DK FF final part - lovers unite -DK - Page 6

contd...part 13
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Kaajjal grabs Rajus collar, her voice is agonized," dd….de..vv….why….are you doing…this…please stop…th…this charade…", Raju swallows…hie eyes turn moist, he is having difficulty in controlling his emotions…..2k..k..kaajj..all…ji…aa..pp…galat…galat…samj…rahe hai….hum Dev…nahin hai….nahin hai"….Kaju tugs his lapels….and shakes him…."stop it …stop it…Dev…please stop it…" she sobs bitterly…a muscle is working in rajus jaw with the effort…."tum…hari…aankhon mein…hai…tum hari…aankhen sach bol rahi…hai…bas karo…dev…bas…."she sobs on his chest….Raju clenches his hands at his side…..his eyes close….briefly……helplessly…..he takes a shuddering breathe…..but doesn't hold her,"……nahin…madam…i…..aankhon ka dhokha ho…raha hai aapko…dekhiye mujhe dhyaan se…hum Raju rangeela hain…kya Dev jaisi koi baat hai hum me…" his voice is grim "…she steps back…her eyes filled with pain….she starts shouting," bas…bahut ho gaya…..band karo ye natak….mein aur kuch nahin soonna chahti….aaj khud bahgwaan ne gawaai…di hai…ye….toofan…ye maang…mein sindoor…ye sab kya jhoot ke rahi hai….nahin tum mere Dev ho…jhoot tum bol rahe…ho…stop it Dev…" her voice breaks again…" Raju tries,…he swallows..a few times for his throat is dry…she takes her arms…" kaajjal…ji…dekhiye…shaanti se socho…hum aap ki man ki baat samaj rahe hai….samaj the hai…aap ko kitna dukha ho raha hai dev paaji se door rehkar…bahut mushkil…hai…magar kuch hi dinon ki baat hai….aap ke liye, dev saab ke liye aur mere liye bhi….sab theek ho jayega…." Kaju stares at him….she is pale….then the glint is back in her eyes…kajugiri…time….." accha tum raju rangeela ho, rajgani ke….Dev pratap singh nahin…" Raju….gives her a dubious look…he has seen the glint," haan madam…ji…hum raju hai…" there is a another strong gust of wind blowing kajus hair….around her face…her look is defiant…angry….Raju looks away….she takes his hand…the concehs go crazy again….he jerks his head at her….sheputs his hand on her head," agar tum Dev hanin….raju ho…toh kao meri kasam….mere sar ki kasam khakar kehna tum Dev nahin ho…" he goes pale……his throat is working but he cant speak…..his eyes reflect his turmoil…" ka mere sar ki kasam….Raju.//….ki tum Dev nahin ho…." He closes his eyes, then with a soft oath….takes her into his amrs….," damn…damn…you….kaajjal…Damn….you"……he hugs her tight….like her is afraid to let her go…..she sobs again,"….humesha rulate ho……kyon kiya ye sab kuch…" he is crying too…his voice wobbles with emotion…."because I was afaraid…afraid of losing you…they killed Payal…tried to kill me…and maybe mom….no….i couldn't take that chance…if they knew I was alive…they would not only try to kill me again…but get you as well oh kaajjal..….he kisses her face…many times….then hugs her again…she closes her eyes…as if she is finally found peace….the priest interrupts he has tears in his eyes" ghabrao mat bete, tum dono ko bhawaan ne milaya hai…kuch nahin hoga….visshwass rakho../….aaj khud ishwar ne is bacchi ke maang ko ujala kiya hai…ab tum uski…raksha karma…."

Dev and kaajjal…slowly walk down the stairs of the temple….he has his hand around her waist, she has her head on his shoulder….

Song is: from ye wada raha

Wada kar le jaane jaa…tere
Bina mein na rahon…mere
Bina tu na rahe…ho ke judaa.


