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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
OH MY GOD Sammy thats a masterpiece 👏 really loved the situations and also the songs with the situations 👏 👏 👏 and of course the romantic dialogues between DK 😳 U R really doing a great job...please continue soon 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Woooooowwwwwwwww sammy. You are definitely better than me!!!! Great continue sooooooooooonnnnnn please. Can't wait to see all the ahem ahem!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
part 3- DKtabela scene 3

ab aur aage....

😉
Kajjal keeps slanting glances at dev....of course...admiring him as we are...thandi aahe barte hue... 😳 😳

background score....

sambhala hai meine bahut apne dil ko....I i forget the movie...and rest of the song.. 😕 .)

dev...is whistling and chopping onions...then starts crying...and tears flow...Kaju sees that and is concerned...she goes over...

kya hua ....Dev....she whisperss....anxiously...hegets mischievous...and starts to sob loudly...kaju is mildly hysterical...dev...d..de...vvv kya hua...lagi kya...he grabs her hands and pulls her to him...a 😛 nd smiles..ha...lagi...par yahaan. 😳 ..he pulls her reall...close...she blushes. 😳 😳 ..realising he was just fooling...Dev. 😳 😳 ..a little breathelessly...tum bhi na...chhodon...bahut kaam...hai..her voice is husky.. 😳 😳 he sighs...ok...yaar....

making a comical face he hums

hum tum ek kamare mein band ho, aur chaabhi kho jaaye....
tere nahanon ke bhool bulaya mein.. 😳 😳 ..dev kho jaaye...hum tum...kajjal who is a DJ gets into the groove and an antakshari begins 😉

jaayiye aap kahaan jaaynge...ye nazar laut ke phir aayegi...ye nazar laut ke phir aayegi... 😳 she smiles lovingly...dev sighs....

mein shayar to nahin..
he swinsg her around... 😃 and they do a jig...
mein shayar to nahin...magar he hassin...jab se dekhs meine tumko mujhko...shaayyri...aa gayi...min shaayar...to nahin.... 😃 she clapss...wah wah...
kya baat hai dev...tum to acche gaane gaate ho...raju se seeki kya...he smiles secretly...DJ ka pati jo hone wala hoon.... 😛 😛

(this is the old kaju in action) 😊 😊

na na karte pyar tumhi se karbaiti...karna inkaar magar ikraar tumhi se kar baiti...na na karte.. 😉 😉
he sings....

kaate nahi katthe ye din ye raat kehni thi tujhse jo dil ki baat....

she joins in...and they come closer...eyes lost in each other....koi nahi bas tum ho saath...kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat....

and together....they say....lo aaj mein kehta / kehti hoon ..oooonn
..nn...I love you...i love you ...i love you.....
😳 😳 😳 then they pause...and lost in each other when the cooker starts to whistle breaking the reverie... 😃 😃 KMH

he tells her...mein tumare liye kuch laaya hoon, come along...bemused she follows...

in the room upstairs....he hands her a package...wear this tonight...i want to see how you look....and there is a small surprise...see you in an hour.....
😃 😃

she opens the package and gasps at the beautiful dress a sharara in red-gold....and jewellry...shaking her head...she dreams...and the song is... 😃 (any guesses)

meanwhile Dev is preparing the dinner room..he has converted tyhe wholeroom with tea lights, floating candles....and it is dim, romantic, sensual....
he hums he puts on a CD...the title score ....of KKHH fills the room 😳 😳 😳

When kaju comes into the room she is lost in the beauty of the place...feeling touched at Devs....sajawat...he says....kajjal...she feels her heart skip a beat...at the soft tone...and turns...

they are both again lost in each others eyes.. 😳 .Dev...stares at her beauty...she is looking like a bride...he swallows...completely entranced... 😳 😳 😳

he is in ablack dinner suit, with a silver bow, cream waist coat....looking regal, and quite dashing....he takes her hand...first these...he has the gold chuddis...Raju tumhe pehna na saka...to mein kar deta hoon....she smiles....her eyes...drinking in every sight of him...

the score of KKHH still playing in the background....

