~The unfathomable love~ Thread 2 UPDATED PART 17 pg 28 - Page 18

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Part 15


Flashback :

Jodha😭 : You will forget me .. I know you will not even remember me

JalalšŸ¤¦šŸ»ā€ā™‚ļø : jo why will I forget you. And it's just a matter of 3 days..Then I'll be back here with you..

Jodha: 3 full days 😢. I know you won't even remember me for once. You will be busy with work , your responsibilities and many other things ā˜¹ļø..

Frustrated Jalal who has been trying to calm his silly wife from past an hour or so , convincing her that he will not forget her even for a second , he will not look at any other women when she is not around . He understands her insecurities well .

Jalal cupping Jo's face in his hands: ok jo , now listen to me carefully ..

YOU ARE MY BREATH. I MAY FORGET TO BREATH FOR ONCE BUT CAN NEVER FORGET YOU. NOT EVEN FOR A SECOND. IF WE ARE AT A LONG DISTANCE FROM EACHOTHER THEN ALSO I WILL REMEMBER YOU, OUR MEMORIES.. I DON'T NEED TO LOOK AT ANY OTHER WOMEN WHEN I HAVE A FAIRY WITH ME . MY DAY STARTS WITH ADMIRING YOU AND ENDS WITH YOU ONLY. WE MAY BE AT INFINITE DISTANCE BUT MY LOVE FOR YOU WILL NEVER FADE OR DECREASE.. IT WILL ONLY GROW .. OUR LOVE IS UNFATHOMABLE LOVE.

Seeing pure love in her man's eye jodha finally got confidence in love . She never wants to be apart from him at any cost or share him . She knows him very well that he won't give a damm to any other women apart from her ,but still a heart has its own insecurities , ifs - buts , any other stupid thoughts . Sometimes it happens that we trust our love onces very much that it we feel insecure imaging them with other person. Even if we know they won't do something like this but who trust the world.. This world is full of evil eyes . If a evil eye cast at your love .. This was something scaring jo.. If it was in her hand then she will hide her love from every evil eye.. But that's not an option and more over love is not a cage . She doesn't want her love to feel caged with her insecurities so she decided to let this go.. Getting her confidence back

Jodha : ok you can go , but come back soon.. I will miss you 😢

Hugging her Jalal jokingly ask: You are so concerned about me , but if you are the one who forgets me then??

Jodha who was shocked with his words : Haww😱.. That will never happen .

Jalal : But just think about this possibility . If you forget me then?.

Jodha : This will NEVER happen šŸ˜‘.

Jalal : just imagine na .. what will I do ? What will you do if something like this happens?? šŸ¤”

Jodha after thinking : If something like this happens then I will wait for you to come and once again blossom our love in my heart , I will wait for your affection, warmthness and your love.

Saying this jo hugs Jalal and in response he also hugged her tightly assuring his love and trust on their relationship.

Flashback end


Akbar sitting near the balcony imaging his jo came out of this when ahan enters his room .

Ahan : angel brealkfast time . I , angel eat brealkfast come come..

Saying this little one start pulling him with his tiny body šŸ˜‚ Looking at his efforts akbar laughs .

All set on the breakfast table , nilam and priya served the dishes .

Abrar: Woow.. it smells so delicious..

Sanjay : ofcourse it will , after all today's breakfast is prepared by priya .

Abrar: wow. Then it must be more than delicious. Lets attack

Abdul : oh god .. leave some for us also abrar😐

Abrar : will see

Soon everyone started eating food and Abrar was non stop praising priya for her cooking skills. Akbar after taking first morsel remembered his Jo's food .. Even she used to prepare just delicious food , same taste , same recipe and uniqueness.. After having single morsel only he can tell it's his jo that prepared this food. He doesn't need any proof that justify this.

Raj : Akbar who was your day yesterday? I heard you, priyu and ahan went to mall ..

Akbar : yes Uncle , it was amazing .. we enjoyed alot ..

Raj : Great everything was good .

Akbar : ya except one thing everything was good..

Raj : what one thing??

Akbar : yesterday priya was.

