ff DK’s New Life part 20 pg39 5th Jan - Page 14

Originally posted by: thesaint148

awww anu brilliant as always. i cant come close to telling you how much i enjoyed reading it. loved how kaajjal was helpless with the craving and was ready to do practically anything to get her icecream. heheheh poor dev, but always a GEM. love his care and concern for her.

thankyou for this brilliant update anu, i really appreciate it and enjoyed every single word of it. 👏

Thank you Kashish for taking the time to read it. 😊 I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading about Kaajjal's cravings, and indeed the poor thing was close to losing her mind, but as always her Rajkumar was there for her though he was despiaring of her mental balance. 😆😳 So glad you liked it and thanks again for your lovely comment.

Anu 😊

Originally posted by: hmala

oh nimmo, amazing again, so kaaju wants icecream in the early early morning, my poor dev, kaajjal kitna sathaa thi hein, If kaajjal wanted pizza, I could have called Pizza hut, and pizza might have been delivered to kaajjal's home, just in few seconds, but icecream,, kya kare issko, and Dev walking on the townroads, and asking Tejaswin for Car 😭 , and the way they are fighting in the car, very sweet, nimmo, you always remind me the days, when I was carrying and use to fight with my hubby,
and now accident, I wish both and baby all are safe,
Excellent job nimmo, continue soon, as you know, I am allergic to tensions, and I can't bear this suspense, come up with next update soon 😛
and I don't know, why I am feeling, their long ride at 3am, their accident, its all just a kaajjal's dream..

mala 😛

Mala dear, thank you for your comment, it was simply wonderful to read. 😊😳 I loved your comment on pizza...yes indeed it would have been so much easier had she wanted some pizza, but you what Kaajjal is like, nah? She always has to have something that's not easy to get (remember how she had to chase after Dev before he would agree to marry her? and then when he was Raju always insisiting he was Dev? 😳) And I loved how you said it reminded you of when you were expecting...that really touched me. 😳😊

I promise I won't keep you in suspense for much longer. The next part will be here soon and in the meantime please don't stress too much about Dev, Kaajjal aur Baccha. Gannu Bhaiya is with them after all.

Anu 😊

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Anu that was just fabulous 👏 👏 ..u know while reading your part I remembered the film Salaam Namaste where in the midnight Preity Zinta asks for Ice Cream 😆 😳 ....Aww poor Dev Raat ke Teen Baje he goes in search of Ice Cream parlour for his preggy wife 😳 😳 ...and Poor Tejwani,his sleep must hv gone haywire 😆 😆 😳

But the interaction between Dev and Kaajjal was mindblowing 👏 👏 👏 ..Dev is irritated with Kaajjal's stupidity and at the same time he loves her so much that he can't even ignore her wish 😳 ..that was beautifully written Anu 👏 ..Now I hope in your next part they hv a pleasant time at some Ice Cream Parlour 😛 😛

Once again Outstanding narration 👏 👏

Jyoti your praise has totally blown me away! Thank you so, so much. 😳😊 I was actually thinking of Salaam Namaste when I was writing this scene, but the real credit goes to newmoon, who suggested I do a scene like the one in SN. 😊 I'm very happy that you enjoyed seeing Kaajjal complaining to Dev and he trying to bear it because he really cares for her, and never fear, in the next installment your wishes may just be fulfilled. 😃

Anu 😊

Originally posted by: mona18

Aww Anu....Brillant Part!!!
The moment I saw the title...I knew it that Kaajjal was craving for something for sure....And of course the craving for ice cream reminded me of Salaam Namaste, Amber and Nick...Aww poor Dev...3am in the morning??? What to do?

Dev has to fulfil his preggy's wife order!!! 😆

I was thinking that even after telling her that the shops might not be open...Kaajjal might see the shop in the city closed and of course like Nick taunted Amber, Dev too would do that!!! 😆

But now this "accident" here??? Oh pls...dont let anything happen to Dev.Jr or Kaajjal.Jr!!!!! 😭 And I know u wont do anything like that hain naa?? 😉

And yea dont blame me if I keep talking abt Apu 24/7....He has gotten me a really high fever!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Do con.t soon!!!! 😃

~Mona 😛

Mona hun, so good to read your reply and as ever it's totally made me grin from ear to ear! 😃😳 You're too sweet yaar! But I am glad you enjoyed it, and yep it was very like Salaam Namaste, I agree, but I thought that Dev would react similarly to Nick, after all let's face it, men don't understand us women, do they? 😆 But as you say Dev has no choice, after all, Kaajjal is his princess, nah?😉

And don't worry for the "accident"...I'm sure you know me well enough by now to know that I would not let any major harm come to our Dev (what a horrible thought! ) or those dear to him. In my next installment you will find out exactly what has happened to them and I hope you enjoy it just as much. 😃

Anu 😃

Ahem...edited...Ok...so you told me I forgot to reply to your comment about Apu giving you fever...so here it is:

I can completely understand your madness girl, in fact I know just how hot and bothered the sight of Apu makes you...I just have to take one look at your dp pic on msn...😆...but that is a bad idea because then I get all feverish and then there's no hope for either of us, nah? 😉😆 How can I blame you when the magic of Apu enthralls us all? 😳

How was that Mona?? Do let me know if I've forgotten anything else! 😆

Anu 😃

ohhhh anu! I really loved this part!
Kaajjal giving orders and dev following them!

I loved their sweet childish fight! soo sweet! Perfect!

continue soon!

😳 Komal

Originally posted by: ploye

ohhhh anu! I really loved this part!
Kaajjal giving orders and dev following them!

I loved their sweet childish fight! soo sweet! Perfect!

continue soon!

😳 Komal

Thank you Komal! So pleased to hear you enjoyed seeing them having their childish spat 😃 You're comment has really made my day. 😳😊 I will update very soon, I promise.

Anu 😊

Hi Nimmo,

Really loved this part. It was really funny and sweet seeing our DK having small fights yet loving one another.
Also you did a great job creating suspense at the end, can't wait to read the next part.

Hey Anu, I just have one question. Are DK going to have twins, because in the beginning you mentioned Arjun and Naina, Dk's daughter. So, are they having twins? 😛 😃

Zareen.

Originally posted by: newmoon

Hi Nimmo,

Really loved this part. It was really funny and sweet seeing our DK having small fights yet loving one another.
Also you did a great job creating suspense at the end, can't wait to read the next part.

Thanks newmoon for taking the time to read it. Glad you enjoyed it 😊 but really the credit is all yours as it was you who gave me the idea to do such a scene. 😊 I just hope I have written it as you had imagined it.

Anu 😊

Originally posted by: gambi

Hey Anu, I just have one question. Are DK going to have twins, because in the beginning you mentioned Arjun and Naina, Dk's daughter. So, are they having twins? 😛 😃

Zareen.

What a fab idea Zareen!!! 😃👏

Actually I hadn't ever thought about twins...I was just gonna have Arjun and Naina a year apart, but I really like the sound of twins. 😃😳 I think I might do that...what say?

Anu 😊