the CD changes track....and the song of Maine pyar kiya... 😃 😳

Mere rang mein rang ne wali...pari ho...pariyon...rani....ya ho meri...prem kahani....mere sawalon ka jawab do...do na...na...

he pulls her to him as the song begins..she smiles ans with her eyes...asks...kya..with his eyes...he says...come close...she smiles..then the flashback of the dance party when he pulls her close...the same expression he closes his eyes... 😳 😳 😳

(apu & SUr being good dancers....effortlessly swing to this song - Slow waltz, quick waltz, then salsa and even...a bit of jive...but really salsa)...and they swing....throughthe song...(one whole song dedeicated to our DK family DJs Kaj and ANi and rest) 😊 😊 😊

DK are breatheless at the end of the song...Dev laughs...wow...you do know how to move...Kajjal...she laughs...you too....shall we eat now...khana to kab ka tanda...ho gaya hoga.... 😆 😆

but they barely eat, not able to keep their eyes off each other...he holds her hand...and smiles at her all the time...Kajjal when we marry...lets go to mussorie for our honeymoon...she blushes...and looks down...he smiles...aah...maybe switzerland...what do you think...she blushes even more...

😃
background song is - from chandni

Tere mere hoton par meete meethe geet sajna,
aage aage chale hum....peeche peeche preet sajna...
....

he picks his mobbile and switches it off...he smiles wryly at the memory...of the previous occassion...no interrupptions tonite....

she whispers...Dev...is this for real or am I dreaming...is this really you... 😳

he says, if this is a dream...agar ye sapna hai...tum mujhe mat jagana...agar ye haqeeqAT HAI...TO MUJHE MAT SULANA...
😳 😳 😳
kajjal smiles...i never thought you were a cabndlelight type.... 😳
he laughs...what did you think am a juunglee, jaanwar...his eyes are dancing 😃 😃

her smile fades as she recalls how she nsulted him that nite...and tears spring to her eyes...he instantly comes over and gives her a hug...kajjal...dont cry....when you cry...i feel like hugging you 😉 😉
you were being faithful... 😛 .i know how difficult it is for you...seeing me in raju....yet having to keep a distance...it isnt easy...but we have to...you ere a brave girl...a very strong girl... 😳

she closes her eyes...and sighs deeply...how will i know when it is you or Raju...he acts so well...DEv smiles secretly...apne dil ka suno...i will whisper in your ears..and your heart will sing....when am near i will hold your hands and your bangles will jingle...
then he looks at her intesnely ....uuuuffff 😳

must play this song.....

😳 😛 aankhen teri.....maual mere maula mere...(anwar) 😳

he then goes back to his seat slowly....
they face each other lost in thought....DEv thinks of a shaayarri for kaju

ye aankhen hain ya phir kheel ke kawal...
madhoshi ke pyaale, kahin in mein dhoob na jaaon...
ye hoton....ki mehkhane..mein..marne ko ji chahata hai....
ye zhoolphe hain ya ghane baadal chaaye
darta hoon, kahin toofan na aa jaaye...

kaajjal is thinking of a shaayyari for dev...her eyes lost in his

yun na dekho mujhe, dil mein kuch kuch hota hai,
meri dhadkan rukh jaati hai, saanse band jaate hai
😳 😳
uff na karoon , teri baahon mein mar bhi jaaoon kahin
ek nazar bar ke dekh loon, tujhe he mere dil
ye Ishq zaleem, he khuda kaise katega ye har pal

😳 😳

he sighs deeply...kajjal/....i...
she says same time...Dev...I.....

he smiles////....pehle aap....kajjal madamji...

she laughs...Dev...tum bhi na...i must remember to thank Raju...for all hes done...he even saved my life...the other day...or was it you...Dev smiled...it was me...i saw you go in that taxi...and thought...kajjal gusse mein hain...aur pata nahin kya karegi...so i followed...and good thing i did... 😡 😡

she looked touched... 😳 😳 am sorry i reacted...if anything happened to you...i would have ...tears spill from her eyes...he comes over again...and takes her into his arms....please kajjal...dont think about it...its over...now...ab mein aur tum...saath hain...darne ki koi baat nahin.... 😊 😊

should i continue... 😊 😊

sammy 😊 😊


dy to me...what

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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Hmm, what did you ask should you continue, i am still with DK and their magical moments. Of dearie please continue. 👏

