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Part 14


We started moving out of campus when abrar got a crazy idea in his mind
Abrar : Dance class means masti , enjoyment 😃.. Can we join them?? What do you think??
Akbar : It's a college we cannot go just like we want..
Abdul naughty : We will mix ourselves with these people, who will know us😜
Akbar : I don't think it's a good idea..
Raj : It's ok.. There are many students , no one will think that you doesn't belong to this college.. so chill ..just mix up 😉
Abdul & abrar : Ok then, we are going, if you want to come it's upto you..
And started running inside campus..
Akbar ( why should I be left behind ) : guys I'm also coming .. Runs behind them..
Raj : see you guys at home , bye..


At ground while walking :

Rahul: spill the beans .
Priya : You know me so well 😜😂
Rahul : yes , now tell me what happened in Dean's office??


Flashback


Priya enters the Dean office
Dean : I already got a call that a student has been caught cheating.. So it was you. It's unbelievable for me .. You have always been a bright student of our college and one of my good student but you also know I beleive in being fair to every student .So Can you justify your self else according to our college rules outcome won't be good Enough.
Priya : This is a misunderstanding.. Why will I cheat for a simple test .. I am capable enough to pass this test with my hardwork ..I don't need a chit to qualify myself for finals..
Dean : Then how is this chit near your desk..?
Priya calmly : Sir if I stand near the Eiffel tower that doesn't mean I built it.. Similarly if the chit was near my desk that also doesn't mean i was cheating..That must be someone else chit , maybe because of air it came near my desk or maybe someone did that wantedly.. But that wasn't my chit . You can check my handwriting and chit paper writing to verify whether it's mine or not.. If you still doubt then I can write my complete test paper right here infront of you to prove my innocence.. Apart from this I have no other way of proving myself..
Vrial sir who was witnessing this, spoke up
Vrial : I agree with her sir .. She is a bright student and she doesn't need a chit to qualify such a simple test.. Moreover I have seen that chit and I can say it doesn't belong to priya because I have been correcting the answer sheets for a year and the answer written in this chit is like a inter student handwriting plus lots of grammatical mistakes and priya has an excellent English plus her handwriting is far better than this. It's definitely not her..
Dean : If you are sure about this , then priya is innocent .. We are sorry priya for wasting your time..
Priya : It's ok sir..
Vrial : We have wasted 30mins your of test , so if you want to continue now? But you will be given only 30 mins , not more..
Priya : Ofcourse I want to..
Vrial sir gave priya her answer script and within 30 mins priya complete her left over answers.
Priya : Thankyou sir..
With this priya leaves the cabin


Flashback ends


Ajay : hey see there is something new posted on campus board, let's see..
Kaira reads the notice:
The Dean ,
St. Xavier's College.
As we all know that today an incident happened during the test in which a particular student was held as a cheating chit was found near her desk . But after verification it was found that the chit doesn't belong to that student.. So I strictly warn everyone to stop creating rumours or embarrassing the student in anyway..If I find anyone doing so, will be punished. And also the real culprit behind this will also be punished for framing an innocent student and going against the college rules.
Sincerely 'Dean'


Rahul : Woow.. you proved yourself and also made a clean image .. proud of you..
Kaira: yes .. we are proud of you girl.
Disha : priya is clever .. she made 2 shots with 1 arrow.. 1 . She completed her paper. 2. By writing it she proved herself ..
Atul : Since our test is completed and also your innocence is proved then should end this with something enjoyable..what do you think??
Kaira : Our group dance 😁😁..
Priya : Come on let's enjoy then..
Priya and her friends performed and other students also joined them. Akbar n his friends who just came witness the dance..


(Song + dance)

(Priya , disha , kaira )

Chalein Jaise Hawayein Sanan Sanan, Udein Jaise Parinde Gagan Gagan
Jaayein Titliyan Jaise Chaman Chaman, Yun Hi Ghoomoo Main Bhi Magan Magan
Hey Hey ....................
Main Deewaani Dil Ki Rani, Gam Se Anjaani
Kab Darti Hoon, Vo Karti Hoon, Jo Hai Thaani
Chalein Jaise...Gagan Gagan