Ye vada aa…raha…na honge…judaa..ye vada…raha

Back to Amnesssiaa….aaa

A lady enters the tabela..she shakes Ameesha awake…hey kaun hai ri tu…mere tabele mein kya kar rahi hai…kal mui…Ameesha screams…thinking it is another buffalo…k..kaun ho…tum…the lady scoffs…is tabele ki malkeen…tu kaun hai…she looks at ameeshas messy clothes and grimy self…with disgust…ameesha quickly pulls out a wad of cash ,,…and givew it to her…soono…yahaan…koi gaadi…ya…transport mil sakti hai kya…mujhe urgently rajgani jaan a hai….the lady eyes the cash…dubiously…..gaadi nahin…mera gharwala….aaj…..sheher ja hai….ghanne behcne…it is a market day…he can take you…but rajgani is in the opp direction and you have come way off….ameesha sits down heavily oh no…a friendly buffalo…coes and licks her again…she shudders…door rahoo..isse door rakhana mujhs e…eeeecchhh…

The lady then becomes conciliatory after the cash is in her pocket…she offers ameesha some hot water for a bath,…and a change of clothes…ameesha eys herself in the vilaage ghara choli and preens …not bad..eh…not bad…(vanity indeed)…she wolfs down …the simple daal rice fare…easted atop a pilae of sugarcane she munches on happily scheming…as the cart moves towards the city….

Back in the town square she checks her mobile…but no network…she calls…Karan on his mobile froma pay phone…he answers….she gets hysterical…he looks at the phone in disgust…Ameesha shut up…and tell me calmly…whats the matter…where the hell have you been…ameesha is stillincoherent but finally manages to tell him…about last nite…he is disgusted…helplessly…ameesha cant you do one simple job properly..oh god…look I will arrange for someone to send you a car….come back to Mumbai…ameesha regains her composure…no karan..ab tum mujh par…chhodo…I will go to rajgani..she pputs the phone down…she smiles eveilly and bites into her sugarcane…..

(we should think of a tabela song for our ameesha) – any guesses

Dev and kaju…stop at the dhabha…Dev hands over a file to him…and gives him some money…chacha…ek aurat aayegi…mere bare mein poochne…sab batana…phir who paise deghi…sabot maangegi…tab usse dheere se ye ile dikhana….

Natak…karma…chilana…phir file dena…Kaju was puzzled…whats in that file…Dev smiles…Rajus papers…eveidence that I am not Dev….i want them to try and lure me…as Raju two options…

Option one, take these papers to police…and expose me…throw me and you in jail…option two….use this to blackmail me…pretend to be dev…and sign the property to them…partners in crime…kaju is shocked…nahin dev…ye bahut khatarnak log…hain..this is risky…Dev holds her …kaajjall….meine …apni jaan daav…pe lagaa liya hai….ab jung chhhed di hain unh onne….jung ho ke rahega…

Song is : from the movie meri jung…

Jeet jayenge hain hum jeet jayenge hum

Tu agar sang haii

Zindagi,,,…har k adam ek nahin jung hai…

Kaajjal…now we will have to be careful….ye log bahut chhaalaak hain…hoshiyaar rahenge…I may have to act werdly at times….and do stupid things as raju…you promise you wont lose your cool….or get emotional…if we slip than it will be lost……promise you will support me no matter what…..he looks into her eyes earnestly….she hugs him…I promise Dev…I promise….i just pray
this nightmare will be over soon

the song is: mera saaya

tu jahaan jahaan rahegaa…mera saaya…o mera saaya..saaath…ho.ho ga..mera saaya…mera saaaya….

Preview : Kaju and Dev…return…Ameesha..finds the papers and is triumphant…..Dev…begins with Chameli…he starts to woo…her Kaju gets upset…despite her promise….there is a scene…at the club…watch this space….
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Sammy looks like even u got hysterical 😉 that u repeated so many times 😛 ..but i really loved your part 😳 too good 👏 ..and now ameesha became the malkin of tabela..hilarious 👏 ...and i really love the choice of your songs for DK and story is getting quite interesting 😛 ..do continue soon 😳

Three good!!!!!! Superb sammy. Wooowww what an emotional revelation. I hope today's episode is equally emotional!!!
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Great continuation. 👏

wow sammy... after soo many days i have read all your continuations.. i am just speechless!!! tooo tooo tooo tooo tooo good!!! keep it up dear!!! 👏

thanks guys...right now...am in 10th heaven after tuews epi...whose update i have read...cant wait to see it online...

