NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 53 - CHAP 58 (Pt 1&2)- 4th - Page 41

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

C58

I honestly don't know how to tell what I'm feeling after reading C58. If I know then I'll be a writer like you. 😆 It's like a magical moment. I only know to feel and admire it. ❤️

Be it from the moment. .. Khalil's entry who brought the darkness along with him and his complaint about unfairness...😡 He always had plenty of evil tricks up his sleeve.. And the way he made Ustaad to accept the challenge and when Ustaad accepted it.. 😲😲 OMG what tensed moments ... And Ustaad you surely know to take our breath away and at the moment I couldn't help recall his night practices in the woods.. Uffo.. the duel...😲😲 even Mughal heir couldn't control his emotions but I'm a mere Baisa...😕 And the way you brought the flashback... hats off to you Chellam..👏 👏

And when Ibrahim Mirza found out that he can see now and at the same moment I also knew that knalil end is no far. But the way he waited for khalil to run for his life for sometime made me happier than the last stance to finish him off. 👍🏼

And Azeez's stance and Chota's eagerness to learn..😆

And then ammijaan's secret plan and Shehensha's entry... What a timing...👏 And Shehzaade inner turmoil... What a greatest protective wall he just lost just to satisfy his ego.. I really pity him.😡

So ammijaan was there during Heera's humiliation too...😲 I really have to go back and read again... And the way Heera decoded everything even at the happiest moment.😲 She didn't ignore anyone. And the thought of gifting the maid who brought the good news.. she's such a darling...😳

Then comes the magical reunion.. Uffo Chellam it's truly an utopia.❤️ And the way both avoiding the details to not to spoil the moment.. And the way Heera checking his wounds and the way he found her crown of pride..😭 Uffo.. these two.. let me admire them forever. And when Heera said let me take you home...*** Chellam wiping away her happy tears ***😭 😭

Chellam, what to say about your writing.. It's beyond my words than saying 'I love You, Chellam' ❤️

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by selvi1275

In the cool mid-autumn air, the falling leaves flutter down,

filling up every spot like a garish quilt spread on the ground.

Perhaps if I were a poet, I'd know how to describe them better.

But for now, I shall just relish this spread, this feast of colours.

A feast, enough to feed the soul as well as the eyes.

Before winter sets in, to take it all away as and when she decides!

(Inspired)

Originally posted by: lashy

In the cool mid-autumn air, the falling leaves flutter down,

filling up every spot like a garish quilt spread on the ground.

Perhaps if I were a poet, I'd know how to describe them better.

But for now, I shall just relish this spread, this feast of colours.

A feast, enough to feed the soul as well as the eyes.

Before winter sets in, to take it all away as and when she decides!

(Inspired)

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

So finally kal di posted her review... I was waiting... it's so unlike you to wait then post your views later ...that's why ! 😳

I so used to read your suda suda review ...immediately after the chapter.😊

Sweet and simple... you said it all in short .

Love reading it! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: lashy

Oh warrior I love,

now that you've finally come home to me

my mind wanders places,

as I spend in your arms, a precious few moments carefree

Tis true, I cannot ask of you to never leave,

to never again ride away.

That I wish you never had another war to wage,

I cannot say.

But tis also true,

that I can never stop my heart from feeling so

Nor can I hold back my eyes,

from letting those emotions show.

Oh warrior I love,

now that you've finally come home to me

I wish we could be forever together,

From all of life's battles finally free.

[☺️]

>>>😉😆🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

In the cool mid-autumn air, the falling leaves flutter down,

filling up every spot like a garish quilt spread on the ground.

Perhaps if I were a poet, I'd know how to describe them better.

But for now, I shall just relish this spread, this feast of colours.

A feast, enough to feed the soul as well as the eyes.

Before winter sets in, to take it all away as and when she decides!

(Inspired)

Originally posted by: lashy

Yes!😉 she must have wanted to see her DIL na?

>>> Even Shehzaade was curious to see her... No wonder ammijaan is no exception...😆

Darling, you say? Then wait for her in 59!

Originally posted by: lashy

Oh warrior I love,

now that you've finally come home to me

my mind wanders places,

as I spend in your arms, a precious few moments carefree

Tis true, I cannot ask of you to never leave,

to never again ride away.

That I wish you never had another war to wage,

I cannot say.

But tis also true,

that I can never stop my heart from feeling so

Nor can I hold back my eyes,

from letting those emotions show.

Oh warrior I love,

now that you've finally come home to me

I wish we could be forever together,

From all of life's battles finally free.

[☺️]

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

That day I couldn't write it as I was getting calls. Even during reading the chapter Then last two days bit busy. Today only I had time. 😆