Koi Roke Koi Aaye, Kitna Bhi Mujhko Samjhaye
Main Na Sunoongi Kabhi
Apni Hi Dhun Mein Rahti Hoon
Main Pagli Hoon, Main Ziddi Hoon, Kahte Hain Ye To Sabhi
Koi Nahin Jaana Ke Armaan Kya Hai Mera.....
Chalein Jaise Hawayein...Main Bhi Magan Magan
Hey Hey ....................
Main Deewaani Dil Ki Rani, Gam Se Anjaani
Kab Darti Hoon, Wo Karti Hoon, Jo Hai Thaani
Chalein Jaise Hawayein Sanan Sanan, Udein Jaise Parinde Gagan Gagan

( Rahul, ajay , Atul)
Aayein Hasinayein To Aayein, Mujhko Dikhane Apni Adayein
Main Bhi Kuchh Kam Nahin
Aankhon Mein Aankhein Jo Daaloon, Dil Main Chura Loon Hosh Chura Loon
Koi Ho Kitna Haseen
Mera Ho Gaya Wo Jo Ek Baar Mujhse Mila
Chalein Jaise Hawayein...Main Bhi Magan Magan
Hey Hey ....................
Main Deewana Main Anjana, Gham Se Beghana
Hoon Aawaraa Lekin Pyara, Sabne Maana
Chalein Jaise Hawayein...Magan Magan
Chalein Jaise Hawayein...Gagan Gagan


Dean on the window :


Flashback


(After priya left)
Dean : But still a chit was discovered at our college and this isn't good for our colleges reputation..
Vrial : yes , priya cleverly proved herself by completing her test else if she really did cheat then she would have not remember the answers but she proved by doing her test infront of us..
Dean : Yes I know she is very brilliant and disciplined student but without proof we cannot go for words .. Good she proved herself.. But now the point is whose chit it was??
Vrial : I have a doubt on someone but without proof I won't name it ..
Dean : I remember a year ago we have installed a hidden cameras in exam halls. Lets retrieve them .
Vrial : But this will take time , since the security room manager is on leave for 3 days..
Dean 😪 : Then We can only wait now till he is back.. but for now do one thing , because of all this priya's imagine his been ruined , so place a letter 'from Dean' that "priya is proved innocent" on the campus board. I don't want people to criticize her .. She is like my own child , I cannot see her go through embarrassment..
Vrial : ok sir , don't worry..
Vrial sir leaves..


Flashback ends


Dean : I know my child you will never do something like this , but I am afraid about your innocence . This world isn't a place where innocent people can survive.. People usually tend to pull you back to stop your achievements or create hurdles. You never know what's inside others heart .. The only thing you can do is be alert ..


At dance class :


Students assembled practicing dance steps , group gossips , laughter , so was such a happy environment in dance class..
Few students were practicing kathak steps ..
Priya and her friends were sitting and watching them. Akbar and his friends were also sitting at a distance from them .. When Rohit and his gang arrive
Rohit to priya : Omg , look guys its priya , "The topper of class"
BDL(babita) 😈: opps little editing to this " The cheater of the class"
Rahul : You just shut up and get lost 😡
Sam(Samaira/ Reshma) : Relax Mr.Khurrana , relax..
Dinesh😈 like a reporter faking invisible Mike with his hand: By the way , will you like to share your experience with us.
Disha : shall I share my karate experience with you 😠
Priya : Guys relax , If you throw stone in mud , it will spoil your own clothes 🙂
Rohit : Dialogues dialogues and dialogues 😏.. But how will your write finals??🤔(in regretting tone)😓 Opps sorry I meant to say watch us write finals ..
Rahul : I think you still didn't read the notice 😏.. Go get your self updated..
Sam : What update ??
Atul : priya has been proved innocent.😏
Dinesh : Ohh so that is why you all are relaxing
Kaira : Yes and one more time if you try to irritate us then The Dean himself will punish you as per instructions
Babita: Excuse me 😡
Disha: excused 😏.. Go get a life 😏
With displeasure Rohit and his gang left.. Priya suddenly picks up the paper which she has seen falling from sams pocket.. After analysing it
Priya : Ohh so it was Rohit and his friends that trapped me🤨
Rahul : what the.. I knew it. This dumbos won't be so innocent ..
Atul : Yes , I already had doubt on them..
Kaira : Come , let's confront them.. I'll kick those morons ..
Priya : No need.. we won't do anything like this..
Disha : what ..? We will leave them after spoiling your image ?? No way..
Priya : I never said I'll leave them😏 I just meant to say we won't confront them now.. He himself will confront his deeds to Dean😏
Ajay : Why will he do that?? He knows it's outcome. He won't do that at any cost..
Rahul : We will make him do that..
Priya : Yep , he will surely prove me innocent 😏 but not now ..For now let's behave like we don't know about this .
Disha : I hate this Rohit and his friends.. Why do they always create hurdles for us😡
Rahul : Let's forget this now and focus on dance class 🙂.