so i will not post my ff tii friday...for thr weekend read...dont want tomiss the real action...DK..will she wont she...

the preview...fors parts14-17(in my FF) will be like this
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part 14

DEv tries to woo chameli as raju....ameesha watches...and leanrs he is there for the money too.....chameli gets a makeover....scene at the club where kaju gets upset

part 15

dev manages to manao...kaju who has stormed off to the madh house....as she is mad at dev...he manaos...her...some tabela moments...he has a plan...time to bring in a new character....so we have dev, Raju rangeela....and third one is DEv the bhooth.....

Part 16
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DEv....and kaju cook up a plan...to spook ameesha....that DEvs.... atma has coem back to haunt her....only ameesha can see him...not karan...and no one else...spooky music....kahin deep jale kahin man...oooo....

Part 17....

while ameesha is busy with the bhooth...kaju is kidnaaped by the goons for a ransom...on her engagement day.....the same thugs who threaten karan....Raju makes a deal with karan...let them ask for 50 crores instead of 25....hum 25 ko hum theeno mein batenge...greedy karan agrees....cliff hanging scene...dev saves kaju...a hug...of the century...thats all...watch this space... 😊

part 14

Dev …returns to the temple……he tells the priest….punditji…na jaane…kya ho…kyaa aap humari shaadi kara sakte hain….the priest is pleaszed….he agrees….
Dev gets back as Kaju is packing their stuff…she looks at him lovingly…he stares at her tenderly……..she looks up, again a long eye locking session….as the lovebirds drift into a dreamland…..

Song is :
Nazar Ke Saamne Jigar Ke Paas
Nazar Ke Saamne Jigar Ke Paas
Koi Rehta Hai Vo Ho Tum

Nazar Ke Saamne Jigar Ke Paas
Nazar Ke Saamne Jigar Ke Paas
Koi Rehta Hai Vo Ho Tum

Nazar Ke Saamne Jigar Ke Paas

Betaabi Kya Hoti Hai Poochho Mere Dil Se
Betaabi Kya Hoti Hai Poochho Mere Dil Se
Tanha Tanha Lauta Hoon Main To Bhari Mehfil Se
Mar Na Jaoon Kahin
Dev….comes out of his reverie…and remembers tha task on hand…he takes kaju into his arms…and gently….strokes her hair…she sighs….what is it dev…tum aise kyon dekh rahe ho mujhe….

He murmurs…soch raha hoon…tum dulhan ke libaas mein kaise dikhogee….

Kaju is stunned…dEv…she whispers..he kisses her forehead…haan kaajjal…meine soch liya hain….bhagwaan ne raasta to bataya hain…ab hum he us par chalna hoga…..

then he moves away and goes on one knee…he doesn't have a rose….but…..rajus scarf/…which he holds out

Will you marry me…kaajjal behl..the goonda from mussoorie……will you marry this idiot called dEv pratap singh who took six months to propose……

…she blushes….and then laughs…Dev….she turns away shyly….yes….

He hugs her….with a laugh….oh kaajjal…I am so…happy…..i have made the arrangements lets go quickly….

Kaju is stunned…abhi…aise…I don't even have an appropiate dress…..Dev….says….it doesn't matter…when we first met you didn't even have a duppatta…he says mischievously…she taps him on his arm…badmash….lekin….mom …aur sab…he grins…it will be a surprise…

They walk to the mandir hand in hand…each step they take takes them back to the times, they almost….reached this point and fate took them away from each other….Kaajjal…remembers…the heavy steps she took on the ve of her engagement with dhruv….and how she learnt of the mahadasha….Dev is thinking of the final…time they meet before the accident…the way he puts the bangles on her….wrists…..

The priest is waiting…the agni kund is ready…..Dev and kaajjal takes their seats…the mantras begin…..kaajjal thinks…of these deeply meant ancient mantras…each one has such a spcial meaning…….jab hum ye phere leten hai…the gos and goddesses….start poruing these blessings…
The duty of the wife is to support her husband in all times……

Kaajjal thinks of the moment after the hotel scene…when she loses trust……the way she reacts towards gannu bhaiiya even

Pati ka fraz hai apni patni ko sar aankhon par bitaye…uski har …waqt raksha kare….us ki har zarrorat ab pati ki zimedaari hai…responsibility….dev thinkss…..how did I treat her…..when I threw her out of the house on the day of puja….kitna dil dukhaya meine uska…..