Suddenly priya interrupts him

Priya : Actually dad I forgot my purse at counter but I found it later else everything was great.

Trying to look normal and also stops akbar from telling yesterday's incident.

Ahan : Its yummy milky day šŸ˜

Akabr : what is my little angel doing?

Ahan innocently: You know how to eat this yummy biscuit??

Akabr faking innocence: no.. this there a trick in this??šŸ¤”

Ahan : yes. I will teach you.

Akbar nods.

Ahan : First take a cream biscuits , then twist it then lick this cream... Yummmm

Akbar mimics : yumm

Ahan : Uff , you no say yumm... I am small na ..I no control so I say yumm .

Everyone starts laughing 🤣

Akbar very observingly : ooo😮

Ahan : Now bring this together like you hug me .. then dip this in milk and then eat..

Akbar : Now angel's turn .

Ahan : No.šŸ˜’

Akbar : why?.😐

Ahan : you first learn na 😃

Everyone erupts into laughter seeing themšŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚


After breakfast everyone sitting in hall discuss something or the other.

Raj : So today I shall declare fishing day. Who who will join me??

Nilam panics: Raj I forgot to tell you.. I have a kitty party with my friends..so I am sorry honey , I can't join you.. But you guys enjoy

Priya šŸ˜…: Dad u already know me and ahan went out yesterday.. I am so tired I was planning to rest.. you know I have a busy schedule and soon my finals , annual day , fest and much more are ahead.. so..

Raj : it's ok dear .. you rest.. sunny , sanjay , akbar , abrar and abdul will join me.

Akbar : Uncle even I am tired.. maybe other day.

Raj : it's ok..

SunnyšŸ˜… : Dad I have to go library.

Sanjay šŸ˜ : You know where's the library??

Sunny : I will search..

Raj : no need..

Sanjay: Dad I have work.. my boss is little strict I should not delay work.

Raj🤨 : I AM YOUR BOSS

SanjayšŸ¤¦šŸ»ā€ā™‚ļøin mind : oh I forgot.

Raj : now no more melodramas .. get ready.

Saying this raj went to his room.

Abrar : This will be fun.. Fishing..

Nilam , priya , ahan , sanjay, sunny standing in a line, bending their heads front way glaring abrar..

All together : FUN?? 😬 Best of luck šŸ‘šŸ»

Abdul abrar gets confused..

Akbar : I hope it will be fun .. seeing them I doubt now .. All the best dudes.


Nilam on phone : laxshmi are you free? Ok then let's go shopping.. I'll pick you up in an hour.

Akbar who heard this: aunty kitty party?

NilamšŸ˜… : I lied . Don't tell your uncle about this please.

Akbar laughs : ok enjoy your day

Nilam : Hn.. No one is here at home except you , priya and ahan . So please take care of them ..

Akbar : Don't worry.. I'll take care šŸ™‚

Everyone left except these three.. Akbar came to priya's room looking for them when he saw priya telling ahan story from one of the book they bought yesterday from mall. Priya who saw akbar at door

Signals him to come in.

Priya : So ahan what did you learn ?

Ahan : If a stranger offers us sweet or toy or anything we should not take..

Priya : Yes , never take anything from stranger, don't even talk to them ..ok

Ahan : ok . But stranger talk to ahan then?

Priya 🤦: Ahan no reply.. Look never trust unknown people ok?

Ahan : But ahan trust angel

AkbaršŸ˜…: yes but angel is not stranger .. so ahan can trust angel ..

Priya : yes. And never go anywhere with people you don't know.

Ahan : oooo😮😮. Not even school?

Priya frustrated: Ahan Mumma is not joking . School is a place you know ..

Ahan innocently: But I don't know driver uncle so no go school

Akabr seeing ahans cute innocent questions and priya frustration laughs

Akbar : Mumma means to say don't go anywhere without informing us ok?

Ahan : ooo kkk

Priya : Now next lesson..

Ahan : ahan wants to play..

priya: ok . What do you want to play ??

Ahan after thinking: Hide and seek ..

Akbar : hide and seek..

