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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
part 7

Kaju looks tired due to lack of sleep...raju looks tired too...they both come out of their rooms same time..their eyes meet...kaju looks very vulnerable...her eyes fll up and she turns her face to wipe them..Raju...feels terrible...he hesitates...Kaajjal...sab thekh hai na...

she nods...haan ra...Dev...mein ..am ok

as she turns to walk, away..Raju feels heavy inside...he looks at Kaju longingly....Kaash
(ek jaan hain hum)
song is :

yaad teri aayeegi...mujh ko bada satheeyigi...zidd ye jhoothi teri
meri jaan lekar jayegee...

At the dor the bell rings....NT mom...is seated on the couch reading amagazine...Arre Kajjal bete...aana to zara...ye patterns to dekh le..tumhare dresses ke liye

Kaju tries to smile for her sake...Raju is near...he sighs deeply...ye sab kya hai mom...NT mom smiles," tum hare kaam ke nahin...ye aurton ki baatein hai2 Raju shrugs....then his eyes fall on a dress design...depite himself...he picks it up...the champagne colored dress...was beautiful...he imagines kaju in it...and closes his eyes...siggjjhhh...when he puts down the mag...she is in his vision....for a moment...Kajjal...sees that expression...and feels her heart respond...she shakes her head...stop it kaajjal.thisis not DEv...try and get a grip on yourself...NT mom smiles at him...Hmmm...toh dress pasand aayi kya...zara mein bhi dekhoon...

She nods...this is beautiful...kaajjal...hum issi banwanyenge....kaajjal...and Raju both turn as the bell rings...she is edgy...nahin beta..servants will atend to it...

When the door opens, karan and Ameesha emerge from their own rooms...they look terrible with a hangover...Karan gives Kaajjal a dark look then smiles...kya ho raha hai yahhaann...ameesha doesnt even pretend ...she openly glares at Kaajjal...who looks away

Mera sar phata ja raha hai...gosh i have a killing headache...veer comes in sarcastically," jyaada peene se aisa hota hai" Ameesha glares at him...it was obvious they had afight...NT mom frowns ...is everything OK....Aur ameesha kal raat ko...she is interruppte at the loud voices coming from the doorway...they all go to investigate...except kaj and Raju...they look at each other shocked...

Chameli makes a grand entry.....swaying ..and ghumaoing her lat...an older man is with her...she looks at them all then concentrates on Raju....arre nass pithe...janam jalle...bade ghar ki aulaad...mujhe barbaad kar diya...aur ab ise bhi karne chale..

NT mom is stunned she looks at Dev...kaun hai ye...kya keh rahi hai...Ameesha forgets her headache..she glances at Karan and he nods subtly....she smiles...

Use kya pooch rahe hai aap mein batati hoon...aap ke is laadle ne maaji hum he kahin ka nahin chhodha...

pehle chikni choopni baatein karke hum he phaansa...phir byaa rachaya...ab hum pet se hain...to doosri ladki ko pakda...badi mushkil se hum he iska pata mila...hai...

NT mom is shocked...Kaju looks stunned...Raju lowers his eyes...but says not a word...pooch iss se kyon khamosh hai...pooch iye...

NT mom comes to DEv...kya ye sach hain....Raju looks at kaju...who has gone pale...nahin mom ...mein is ladki ko nahin jaanta...

Chameli...wails..haaiii..suna...chacha...aap hi ne..humari shaadi rachiyee...batah unko...saboot...the old man nods...haan madamji...ye ...kagaz patri...aur ye...chameli beti ke meidacl report...NTmom reads and goes pale...it says Chameli is 2 months pregnant...Raju is unrepentant...this is not possible Mom...mein sirf ...kaajjal se pyaar karta hoon...zaroor is ladki ko galat faimi hui hai...then chameli produces the photos with Raju dressed as Dev posing with everybody...Raju closes his eyes...

ye photoo bhi jhoot hai kya....aur saboot doon...kya...NT mom gives her a son...a telling look..Dev mujhe tum se ye umeed nahin thi....i am shocked...

