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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
Part 11…contd…from part 10-DK FF table scene

"Kaajjal…you must be crazy to marry me…," he mutters…his breathe fanning her face like a caress…Kaajjal….is floating…."why…" she whispers softly….he nibbled her ear "because I want to do naughty things to you like this…." " ouch…badmash…yes …also at the farmhouse…you are very naughty…." She rolled away….laughingly…staring at him….a mischievous glint in her own eyes…." And what I did…naughty vthings to you….would you tink I am sane…"


hie eyes darken," is that so….then come here…Kaajjal…" she shakes her head," no am feeling shy…" she says softly….he rolls to her and pulls her to him, he is lying on his back…" give me a little kiss,….Kaajjal." she shakes ahead…" no…I cant…" she is blushing furiously…but her heart is racing…."Dev…Raju may come back…what if he does…and sees us like this…" Dev chuckles,2 who nain aayega…he is snoring at the dhabha…I looked…when I was on the way here…he will wake up only in the morning…so you my dear are all mine for tonite…" he kissed on her nose,"C'mon Kaajjal…do little naughty things to me…too…"…she tries to pull away…her breathe really getting constricted…

the song is (from Sagar)

OOO jaane do Naa….
OOO Paas aao na….choo na mujhe choo ho na mujhe…choo o naa…

"he feels his control is slipping…" kaajjal…lets go to the house…it may get cold and uncomfortable .." kaajjal..smiles…no like it here…its more romantic

(this line is dedicated to jyo and autmn…jyo for her tabela…and Autmn for her lovely scenes…)

…he laughs softly….romantic…eh….lets see….how romantic you…are

he takes off her dupatta…she draws in her breathe….its your turn now…he murmurs…she stares at him…now…no backtracking….i want you to kiss me…" he mutters she shakes her head…nahin…mujhe sharam aati hai… …their faces are close…Kaju is drowning in his eyes….he pulls her to him and kisses her softly…see it is easy…now you try…she smiles…." It is easy for you…you are a guy…slowly…hmmm….he trails his fingers along her neck…and she groans…try…follow my lead….you will enjoy it….cmon…" so very tentatively, closing her eyes shut…..she kisses him softly…he groasn in pleasure…"hmm…wasn't so difficult"….now here…he point to his neck…her eyes open…they are wide…"dev"….his voice was husky…."cmon…now you have started don't stop….yaad hai..my list of sins is very long…so are yours my dear…"…..please kaajjal…once…more…" she smiles and gets naughty…this time..she nips his nose…"ouch….Ab badmaashi kaun kar raha hai….….he hold her head…and undos the clasp…holding her hair…it falls on his face…like a silk curtain…he strokes her hair…you have got beautiful hair…kaajjal…..i get lost in it…..why do you tie it up…. she sighed…" don't you like it that way"…


his eyes are dark…" I love it when your hair is tied up….reminds me of a goonda…a beautiful one…" she gasps…." Goonda…thas rude….kab goondagardi ki meine…." He pulls her cheeks…gently," Accha poore mussoorrie ko mere khilaaf kiya….like a mafia don…who goondagardi nahin thi kya…aur…radiocity mein elaan kiya..tum mera naam announe karogi…you threatened….if I didn't agree to marry you…woh kya tha….my sweet, defiant, stubborn and very sexy…gonad…" he kisses her lips again…"dev…" "mmmmm"…." Dev…when I think of those times when you were so aloof…so distant towards me…weren't there times when you wanted to take me in your arms…you loved me…then.." he sighed at those memories…"yes there were many….the nite of the business party…you were in that pretty erd dress and you had your hair open….i wanted to dance with you so badly…hold you, feel your heart beat next to mine…caress your hari…but didn't dare…I was scared….She smiled" I remember…I dreamt I was dancing with you…it was magical…you were so close to me….i could hear your heart beat…next to mine….and any other times…" he smiled" at the lori….when my hand was burnt and you were applying the cream….you looked…so ….lovely…I just wanted to kiss you…take you in my arms like this…" he kissed her again…" and if you had done than what…2 he muttered…2 if I kissed you then….thappad milta zor ka…darr gaya mein" she laughed…" haan zaroor…thappad milta….but more out of fear than anger…iwas nervous too…sitting so close to you…feeling my heart race…."he murmured" you are talking too much….you cant slip away…tonite….you have a few more kisses to go…."she kissed his jaw…and slowly traced his jawline with her lips…he groaned…2 I a in sheer bliss…my neck…" she kieed his neck…and became a little confident…she opened one of his shirt buttons…he drew in his breathe…don't stop…kaajjall…his voice…was huskier…her hands trembled as she opened the next one..he sighed…as she gently caressed his chest…..her hands shivering…..but when it came to kissing him there she couldn't….she pulled her hands away and hid her face…I cant….mujhse nahin hoga….

(sorry to be a KMH)

the camera rols to ameesha madam….she is making her way….slowly…dazedly///…she is stillin shock….after being given a friendly lick by the friendly buffaloes….