Ahan : ahan and Mumma will hide , angel will search us ...

Akbar : ok.

Both ahan and priya hides , akbar keeping his hands on his eyes counting 1 , 2, 3, 4, 5. I am coming.. Searching everywhere he finds priya hiding behind door. Catching her hand firmly , looking into those black doe eyes

Akbar : This time I won't let you go.

His rough hands holding her soft delicate hands securely giving her goosebumps , his continues stares making her heartbeat raise . His face so close to her , she can feel his breath on her face and his hard lips making her little raged with unknown feeling. Suddenly she realised what she is doing.. Ordering her mind to stop nonsense. Whennshe hears him say something

Priya confused: what??

Akbar: nothing.. come lets look for ahan.

Priya: ya..

Both started looking for ahan who was hiding in closet when they saw him hiding in closet they pretend not knowing..

Priya : oh no.. where must be ahan..

Akbar : Yes , he is so smart .. Don't know where he is hiding..

Priya : Maybe under bed (after looking there) oopps he is not under bed.

Akbar : Now we will loose..

Ahan loudly : hehe.. Mumma and angel with not find me..

AkbaršŸ‘»: who said so??

Priya : here he is

Holding ahan akbar and priya tickles him..

Priya : Rule 1 - When you play hide and seek , choose a nice place that no one can see you..

Rule 2- Make no noise till you are caught.

Rule 3- When caught run away.šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Ahan : oo

After spending some gala time billo bought juices , fruits and milkshake for them.

Akbar notices tensed priya.

Akbar : Sometimes sharing your problems can make you feel better.. If you want to share your problem with me maybe I can help you, I won't tell anyone about it ..

Priya : How can you help me?

Akbar : depends on type of problem.

Priya : You are a businessman.. how can you help me??

Akbar confidently : I have solution for every problem šŸ˜Ž

Priya : oho.. ok imagine you are a king..

Akbar in his mind : hehe imagine ? I am already

King

Priya: hmm?

Akbar: you where saying something.

Priya : hn .. if you were a king whom will you choose . Your responsibility or right

Akbar: šŸ˜… Well I will choose what is right and about responsibilities then I always take care of my responsibilities there is no option.

Priya : you are confusing me .. Choose either of them.

Akbar: right one.

Akbar explain how important it is to choose right path. We can't neglect something that is right and choose favourable one. Karma hits back.

Priya : ok. Can you do me a favor?

Akbar: yes tell me

Priya: I have something to deal with. Can you take care of ahan.. It's just a matter of one hour and I'll be back..

Akbar : ok but be safe .

Priya: thanks.

With this priya leaves thanking akbar in her mind for clearing her confusion.


Fishing spot:

Everyone tired with fishing trip and bored as well.

Raj : Guys enjoying?

Everyone looking at eachother: kind of not

Sanjay: can we go home now?

Raj : Its only 2 hrs since we came here..

Sunny : feels like a day..

Abdul to abrar: we didn't catch any fish and are just roaming ā˜¹ļø..

Abrar: lucky Jalal , he didn't join us.

Raj : come on let's go that side.. maybe we can get fishes .


Shopping mall

Nilam : Thankgod you came else I would have been trapped with raj and his fishing craze.

Laxshmi: that's the reason you came šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ I thought you finally got time for yourself..

Nilam : Raj and his crazy hobbies.. I can do anything to prevent myself from his hobbies šŸ˜…

LaxshmišŸ˜‚ : come lets go in that section..

Nilam : yayy it's shopping day😜


At M.M

Ahan and akbar playing building blocks trying to find perfect pieces for making their home.

Ahan😢 : All wrong pieces.. how will I make home

Akbar: baby patience is needed for every situation.

Ahan : patience??

Akbar thinking about his and Jo's story : Be it making home or getting what you want. You need to have patience else everything will be destroyed in hurry.

Akbar : you play this , I am feeling thirsty I will drink something and be back.

Saying this akbar goes to kitchen where he sees billo the maid cleaning utensils. Maids will be knowing secrets and other hidden information of family.. thinking this akbar interrogates billo about priya's past while drinking water.

