I forget all that when I married you? How foolish I was! You sure took me in and look at my state now, I..."
Her flow of words was stalled by one of his fingers pressing against her lips. She looked up at him with wide, questioning eyes and he brought his face even closer to hers so that when he spoke she could feel his words whisper across her skin. It sent tiny shivers of pleasure down her spine and despite her irritation with him her heart was fluttering and her pulse skipping.
"Sshh," he told her. "Ek aur baat hai."
She gulped in an attempt to wet her suddenly dry throat and stared up at him in trembling expectation, wondering what he was about to tell her now.
"Mujhe bhi ek larki chahiye," he said, his lips curving into a smile and his eyes twinkling. "Bilkul uski Ma jaise...pyaari, intelligent aur..."
She held her breath as he paused, his eyes flicking across her face with that magic sheen in them that always left her spellbound. The silence was so deep she could hear her heart's frantic beating. Dev's breath fanned across her lips like a balmy breeze and she could feel her skin tingling in response. He lifted his hand and gently threaded a strand of her hair through his fingers, letting the silky locks brush against his skin and breathing in her sweet, alluring fragrance. When his eyes met hers again she saw how dark they had become and the love and desire she read in them for her left her in awe.
"Aur..." he said again, "Khoobsurat."
She closed her eyes, her heart fluttering like a feather on the summer breeze. Just with that one word he had overwhelmed all her senses. His lips caressed her cheek and she sighed sweetly. When she opened her eyes he was gazing intently at her face, that magical glow lighting his eyes. A fire was raging in her cheeks from where his lips had touched her skin and her pulse was tangoing. Lowering her eyes with a shy smile she said,
"Dev, tum bhi... Why do you always do this to me?"
She looked up at him again and her hazel eyes were shining with adoration for him. Touching a hand to his cheek she spread her fingers across his face, revelling in the smoothness of his skin to her touch.
"I've lost myself so completely in you that I cannot separate myself from you," she told him. "Yeh dhadkan," she added, catching his hand and placing it across her heart. "I cannot tell if it is yours or mine."
"They are one and the same Kaajjal," he told her. "Our hearts are indistinguishable. Aur yeh..."
He took her hand and placed it over her stomach, lacing his fingers through hers.
"This is the proof of that fact," he said, looking deeply into her eyes. "Hamara baccha."
Her eyes glistened with tears of joy as she gazed up at him adoringly. There was a tender smile on her face as she rested her head on his shoulder. He brought his free arm around her and held her and together they stood like this for a few moments in silence, listening to the beating of their hearts. They were rudely interrupted all of a sudden by the baby, kicking forcibly to remind them of its part in their lives. Smiling at one another they gazed down at their entwined hands and they both knew that whether a boy or a girl their baby would be the most cherished and most loved baby in the world.

Hope you all liked it 😊 Do leave a comment if you have time and remember you can give me any suggestions you want.

Anu 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Anu, sorry for the delay! 😳

Great part, and caring DPS! lucky kaajjal!!!!!
Great narration, very sweet, loved it!!! Dev is soooooo caring!!!! Love him!

Part 10:

Awwww the baby kicked, I can imagine happy Dev!!! Wonder whether it will be a cute boy or a sweet girl????

This part was really sweeeeeeett and romantic as well! Loved the part where they say that their heartbeats are just one!!!

And ohhhhhhhhhhh that DPS touch can just make you go completely weak and kill you!!! I imagined myself in kajus place! ohhhhhhhhhhh....
😳
Do continue soon! 👏 👏

😳 Komal

Edited by ploye - 17 years ago

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