Karan gets into the act....he preetnds to be shocked...he looks at kaajjal..mom kum se kum ...kaajjal ka socho...kya hoga uska...Kaajjal tum theekh to ho..NT mom goes to her side...Kaajjal beta don worry hum sab tumhare saath hai..

chameli...mujhe thoda waqt do...ye sab...baut mushkil hai...abhi hi mera beta maut ki mooh se aaya hai...give me some time...please...Chameli glares at Raju...aap ke paas waqt hai...maazi...mere paas ye pet hai...jo badta jaata hai...uska kya...gaonwale...she starts to cry...pata hai roj taaana deve hain...ka ka humhe kehte hain...nahin...hum to abh hi mar jayenge...

ameesha joins in...mummyji...hum is ladki ko kaise jaane de sakte hain...kitni badnaami hogi...jab thak aap faaisal na karte...ise yaheen rehne dena....

baat ghar mein hi rahegi....NT mom looks at Raju who is silent...theek hai...use guest house ka kamra dikha dena...and she leaves...Kaajjal ...has tears in her eyes of anger and she flings Rajus arms away...adn runs t o her room.....Chameli glares after her...

Ameesha and karan smile ...and whsiper...bahut acche chameli...jaldh hi Raju tumhare paas aayega...

Pahua hears that...he quietly goes to seek Raju...

Raju taps on Kajus door...kaajjal..kaajjal...please let me come in....

after 2 mins kaju opens the door....she is furious with him...grabbing his hand she shoves him inside...us ladki...ko tum ne barbaad kiya hai..raju...tum itna ghir jaaoge meine kabi socha na...tha...preganant...no wonder she was in tears the other day....

kaise insaan ho tum...Raju gets angry...firts of all he is frustrated that kajuis crying and he cant hold her...then he is angry, at her for believing chameli...he pushes her to the wall and hisses...listen to me kaajjal...meine use pregnant nahin kiya hai...mein aisa insaan nahin hoon...tum humesha mujhe galat samajhthi ho...kaju....gives it back..harshsly

tum ho issi layak...use phaasan...hai...use dhokha diya hai...he is shouting...meine use dhokha nahin diya...yes i flirted with her...but never touche her in that way...i dont feel that way for her...like...his voice gets softer...huskier...pahua comes in cutting in

whatever Raju was goin to say. tum dono phir lad rahe ho...ye sab us karan ameesha ki idea thi...woh log chameli ko yahaan le aaye hain....

Raju moves away...and kaajjal lets out her breathe..her heart has gone crazy...with Raju behaving just like Dev,,,for those few seconds..his breathe on her like fire ...

Raju scratcehs his head...kuch karna hoga..pahue...ye..aadmi kaun hai...shayyad sannata...jaanta hai...use...

pahua...shurgs...pata nahin....he glances at Kaju who is looking at him...puzzled...Madam...ji...aap jo bhi samjho...hum woh nahin...hum kissi ladki ke saath aisa nahin kar sakte....

Kaju...says nothing...ab hum rajgani jaayenge...wahaan pata lagayenge ki chakkar kya hai...

Kaju looks up...mein bhi chaonghi..Raju....mera yahaan dum ghoot raha hai....raju has a strange expression on his face which quickly goes as she looks at him...pahua..sighs..phir dono chale...unko kya bataye...shakh hua tho...

Raju smiles...nahin hoga...tu gabra mat...inke liye mere paas ek idea hai...

he goes to NT mom...mom...aap jo bhi samjho...us ladki ke saaath mere koi gair sambhandh nahin hain...

NT mom is still upset...adn doesnt smile...uske paas doctor ke reports hai...shaadi ka cert...hai...nahin Dev...mujhe sochna hoga...iske baare.mein....aakhir ye kaajjal aur ladki ki zindagi ka sawaal hai...mujhe akela chhod do...