Jyoti seems lost today. Must be busy with jiju!!!! 😳

By the way check out my tabels update too!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww Sammy u r a brilliant narrator yaar 👏 superbly written scenes 👏 and apt selection of some beautiful songs 😳 😳 u know earlier i really used to get bored during weekends but now with u people like Sammy and Autumn,i m really not missing my daily dose of DKeria 😳 because i can imagine each and every romantic scenes written by u people 😳 😳 Hats of to u Sammy for your creativity 👏 👏 and yes u should definitely continue 😳

And Autumn,i m not busy with him yaar,its my final year exam which is keeping me busy 😔
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Awww Sammy u r a brilliant narrator yaar 👏 superbly written scenes 👏 and apt selection of some beautiful songs 😳 😳 u know earlier i really used to get bored during weekends but now with u people like Sammy and Autumn,i m really not missing my daily dose of DKeria 😳 because i can imagine each and every romantic scenes written by u people 😳 😳 Hats of to u Sammy for your creativity 👏 👏 and yes u should definitely continue 😳

And Autumn,i m not busy with him yaar,its my final year exam which is keeping me busy 😔

Oooooopppppssss sorry but not a bad thought right? anyways prepare nicely and do well. I am sure you will do with flying colours there too like you dazle away here at IF.😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys....actually...thats my plan...to keep posting this thread for the weekend read...and i got so oooo carried away...yaar...didnt get a chance to read yours or jyos threads...actually the part 2 by bhootnis is hilarious 😆i have to read it at leisure...more

there is a tabela scene...but autumn..aapne itna accha likha...i may skip that for now...your threads is brilliant....
😃
and i have the following scenes...coming up attached to this one....after dinner...a walk under the moonlight....a rain scene DK with songs, and dialogues and more shaayaari.... 😳 😳 😳

a party scene to celebrate Devs party....so more songs, another close up DK dance...

and a surprise item Karan -ameesha item number 😆

thisis a taster....Ameesha suddenly breaks into a jig...shakesa leg...due to everybodys horror.... 🤢 🤢

Piya tu ab to aaja...ha..ah..ha...shola sa tanman baike..aake buja ja....ha ...ah... 🤢 🤢

something like that....and karan...who is toned as well...guess how it may go... 😆 😆 😆

amnessiaa oh my darllling...😆 ......

thats my new names for the two stupid villians...amnessiaa..phhhooss...jassooss..and Karna Kya...kartoos... 😆

i hope to get it ready by monday....gaane sab soch rakhe hain...shaayrri...likna bakhi hain...look forward to your support...and encouragement 😊

sammy 😊 😊



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Posted: 18 years ago
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Keep it up sammy. Waiting for it eagerly!!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4 & 5
ok its abit toooo long... 😊

After dinner, Dev takes her hand…she slowly gets to her feet….their eyes lost in each other….her heartis beating quickly….her breathe is still…..he pulls her close…deliberately…, his face only a breathe away…"kaajja..ll…you look so beautiful tonite…ji chahta hai…bas tum he dekta rahoon…I never thought I would find love again…

Jab tum se pehli baar takraye….mussorrie ki pahadi par, toh dil mein ek toofan jaaga…Darr laga…ghabra gaya mein….i wanted to run…as fast as I could…but everyhere I went you were there challenging me with your eyes, that are like deepest spring on the mountain tops….

Tum ne sach hi kaha tha, hum ek doosre ke liye hi bane hain…magar meine kitna tumhe tadpaya, dil dukhaya….can you please forgive me, kajjal….his eyes were moist…with pain and remorse….tears escape her own eyes…

She puts her finger on his lips, her touch featherlight," nahin dev,…shhhh…don't say things like that….agar tum meri zindagi mein nahin aate, toh ye zindagi…kuch na thi…
Ye Adhuri thi tumhare bina, Adhuri hi re Jaati
Jeete magar, Zinda kahaan hote, aise hi chale jaate

Jeene ka Maqsad, tum se mila hai mujhe….meri zindagi…tumhari wajah se sawanr gayee hain…

Now I know the purpose of my life…you have given me an identity….a direction…all the pain is nothing….as long as you there with me….ab agar maut bhi aaye, to gham nahin….