She finally at last reaches those huts…her steps quicken…koi toh mujhe yahaan paani degaha….give me a bed…and food…but alas as she goes in it is a tabela…she is horrified…there is a barrel filled up with clear water…in the middle…of straw…and buffaloes all around…she screams…oh no….and starts to run outside…big drops of water fall on her face…the skies thunder….and the heavens open up…..she runs inside the tabela at least it is dry there…lagta hai rat yaheen gujarni padegi….oh…veer….i miss our lovely bed…mere kapade….oh that food….she groans…she washes her face in that water…it smells foul…..chalega…at least she is clean…..with a sigh she lies down on the old toota poota cot…at least I can rest my feet…she closes her eyes….tiredlyyy

Something warm and wet tickles her ear…she sighs… a few drops of rain…wont wake her up…she tries to sleep….and suddenly opens her eyes…two buffaloes…were standing close….she shrieks…shrieks….the buffaloes join in…gleefylly…mmmoooooooo…welcome home humesha…to the family…after all you are one of us…."

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" no…no…no dev…I cant go on….mein nahin kar sakti….she chicken out…he sighs…." Chicken- you girls are…so darr pok…cmon it is only a kiss." He is bare chested as he leans over her…stroking her cheeks…."ok I let you go this time…no chickening out next time…..oh my sweet kaajjal….i love you so much…." I love you too"….." you know kaajjal..when 2 people love each other like us,…..their souls become one….it is a very deep feeling and goes beyond the physical sensations….i cannot begin to express…..its beautiful….there is complete acceptance, a harmony, no haste, no aggression….i want tonight to be beautiful…for you especially…." She places her hand on his heart,"and your heart is racing like mine…dd…de…vvv…I am scared…are you scared…too"she whispers" "I am scared….kaajjal…of loving you…of losing you….i never want to let you out of my sight…ever…" he gathers her into his arms…..his lips meeting us…." I ..never….want us to be apart…again…."

There is loud clap of thunder….above…it starts to rain…a few drops come in through the hole in the roof….but as two souls become…one…they are oblivious to it….

Song is : viewers choice….you please choose….

(Guys this song is dedicated to autmn….for her beautiful…scenes….and kaj and ani…for their beautiful videos…..)


please review……
sammy
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there is part 12 to come...

preview : DEv...leaves...Raju gets back...Kaju-raju go and find the fraud doctor...who made fake cert...and go tothe temple...to find the fake marriage details....and a miracle happens....Kaju finds out Raju is DEv.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Part 12
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When the 1st rays of sun seep in thru the roof Dev...slowly stirrs awake....it was quite chilly and he snuggles to Kajjal...who is fast asleep...he turns to look at her tenderly....she looks so beautiful...in sleep...so innocent.....last nite was like magic.....he had finally found someone in his life....who loved him so much....who gave him so much....selflessly...he had never dreamt....of ever finding such a love...after payal...his eyes darkened at the thought of his enemies...he promises...to himself and kaajjal..jab tak unko mein sabak nahin sikata...i will not rest...he looks at her with some despair...it also means this raju charade will have to continue for sometime.....my dear....if he gets killed as Raju it wont affect her so badly///....but what will do about DEv...he sighs...she stirs and opens her eyes....she looks shy...vulnerable...Dev....it wasnt a dream//....he kissed her...no...is this a dream....
she felt incredibly shy as memories of last nite rushed in....she remembered every bit clearly as her breathe....it was forever etched on her soul.....

Dev...last nite was....beautiful....you were so tender, so patient.....i never thought it would be like that...." he stroked her face,2 yes it was more than i dreamed...are you happy kaajjal...." she smiled," delirious.....if this is how marriage is than i cant wait to get married to you...though according to me we are married....after that shapath i took at the temple...meine tum ko apna...pati bana liya tha...do hafte baad jo humari shaadi hai....woh toh ab ek formality hai..." she rests her head on his chest content to hear his heart beat"..he turns over...his eyes are serious...." nahin ...kaajjal..there is big difference between being loveers,...and marriage...woh saath phere...woh pavititr...agni....sab kuch badal jaata hai...the stars change....destiny changes...(guys does it means he still believes in the mahadasha-???)

she cups his face euqallu serious tone," Shastron mein likha tha ki savitiri yam lok gayee thi, apne pati ko wapas laane...lord yama se bhi ladi...agar tum he kuch bhi ho jaata...toh...mein doosri duniya mein jakar....tum he wapas le aati...saare yam...lok...se ladti...i would never give up...till i found you.....

he smiles ...tremlously....Oh kaajjal...my sweetest...my dearest....hum to har,...janam...mein saath saath...rahenge/....koi hum he judaa nahin kar sakta...not even death

song is: *tum se accha kaun hai)

janam janam ka saath hai nibhane ko
sau sau baar meine janam liye....

Dev...sits up....we have to get going...i am leaving now...Raju abhi aata hi hoga...i will quickly showere in his room and leave...she closes her eyes shyly...as he gets dressed....he stands up and looks at her..longingly...purses his lips..then leaves....

after 10 mins he comes to the tabela she is fully dressed...coast is clear....you can shower too...he isnt back...he hugs her tightlyy...i will be abck soon...take care my love...she closes her eyes….i will wait for you…dev…

she goes in and has a cold bath as there is no running water…she washes her hair…hair too….there was straw all over her hair…she hums a song…as she comes out….she sighs…coast is clear…that idiot raju was still not back….she changes into another dress and starts rubbing her damp hair…there is a knock on the door…must be raju…..she opens the door..his eyes darkem…"hi"…for a moment she thinks it is Dev…then shakes her head…she could smell the alcohol a mile away…wrinkling her nose she lets him in….he hides a smile…."arre madamji…so you slept here after all…mujhe pata tha…raat mein thand bahut hui hogi…" she controls her temper…she had promised Dev…she will put a lid on it….