Akbar : hello

Billo : hello ji.

Akbar : since I came here , I never saw ahan's dad..

Where is he??

Stunt about this question billi signals akbar to be quite ..

Billo : 🤫 don't ever ask this question again.. else priya didi will be upset.

Akbar: but why?? Where is her husband?

Billo: no one knows.

Akbar trying to get answer : what do you mean no one knows. There must be something about him like if he is in other country or anything you see..

Billo : No one talks about this in our house.

Akbar: why?? Is he a bad person?

Billo frustrated with his queries : no. It's just no one wants to remind priya didi about her past and ahan doesn't know anything so no one speaks about this.

Akbar: ok . But you must know something..

Finally irritated with Akbar's questions billo blurts out

Billo : I don't know anything about this since no one in this house talks about this matter but yes I remember when I was appointed new maid here I once heard raj sir talking on phone about this.

Akbar: what did you hear??

Billo : I heard him saying few years ago didi met with an accident . she lost her husband in that accident and didn't remember anything about him so no one brings this topic .

Akbar: you mean to say she didn't remember anything?

BillošŸ˜‘ : Of all this you heard only that?

Akbar šŸ˜…: tell me .

Billo : yes, she lost her memory about her husband, her family.. so no one brings this topic up.. And you too don't talk about this else if anyone get to

know that I said you all this then I'll be fired.

Akbar: ok I won't.

Thinking about this akbar left with many questions running in his mind.. Maybe priya can clear his confusion. On reaching to room he finds priya and ahan playing

Akbar: you came.

Priya: yes but where were you?.

Akbar: kitchen. To drink water

Priya: oh ok.

Akbar: done with your work?

Priya: yes. I wanted to thank you for clearing my confusion.

Akbar: your welcome. You can come to me anytime if you want help..

Priya: thanks.

Akbar: Can I ask you something only if you don't mind?

Priya: yea sure.

Akbar: where is your husband?

Shocked with this question priya didn't answer

Akbar : If you don't want to share then it's ok.

Priya : no ..I mean it's ok..

Akbar: where is he?

Priya : Somewhere in this world.

Akbar: But people say..

Priya interrupting: He is dead. I know people say he is no more but I don't believe it. As long as I am alive and breathing then he must be alive as well. Maybe destiny is taking its own time to mend our ways . I believe he will come to me soon..

Akbar: are you sure? If he forgets you then.

Priya : That's not possible.

"YOU ARE MY BREATH. I MAY FORGET TO BREATH FOR ONCE BUT CAN NEVER FORGET YOU. NOT EVEN FOR A SECOND. IF WE ARE AT A LONG DISTANCE FROM EACHOTHER THEN ALSO I WILL REMEMBER YOU, OUR MEMORIES.. I DON'T NEED TO LOOK AT ANY OTHER WOMEN WHEN I HAVE A FAIRY WITH ME . MY DAY STARTS WITH ADMIRING YOU AND ENDS WITH YOU ONLY. WE MAY BE AT INFINITE DISTANCE BUT MY LOVE FOR YOU WILL NEVER FADE OR DECREASE.. IT WILL ONLY GROW .. OUR LOVE IS UNFATHOMABLE LOVE. "

You know whenever I sleep I hear such voices in my dreams .. I can tell confidently that my love is somewhere waiting for me like I am doing.


Her words made akbar emotional.. He didn't know how to react.. His love is here waiting for him and he cannot reveal his identity. If he tells her who he is then she won't believe it. She may think he is taking advantage of her situation. If she starts hating him for taking advantage of her lost memory

then?? No i won't do anything that can take away my jo from me.

Priya: where are you lost??

Akbar : Nothing.. it's just you made me emotional.. Anyways come lets have lunch.

Evening at M.M

Everyone arrive home exhausted . Relaxing in sofa and discuss about how their day was.

Nilam : So boys how was your day??

Abdul , abrar, sanjay, sunny looks at eachother 😵

Nilam laughing: no need ..I understood šŸ˜‚

Raj : It was fun šŸ˜. By the way how was your day nilam?

