FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 2020 Chapter 42 Part1 - Page 4

"Marry me"

"I love you. Period."

Dhak dhak , dhak dhak ... and some more Dhak dhak !!

That is how it was. Whole piece. For me. Every word, every emotion, every feeling ... yes giving goosegumps to us has always been your thing, but real dhak dhak, this is my first... I have been brought to absolute still only once before, when they had first kissed.

But this was..... DREAMY? I don't know how to put it in words man !!

Really... just what was that. My throat right now is as parched as Jo's. I am so drained.. over-whelmed... drenched... happiest... crying... basically a chaotic glorious mess right now, of another level altogether.

You have killed me with this Jalal. This Jalal is unreal, never felt this rush.. this naturally born... dhak dhak dhak ever... Jalaaaaal.

What have you done Jahnu di !!!

I dont know how to whistle.. but "Marry me" had me whistling like a shameless idiot while also giving me cardiac arrest sort of thing.....Dhak dhak + blushing + dying to heaven + seeing stars + also whistling ... is all this even possible in one single moment???

Just know that you've bowled me over .. once again Di.. and I love you !!

Jo's inner-most feelings, fears, insecurities... Only you could've done justice to the gravity of them. Various emotions coming across raw and hard-hitting.

Never read something so relatable.. so true.. so complicated yet woven in simple effective words... hard hitting impact truly.

It shows through your writing.. always has that you're purely in that emotion when you are penning it.... to justify the gravity of those feelings/emotions.. of both of them. To frame and handle that conversation, which has only solified the foundation of their relationship like never before.

Kudos Jahnu di! Ek hi dil hai , kitni baar jeetogi aap !!

I can go on and on, and still fall short of words. But please know, I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT.

I just want Jalal yaar. You're raising the standards like anything!!! Can he get any more charming and understanding... and just the best!!! How am I ever going to marry anyone now, my first condition may be to ask potential candidates to read PBD and report to me what they learnt !!

Gosh, I am gonna go back and drown in the bliss again... for so many times.

I will post a detailed comment on my favourite bits , once I have had nice fill of the heaven you penned.

This was a adrenaline-rush-driven write-up immediately after reading the chap.. coming out fully jumbled up.. but just had to let you know, YOU ARE A MAGICIAN.. and LOVE YOU. Period. ❤️

Love,

Your Nanu

Can't believe the update's here 🥳 Thank you so much di❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

OMG! OMG! OMG! A broad grin has been plastered on my face ever since I started reading the update and dear husband has already asked me about it twice :)The whole 'am-I-actually-reading-a-PBD-update' thing feels quite surrealOf course can't help smiling and blushing recalling the contents ;)Right now I am just savouring the update. Taking it in, not missing even a single syllableWill give my comments in detail once the euphoria ebbs :)But I love it love it love it :) I actually marvel at how much I can fall in love, time and again, with different versions of Jalal - the original in JA, NJAPA Jalal, Khan Sahib of HBAS and PBD Jalal :) He is an absolute dream come true :) ardent lover, sensitive, understanding, and steady in his feelings like a rock, able to surpass any catastrophe like a safe anchor A big thanks to you Jahnavi for resuming this story. Really a huge thanksMore later...

❤️❤️❤️

🥳

This is Unbelievable...... Thank you so much Jahnu ... for this update........

.... I’ve dived headlong..... will be sometime before I come out...... but I’m sooooo Happy....

When they both ( didn’t) speak out their minds ...i zoomed out into space.... even though it was in italics... I DID imagine that they both spoke out their minds...... ......but still ..It was Dreamy.....

I simply LOVE your ...NO NONSENSE CONFESSIONS......

let me swim a little more and then get back to you with my thoughts

Sorry for late reply ...... couldn’t post any from morning .... only now got through

Originally posted by: selvi1275

When they both ( didn’t) speak out their minds ...i zoomed out into space.... even though it was in italics... I DID imagine that they both spoke out their minds...... ......but still ..It was Dreamy.....

>> Me too !!!☺️

I simply LOVE your ...NO NONSENSE CONFESSIONS......

>> Me too !! That's what they are... absolutely NO non-sense.