The song in the background is from Aandhi movie

"tum aa gaye ho, Noor Aa gaya
Nahin to chiraagon se lao aa gay….
….
Badi bewajah thi zindagi……"

He puts his finger on her lips this time," Maut aane se pehle, mujhse….ladna hoga, usse…tum he ab koi nahin cheen sakta hai mujhse…he hugs her tightly as if she might disappear…she holds on tightly too….

She looks at the window and sees the moon,softky whispers," dekho…Dev…Chaand Muskara raha hai…,"he moves so that he can look, but still holding her close….as if he is loathe…to let her out of his sight….then he looks at her "mera chaand to mere paas hai,
Then he looks at the moon, shinning brilliantly that night,"

ai chaand, dekho mat mere chaand ko
Tumhari nazar na lag jaaye
Ek nazar to dekh loon mein Usse
Apni palkon pe chuppa loon Apne Chaand ko

Song :

Then he turns to her, his eyes filled with passion of the moment…"Oh….Kajjal….i feel like," his lips brush her hair…she takes a few deep breathes…his caress follows her hair and he murmurs " you smell like roses in the morning dew…tum hari khushboo meri saanson mein bandi hai…"…he nuzzles her again and whispers,"Ji chahta hai, inhi zoolphon mein…kho jaaoon…" she whispers huskily," De..devvv…"….wanting him to go on but afraid…as well….it was sheer agony, as he caresses her cheeks, with his lips trailing her eyes one by one….his touch like a gentle breeze, tantalizing, teasing…
"kajjal…I wish I could trap this moment for ever…."…..she is lost in his touch….

He feels he is losing control so takes her outside….slowly…to take a few composing breathes…to cool his senses….the moonlight is brilliant casting silvery hue all over ….she feels chilly so he takes off his jacket and wraps it around her, their eyes meet again (flashback to lonavala when he did the same thing)….she smiles," Dev…I always wondered….when you did you first start to feel…you love me…" he cups her face lovingly," mussoorrie on the cliff…no doubts…jab nazren milee…tab dil ne kuch kaha…and first time I saw you at the diwali party…I knew…I just wanted to take you in my arms…and was so scared…no wonder there was some rudeness…and then at lonawala…by the bonfire…I just wanted to do this," he bends his face and their lips meet…she is stunned…at the way she meets his own response…he groans deeply and tries to move his lips to her hair…Oh kaajal…am goin crazy….it is driving me nuts to hold you like this….

He mutters ," its your turn…when did you know…" she trembles in his arms…"ohhh…De…evv…"..then he moves away…wryly," we should sit apart so that we can talk…dammit…kajjal…don't look at me like that…he growls…she laughs …trying to ease the tension within her…"accha…ji Dev sirji.,….wheere shold I begin…I think it was the same for me …on the cliff…I didn't sleep the whole night…but later…you were so horrid at each turn…then when you offered that money…I was so angry…dil toot gaya…I felt betrayed….how could I love someone so nasty….but heart wouldn't listen it kept edging me on..and mere pyaare gannu bhaiyya, ne humesha sach bataya tumhare bare mein,…" she smiles at the memory…of those times….

"pata hai, we met a sidhbhabha, earlier in the day we met the first time….he told me I will meet my sapnon ka rajkumar…and I will be very happy after…then when hottie I were returning from a movie….she told me…it is a special full moon might…if a young unmarried girl meets a handsome, single guy….he will be her partner for life….and then when I was returning throughthe jungle…I was so scared of the noises…so I ran and you grabbed me saved my life," she puts her chin on her palm and balances it on her knee so that she could look at him with a silly grin on her face….he smiles…tenderly," and I gave you so much grief…some rajkumar I am…more like a nightmare….Oh kajjal…my sins are endless…" she smiles mischievously" , MMmmmm…there is along list of your sins…bada lamba hisaab dena hoga…bahut…pareshhaan kiya…." She laughs at the look on his face…his eyes darken,and he mumbles "Accha…hisaab…kahaan se shooroo…karoon…." He pulls her close, she gasps…"dev…vvv," he murmurs"what…Dev…what"