Raju…hum he bahut kaam karma hai…tum jaldi se tayaar ho kar….aana…mein intezaar karti hoon….When she is gone he sighs….oh kaajjal….

He comes out dressed as Dev this time she swallows…to remind herself…he is raju….he looks at her Chale….they first go to the doctor…pehle is fraud doctor ko…pakadthe hai…phir pandit….kajugiri+rajugiri time

Kya yehi jagah thi Raju…theek se pata hai na…
Haan letter head par yehi hi address tha….

He knocks on the door of the doctor…a young man opens the door he frowns at raju…who shoves him inside…hey..ey…kaun hai…ye kaisi goondadari hai…Raju has him by the lapels….kaju…is shocked….Raju/….but for amoment he looked so angry like Dev….Dev would have done exactly like that….breathing down the doctors face angrily…nakli….repot banana ka shaukh hai na tum he…bolo kite paise mile the tum he…the doctor…is scared…aa…ap….k..kya bol rahe…hain…mujhe…kuch bi….pata…nahin…..Raju Slams him again….the doctor
ivers….aa…aapp////kau…kaun…hai…kiski….baat..kar rahe…hai….Raju snarls…chameli….gulbarga…yaad hai…yahhaann…dhabha…chalathi hai..usse nakli cert…kine diya…the doctors first denies…then ….seeing the murderous look in Rajus eyes….stammers…mm..m..meine….Kitne paise diye…tum he…bakk…ooo…..Kaju is scared…R..Raju…zara..dheere..se….she was scared of Rajus anger…..

Kitne paise….pa…paanch…hazaaar….i swear….tum he abhi isi waqt ek chithi likna hoga…..the doctor nods….you have to say that the certificate was false….and that you were paid 5 thousand to do it…..comon write…the doctor is treeified…I will lose my license and go to jail…..raju smiles eerily….if you don't write tum abhi par lok jaaoge…likko….paise doonga …likho….

The doctor…types the letter on his typewriter and takes acopy on the letterhead…Raju snatches the letter reads it…satisfied..he takes out a cheque for 2 lacs….ye lena…aur ohir apni shakkl rAjgani mein nahin dikhana…if I find you here…I will kill you…the doctors shrinkas back…samjha…his eyes lit upwith greed….when she sees the cheque….

Kaju…tells him" us beechaare ko itna darrana ko kya zaroorat tha….pyaar se bhi kaam kara lethe the…aur itne paise aaye kahaan se…Raju…." Raju smiles like old…hehehe madam ji…Dev Paaji pehle se hi ye hum he de gaye the…ye laathon ke bhooth baton se nahin maante….yahaan…aap hum pe chhodo…

She shakes her head…..they find the temple….yehi mandir hoga…yahaan…sab ki shaadiyaan hoti hain….kaju gives him a strange look….

It was a Lord Ganeshas mandir…kaju is delighted…arre gannu bhaiyya,,,…she folds her hands and prays…Raju looks at her tenderly…he recalls…the scene at the mandir last time…..

They see the pundit and enquire…if he knows chameli…they describe the fraund priest…who had accompanied Chameli….Nahin beta…aisi koi shaadi nahin hui…everything is very legal here…come I will show you….par pehle puja ka samay ho gaya hai…tehro beti mein tumhe thaali deta hoon////…bhog ke baad….baat karenge….Raju looks at Kaju bemusedly…as she puts her dupatta around her hed, and closes her eyes…he sighs…I am so luckly to have such as deeply spiritual person in my life…wanra aaj kal ki ladkiyaan….kahhaan ye sab mein vishwass rakti hain….

She looks at him…kya soch rahe ho Raju….aarti ka samay…hai..haathh…jodo…

Song is :
Jai jagdish hare…

She sings along….and the temple bells ring….

The priest brings a thali….and does the bhog…Raju follows her lead…then he hands the thali to Kaju and says" use tilak lagana…aur tum bete us ko…mein…records lekar aaya…abhi Kaju smiles…" aao mein tum he tilak lagati hoon" …slowly a small storm…brews…the temple bells start to rins…he has a strange expression of his face…. He feels something is above to happen….oblivious to his thoughts…..she takes a pinch of sindoor and puts it on his forehead…the bells go wide…ab tum raju…she smiles…he swallows….he slowly takes a pinch of sindoor and lifts his hand slowly…the bells…ruing…the storm…blows…the leafs….are flying…he dupatta flies of…she stares at him stunned then at gannu bhaiyya…..ganuu bhaiyya….can it be…no.no/….is it…she looks at raju…his hair is blowing in the wind…there is no smile on his face….he is mesmerised like she is……his eyes are dark…..with deep emotion……
the bells are ringing…conches are blowling…her eyes widen….Rajus hand trembles when it gets closer to her forehead…suddenly there is a gust of wind…and the sindoor blows into her forehead covering her maang…her thali falls to the floor…she is pale with shock…her lips tremble…his hand pauses at her forehead….

D..De…VV…..

freeze...please give me your views.....

Preview for part 13 :

Raju who is exposed as DEv...finally...admits he was Raju all the time....Kaju is delirious, siobbing and mad at him for the charade.....he takes a promise..that she has to play along...till they achieve their obj...he takes a kasam....meanhwile ameesha...finallly...gets..there...more humour to come...see you folks....ta..... 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Shivers….aa…aapp////kau…kaun…hai…kiski….baat..kar rahe…hai….Raju snarls…chameli….gulbarga…yaad hai…yahhaann…dhabha…chalathi hai..usse nakli cert…kine diya…the doctors first denies…then ….seeing the murderous look in Rajus eyes….stammers…mm..m..meine….Kitne paise diye…tum he…bakk…ooo…..Kaju is scared…R..Raju…zara..dheere..se….she was scared of Rajus anger…..

