~The unfathomable love~ Thread 2 UPDATED PART 17 pg 28 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Sorry for Combine review Appy

I wanted to catch up with story as you are resuming it.

It's ok dear .. 💛

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Part 2 & 3

Malaysia scene:

completely opposite to India, Modern society..

Typical homely scene😛 Care for their daughter's safety...

Jalal all set to expose the traitors😎...

And what an entry of our hero in the scene to catch and give a life time lesson to the culprits,

Yep.. parents care is something very precious ♥️.. Of course our hero needs a dashing entry😂😂

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Part 4

Those beautiful memories of Jodha accompanied with song,

Again one more good choice of song

Friends Gala time very much funny...

Jalal n Abrar teasing foodie Abdul...

And their chariot ride was ...but poor Jalal... he has become such a lost soul in her absence...😒

Part 5

Humorous one

Full of Abdul n Abrar fight over getting lost in unknown place...

Well done

M happy to you liked my work ☺️.. hehe.. you will se lots of humour in this story 😉

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Part 6 - 8

Wonderful...

Fun and fight while shopping😆

What I like the most was, start of part 8...

You have Beautifully penned them👏

"closer to dreams is always a beautiful thing in life.!

Who knows where destiny lies.?"❤️

Family time at MM was nice..

And Jalal n Ahan scene cute...

👍🏼

Glad you liked them💚

Originally posted by: Soso70

Thank you for rewriting all chapters

Please continue soon. I'm so curious 😁

Your welcome ♥️

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Awesome one didu

Loved the song

Poor jalal is jealous seeing Rahul and priya( whom he belived as jo)

Bt who is this mysterious person😲

Eager to know😉

Continue it soon didu😊

Thx 4 pm also didu😊

Thankyou.. hehe need some spice in story 😂

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Awesome update n thnxx for pm me

Your welcome 💛

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Didu update na

Here I am 😌

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956

Your welcome 💚

😊

Part 13

At Xavier's College:

Lurking across the vast open school grounds, where I could see almost everyone with their books out. Bunch of other students entered the examination hall, much quieter than usual. I could see the tension in everyone’s eyes. Starting from an average to the topper every student was concerned about the test. No it wasn't a final exam but this test results will analyse who are eligible to sit for finals.. Yes this was a little pressure since not everyone from college gets a chance to write final exam .
This extraordinary rule is only for Xavier's College , ofcourse it should be since Xavier's College is one of the top college of Malaysia . Studying here is like getting a quality education plus bright future with guarantee.
Everyone doesn't get to enter the finals exams. It's like a preliminary , if we get failed then continue studies next year losing a year..
Similar is the situation for priya a d her friends..

Priya : I hope we atleast get qualified in this test..🤞🏻
Disha : Don't worry priyu , you are always the best .. infact we all can .
Ajay : Why to worry when we have a personal lecture who trained us so well 😉
Atul : Yes priya , you did taught us well but let's hope we remember it🤭
Rahul: Guys let's be positive.
Kaira: positive is ok until we remember whose it's hitler vrial's subject 😪..

On the other side
Dinesh : guys I bought cheating chits of all of us as planned..
Reshma: great..now this will help us qualify for finals..
Rohit : good that you bought this else I cannot waste my time even on bringing them😏
Dhruv : let's quickly hide them , it's almost time for test ..
Reshma : Give me few, they won't do strict checking for girls so this way we can be save...
(All of them quickly hides cheats )
As soon as the bell rings , everyone starts entering the campus , going to checking counters to get them check and then to exam halls

In exam hall :
Everyone busy writing , remembering and seeking help.. Priya so immersed in her paper like Rahul , disha & kaira patiently scrubbing and writing answers, Ajay & Atul busy recollecting answers .. Dinesh slowly kicks the cheating chit towards Dhruv and babita, Reshma busy copying where as Rohit is busy clumsily copying answers..

With this it's almost 2 hrs 30 mins everyone & focused on their papers..

Last 30 mins left..

Babita completed her work of cheating and didn't know where to hide her cheat , when she notices priya sitting exactly opposite of her and so busy unaware of her surroundings.. Suddenly an evil idea pops up in her mind and she throws the cheating chit near priya's desk . Priya who was unaware of all this didn't notice this but few minutes later the invigilator notices a cheating chit near priya's desk and picks it up.. Keeping his hand on desk