Everyone perform on some or the other music .. even atul with disha , ajay with kaira , and last but not the least Rahul and priya on "Lamberghini"

(Link for dance performance

Dance , just imagine 😜)


Seeing priya dancing with Rahul isn't making akbar at ease.. He was jealous , but after some point he started imaging his and Jo's dance performance .. Again in his dreamland 😍
This is when priya notice akbar and his friends enjoying their dance performance.. She just gave them smile.


At M.M


Ahan : when will Mumma come?? She promised me for ice-cream ☹️

Nilam : She will come soon dear.. Till she comes why don't we play hide and seek??
Ahan: yayy. Hide and seek , but I will hide and you will search me
Nilam : ok ok..now hide soon
Nilam kept her hands on her eyes and started counting 1 , 2 , 3 , 4 , 5 .. and started searching ahan ..
After looking for sometime
nilam : ohho where is ahan 🤔 ummm
Priya who just came home along with akbar , abdul and Abrar, saw ahan hiding near the stairs
Priya : Here my baby is ..
And tickles Ahan , the little one started giggling..
Ahan : Mumma cheating.. You no count till 5 before searching me..
Priya as if she made a huge mistake : ohnoo.. it means you won and I lost ☹️
Ahan : Mumma no lost . Mumma & ahan one team 😊
Priya lovingly : Aww my baby .
Ahan : Mumma ice cream promise??
Priya : yes yes , I remember your ice cream promise. We will go to mall and have fun.
Nilam : Priya you came from college just now , get fresh , have something then go..
Priya : ok mom .. we will leave after lunch.
Priya : but wait sunny n sanjay both are not here .. And I won't let you both go alone ..
Akbar who has been listening to this interrupts..
Akbar: Don't worry aunty.. We will also go with them.
Priya: Ahmm I didn't want to trouble you..
Abrar: We are happy to join you guys ..
Abdul : yes and remember you promised us to give a tour of this city so let's go together.
Priya : Ok then we will leave after sometime.
With this priya moves to her room.
Ahan , akbar , abdul , abrar spend sometime together playing hide and seek.. This made Akbar's heart warm seeing his little one search him , running around , laughing . It was such a heart warming moment ❤️.
After sometime priya came down after changing her clothes
Priya : Shall we leave??
Abdul : Sorry , I just got a message from my employee , i have little work to be done..
Abrar : yes we have some work..
Priya : ohh then we will go some other day.
Abdul : No..
Abrar : We meant to say , me and Abdul can manage it .. you and ahan go with akbar..
Abdul : yes .. Why to postpone it.. Three of you can enjoy..
Priya : I don't mind.
Akbar : I don't mind it either..
Priya : ok then , ahan come, lets go
Holding ahan's hand priya went out
Abdul to akbar : bye , enjoy your day.
Akbar knows his friends did it on purpose.. They wanted him to spend some family time..Even he wants to spend sometime with his child and wife.
Akbar : Thanks guys 😊
Abrar : Your welcome.. now go ..


Akbar/ jalals POV :