Kitne paise….pa…paanch…hazaaar….i swear….tum he abhi isi waqt ek chithi likna hoga…..the doctor nods….you have to say that the certificate was false….and that you were paid 5 thousand to do it…..comon write…the doctor is treeified…I will lose my license and go to jail…..raju smiles eerily….if you don't write tum abhi par lok jaaoge…likko….paise doonga …likho….

The doctor…types the letter on his typewriter and takes acopy on the letterhead…Raju snatches the letter reads it…satisfied..he takes out a cheque for 2 lacs….ye lena…aur ohir apni shakkl rAjgani mein nahin dikhana…if I find you here…I will kill you…the doctors shrinkas back…samjha…his eyes lit upwith greed….when she sees the cheque….

Kaju…tells him" us beechaare ko itna darrana ko kya zaroorat tha….pyaar se bhi kaam kara lethe the…aur itne paise aaye kahaan se…Raju…." Raju smiles like old…hehehe madam ji…Dev Paaji pehle se hi ye hum he de gaye the…ye laathon ke bhooth baton se nahin maante….yahaan…aap hum pe chhodo…

She shakes her head…..they find the temple….yehi mandir hoga…yahaan…sab ki shaadiyaan hoti hain….kaju gives him a strange look….

It was a Lord Ganeshas mandir…kaju is delighted…arre gannu bhaiyya,,,…she folds her hands and prays…Raju looks at her tenderly…he recalls…the scene at the mandir last time…..

They see the pundit and enquire…if he knows chameli…they describe the fraund priest…who had accompanied Chameli….Nahin beta…aisi koi shaadi nahin hui…everything is very legal here…come I will show you….par pehle puja ka samay ho gaya hai…tehro beti mein tumhe thaali deta hoon////…bhog ke baad….baat karenge….Raju looks at Kaju bemusedly…as she puts her dupatta around her hed, and closes her eyes…he sighs…I am so luckly to have such as deeply spiritual person in my life…wanra aaj kal ki ladkiyaan….kahhaan ye sab mein vishwass rakti hain….

She looks at him…kya soch rahe ho Raju….aarti ka samay…hai..haathh…jodo…

Song is :
Jai jagdish hare…

She sings along….and the temple bells ring….

The priest brings a thali….and does the bhog…Raju follows her lead…then he hands the thali to Kaju and says" use tilak lagana…aur tum bete us ko…mein…records lekar aaya…abhi Kaju smiles…" aao mein tum he tilak lagati hoon" …slowly a small storm…brews…the temple bells start to rins…he has a strange expression of his face…. He feels something is above to happen….oblivious to his thoughts…..she takes a pinch of sindoor and puts it on his forehead…the bells go wide…ab tum raju…she smiles…he swallows….he slowly takes a pinch of sindoor and lifts his hand slowly…the bells…ruing…the storm…blows…the leafs….are flying…he dupatta flies of…she stares at him stunned then at gannu bhaiyya…..ganuu bhaiyya….can it be…no.no/….is it…she looks at raju…his hair is blowing in the wind…there is no smile on his face….he is mesmerised like she is……his eyes are dark…..with deep emotion……
the bells are ringing…conches are blowling…her eyes widen….Rajus hand trembles when it gets closer to her forehead…suddenly there is a gust of wind…and the sindoor blows into her forehead covering her maang…her thali falls to the floor…she is pale with shock…her lips tremble…his hand pauses at her forehead….D..De…VV…..


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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: dudleysam

hey guys do you know how i can change the title of this topic....