Raju tells her...mom...mein ...bahaar ja raha hoon...business ki meeting hai...do dino mein lautoonga...his mom nods...aur kaajjal...

he sighs use bhi saath le ja raha hoon...his mom frowns ...woh kaisi hai...uspar jaane kya beeth rahi hogi...how could you dEv...after all she has been trhu...

meri himmat nahin..i cant face her yet....

Raju keeps his head lowered...am innocent mom...ad he leaves the room...ameesha who waseaves droppping waits till hes gone and reports to Kara...plan is successful...karghosh..haathmein aaya hai...lets follow him....

kaju looks ahead...she is not talking to Raju...and alike...he looks grim faced...angry...she is angry too...

next part 8...has more...of the romance...this was justthe setting...bear with me...


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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
i just have a request.. y dont u somehow indicate in ur title that u have continued 😃 cuz i didnt know that this ff was actually continued 😳 and i came on it and found that 7 parts are done already hahahaha..
ill read them now and tell u how it was 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
thanks for the suggestion...music...now for parts 8& 9

must warn you guys, as DEv is back...this may be a abit outdated...but let me know what you feel 😊 bindaas

Part 8

ameesha slinks to her fav. dark corner and calls Karan at hisoffice,"psst...they have left...just..you can take you car and follow them", she smiled gleefully...and he snaps at her," cmon Ameesh- kya yaar make your self useful for once,
i am upto to neck in work and also that thug who threaten me for the money...take a car damn you and follow those two" ameesha fumbles," b..but what will i tell Veer...and and...," karan slaams her," just think of a story...mein baut pareshaan hoon....Nandini was very upset..do something ameesha...by" he put the phone on her...she sighs......"ab kya karoon..." Veer sees her go out and asks snappily" where are you off to now" Ameesha snaps back" to my Papa...i need a berak...i will come back when you cool off" he looks angry," Ok- stay there..." and wlaks out...she sighs with relief and slinks away....after she had gone, Veeer smiles and calls someone on his mobile...

Raju looks in the rearview mirrow and says curtly to kaju," Ameesha's car...is following us stay pt," as Kaju tries to turn...she is still cross at him...

he glances at her," she has taken the bait...now lets see what we find in Rajgani"....Kaju replies coolly...."what do you hope to finsdi nrajgani...its obvious...KA have told chameli what to do....she is not acting alone for sure" Raju gives her a scathing look," I know that..am not dumb...OK....Chameli is a simple girl who is being used by the duo...but she knows people in Rajgani....shes lived there long enough to do so...besides i glanced at those papers too....they were made in Rajgani...we must find the doctor and the punditji in rajgani who did this"

Kaju nodded but continued to be cool towards him...Rajus lips began to twitch as his anger ebbed...he thought...gusse mein bhi haseen lagti hai...kya karoon...majboori hai...kaajjal...he tunrs on some music...

song is (bombay to GOa)

Dekha na hai re,
socha na hai re,
rakh di nishane pe jaan
kadmon pae tere rakh doon mera dil
hai bas ehi armaan

arre yahoo..oo.. cuckadoo.oo.oo

Raju sandg along his spsirts lifting...and he was soon back to his old self....

Kaju continues to fume...Isse har waqt ghana bjana aur natutanki sujh tha hai....stupid...

Ye sab tum hari wajah se hua hai...we were doing well...if you hadnt hurt chameli so bad, she wouldnt have joined ranks with them...Kaju snaps...

raju smirks..." its not my fault that she fell in love with me...if girls find me attractive than it s


not my fault....she gasps...what conceit....you ...tum....se baat karna bekaar hai...hmmmpf..." she sulks again...

he smiles" pata hai patiale ki saari ladkiyaan mujhe pe marti thi, madamji...hehehe....they used to fight for my attention...she shakes her head, " andhi hongi....or mad...
he smiles," isliye toh dev saab ne mujhe pe ye kaam saupa...he know i am toooo...gooood.. yaar

Kaju sighs in disbelief...if it wrent for Dev...shed throw this guy out....

to irritate her further...Raju sings loudly...and she puts her hand over her ears....