When I sent her away holding payals bangles…I broke her heart….how much she must have hurt……acchi zimedaari nibhayee hai meine……he bahgwaan mujhe maaf kar do…please give me the wisdom to act wisely from now on…….

Patni ka farz hai who apni pati ka kehna maane, uski sewa kare….use devta samjhkar…pooje…sab rishte…ab peeche ho jaate hai…..ab usk a ek hi ristha hai….sab se badkar hai…..

Yes, kaajjal thinks of the moment before the accident….i had said…..i love him more than god…may I be able to do so for rest of my life…never let him down…never let our love down….
I will trust him , listen to him and put his wishes before mine no matter what……

They take the pheras solemnly…gannu bhaiiya appears to be smiling…the conches ring, the bells toil continously…feels all gods and goddesses are blessing them…the touch the feet of the feet…..saubhagyawatiii…beti….dhoodon nahahon, phoodon palo…..all the best……

They are silent on the way to the car…Dev turns her around…she is shy…is looking down he is looking at her maang, the garland….Kaajjal…this is the most beautiful moment of my life….i feel at peace…she is so overwhelmed she cant speak…her eyes glistn communicating her own feelings….he caresses her face…so kaajjal…Dev pratap singh….kaisa lag raha hai….she blushes…dev….she whispers…..shyly

Song is : raja hindustani

Aaye ho meer zindagi mein tum bahaar banke
Mere dil mein yun hi rehna tum pyaar pyaar banke

Aaye ho….

You know kaajjal…I never told you this…but I had found the envelope behind which you had written…..Kajjal –dev pratap singh…I was stunned then…and realised you were in love with me…she is stunned to hear that….you…d..did…oh d..dev…i…he puts his finger on her lips….and yes I had each of those momentoes,….till the day…you were getting engaged to Dhruv….i couldn't burn themm…each one holding…such a dear part of you…..then came the locket….he smiled and took it out…she was stunned ….you had it with you all the time….Dev…..he smiled…I couldn't burn it…it felt I was…dying…with that locket…I couldn't so I kept it…in fact I was going to use it to convince you am dev…once KA was exposed…guess…it was done for me…she hugs him…tremelously….oh dev… I love you so much….he hugs her back…oh kaajjal..i love you too….then slolwy.....but my dearest…..

how muych ever I hate it, now you mst remove the sindoor,….and become Kaajjal behl again….

Kaajal…sobs…no…dev…no…he holds her tight…we will have to behave if I am raju and you will have to be irate towards me…it is very important…tum hara saath ab is….me bahut zaroori hai…

Kaajal is subdued in the car….Dev…is feeling depressed…but he holds her hand and she rests
her head on his shoulder….get back to the house….

song is from the movie anand :

zindagiiii kaisi hai paheli chaaye
kabhi to hasaye e e

kabhi ye rulaye
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Raju starts to woo Chameli.....chameli falls for it...ameesha falls for his con...and makes a plan

Oh wowww Sammy wonderful narration 👏 ..i m feeling soo nice after reading this part of yours 😳 ..DK finally got married at least in your FF 😳 and their scenes in the car r soo romantic and enchanting 😳 😳 really loved the selection of songs along with the scenes 😳 ...do continue soon sammy 😳 ..u r a terrific writer 👏 with equal blend of romance and humour 😛

part 15

NT mom is waiting for them she is still upset at Dev…and addresses Kaju….tum theek toh ho bete…sab theek raha..she doesn't look at Dev…..Dev sighs deeply..and says nothing…kaju glances at Dev…haan mummyji sab theek hain….mein thak gayee hoon….apne room mein jaan a chahti hoon…..NT mom nods…and she starts to leave…after Kaju…Dev says softly mom…Nt mom doesn't turn….please Dev…mein tum se baat nahin karna chati….Dev sighs frustratedly…please mom….dont do this he thinks…his heart heavy…NT mom leaves….Dev goes to his roommm…