Click on the post and that opens your fist page. Then go to Edit and change or edit the title every time.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Awwww thanks so much sammy. I am touched by your dedication. You are good too. Keep it up. Waiting eagerly as monday episode for your next part!!!! 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Sammy just brilliant yaar..u r just too good when it comes to gelling romance with humour 👏 👏 ...i really love the way u r creating suspense in each of your posts😳..please continue soon..because in weekends your's and Autumn's FF just keep my romantic mould going😳..and just go to your first page and click the edit button and then u can change the subject title😳
Edited by jyoti06 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
contd...part 13
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Kaajjal grabs Rajus collar, her voice is agonized," dd….de..vv….why….are you doing…this…please stop…th…this charade…", Raju swallows…hie eyes turn moist, he is having difficulty in controlling his emotions…..2k..k..kaajj..all…ji…aa..pp…galat…galat…samj…rahe hai….hum Dev…nahin hai….nahin hai"….Kaju tugs his lapels….and shakes him…."stop it …stop it…Dev…please stop it…" she sobs bitterly…a muscle is working in rajus jaw with the effort…."tum…hari…aankhon mein…hai…tum hari…aankhen sach bol rahi…hai…bas karo…dev…bas…."she sobs on his chest….Raju clenches his hands at his side…..his eyes close….briefly……helplessly…..he takes a shuddering breathe…..but doesn't hold her,"……nahin…madam…i…..aankhon ka dhokha ho…raha hai aapko…dekhiye mujhe dhyaan se…hum Raju rangeela hain…kya Dev jaisi koi baat hai hum me…" his voice is grim "…she steps back…her eyes filled with pain….she starts shouting," bas…bahut ho gaya…..band karo ye natak….mein aur kuch nahin soonna chahti….aaj khud bahgwaan ne gawaai…di hai…ye….toofan…ye maang…mein sindoor…ye sab kya jhoot ke rahi hai….nahin tum mere Dev ho…jhoot tum bol rahe…ho…stop it Dev…" her voice breaks again…" Raju tries,…he swallows..a few times for his throat is dry…she takes her arms…" kaajjal…ji…dekhiye…shaanti se socho…hum aap ki man ki baat samaj rahe hai….samaj the hai…aap ko kitna dukha ho raha hai dev paaji se door rehkar…bahut mushkil…hai…magar kuch hi dinon ki baat hai….aap ke liye, dev saab ke liye aur mere liye bhi….sab theek ho jayega…." Kaju stares at him….she is pale….then the glint is back in her eyes…kajugiri…time….." accha tum raju rangeela ho, rajgani ke….Dev pratap singh nahin…" Raju….gives her a dubious look…he has seen the glint," haan madam…ji…hum raju hai…" there is a another strong gust of wind blowing kajus hair….around her face…her look is defiant…angry….Raju looks away….she takes his hand…the concehs go crazy again….he jerks his head at her….sheputs his hand on her head," agar tum Dev hanin….raju ho…toh kao meri kasam….mere sar ki kasam khakar kehna tum Dev nahin ho…" he goes pale……his throat is working but he cant speak…..his eyes reflect his turmoil…" ka mere sar ki kasam….Raju.//….ki tum Dev nahin ho…." He closes his eyes, then with a soft oath….takes her into his amrs….," damn…damn…you….kaajjal…Damn….you"……he hugs her tight….like her is afraid to let her go…..she sobs again,"….humesha rulate ho……kyon kiya ye sab kuch…" he is crying too…his voice wobbles with emotion…."because I was afaraid…afraid of losing you…they killed Payal…tried to kill me…and maybe mom….no….i couldn't take that chance…if they knew I was alive…they would not only try to kill me again…but get you as well oh kaajjal..….he kisses her face…many times….then hugs her again…she closes her eyes…as if she is finally found peace….the priest interrupts he has tears in his eyes" ghabrao mat bete, tum dono ko bhawaan ne milaya hai…kuch nahin hoga….visshwass rakho../….aaj khud ishwar ne is bacchi ke maang ko ujala kiya hai…ab tum uski…raksha karma…."

Dev and kaajjal…slowly walk down the stairs of the temple….he has his hand around her waist, she has her head on his shoulder….

Song is: from ye wada raha

Wada kar le jaane jaa…tere
Bina mein na rahon…mere
Bina tu na rahe…ho ke judaa.


Ye vada aa…raha…na honge…judaa..ye vada…raha

Back to Amnesssiaa….aaa

A lady enters the tabela..she shakes Ameesha awake…hey kaun hai ri tu…mere tabele mein kya kar rahi hai…kal mui…Ameesha screams…thinking it is another buffalo…k..kaun ho…tum…the lady scoffs…is tabele ki malkeen…tu kaun hai…she looks at ameeshas messy clothes and grimy self…with disgust…ameesha quickly pulls out a wad of cash ,,…and givew it to her…soono…yahaan…koi gaadi…ya…transport mil sakti hai kya…mujhe urgently rajgani jaan a hai….the lady eyes the cash…dubiously…..gaadi nahin…mera gharwala….aaj…..sheher ja hai….ghanne behcne…it is a market day…he can take you…but rajgani is in the opp direction and you have come way off….ameesha sits down heavily oh no…a friendly buffalo…coes and licks her again…she shudders…door rahoo..isse door rakhana mujhs e…eeeecchhh…

The lady then becomes conciliatory after the cash is in her pocket…she offers ameesha some hot water for a bath,…and a change of clothes…ameesha eys herself in the vilaage ghara choli and preens …not bad..eh…not bad…(vanity indeed)…she wolfs down …the simple daal rice fare…easted atop a pilae of sugarcane she munches on happily scheming…as the cart moves towards the city….

Back in the town square she checks her mobile…but no network…she calls…Karan on his mobile froma pay phone…he answers….she gets hysterical…he looks at the phone in disgust…Ameesha shut up…and tell me calmly…whats the matter…where the hell have you been…ameesha is stillincoherent but finally manages to tell him…about last nite…he is disgusted…helplessly…ameesha cant you do one simple job properly..oh god…look I will arrange for someone to send you a car….come back to Mumbai…ameesha regains her composure…no karan..ab tum mujh par…chhodo…I will go to rajgani..she pputs the phone down…she smiles eveilly and bites into her sugarcane…..

(we should think of a tabela song for our ameesha) – any guesses

Dev and kaju…stop at the dhabha…Dev hands over a file to him…and gives him some money…chacha…ek aurat aayegi…mere bare mein poochne…sab batana…phir who paise deghi…sabot maangegi…tab usse dheere se ye ile dikhana….