Meanwhile Ameesha who is not far behind is busy cooking schemes in her head....in the process her driving skills are found wanting....she has to brake when a goatsherd....tries to steer his hundred odd goats...across the road...she bangs on the horn in frustration....stupid fool....isse bhi yaheen marna tha...finally the road was clear...in her haste...to drive...she lands her car ina ditch...oh no...she tries hard to pull it out but it remains stuck...dammmnnn...ab menin kya karoo...Raju anu kaajal aage nikal gaye...

she gets out of the car...and kicks the wheel in frustraion...She decides to call Karan...but the netwrok doesnt respond...gawd ther ei sno netwrok...she looks around in depair...ab kya karoon is viraane mein...her woes continue

Raju and kaju arrive in Rajgani...Rajgani parks the car in front of the lodge...he enquires for rooms...but there are none...he comes back...kaju is still fuiming so he shrugs and drives to his own house...he gets out stretches his arms "home sweet home..." then he waits for Kaju to get out and locks the car...in her annoyed state she closes the door and starts to walk but is held back by her dupatta, which is tsuck in the car door....dammnnn...she tunrs t the car...and tries to tug it out...meanwhikle Raju is walking ahead...he pauses and tunrs...to see her sturggle with teh dupatta...

he sighs and comes over, he unlocks the car and hands her the dupatta...their eyes meet...and she feels that same stillness inside her...a gentle breeze blows...his eyes flicker with soem emotions....then he shakes his head wryly...ghar aa gaya....madam ji

thats the end of part 8....now the preview for the next part

Raju makes a fool of himself at the dhabha...Kaju meets DEv...they spend a night in the tabela...Ameesha meets some buffaloes. she spends a night in a tabela... 😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
part 9...contd from part 8

kaju still feels a bit dazed at that dupatta encounter...sometimes she felt , Raju was Dev....whenever he looked at her...his eyes...would be like Dev...she gives herself a firm mental shake then...no kajjal...get a grip on yoursefl...this is raju DEvs humshakkal...hired by him to do a very imp. task....with a sigh ehs goes inside...Accha Raju...jahaan tak mujhe yaad hai...ek hi kamra hai...tum kahaan sohoge...lodge mein...

Raju smiles"hehehe - woh kya hai na, madam ji ...pehle mein aur pahua yahaan rehte the...do logon ki jagah hai is ghar mein...aap yahaan aaraam se reh sakte ho..." she folds her arms,"hmmm....tum ne mujhe chameli samjha hai, raju....aaj raat tum baahaar so ho ge...samjhe...2 Raju scratches his head,2 hehehe kaajjjal ji....aap bed par soyiye, aur mein....neechae no prablem...woh kya hai nah baaahaar bahut thand hoti hai raat ko...mein nahin so sakta..."...kaju stands up picks up her bag and marchaes outside he runs after her," kahaan ja rahe hai...wahaan kuch nahin sirf ek toota phoota tabela hai 😉

Kaju glares at him," tum hare saath tum hari bakwas nahin soon na chahti mein wahin rahoongi....mujhe thand nahin lagti...mussoorrie ki hoon...she swears at him softly....she will kill him with her bare hands one day...she enters the shed and is dismayed to see straw and and broken furniture....there was a hole in the roof...with a sigh...bas tum hare liye Dev...sab sahoongi...chalega...i will be fine...Raju follows her...wah wah kya mahal...hai...kya bistra hai...kaajjal madam..aap ko macchar katenge...bade bade katmal...katenge...kaju snaps a finger at him...get out raju...you have irritated me long enough....now please leave me alone...

he gets angry....to hell with you...jab kulfi jamegi tab mujhe mat kehna...aur ...jab darr lage to mujhe mat jagana...

he storms off#muttering to himself, humesha apni man maani chalati hai...thnad lagne do usse ...garam dimag thanda ho jayega...later he only relents....with a sigh...

but after a while he comes in slowly...she had spread out her shawl....ye kya hai...she snaps...he sighs...kuch kambhal aur....blankets hai...kya madam aap bhi...galat samjti hai mujhko...mera woh matlab nahin tha....i thought you will be more comfortable inthe house...