Suddenly two big drops of rain pops on her eyelids and she blinks….paani….and more drops follow….she gets to her feet" Dev…chalo…barish ho rahi hai…andhar chalo…." He gets up but holds her back….there is a huge crack of thunder…and he smiles, slowly…"rukho….i love the rain…." And he pulls her to him….she is scared…and excited at the look in his eyes…"lets dance….i feel so joyous…like this rain…common kajjal….lets whirl"…he swings her around…and they dance…round and round…like Fred astaire did….and countless heros-heroines in the rain….but for DK,

The song is : from the film betaab

"baadal yun garaz tha hai,….darr kuch aisa…lagta hai…
Chamak chamak ke..macchall…macchaalll…ke ye bizlee hum pen a ghir jaayegee
….

Andhar bhi toofan, baaahar bhi toofan…beech mein…is toofanon hai ye sheeshe ka makaan"…

they are fully drenched…lost in each other…but the downpour gets heavy and reluctantly they come inside…..he tries to pull her close but sneezes…"aaacchooo…aaacchhhooo…" then he goes " aancchoo….kkaa…aanncchhoo…"

She sniffs…" sardi ho jayegaa…Dev…you are prone to cold.ss…get out of those damp clothes…I will go upstairs and get a towel…" he sneezes harder…" I will come too"

She finds a bathrobe….and throws it at him…she runs into the bathroom,2 I will be out in a minute" ….Devs…bathrobe is a size too big…she giggles…and wraps the towel around her head…for the wet hair…he is in his robe…and her breathe is caught…he looks so …ahem…you know what…she flushes at her thoughts…and swallows…for some courage…"er..dev…I will rub your hair" he is still sneezing…As she rubs his hair he mutters", remember the last time you did it….was all your fault…koi aise balti ka paani fekta hai…" she laughed…"don't laugh lady…" she said" no….but I washing the stairs…all of us in the block take turns…mujhe kya pata tha…tum wahaan…miloge….sorry baba…"…she pulls his cheeks" mere pyaare gudde…mere acche…soooccchweet…Devu……gussha..nahin karte…I will get you some garama garam coffee…it will make you feel better…abhi aayee" she was glad to make her escape….before he can pull her close…his eyes had darkened…and she runs

For the tension was rising…she was acutely aware that there were only in their bath robes now…back in the kitchen…as she puts the kettle to boil and unravels her towel to rub her hair…she hums a tune

Song is – from movie anamika

Bahon mein chale aao, o….o…hum se sanam kya parda…
……to darr kaisa…..

Dev makes his way down..he is sniffing horribly…there was some cognac in the hosue…now where was it…some in the cognac would help…or he would be down with a howler of a cold….he goes into the kitchen and pauses (flashback to the prev. time in lonawala)…he goes still as kaju is towelling her hair…she turns and swings her hair back as she does…but freezes at the look in his eyes….for a moment they don't speak…the desire is written on their face…s …the kettle whistles to break their reverie….KMH…

He gets the mugs and pours a bit of cognac into it…she comes to the table…and sniffs the cup…what is it…he smiles…cognac…it is necessary for the cold or we will be down with pneumonia…in the morning…..she makes aface"uuggghhh….sharaab…mein nahin …pithi…no…nah…I wont have it…" he says firmly" cognac.,..sharaab nahin hota….sirf dava hai…cmon be a good girl and drink…up…ye dev sir ka order hai," she meets his eyes and see they are dancing….with a wry smile," ok….Sir…" he smiles…snd goes to fetch the kettle…when he returns he aghast to see she has drunk the whole bottle…she is standing on the chair and swaying…like a egyptian…dancer….