Nilam : good šŸ˜…

Sunny: Maa I think I have seen shopping bags in your car

Nilam😬: My Friends bought it for me..

Sanjay: really?? Or is it that you bought it yourself šŸ˜’

Nilam: you guys need some rest .. Priya, akbar how was your day?

Priya: good ma. Now go and get fresh , I'll be waiting for dinner..

Everyone moves to their rooms. When akbar ask his friends.

Akbar: so guys how was your day??

Abdul : Totally amazing.. One place to another by walk😵.. my legs are hurting 😩

Abrar: yes amazing because we didn't catch even a single fish 😐. I am dying out of hunger 🤢

Akbar burst into laughter after knowing this

Abdul: how was your day?

Listening this akbar got little tensed.

Abrar: what happen ? Everything ok?

Akbar: I'll tell you later.. now go and get fresh..


After dinner :

Akbar tells his friends about priya past and what she thinks about it. (Excluding her problem )

Abdul: you mean to say she lost her memory?? That's the reason she didn't recognise us on very first day .

Abrar: but there a possibility that she is not jo ..

Abdul : how's that?

Abrar : According to what she said or billo aunty priya's husband died in an accident.. It means they have met her husband and knows him ..

Abdul : hmm.. that's something extraordinary.. I mean if she is not jo then our point of staying here is waste

Akbar : SHE is my jo only. I can tell this just by looking at her

Abdul: Maybe her face is similar to bhabhi(sister in law)

Abrar: yes . We know that 7 different people have similar faces surprisingly. Maybe priya is one of them.

Akbar : No .. even if that was the case then why will I have a strong feeling about jo when priya is around.

Abdul: hmm.. but her past.

Akbar: That's all a lie

Abrar: Why will they lie to her about this.

Akbar : We need to get at depth of this ..

Saying this akbar went to his room ..

Both akbar and priya are busy in their own world .. One is waiting for other to come back and take her with him , even without her memory she can confidently tell that her love is waiting for her and one day he will come and take her and ahan to his world . Other side a heart is burning seeing his love at dilemma , wants to tightly hug and take her away but cannot do it. One is burning in fire of memories then the other is burning in fire of distance. One is going down the memorylane to soothe his pain then the other is trying hard to get memory for soothing her pain. Situation both side is delicate.


(Song with English translation)

Bheed mein tanhaai mein

In the crowd and in loneliness

Pyas ki gehraai mein

In the depth of my thirst

Dard mein ruswaai mein

In pain and in anguish

Mujhe tum yaad ate ho

I miss you... always

Geet mein shehnaai mein

In songs and in music

Khwaab mein purwaai mein

In dreams and in reality

Dhup mein parchaai mein

Days and Nights

Mujhe tum yaad ate ho

I miss you... always

Teri chaahatein meri zindagi, tere pyar ko main bhula na saku

Your love is my life... I can't forget your love

Karu koshishen bhale raat din, tere aksa ko main mita na saku

I try my best day and night... but I can't erase your image

Kabhi khwaab mein socha na tha, jeena padega tujhe chhod ke

I never dreamed that... I'd have to live without you

Sanam jo tera ishaara mile, chali aaun saari kasam tod ke

O beloved, if you need me... I'll break all promises and come

Zulf ki nanaai mein

In the shade of your stresses

Bheed mein tanhaai mein

In the crowd and in loneliness

Dard mein ruswaai mein

In pain and in anguish

Mujhe tum yaad ate ho...

I miss you... always

Song

Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Amazing chappy

Poor boys

When will her memory come back

Update soon

Thanks for Pm



Sorry was busy in some other work ,just saw these 2 Pm

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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome partšŸ™‚

Hopefully she gains her memory soon

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soonšŸ™‚

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Posted: 5 years ago

awesome chapter

emotional ending

hopefully she gets back her memory soon.

both are suffer so much

like the song

Continue soon 🧔

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update didi

My assumption is correct priya is only jo

Bt whn will her memory come back

Poor boys

Loved the songšŸ’–

Continue it soon didi

Thx 4 pm also didi

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