Kaju gives him a telling look," mein tum he acchi tarah se jaanti hoon, tm he aur tum hari niyat ko...hmmmm...aur ...kahaan ja rahe ho2 he snaps "...dhabha" she is annoyed"kyon....chameli nahin hai wahan par. kya karoge""

he pursed his lips annoyed at her comments" naachne....bhook lagi hai....khana bhi khana hai...
subah se kuch nahin kaya...." she glares at him"
ye kapde kyon badle tum ne"

he tells her irately

Agar DEv saab banke gaya toh kohi paani bhi nahin dega...hum he...yahhann sab raju ko jaante hain....waise shayam ho rahi hai...aap bhi aayiye....khana khane...kaju sighs....alright...

on the way he apologies," sorry Kaajjal/...she turns ...haan...haa..kuch sunai nahin de raha hai...he sighs am sorry....for irritating you...but you were also very rude...yesterday....Kaju relents....eventually ...sorrryy...but what you did to chameli is unforgivable...you were always flirting with her...the poor girl is a village belle...she fell for it...tum he aise nahin karna chaiye tha..."

he catches his ears...sorry kahan na...i didnt know she was goin t take my jesting seriously...i didnt mean to break her heart...she is a sweet girl...sacchi...kaju didnt beleive him...but relented...and warned

magar mujhe tang kiya...do maroongi..samjhe...he makes a face...

at the dhabha...the men treat him like a long lost frind...they exchange hi fives...raju places an order for kajus lucnh...as he is enquiring with them....kaju...settles at a far corner...

a bus load of people disembark in front of the dhabha...and many heavy costumes women....get down...they were loud chatty...and rustic looking...

raju eyes them with interest...he asks the old buzzer...there...ye sab kaun hai...chacha...

chache who is busy leering the scantily dressed women breathes...gypsies...khanabadoshi...they come here every year for the mela in the next village...they all sing like a dream eespicaillay that fatakara...

her name is gul badan..haaii...haaii...kya naachthi hai...tum dekha...hosh udd jai...raju glances at his kaju...mere to h hosh pehle se hi udd gaye hai...he sighss....

the lead gypsy saunters across and see raju,she admires the handsome young man and gestures him to come and tlak to her" eh ...nautanki...ye tera dhabha hai...kya...bhook lago hai hum sab ko...khana...khia na...mere raajaa..2...kaju watches the gypsy with raju and rolls her eyes...phir se shooroo hua...not again///...this guys is too much...poor chameli never had a chance...disgusted she looks away...Smiling coyly Raju says to the gypsy,hehehe woh kya hai na...dhabhe waali sheher mein hai...aap bataiye...mein aorder karta hooon...apna hi dhabha samjho..." the gypsy also flirts back...." accha...he raajaa...uddar kya dekh raha hai baar baar...idhar dekh..." he smiles " hehehe....huh.." "woh teri jhoroo rooti hai kya...maike gayee hai kya"...raju sighs," meri biwi maike nahin wahaan baiti hai...mujhse humeshha ladti hai..." the gypsy looks at kaju....and says" ha mein mar jawaan...she is lovely...teri jhorrooo hai kya...such mein...woh kitni...sundarr...aur tu..mere raajaa....bhawran bandar.." raju straigtens/....then the gypsy says" jaldi se....khana laana aur sharaab bhi...doh goot na piyoon to chain nahin" she saunters to her group...Raju comes over and hands her a bottle of liquor...

she looks up," arre raajaa...tu bhi do goot maar le" he glances at Kaju who is throwing daggers at him.,..he has an idea...he bends low and whispers somethng to the gypsy...she laughas and glances at kaju

"Main nahin piyoonga...woh mujhe maregi" the gypsy scoffs" chal ja re...biwi se darta hai...mard hai toh mard ban...chal sharma mat...do goot phi le...Arre aurat toh maum hai...toda jalne de usse....baad me...thanda...ho jayegee..."