When he comes closer, she puts her arms around him" hic…hic…Dev…pata hai…you are so handsome…yaar" he groans….she was drunk…"kajjal…meri pyaari…pyaari…kajjal…coffee…piyo…please…baito"…she shakes her head…" hmm…ahhh…no…I want to say something…you are cchhhooo…cchhhwwweeettt…." She kisses him on the nose…he sucks in his breathe…."kaajjal…pleas get down and drink your coffee…2 there is a tremor in his voice….she sparays her hair on him teasingly….."Dev…I love you…I love you…hic…hic…" he sighs deeply2 and I love you too…magar please…get down…for gods sake"

The song is: from the movie "yeh dillagi"

Hoton par tera naam hain, tujhe chahna mera kaam hai
Tere pyaar mein paagal hoon mein subah shaam….jaanam I love you you love me…"

Dev is rapidly losing control…he fights harder….as he has been the whole day….he wanted to spend time with her, assure her ….but things were getting abit out of hand…god she looked so beautiful and sensous…and with her wrapped around hin constantly…in this drunken state…it was getting harder to think straight…..then she began to go weak at the knees as the alcohol took effect….with a sigh he picks her up (apna Sheru style)…and takes her to her room….with relief…

She hiccs…."dev…do you love me…" he sighs"yes I do…." As he lays her down on the bed, she still has haer arms around him,"Dev…will you kiss me…" he takes a deep breathe and closes his eyes," no kaajal…just sleep…please….tumaaj hosh mein nahin ho…" she murmurs, pulling his face closer "to mujhe behosh hi rehne do…dev…tum mujhe bahut acche lagte ho"…he is losingthe battle…her eyes are like luminous pools of a deep ocean…and he is drowning….."kajjal.."softly…" a tremor in his voice….she finally wins…as he melts into her arms…the moon smiles upon them brilliantly ….

And the song is : (from Apus own film…Pardes)
Do dil mil rahe hain do dil mil rahe hain….sabko…

Part 5

When kajjal wakes up next morning…her head feels heavy….and she feels so different…like a cat…and stretches lazily but her arm encounters something which is breathing…she is shocked as she turns to see dev…snoring softly….god, what has she done…ye sab kaise hua….kal raat ko…she gasps…as some hazy bits of last nite float into her consciousness…oh no…she sighs…ab kya kare….then she slowly gets up but finds his arm is across her…and she gently pulls it away…he mutters in his sleep and she freezes…but he is fast asleep…so she….moves towards the bathroom….with a deep sigh she goes in…she realises that it was too late for regrets…besides…it was her dev..only…to her …he was already her husband as per her shapath at the temple after the accident….she smiles and blushes….she gets dressed into her own clothes and when she comes out he is awake…lying, bare chested on the bed…he smiles lazily…Kajjal…good morning…she blushes like a bride…"g..g…ood morning…." She dare not meet his eyes…he calls her to him" kajjal…come here…please…" she hesitates…at the look in his eyes…"bas tumse kuch kehna hai,…please2…reluctantly she agrees…but when she gets there he pulls her to him…she gasps"dev…" he smiles…."mmmm." and caresses her lips…."what…you look very …tasty…." And he nibbles her ear…shocked…she pushes him away "badmash….…chalo hatoji….mujhe jaana hai…" she is blushing furiously….he laughs…" cmon dear wife….my list of sins is very long…how can you let me go so easily….hisaab kaise pura hoga…." He teases wickedly…she shakes her heard and makes her escape.

Over breakfast….he is holding her hand lovingly…she cuts into his dreamy look" Dev…ab kab milenge…I am loathe to let you go…" he smiles like an idiot…and gets a tap on his hand.."uhhh…oh yes, kab milenge….i will send message with raju…meanwhile he will take good care of you…."

She smiles " Raju…I must thank him for giving me you….hes so sweet and mein usse kya nahin kahaan bura balla…" he smiles " bechara raju…am a little jealous of him now…he gets to be with you all the time…mujhe ye pal churane pade…" she smiles and blushes at the meomory of last nite…

He calles for a taxi…and asks him to drop him off at bandra where he has his car parked…he gives her one last hug, before the taxi arrives….in the taxi…he holds her hand throughout…..