Pahua is there…pahua missed him and gives hima hug…bhaiiya…..aap kahaan…the….kya hua…sab….raju is feeling too depressed to talk so he says…please mere bhai…mein bahut thak gaya hoon…..badme baat karanege…pahua says…haan haan….tum mat batana…mein didi says poochtha hoon…but he finds wahaan bhi kuch aisa hi haal hai…kaju is staring into space…sadly…

when pahua enters she wipes her tears…arre pahua….she gives him a hug…pahua demands…kya ho gaya hai tum dono ko…waise toh humeshaa ladte rehte ho….aaj dono bhi aise khaamosh hai…jaise ki……mujhe pata nahi…didi…aap aur bhaiyya…chu chupp acche nahin lagte…..jaao…lado..naa….kuch….jagda…kar lo…do something…he shakes her a bit….kaju…..weeps silently…nahin…pahua….tum abhi chote ho…nahin samjhoge…she hugs him again…..

Dev is thinking of a plan…he has to do something soon…KA need to be forced to show their hand…and chameli was the key…wiping his tears he goes to the bathroom and spalshes water on his face….there is anew glint in his eye……rajugiri…zindabaad…….

Chameli is in the kitchen muttering to herself….us naaz pithe ko….us kaajjal ke saath jaana tha…na jaane kahaan gaye..hain…..dhokhebaaz kahin kaa…she wipes her own tears…she is cooking something for herself…is ghar ke log toh mirchi kaathe hi nahin…..hai….mujhe apna khana khud banana hoga….

Raju comes in…hey chameli….he whispers….she stiffens and turns slowly…aa gaya….janam jalle….aa gaye…gul chade uda kar us….chokri ke saath….she turns tossing her lat….Raju says softly….dekh chameli…tu hain na…sab….galat samjh baiti hai……..tu sachi baath nahin jaanti na….

Chameli turns angrily…ab tera aisa kaun sa sach hai…bhootni ke….KA ne sab bataya mujhe…ki murder wurder nahin hua hai….woh kaajjal madam apni kissi dushmani ka badla le rahi hai…unse……Raju smiles…chamel…please yaar…meri baat toh sun…he glances around furtively and sees a shadow…he moves evr so slightly so that he sees….Ameeshas reflection on a stainlesssteel cupboard…..door…he smiles…..and holds chamelis arms…which she flings away…haat mat lagana….ke dehti hoon…mein jaanti hoon…tu kyon aaya…hai maska lagane…..tujhe darr…hai teri shaadi us kaajjal…se nahin hogi…mere jeethe ji toh nahin hogi…he shocks chameli by saying….hardly….kaun kambakht us bhootni se shaadi karna chahta hai…dekha hai usse she is so pale like a ghost…har waqt rhona-dhone…dev ka jaap karti hain…mein bore ho gaya hoon yaar….jab se yahaan aaya hoon…aise lagta hai…kissi kaid main hoon…..mauj masti sab bhool gaya hoon…..

Chameli is in doubt…tum hara kya barosa…you are thug a con man….na jaane kitnon ko thugga hain…tera mujhe zara bhi visshwass nahin…dev…puts his arms around her waist…his heart….wincing at the thought….he hopes Kaju dosent walk in…arre chameli….hum acche actor hain…ab saboot tum ko mil gaya hoga….tu to humessha mazaak karti thi humara…tu bhi dhokha kaayee…chamelis eyes widens…tu sach keh raha hai…..he smiles….meri kasam…chameli…..meine sirf ek hi ladki se pyaar hai…..(and who kaajjal hai) she hugs him……with tears in her eyes…mein toh mar gayee thi re…….tune kyon kahan….ki tu usse se pyaar karta hai……

Raju smiles…..kyonki….KA mujh par nazar rakhe hain……chameli sniffs…toh chal yahhan se…rajgani laut the hain…nahin chaayiye sab kuch…chal tu abhi…..Raju takes her arms….Chameli zara soch…..kitna paisa hai yahhaan…kaajjal. To kum he …5 crores de rahi thi who bhi…NT mom se pooch kar…pata nahin mile na mile….lekin agar mein dev pratap singh ban gaya…to poore 800 crore mera ho jaayega….Chameli is shocked…..outside Ameesha is shocked…..to ye baat hai…Raju was double crossing kaju….