Invigilator : Excuse me miss.
Priya: yes sir ..
Invigilator : Stop writing and hand over your paper to me..
Priya: what???
Invigilator loud and angrily: I said just hand over your paper and leave the hall..
(Everyone turns to where this scene was created)
Priya : May I know the reason???
Invigilator showing chit : after cheating you still can argue huhh
Priya : That doesn't belong to me and I didn't cheat.!!
Invigilator: ohh really, then is this chit near your desk a show piece??
Priya : how would I know.. I was busy writing my own paper ..
Invigilator : don't waste my time and leave..
Disha : sir when she is saying she didn't cheat then why are you are you punishing her.??
Atul: yes sir , priya is a topper of our class , she doesn't need to cheat for a little test like this...
Invigilator : explain all the reasons to Dean , not to me.. now leave..
Rahul : Enough sir , we trust her and she cannot do something like this so please let her complete her paper..
Invigilator : Are you ordering me?? You either write your own paper or leave with her..
Disha , Atul , kaira , ajay with Rahul : ok sir , if priya doesn't get chance to write her test then we will also not write, we will leave with her ..
Invigilator : upto you!!
Priya : guys please, it's my issue and let me sort this out ..
Rahul : It's our issue not only yours ..
Kaira : yes Rahul is right , we will also leave if you are not allowed..
Priya : guys please don't act without thinking , see it's only 25 mins left now , anyhow after that you can come out and help me in this matter but right now I don't want any of my friends to spoil their test because of me, it's a matter of our career .. please continue this exam , please?
Rahul : fine but just 25 mins and we will be their with you in this situation ..🙂
Priya nods and leaves the hall ...

This news spread like a fire in the forest at college that a student is caught cheating and maybe disqualified for her finals.. After exam was done , students gathered in small small group discussing about how vrial sir caught a student cheating...
This was a little embarrassing situation but priya's Friends didn't bother to even react to them..Since they know priya very well , they trust her ..
The news reached sunny as well.. He was shocked to hear something like this about his sister.

At M.M :

Raj and nilam discussing how bright and intelligent student is priya and her past records with akbar and his friends..
Raj : You know this college is a top most college of Malaysia .. Getting to study here is one big achievement..
Nilam : I remember how priya studied day and night to get in this college.. This was one of her dream.
Raj : And m sure she will qualify her test and then finals as well..
Nilam : Like always she will top ☺️. My daughter is very hardworking.. I am proud of her.
Suddenly Raj's phone started ringing.. It's sunny whose calling him.
Raj : yes sunny ??
Sunny : Dad sis is in trouble 😰
Raj anxiously : what??? What happened to priya? Is she alright?? Is she safe ?? OMG speakup dammit !!!
Hearing this everyone stood up, atmosphere got little tensed ..
Nilam : raj , what happened to our daughter, tell me ? 😰
Akbar : uncle is she alright?? 😰
Raj kept the phone in speaker..
Sunny narrates how the gossip is going around at college about priya being caught while cheating and chances of her to get disqualified for finals..
Nilam : That's not possible , my daughter prefer to rather fail than cheating..
Raj : Who is behind all this ?? Who is responsible for this?? Do you know anything..
Sunny : I don't know much but I just got to know that sis is in Dean's office for interrogation.. And am also going there.. You please come here dad..
Raj : Don't worry I'll be There soon..
Akbar: We too uncle , please let us come.
Raj : ok come..

Waiting outside the Dean office priya's Friends, sunny are getting impatient for know what's going inside the office.. Marching left to right, right to left .. Raj , akbar and his friends arrive..

Raj : Where is priya??
Akbar : How is she??
Rahul : She is still inside the office..
Disha : Don't know what's happening there.. It's been a hour now😣
Atul : I hope the Dean doesn't disqualify her for finals else her career will be destroyed..
Kaira : Let's be positive 🤞🏻
Finally the wait is over and everyone turns towards office door that just opened..
Priya was just stepped out and was bombarded with questions.. And she simply gave a smile.
Raj : why are you smiling?? This is a serious issue. This thing can ruin your whole career.. You worked hard to achieve this & I won't let anyone to destroy this..
Priya 🙂: Dad relax .. I won't let anyone to destroy my career.. I Am not that fragile anymore.. 😏
Ajay : Priya isn't someone people can mess with.. If she is relaxed like this , then One thing is for sure ..
Rahul , Disha , Atul , kaira together : Someone is soon going to pay for this smile 😅😂
Priya : By the way , there was something miraculous happened 🤭.. Someone defended me..
Akbar: who???
Priya : Guess?
Rahul : Not the Dean , not be the invigilator thennn??🤔
Kaira: common dear, just tell us what happened..
Priya : ok ok It was Mr.Hitler that defended me😅
Priya's Friends looked like have seen a horror movie
Atul : That Mr. Do not waste time, Do not enjoy ..Him???
Priya : Yes him😂
Rahul : Woow.. Today sun must have arise from opposite direction for sure .
Ajay : Are you sure , it was vrial sir who defended you????
(Vrial sir who just happened to exit the office heard )
Vrial : Why do you think I cannot defend my good student??🤨
Disha: No , it's just little impossible to beleive 😅
Vrial : I agree that I am a little bit strict for rules and discipline but at the same time I also know how every student is ..I don't need to listen to others gossip to judge a person .. I observe every individual .
Saying this vrial sir leaves..
Disha : Was he comforting us or scaring?? 😵
Priya : Oh forget it , Now we have our dance class..
Raj : ok , if things here are sorted then I think we should also go .. c u all
Everyone : bye uncle ..
With this raj , akbar n his friends left..

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since i have already added pictures for both the gangs like priya and rohit then why to leave our hero n his gang behind..

so here it is..

1. JALAL UDDIN MUHAMMAD AKBAR

2. ABDUL

3. ABRAR

4. SURYA

5. MIRZA

ENJOY THE CHAPTER ..