As we reached there, the car park was dull and dark. Well I didn't know how to drive so priya took the initiative and drove the car.. At first I was surprised how smoothly and easily she was driving .. When I asked her she said it was her dad who taught her driving and wants his daughter to be independent.. Hearing this I felt warm knowing how they treat his love and made her self-dependent. Then we took the raise from the second level of the underground parking lot to induce to the bottom floor of the looking complex The moment we stepped out of the lift, we were greeted by a blast of cool air and the blare of music from a music shop nearby. The ground floor was bright and lively.
The layout of the mall was very impressive. It was spacious and well lighted up. We were in the lobby of the huge shopping complex. There were many people enjoying there. I could see a supermarket, which occupied a lot of space. Then there were electronics shops selling huge televisions and music systems that were displayed outside. Near to it was a large shop of shoes. Ahan started jumping in my arms seeing them and I bought a pair from there for ahan after alot of convincing priya .. She wanted to pay for it herself but when I said I'll be happy to do so , she left it on me.
On the first floor, there were few jewelry shops. I wish to buy something for priya too but that will make her feel awkward . And i didn't want to rush her and give her sometime to speak about us by her own will. Till then let's pretend to be friends 🙂
We then went to the book shop. There was plenty of books , music CDs etc. This was something interesting for me. There were few animated children’s movies also that fascinated me. After a lot of confusion, priya and I finally decided to buy few suitable for ahan . It was a good experience. I totally enjoyed selection of books since after every book Priya used to give advice for what ahan likes and doesn't , what is suitable for a kid to watch and what not .. and some books also give a life lesson. we took books like
1. All the World
(Written by Liz Garton Scanlon)
With beautiful watercolor illustrations and a message of love and family life, this Caldecott Honor book explores different community settings through the eyes of a diverse family.
2. Brown Bear, Brown Bear, What Do You See?
(Written by Bill Martin Jr., Illustrated by Eric Carle)
This is a great book for all ages. It introduces colors, animals, repetition and rhyming. Kids love this book because of the sing-song nature of the words and the beautiful images. It is also easy for students to read along with the book the more familiar they become with it.
3. Circus Ship
(Written and Illustrated by Chris Van Dusen)
Circus Ship is sure to delight adults and animal-loving little learners alike. The lyrical story is fun to read, and the charming illustrations offer lots of details for tots to discover. There’s even a page of hide-and-seek animals to find.
And other such books.
Suddenly, I noticed a play area for children. We took ahan there for a few rides. I enjoyed the rides and played a few video games with ahan
and priya . Priya explained me how this works. This was similar to our fair (Mela) rides. After spending time on the rides, we began to feel hungry. We all went to the food court. There were many food outlets offering a variety of delicacies. It took me some time to decide what I wanted to have. We ordered the food items and sat down to enjoy them. And also ahan's chocolate ice cream .. Little one naughtly added some cream on our faces making us smile at his antics.
Finally, it was time to go back home. I thanked God for the wonderful day spent at the shopping complex with my love ones. It was such an amazing day I would never forget. Priya was happy to see smile on ahans face. We were moving out to parking when priya noticed that she forgot her purse at counter. She moved back to counter telling us to stay near parking lot waiting for her.
After few minutes I saw priya running towards us panicked.. I asked her what's wrong she didn't respond to it instead asked me to get inside the car with ahan . As soon as we sat in , she started driving fastly as if she was being chased by someone.
Priya : Fasten your seatbelt and hold ahan tightly..
Akbar : What happen??
Priya looking into the rare mirror: Just do as I say
Saying this she once looked at ahan who was clueless like me and Increased the speed of car . I felt as if we are in some kind of auto racing .Ahan was observing his mom but didn't speak a word . Just few minutes ago when we were in mall she was calm but suddenly she got panicked, I can see the anxiety in her eyes , her forehead was moist , those dried lips as if seen a ghost. I couldn't understand anything out of this but all I wanted to do now was to tightly hug her, comfort her telling nothing can harm her and my son when I am around. Soon we reached malhotra mansion and she instructed the guards to immediately close the gates , getting out of car she took ahan from my arms and ran inside the mansion and into her room. For a second I felt like she was trying to protect ahan from something or someone . The way she was holding him securely like a treasure that needs safety . I wish I could do something but alas I can only watch what's happening 😪

Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Parts 9- 11


Fabulously Awesome Updates


Loved the song choices

Characters are so Interesting

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice part dear

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome chappy

She proved herself

Family time

What happened that made her this panicked

Update soon

Thanks for Pm

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

She proved herself

Family time

What happened that made her this panicked

Update soon

Thanks for Pm


Glad you liked it 💚

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update

Like the songs

Priya proofed herself. Let's see how she convicts the cheater

Family time

What happend, that she got so panically. seems like she wanted to protect Ahan of someone

thanks for update 🧡

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Posted: 5 years ago

You choose very nice songs dear 😉😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update didi

Loved the songs

Priya proved herself now let's see how she made Rohit's gang accept their mistake

Family time👨‍👩‍👦

Bt at last why is she panicked😲

And by whom is she saving ahan😲

Continue it soon😊

Thanks for pm also didi😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Soso70

Awesome update

Like the songs

Priya proofed herself. Let's see how she convicts the cheater

Family time

What happend, that she got so panically. seems like she wanted to protect Ahan of someone

thanks for update 🧡


Glad you liked it 💚.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Awesome update didi

Loved the songs

Priya proved herself now let's see how she made Rohit's gang accept their mistake

Family time👨‍👩‍👦

Bt at last why is she panicked😲

And by whom is she saving ahan😲

Continue it soon😊

Thanks for pm also didi😊


Happy to know you liked it 💚..

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