Chameli beats him….kyaa…tu ab kaajjal ko bhi dhokha de raha hai……she is aghast…Raju smiles nastily…kaun….kise dhokha de raha hai…pata nahin……dekh chameli…ye sab lafda…zokham ka hain…ek etarf is shaadi…ka….humare sir par….talwaar ki tarah latak rahi hai…doosri taraf ye KA …pata nahin kya chaal chal rahe…hai…..is se pehle…ki humara bhaanda phoote….paise apne naam kar kar le….20-50 crores kya kam hai….chamelis eyes widens…20 pachhass…..arre naaz pithe…tu maaji ko dhokha dega….

Raju laughs hehehe….arre chameli….meri raani…..paise ke liye…hum sab kuch kare…..mein soch raha tha.,,…patha hai…jo gehne…kaaajjal ne pehne the kam se kam….25 lacs ke honge….aur wiase bhi maaji ko pata chalega to hum he police ke hawale kar dengi….in ka kya barosa…ye bade log kissi ke nahin hote….he slants a glance at the door…hoping ameesha is listening

Chameli sighs…pata nahin raju….kaajjal…bahut pareshaan hain…..tune usse dhokha nahin dena chayiye…Raju smiles…nahin nahin…chameli…..hum…sirf thida paisa kama rahe hain bas…Kaajjal…madam …aur KA ameesha bas ladthe rahe…hum kya…hum to …dubaai jayenge….
Tum hare saath…chameli relents…sacchi…she sways…happily

Ameesha is furious but has a eveil smile on…she quickly slinks to karan who is looking hassled….arrey kahaan thi tum…he snaps at her….ameesha crows…agar meri khabar soonoge…toh…..mujhe…..tum….inaam doghe…he is angry…look ameesha…this goon called up today…do din ka samay diya hai….agar hum do din mein paise nahin dethe hai…who khud yahaan aayega….i am so scared yaar…aur tum he mazaak soojh raha hai…aaccha….never mind that…what did you find in rajgani….she gives him the file triumphantly….he flicks thru it thoughtfully…ye toh sabbiit ho jaatha hai ye raju hain…magar…woh…..kaajjal ki itni madaad kyon kar raha….hai..usse bhi pata hoga kaajal….ko bahut mishkil hoga…paise dene….she will have to prove first…..we have done all this…..and she has no proof or wed be behind bars now….

Ameesha then tells him what she heard in the kitchen…he was thoughtful uski chaal hogi to get chameli on his side…after all she is a spoke in the wheels to his getting married to kaajjal…ameesha smiles….nahin karan zara socho….kaaajjal se shaadi karke raju ka kya faiida hoga…she is broke…average middle class….he knows that….i think he wants to make a fats buck and abscond…ditching her……

Karan….nods….you are right ameesha….lagta hai…humare haath ek bahut bada aur ahem maura laga hain…chameli ke maddad se hum raju ko apne kareeb la sakte hain and make him an offer…akhir…..choron ki baraat mein sab meilkar khayenge…he laughs softly…….

preview for [part 16)
DEv declares to NTmom he is going to the club...ameesha takes cahmeli to the club on the sly...nT mom insists kaju shud go along...at the club..as Raju chameli and Raju ebcome a twosome....real...close...Kajui s upste and and walsk out...she goes to madha house...DEv follows

beautiful sammy, specially part 14 .... o i loved it .... the way dev said, jab hum first time millay thay tu tumhar dupatta bhi nahi tha ...... 😳 o that was a masterpiece. and the scene when Dev turns and looks at her filled mang ... o what a beautiful moment ... a moment every lover waits for all their life. that one moment of submission and belonging to each other .. WOW. and also the moment when he tell her about the Kaajjal dev pratap singh wala paper ... o how beautiful can it get ... she realising after such a lng time Dev knew from sooooo long how she loved him. man its awesome. loved it yar .... loved it.