Natak…karma…chilana…phir file dena…Kaju was puzzled…whats in that file…Dev smiles…Rajus papers…eveidence that I am not Dev….i want them to try and lure me…as Raju two options…

Option one, take these papers to police…and expose me…throw me and you in jail…option two….use this to blackmail me…pretend to be dev…and sign the property to them…partners in crime…kaju is shocked…nahin dev…ye bahut khatarnak log…hain..this is risky…Dev holds her …kaajjall….meine …apni jaan daav…pe lagaa liya hai….ab jung chhhed di hain unh onne….jung ho ke rahega…

Song is : from the movie meri jung…

Jeet jayenge hain hum jeet jayenge hum

Tu agar sang haii

Zindagi,,,…har k adam ek nahin jung hai…

Kaajjal…now we will have to be careful….ye log bahut chhaalaak hain…hoshiyaar rahenge…I may have to act werdly at times….and do stupid things as raju…you promise you wont lose your cool….or get emotional…if we slip than it will be lost……promise you will support me no matter what…..he looks into her eyes earnestly….she hugs him…I promise Dev…I promise….i just pray
this nightmare will be over soon

the song is: mera saaya

tu jahaan jahaan rahegaa…mera saaya…o mera saaya..saaath…ho.ho ga..mera saaya…mera saaaya….

Preview : Kaju and Dev…return…Ameesha..finds the papers and is triumphant…..Dev…begins with Chameli…he starts to woo…her Kaju gets upset…despite her promise….there is a scene…at the club…watch this space….
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
contd...part 13
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Kaajjal grabs Rajus collar, her voice is agonized," dd….de..vv….why….are you doing…this…please stop…th…this charade…", Raju swallows…hie eyes turn moist, he is having difficulty in controlling his emotions…..2k..k..kaajj..all…ji…aa..pp…galat…galat…samj…rahe hai….hum Dev…nahin hai….nahin hai"….Kaju tugs his lapels….and shakes him…."stop it …stop it…Dev…please stop it…" she sobs bitterly…a muscle is working in rajus jaw with the effort…."tum…hari…aankhon mein…hai…tum hari…aankhen sach bol rahi…hai…bas karo…dev…bas…."she sobs on his chest….Raju clenches his hands at his side…..his eyes close….briefly……helplessly…..he takes a shuddering breathe…..but doesn't hold her,"……nahin…madam…i…..aankhon ka dhokha ho…raha hai aapko…dekhiye mujhe dhyaan se…hum Raju rangeela hain…kya Dev jaisi koi baat hai hum me…" his voice is grim "…she steps back…her eyes filled with pain….she starts shouting," bas…bahut ho gaya…..band karo ye natak….mein aur kuch nahin soonna chahti….aaj khud bahgwaan ne gawaai…di hai…ye….toofan…ye maang…mein sindoor…ye sab kya jhoot ke rahi hai….nahin tum mere Dev ho…jhoot tum bol rahe…ho…stop it Dev…" her voice breaks again…" Raju tries,…he swallows..a few times for his throat is dry…she takes her arms…" kaajjal…ji…dekhiye…shaanti se socho…hum aap ki man ki baat samaj rahe hai….samaj the hai…aap ko kitna dukha ho raha hai dev paaji se door rehkar…bahut mushkil…hai…magar kuch hi dinon ki baat hai….aap ke liye, dev saab ke liye aur mere liye bhi….sab theek ho jayega…." Kaju stares at him….she is pale….then the glint is back in her eyes…kajugiri…time….." accha tum raju rangeela ho, rajgani ke….Dev pratap singh nahin…" Raju….gives her a dubious look…he has seen the glint," haan madam…ji…hum raju hai…" there is a another strong gust of wind blowing kajus hair….around her face…her look is defiant…angry….Raju looks away….she takes his hand…the concehs go crazy again….he jerks his head at her….sheputs his hand on her head," agar tum Dev hanin….raju ho…toh kao meri kasam….mere sar ki kasam khakar kehna tum Dev nahin ho…" he goes pale……his throat is working but he cant speak…..his eyes reflect his turmoil…" ka mere sar ki kasam….Raju.//….ki tum Dev nahin ho…." He closes his eyes, then with a soft oath….takes her into his amrs….," damn…damn…you….kaajjal…Damn….you"……he hugs her tight….like her is afraid to let her go…..she sobs again,"….humesha rulate ho……kyon kiya ye sab kuch…" he is crying too…his voice wobbles with emotion…."because I was afaraid…afraid of losing you…they killed Payal…tried to kill me…and maybe mom….no….i couldn't take that chance…if they knew I was alive…they would not only try to kill me again…but get you as well oh kaajjal..….he kisses her face…many times….then hugs her again…she closes her eyes…as if she is finally found peace….the priest interrupts he has tears in his eyes" ghabrao mat bete, tum dono ko bhawaan ne milaya hai…kuch nahin hoga….visshwass rakho../….aaj khud ishwar ne is bacchi ke maang ko ujala kiya hai…ab tum uski…raksha karma…."

Dev and kaajjal…slowly walk down the stairs of the temple….he has his hand around her waist, she has her head on his shoulder….

Song is: from ye wada raha

Wada kar le jaane jaa…tere
Bina mein na rahon…mere
Bina tu na rahe…ho ke judaa.