Raju laughs....glancing at kaju he takes a long swallow,2 tu sach kehti hai...the gypsy rolls out a paan...paan khayega....ye banarasi hai...special paan...tu bhi kya yaad rakhega....

he eats it sputters for a few seconds then begins to enjoy...turning to kaju who is throughly annoyed at his antics...he signs the song

(don)

kaike paan banaras wala....khul jaaye
band akal ka thala

phir to aisa hua kammaal...
ki kar de sab ki seedhi chaal...ki chora
ganga kinare wala...

Kaju looks away....her dinner arrives but she is just picking at it...where is dev...she wished he were here...the she wouldnt have to watch this idiot Raju....make a fool of himself...

meanwhile Ameesha...abandons her car...and sets on foot...she comes to an expanse of fields all around her...gingerly she tread down the treacheous path or stonesm, weed and muck...it had been raining inthe morninga dnit was lsimy all over...oh god...h god...this is worse than that slum in viraar....kya kya karna pad raha hai is property ke liye...

wlaking along she doesnt see the ditch and falls in headlong....splash.....she comes up sputtering...what th....she covered in grime...and the stench....yucckkkk....oh no....

Abuffalo hearing the splash....runs in...and splashes all over her again...it enthustiacally comes near...Stay away...you brute...dare you come near...door raho...the fridnly buffalo....gives her a frindly lick and ameesha shrisk...scaring the poor buffalo away...she shrieks again....as it..dumps a freshload of dung in the ditch out of fright...needless o say what that ditch was being used for 😆

now to part 10


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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 10...contd from 9

Raju is dancing and swaing to the music...he is on a high and drunk....Kaju has had enough...she stands up...and starts to walk away.....he saunters across...hic...madam...ji...aap ja. ...rahe hain...hic....he looks at her drunkenly...bas thodi hi phi hai,..woh hai..na gul badan....accchi hai...hic...aap...bhi aayiye....its fun....cmon...he takes her hand...she flings his hand away....go away...raju....i have had enough....u ar making a fool of yourself....leave me nbe...he laughs....he saunters away...swaying to the music...

hen he sings...
(katio patang)
ye jo mohabbat hai
ye bas unka hai kaam
mehboob ka jo lete hue naam
mar jaaye, mit jaay
ho jaaye badnaam
rehno do ji chhodo ki jaane do yaar hum na karenge pyaar

shaking her head Kaju walks briskly and reache sthe gate almost when

the gypsy sees the expression of sheer longng on his face and depair...she whispers to him," he raajaa...ja usse maaafi maan...gale lagaa...maan jayegi..."tere liye gaati hoon tu bhi gaa...

pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
pardesi pardesi jaana nahin

kaju pauses thens hakes her head and wlaks

Raju sings

the song from raja Hindustani

pardesi pardesi jaana nahin
pardesi pardesi jaana nahin

mujhe chhod ke mujhe chhod ke
pardesi mere yaara....vaada nibhana
tum yaad rakhna
kahin bhool na jana

his voice as if wrechned from the heart, soulful, emotional....
she freezes....a strong wind clows...DEv.....she turns slowly....Raju is singing his eyes closed...tears flow down her cheeks....Dev...Raju is Dev....she runs to him....just then he opens his eyes....she screams...DEvvv....he realises his faux pass and quickly turns his back...he blicks tyhe tears,...and gets into thr aju mode..and when she gets to him..hic Kaajjal ji...accha acting tha na....she slaps him hard....and runs away.....he laughs....despite his eyes which cried....