The song is : from raja Hindustani

Aaye ho mere zindagi mein tum bahaar banke….
Meri zindagi mein rehna tum pyaar pyaar banke…

The taxi stops at bandra…they both exhange a glance….of sheer longing…before she goes away…she keeps looking ti,lll he is out of sight…she sighs deeply….

Dev quickly changes into a another suit to meet Kaju…and races his car to be there first….

As he is waiting for kaju…chameli catches hold of himmm

"ai raazzuu…kahaan tookoor dekh rahe ho…mein hoon…chameli…ai…kya hua…"

Raju is nervously looking around to see if kaju has arrived…"arre chameli…yaar tum yahaan kaise…kya hua sab teekh to hai…" she starts to moan…" kya kare…wahaan sab hungamma hai…aur tu bhootni ke…kahaan batak rahe the….i tried on your mob…and you weren't answering…I didn't know how to get to the singh maniosn,…luckily I saw you" just then Kaju arrives and stops the taxi when she sees Raju with Chameli….for a moment her heart skips a beat…Raju in his acting was so muchlike Dev…she sighs…

Seeing her approach chameli gets angry "kya ye bhi saath saath hain ….kuch chal to nahin raha tum done ke beech mein….haan…razzuuu…"" na phone naa taar….dekhna …mein Haryana ki chori hoon…aise waisi nahin…tujhe bhi marrongi aur use bhi"

Raju tries to assure her" saath rehna to pad raha hain…kaam hi aisa zokham ka hain…magar tu yahaan kaise…"

Chameli trues to move into his arms but he steps back and she is stunned…tears spring to her eyes," tum…badal gaye ho raazzuu kahin is mem…net um he phasaya to …nahin…hum pehle se hi zaanthe the…" raju sighs regretfully 2I am sorry chameli…I never meant to hurt you"…chameli lashes out at poor kajjal" arre pakhandi….memshaib…humhare raju ko cheen liya….nahin chodoongi" kaju is puzzled what is she talking about….Raju is scared chameli may say something more so he takes her arm…and gently "chameli jo dikta hai who sach nahin….mein tumse milta hoon aur sab samjha that hoon"….

She sniffs"jhoothe mzhe teri kissi baat ka yakeen nahin…she is beautiful…you have fallen for her…its written all over your eyes…magar who tum he bhi chhod degi…uska barosa nahin…karma…"
he sighs" aisa kuch bhi nahin..tuma ra raju…sirf tumhara hain…lekin ab tumhe jaana hoga….mein aur kajjal bade dangerous mission par hai…." He calls for a taxi….and convinces Chameli to go to sannatas dadi….

He sighs in relief….Kaju looks concerned…is everything ok, why was she crying….

Raju smiles in his usual self" arre madamji…no problem,….she is fine….just a bit emotional…."" Dev paaji mile kya" Kaju smiles…"haan…thank you so much Raju…I have been so horrid to you will you please forgive me" Dev closes his eyes briefly…god this was so difficult,…he couldn't hug her…."kajjal ji…hum dost hain…doston mein kaisa..thank you aur sorry"…chalo…chale….

Back in NT household there is another hungama….DEvs birthday…as soon as they enter…NT mom catches hold of him…."to aah…gaye….kahaan te…hmmm" she is smiling and then looks at a blushing kajjal and understands…Dev blushes too and hugs his mom"aww momm…." Pata hai…aaj kya hain…" he glances at kaju who looks stunned…trying to recall….ab kya hai…NT mom pulls his ears "bhool gaye tumhara janam din…ye na aise hi hain….kajjal…iske bahut kaan kichna…" kaajal takes a deep breathe…now she understood why Dev…came to her yesterday…he wanted to spend a very special moment with her…
She smiles and goes to her room and Raju sighs…longingly after her

Next is the birthday scene…

Just read the review…looks like Sony is taking note of our FFs….

Guys please review this FF…I know it is very long, but Friday, Saturday aur Sunday ka quota hai….

Watch this space for more

sammy 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
i missed adding one song...it is from the movie....Hum dil de chukhe sanam....and the song is

Chand Chupa
Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,
Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,
Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai
Madhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai,
Haan Ye Sama, Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,

it comes after his ode to Kajjal when seeingthe moon...
sammy 😊


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