Ye vada aa…raha…na honge…judaa..ye vada…raha

Back to Amnesssiaa….aaa

A lady enters the tabela..she shakes Ameesha awake…hey kaun hai ri tu…mere tabele mein kya kar rahi hai…kal mui…Ameesha screams…thinking it is another buffalo…k..kaun ho…tum…the lady scoffs…is tabele ki malkeen…tu kaun hai…she looks at ameeshas messy clothes and grimy self…with disgust…ameesha quickly pulls out a wad of cash ,,…and givew it to her…soono…yahaan…koi gaadi…ya…transport mil sakti hai kya…mujhe urgently rajgani jaan a hai….the lady eyes the cash…dubiously…..gaadi nahin…mera gharwala….aaj…..sheher ja hai….ghanne behcne…it is a market day…he can take you…but rajgani is in the opp direction and you have come way off….ameesha sits down heavily oh no…a friendly buffalo…coes and licks her again…she shudders…door rahoo..isse door rakhana mujhs e…eeeecchhh…

The lady then becomes conciliatory after the cash is in her pocket…she offers ameesha some hot water for a bath,…and a change of clothes…ameesha eys herself in the vilaage ghara choli and preens …not bad..eh…not bad…(vanity indeed)…she wolfs down …the simple daal rice fare…easted atop a pilae of sugarcane she munches on happily scheming…as the cart moves towards the city….

Back in the town square she checks her mobile…but no network…she calls…Karan on his mobile froma pay phone…he answers….she gets hysterical…he looks at the phone in disgust…Ameesha shut up…and tell me calmly…whats the matter…where the hell have you been…ameesha is stillincoherent but finally manages to tell him…about last nite…he is disgusted…helplessly…ameesha cant you do one simple job properly..oh god…look I will arrange for someone to send you a car….come back to Mumbai…ameesha regains her composure…no karan..ab tum mujh par…chhodo…I will go to rajgani..she pputs the phone down…she smiles eveilly and bites into her sugarcane…..

(we should think of a tabela song for our ameesha) – any guesses

Dev and kaju…stop at the dhabha…Dev hands over a file to him…and gives him some money…chacha…ek aurat aayegi…mere bare mein poochne…sab batana…phir who paise deghi…sabot maangegi…tab usse dheere se ye ile dikhana….

Natak…karma…chilana…phir file dena…Kaju was puzzled…whats in that file…Dev smiles…Rajus papers…eveidence that I am not Dev….i want them to try and lure me…as Raju two options…

Option one, take these papers to police…and expose me…throw me and you in jail…option two….use this to blackmail me…pretend to be dev…and sign the property to them…partners in crime…kaju is shocked…nahin dev…ye bahut khatarnak log…hain..this is risky…Dev holds her …kaajjall….meine …apni jaan daav…pe lagaa liya hai….ab jung chhhed di hain unh onne….jung ho ke rahega…

Song is : from the movie meri jung…

Jeet jayenge hain hum jeet jayenge hum

Tu agar sang haii

Zindagi,,,…har k adam ek nahin jung hai…

Kaajjal…now we will have to be careful….ye log bahut chhaalaak hain…hoshiyaar rahenge…I may have to act werdly at times….and do stupid things as raju…you promise you wont lose your cool….or get emotional…if we slip than it will be lost……promise you will support me no matter what…..he looks into her eyes earnestly….she hugs him…I promise Dev…I promise….i just pray
this nightmare will be over soon

the song is: mera saaya

tu jahaan jahaan rahegaa…mera saaya…o mera saaya..saaath…ho.ho ga..mera saaya…mera saaaya….

Preview : Kaju and Dev…return…Ameesha..finds the papers and is triumphant…..Dev…begins with Chameli…he starts to woo…her Kaju gets upset…despite her promise….there is a scene…at the club…watch this space….
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
contd...part 13
😊 😊 😊
Kaajjal grabs Rajus collar, her voice is agonized," dd….de..vv….why….are you doing…this…please stop…th…this charade…", Raju swallows…hie eyes turn moist, he is having difficulty in controlling his emotions…..2k..k..kaajj..all…ji…aa..pp…galat…galat…samj…rahe hai….hum Dev…nahin hai….nahin hai"….Kaju tugs his lapels….and shakes him…."stop it …stop it…Dev…please stop it…" she sobs bitterly…a muscle is working in rajus jaw with the effort…."tum…hari…aankhon mein…hai…tum hari…aankhen sach bol rahi…hai…bas karo…dev…bas…."she sobs on his chest….Raju clenches his hands at his side…..his eyes close….briefly……helplessly…..he takes a shuddering breathe…..but doesn't hold her,"……nahin…madam…i…..aankhon ka dhokha ho…raha hai aapko…dekhiye mujhe dhyaan se…hum Raju rangeela hain…kya Dev jaisi koi baat hai hum me…" his voice is grim "…she steps back…her eyes filled with pain….she starts shouting," bas…bahut ho gaya…..band karo ye natak….mein aur kuch nahin soonna chahti….aaj khud bahgwaan ne gawaai…di hai…ye….toofan…ye maang…mein sindoor…ye sab kya jhoot ke rahi hai….nahin tum mere Dev ho…jhoot tum bol rahe…ho…stop it Dev…" her voice breaks again…" Raju tries,…he swallows..a few times for his throat is dry…she takes her arms…" kaajjal…ji…dekhiye…shaanti se socho…hum aap ki man ki baat samaj rahe hai….samaj the hai…aap ko kitna dukha ho raha hai dev paaji se door rehkar…bahut mushkil…hai…magar kuch hi dinon ki baat hai….aap ke liye, dev saab ke liye aur mere liye bhi….sab theek ho jayega…." Kaju stares at him….she is pale….then the glint is back in her eyes…kajugiri…time….." accha tum raju rangeela ho, rajgani ke….Dev pratap singh nahin…" Raju….gives her a dubious look…he has seen the glint," haan madam…ji…hum raju hai…" there is a another strong gust of wind blowing kajus hair….around her face…her look is defiant…angry….Raju looks away….she takes his hand…the concehs go crazy again….he jerks his head at her….sheputs his hand on her head," agar tum Dev hanin….raju ho…toh kao meri kasam….mere sar ki kasam khakar kehna tum Dev nahin ho…" he goes pale……his throat is working but he cant speak…..his eyes reflect his turmoil…" ka mere sar ki kasam….Raju.//….ki tum Dev nahin ho…." He closes his eyes, then with a soft oath….takes her into his amrs….," damn…damn…you….kaajjal…Damn….you"……he hugs her tight….like her is afraid to let her go…..she sobs again,"….humesha rulate ho……kyon kiya ye sab kuch…" he is crying too…his voice wobbles with emotion…."because I was afaraid…afraid of losing you…they killed Payal…tried to kill me…and maybe mom….no….i couldn't take that chance…if they knew I was alive…they would not only try to kill me again…but get you as well oh kaajjal..….he kisses her face…many times….then hugs her again…she closes her eyes…as if she is finally found peace….the priest interrupts he has tears in his eyes" ghabrao mat bete, tum dono ko bhawaan ne milaya hai…kuch nahin hoga….visshwass rakho../….aaj khud ishwar ne is bacchi ke maang ko ujala kiya hai…ab tum uski…raksha karma…."

