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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Thank you for update...

🤗


Loved the whole chappy...


Not only JoJa... I like one more character here...


His better half "JAGUARE❤️"


😊

Edited by Aishu.R - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#42
Having spent better part of today reading, re-reading and re-re-reading the update, I am quite in awe and speechless. The grin hasn't really left my face and today has been a good....in fact a great day. My salient inputs are as follows - I'm glad inspector Prithvitej is getting closer to finding the culprit and his accomplice. His nimble grey cells seem to be Ob fully charged mode after the party :). From the last update we all were well aware that Jalal's delay and the no-contact moments between the two brought Jodha on edge. But you explained her helplessness, desperation and sheer despair beautifully. Gosh! It was as painful for me as it was for her :(. Jalal's knee jerk reaction was understandable, though not at all justified. The whole scene once Jalal returns was just amazing. While his verdict had me blushing furiously, Jodha's appearance made my heart bleed. What followed was nothing even remotely close to what I expected :) and Wallah! Unexpected blessings! And how!!! Before Jalal was back when Jodha was ruminating on what kind of person she's become, I'd kind of imagined that she might unload a bit of her thoughts to Jalal.... But the way the whole scene unfolded was just brilliant. All that was said was superb..... All that was thought but not said was even more superb!!! The Marry Me and I Love You caught me by surprise..... And I never thought I could fall more in love with Jalal but I kept plummeting n tumbling more n more in love with him (if that's even possible :) :)) That's all from me, for now...... Thanks a ton Janhavi for this superb treat. I'm sure it would have been a little tough for you to resume writing after such a long break, but rest assured that, as far as I'm concerned, you've done full justice to this beautiful story. And to think that we are all in a for yet another huge dollop of this in a couple of days - part 2 - makes me ecstatic.... THANKS AGAIN
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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Jeryl

Nancy,


How am I ever going to marry anyone now, my first condition may be to ask potential candidates to read PBD and report to me what they learnt !!

Is there an option for married women like us to replace the existing ones with “PBD Jalal’s “.?

Jahnu is giving us hard reminders of our “dull” lives. I am sure some married souls will agree with me.😭


Rose.



🤣 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Jahnu you want long answer or short one?😉


Long: Next update please.

Short: Loved it. Period!❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Jeryl

You still have the opportunity to conduct a “ Swayamvar” to choose your Jalal.😉



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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Jahnu you want long answer or short one?😉


Long: Next update please.

Short: Loved it. Period!❤️


Loved your long answer Kal di !! 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Posted a thank you note on 1st page...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48
Wah Wah :) I'm impressed Kawsi

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Jahnu you want long answer or short one?😉


Long: Next update please.

Short: Loved it. Period!❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49
Ufff 😍 A superb update of this kind makes us forget the world around us dear :) so the years that we've waited are forgotten. And I'm sure you know from experience that we never abandon our Jalal ❤️ And don't thanks us.. Thanks is all for you for continuing :) and yes some thanks to the lockdown too 😂

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Posted a thank you note on 1st page...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: sajwan07

Chapter 42 Part 1


From where shall i start Di.. i am still reeling with those jittery feelings while writing this.. i am still trying to calm my racing heartbeats while writing this.. i am still trying to ease out my goosebumps that are not going anywhere since the first line that i read.. these feelings are causing a havoc inside me..even now.. and i am not able to tame them down..


>> 🤗 Here take this hug and bring the havoc down


so our intelligent cop finally decoded the mystery..or should i say..got a solid clue.. i too had an inkling for him but let's wait and watch how this mystery unfolds.. who knows.. you always like to keep us on our toes..

>> It's almost in open... no more surprises there!😊


i literally had my eyes wet when i read those never gonna fulfilled yearnings of Jodha...for her brother.. for her family.. for her home.. and it left me wondered how can someone so beautifully described such complex human sentiments.. you are really gifted Di.. the way you put your words..

>> I'm not that gifted as you think. What you read was after many brainstormings I did to get it right and also the reason why I left it behind 3 years ago.


Well… it’s only fair that if her impulsiveness becomes of him, then his cool collectedness became of her. And boy... what a combination they make! Complementing each other at times when the other one is lacking…❤️


a monument that had resisted the tests of time; a monument that might be only shards now but kept its character intact. ( no words for this one.. you got me bowled..)

>> This is my favorite too...


“No rose in the world can hold a candle to mine.”

yes indeed..


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“MARRY ME!” He extended his hand, solemnly beholding her soul through her eyes. “I’ll spend the next fifty years answering your questions.”


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Dhak…. dhak… dhak….dhak


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“I Love You. Period.”


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but someday…while you’re changing nappies for our grandchildren, I’ll simply kiss you and tell you how mawkish you had turned me into in one night...”


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“Sweetheart…” he quirked a doubtful brow. “How much do you know about what happens between a man and a woman?”


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“I very much planned to sleep with my best half tonight.”


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ahh.. what a rollercoaster ride diii... after such a looonnggg time.. truly the wait was worth it worth it worth it..!!!!!


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❤️


>> Haha... I'll let you enjoy the ride then... till we talk next time... 🤗

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