When the tide turned .MithviFF-Part 17 updt Pg32 - Page 2

GREAT usha di.. wonderful post . 👍🏼
OMG plz update soon😳

Wonderfully written. I think you wrote this better than the CV's. I definitely think that should have been Prithvi's reaction to hearing the truth rather than standing around simmering and then waiting to be ordered to go and find her. I also love the way you described his anxiety in finding her. Awesome job, can't wait to see part 2 and where this will lead Mithvi...👏

very well written, you have to continue soon ,

Originally posted by: sue_minaaa

Wonderfully-written dear!! 👍🏼 Loved it.. please update soon!! waitinggg!! 😃

Originally posted by: luvsati

dil khush kar diya yaar. Thoroughly loved it dear. Keep updating.

Originally posted by: LadyMacbeth

Ushadi , I'm banging my head , trust me , I couldn't make the 1st reply on your post , aajhi mere netko kharab hona tha ! 😡

Brilliant di , fantastic language . Please continue .

Originally posted by: mariyakamran

OMG this is great. Eagerly waiting for more! :)

Originally posted by: liza81

GREAT usha di.. wonderful post . 👍🏼
OMG plz update soon😳

Originally posted by: Parm.

Wonderfully written. I think you wrote this better than the CV's. I definitely think that should have been Prithvi's reaction to hearing the truth rather than standing around simmering and then waiting to be ordered to go and find her. I also love the way you described his anxiety in finding her. Awesome job, can't wait to see part 2 and where this will lead Mithvi...👏

Originally posted by: hangok

very well written, you have to continue soon ,