i will kill him ...i will kill him....she says as she hurries back tothe tabela...brushing her tears away


kaju...shakes her head...AS she reaches the


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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 10

She tunrs one last time to see him surrounded by the women dancing....they were wrapped around him...disgusted she continues to walk....

she is muttering angrily....

she stops for sometime to rest her feet...oh dev...where are you

finally she reaches the tabela...it is dark....gingerly she finds away around...and the light comes on...theere is a single light bulb...lying on the straw is DEv...hi...where were you...kabse intezaar kar raha hoon...she pauses....what is this is raju...no cant be he was drunk and dancing....she runs o DEv...He hugs her tight...Oh dev...kahaan te tum ab tak....i had to suffer that...ek din mein usse maar daloongi....he hugs her tight...kise marogi....Raju...woh to sahraab pphikar....so gaya hai...i saw him...just a while a go at the dhaba....oh my darling i missed you so much;...


she said with feeling in missed you too....oh...dev....

she cups his face lovingly....he lisses her chin," did you....ho w much,2 teases...

she husg him again...."you dont have to ask DEv...you know...i ...i cant bear to e without you even for a minute...bardaast nahin hota...." he sighs....mujhe bhi kahaan....every moment of this judaai is so painful i cant tell....but we are finally getting somewhere....cahmeli ke aane se....those two have found out that there is Raju at the house....so far so good...we are really close now..." he was busy kissing her hand...she sighed...in deep contentment....DEv...what if mom calls the wedding off...." DEv smiles...
"maybe it is a good thing....will give us more time to nab those two...." he trails his fingers along her cheeks....slowly...she draws in her breather...DEv...he caresses her face,2 hmmmm....you look beautiful tonight....pink is your colour....he was wearing a black shirt and trousers,....they are lying on the straw...he asks....lodge mein kamra nahin tha kya...whay are you here....kaju smiles...the alternateive was to sahre a room with raju...he growls and nibbles her ear....i will kill him if you did that...she laughs....what are you jealous of raju...he growls...gaina...aer you trying to make me jealous....
she toys with the button on his shirt....
she could feel his heart race like hers....yes i am ....DEv....

he trails his lips along her forehead


and she groans....


doesnt matter...tum jo aa gaye,...ho...she strokes his hair...gently.....his attention was all on her...he gazes at her lovngly.....

my sweet kajjal...my lovely...kaajjal...what will i do without you...har pal kithe mushkil se gujar ta hai...." she was getting lost in his eyes, his warm breathe fanning her face....


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Posted: 18 years ago
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"D...DEv that nite we were together....do..you...do.you...remember...it"...he smiled....his lips...covering every inch of her face slowly, teasingly....she trembles...."every bit....every moment...." then he pulls her so that she lying o him...." you could have resisited...i was drunk wasnt i....not fully conscious..." he smiled,"Madam....you pulled me into your arms....like this,...mein bechaara...kya karta..." Kaju...said coyly" and what did you do then,2 DEv....smiled. he tunrd so that she was on her back now....he caressed her cheek with is lips and moved...a bit lower...and tried to pull away..." i di this...and you my dear would nt let go....like now." she held him back...with a smile"
their face were closing....he muttered," you must be crazy to marry me....


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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Oh wowww Sammy your FF is just hilarious 👏 ,u know u should change your subject topic to DK FF in tabela or something and also mention the page where u continued your last part so that everyone can read it 😛 ...i really love the way u input songs in your FF..too good 👏 👏 😳 and Ameesha spending night in a tabela..wowww 😆 ....great going Sammy 👏 👏 continue soon 😳
Patjhar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Hey Sammy very nice parts. Just read them all. 👏

OOOOOhhhhhhh getting goosebumps, please continue soon!!!!! 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
hey guys do you know how i can change the title of this topic....

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