When the tide turned .MithviFF-Part 17 updt Pg32 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
oh there is part 3 ...*runs back to read*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Usha! Thank you for the new year's present.

It was wonderful. The guilty concern that Prithvi is showing towards Meera is great. Hopefully it will slowly turn genuine from the heart concern and our Meera will also start to turn the tide towards P.

On the show it never sat well with me that Prithvi blindly followed data's order without any thought or remorse. Not sure how they will get out of it on the show.

But your characters are better and likeable.

Happy New Year to you too and I hope 2013 brings you the best of everything in the world.

XOXO
Shelly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sue_minaaa

Hiii Usha!! 😛 Loved it.. How I wish the CVs gave us something like this! I really didnt like Friday's episode much..🤔 I am really in love with this soft, sweet and caring Prithvi! ☺️ Once again, kudos for the fabulous writing.. waiting for the next part!😛 And, Happy New Year to you dear!!! 😊


Thank you Sue ... This is how I want to see Prithvi too ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shell16

Usha! Thank you for the new year's present.


It was wonderful. The guilty concern that Prithvi is showing towards Meera is great. Hopefully it will slowly turn genuine from the heart concern and our Meera will also start to turn the tide towards P.

On the show it never sat well with me that Prithvi blindly followed data's order without any thought or remorse. Not sure how they will get out of it on the show.

But your characters are better and likeable.

Happy New Year to you too and I hope 2013 brings you the best of everything in the world.

XOXO
Shelly


Thank you Shelly ... I love to hear what you have to say about my story !

True, Prithvi following DT blindly was bad ...

I am a HUGE romantic ... 😆 ... I just cant take negativity... so you will certainly find my characters and story a little on the sugary & mushy side ! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice story yaar...continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: rusha4003


Thanks dear ... will continue soon !

BTW .. what do I call you ? I'm Usha ! 😊


Hey Usha...😊..You can call me Param or my nickname...Paro...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
ohh god, how i could miss the part 2 😔
this 2 parts was great , i like both of it, love the fac😉t that priest thought that they are husband & wife...
poor prithvi but he deserves it... like meera😊

continue soo, please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Fabulous. Loved the update. Please update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏 Just found this my friend! Great story! Looking forward to reading more!

Happy New Year!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
This is a lovely SS so far Usha.

Im glad you left out the ridiculousness of them circling the fire. Sure, it was 'symbolic' but ridiculous.

Anyway.I look forward to more..

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