Nancy,

How am I ever going to marry anyone now, my first condition may be to ask potential candidates to read PBD and report to me what they learnt !!

Is there an option for married women like us to replace the existing ones with “PBD Jalal’s “.?

Jahnu is giving us hard reminders of our “dull” lives. I am sure some married souls will agree with me.😭

Rose.

Originally posted by: Heeralicious

"Marry me"

"I love you. Period."

Dhak dhak , dhak dhak ... and some more Dhak dhak !!

That is how it was. Whole piece. For me. Every word, every emotion, every feeling ... yes giving goosegumps to us has always been your thing, but real dhak dhak, this is my first... I have been brought to absolute still only once before, when they had first kissed.

But this was..... DREAMY? I don't know how to put it in words man !!

Really... just what was that. My throat right now is as parched as Jo's. I am so drained.. over-whelmed... drenched... happiest... crying... basically a chaotic glorious mess right now, of another level altogether.

You have killed me with this Jalal. This Jalal is unreal, never felt this rush.. this naturally born... dhak dhak dhak ever... Jalaaaaal.

What have you done Jahnu di !!!

I dont know how to whistle.. but "Marry me" had me whistling like a shameless idiot while also giving me cardiac arrest sort of thing.....Dhak dhak + blushing + dying to heaven + seeing stars + also whistling ... is all this even possible in one single moment???

Just know that you've bowled me over .. once again Di.. and I love you !!

Jo's inner-most feelings, fears, insecurities... Only you could've done justice to the gravity of them. Various emotions coming across raw and hard-hitting.

Never read something so relatable.. so true.. so complicated yet woven in simple effective words... hard hitting impact truly.

It shows through your writing.. always has that you're purely in that emotion when you are penning it.... to justify the gravity of those feelings/emotions.. of both of them. To frame and handle that conversation, which has only solified the foundation of their relationship like never before.

Kudos Jahnu di! Ek hi dil hai , kitni baar jeetogi aap !!

I can go on and on, and still fall short of words. But please know, I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT.

I just want Jalal yaar. You're raising the standards like anything!!! Can he get any more charming and understanding... and just the best!!! How am I ever going to marry anyone now, my first condition may be to ask potential candidates to read PBD and report to me what they learnt !!

Gosh, I am gonna go back and drown in the bliss again... for so many times.

I will post a detailed comment on my favourite bits , once I have had nice fill of the heaven you penned.

This was a adrenaline-rush-driven write-up immediately after reading the chap.. coming out fully jumbled up.. but just had to let you know, YOU ARE A MAGICIAN.. and LOVE YOU. Period. ❤️

Love,

Your Nanu

Originally posted by: Jeryl

Nancy,

How am I ever going to marry anyone now, my first condition may be to ask potential candidates to read PBD and report to me what they learnt !!

Is there an option for married women like us to replace the existing ones with “PBD Jalal’s “.?

Jahnu is giving us hard reminders of our “dull” lives. I am sure some married souls will agree with me.😭

Rose.

PBD Jalal doesn't exist in this world 😭 So I am the one at loss here... you guys atleast have make-do Jalals. 😆

You still have the opportunity to conduct a “ Swayamvar” to choose your Jalal.😉

Originally posted by: Heeralicious

PBD Jalal doesn't exist in this world 😭 So I am the one at loss here... you guys atleast have make-do Jalals. 😆

No words can express my happiness.... Loved it ..... Very happy to see you back ..... And your work is something which I adore the most... Soo good🤩

It was Dreamy...

Ignited kind of enthusiasm from start to end...

Di you have way with words and emotions..

The way you describe the turmoil & dread she went through,

their thoughts and fear for others safety was Incomparable...👏

And conversation that took place from

and his replies shows how much he loves her & sure of their relation

No rose holds candle to mine!

People appreciate its courage to bloom!

…because feelings surpassed liking!

❤️❤️

When she bared her soul to him about her

Fears, insecurities, apprehensions, quest...

came his Long Answer...

Marry me

“I’ll spend the next fifty years answering your questions.”

And there he proposed her in simplest way without any animation or second thought

I love you. Period!

And soon the whole intense and pessimistic conversation end up with his mischief 😆