Dev and kaajjal…slowly walk down the stairs of the temple….he has his hand around her waist, she has her head on his shoulder….

Song is: from ye wada raha

Wada kar le jaane jaa…tere
Bina mein na rahon…mere
Bina tu na rahe…ho ke judaa.


Ye vada aa…raha…na honge…judaa..ye vada…raha

Back to Amnesssiaa….aaa

A lady enters the tabela..she shakes Ameesha awake…hey kaun hai ri tu…mere tabele mein kya kar rahi hai…kal mui…Ameesha screams…thinking it is another buffalo…k..kaun ho…tum…the lady scoffs…is tabele ki malkeen…tu kaun hai…she looks at ameeshas messy clothes and grimy self…with disgust…ameesha quickly pulls out a wad of cash ,,…and givew it to her…soono…yahaan…koi gaadi…ya…transport mil sakti hai kya…mujhe urgently rajgani jaan a hai….the lady eyes the cash…dubiously…..gaadi nahin…mera gharwala….aaj…..sheher ja hai….ghanne behcne…it is a market day…he can take you…but rajgani is in the opp direction and you have come way off….ameesha sits down heavily oh no…a friendly buffalo…coes and licks her again…she shudders…door rahoo..isse door rakhana mujhs e…eeeecchhh…

The lady then becomes conciliatory after the cash is in her pocket…she offers ameesha some hot water for a bath,…and a change of clothes…ameesha eys herself in the vilaage ghara choli and preens …not bad..eh…not bad…(vanity indeed)…she wolfs down …the simple daal rice fare…easted atop a pilae of sugarcane she munches on happily scheming…as the cart moves towards the city….

Back in the town square she checks her mobile…but no network…she calls…Karan on his mobile froma pay phone…he answers….she gets hysterical…he looks at the phone in disgust…Ameesha shut up…and tell me calmly…whats the matter…where the hell have you been…ameesha is stillincoherent but finally manages to tell him…about last nite…he is disgusted…helplessly…ameesha cant you do one simple job properly..oh god…look I will arrange for someone to send you a car….come back to Mumbai…ameesha regains her composure…no karan..ab tum mujh par…chhodo…I will go to rajgani..she pputs the phone down…she smiles eveilly and bites into her sugarcane…..

(we should think of a tabela song for our ameesha) – any guesses

Dev and kaju…stop at the dhabha…Dev hands over a file to him…and gives him some money…chacha…ek aurat aayegi…mere bare mein poochne…sab batana…phir who paise deghi…sabot maangegi…tab usse dheere se ye ile dikhana….

Natak…karma…chilana…phir file dena…Kaju was puzzled…whats in that file…Dev smiles…Rajus papers…eveidence that I am not Dev….i want them to try and lure me…as Raju two options…

Option one, take these papers to police…and expose me…throw me and you in jail…option two….use this to blackmail me…pretend to be dev…and sign the property to them…partners in crime…kaju is shocked…nahin dev…ye bahut khatarnak log…hain..this is risky…Dev holds her …kaajjall….meine …apni jaan daav…pe lagaa liya hai….ab jung chhhed di hain unh onne….jung ho ke rahega…

Song is : from the movie meri jung…

Jeet jayenge hain hum jeet jayenge hum

Tu agar sang haii

Zindagi,,,…har k adam ek nahin jung hai…

Kaajjal…now we will have to be careful….ye log bahut chhaalaak hain…hoshiyaar rahenge…I may have to act werdly at times….and do stupid things as raju…you promise you wont lose your cool….or get emotional…if we slip than it will be lost……promise you will support me no matter what…..he looks into her eyes earnestly….she hugs him…I promise Dev…I promise….i just pray
this nightmare will be over soon

the song is: mera saaya

tu jahaan jahaan rahegaa…mera saaya…o mera saaya..saaath…ho.ho ga..mera saaya…mera saaaya….

Preview : Kaju and Dev…return…Ameesha..finds the papers and is triumphant…..Dev…begins with Chameli…he starts to woo…her Kaju gets upset…despite her promise….there is a scene…at the club…watch this space….
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
sorry about the 3 repeats...i got confused...as it wasnt coming..when i clicked on page 7 from the main list of titles 😕

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