NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 53 - CHAP 58 (Pt 1&2)- 4th

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

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Posted: 6 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: lashy
>>> mixing both teas, eh? following Rosejaan's principle 😆 no
wonder you feel better!

>>>☺️ Everything tastes better when it is dual-flavoured.🤣

Aparna, a fall and a bruise to boot! But you are fine now.🤗

Lashy Sahiba, seeing Appu's barrage of questions, I think I was too soft on you- having you field only one question! 😊Waiting to read your responses, Sahiba.😃

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 6 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

I have no issues at all with Kuki being IM's apprentice since I am certain that one of the many rakhi threads on the Sahib's hand is from Kuki.😉

Did you Kuki? I doubt it. She was busy watching Azeez and Rashmi😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
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Oh no! I took the due credit away from the poetess. 😭 But it was written edited at the bottom and I assumed it was inspired. How did I not decipher the blushing face clue?😕
The edited was written at the bottom of the Nature poem... me thinks you got confused because the nature poems are generally my original and the love poems edited/inspired... and today, it was the other way around😆

It is your original composition, Sahiba?
OMG! The level of appreciation has gone up multiple notches higher!👏 👏👏

Hayooo ...

Totally out of this world, Sahiba!🥳

Idhu three much!😆

The certifications you were pondering- not along the lines of literature? If you can churn out such exquisite pearls, you should consider that.👍🏼

No... not literature... baba re omggg! Done enough of that right until college😲

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Lashy Sahiba, seeing Appu's barrage of questions, I think I was too soft on you- having you field only one question! 😊Waiting to read your responses, Sahiba.😃

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

😳 😉 😆
Awww! Look at that ecstatic smile!
But I think I might be able to get away with doing the aarthi for both since Akheera and the Ustaad's men would be standing together at the entrance when it is done- so hitting many targets with one aarthi!😉

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Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Ok it's inspired...but if you have imagination and talent then only you can write poems na .

It's beautiful! 👏
Feast of colour ! ⭐️

A bit of uplifting for a girl who always uplifts me!

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Tough

Originally posted by: lashy

Here comes Cooks
with her anagram-answer books!
And if SHE calls it tough
then how am I ever gonna solve this stuff! 😲

I agree it is tough for us but child's play for our anagram Queen Kuki!👏

Spectacularly decoded, Kuki. 👏

I will have a go at the last one.😳

Chellam, this review of yours was admirably written, Sahiba.👏

You have picked all the highlights of the update and given them added value with your emotional interpretations.👍🏼

Bindup, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Selvi🤗

Edited by roseraja1915 - 6 years ago

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RDOLLY7PANNU

@RDOLLY7PANNU

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Aparna, a fall and a bruise to boot! But you are fine now.🤗
Lashy Sahiba, seeing Appu's barrage of questions, I think I was too soft on you- having you field only one question! 😊Waiting to read your responses, Sahiba.😃

Lashy C58 is another of your marvels------- Honestly speaking I was apprehensive about the way you were going to narrate the duel between AMK and Khalil.The first one was on the classic lines swords and daggers----thrilling to the hilt but the second one,well after C57 one thing was sure that AMK would be the survivor---but how? Had guessed, that the weapons would be the battle axes? But how enthralling would it be was the question----My,my how you narrated it!! AMK blindfolded, duel fought on the wet sand quagmire !! WOW,WOW!! The masterstroke---entry of the ailing Shenshah who was put wise about the gory events through a letter written by Heera and O! rewritten by, who else, but Ammijaan!! What a storyteller you are!! I bow down to you for this skill. The narration was engaging,so gripping,so realistic,so plausible and so very,very interesting.It reminded me of the kathas about Sri Parshuram ji we used to hear in our chilhood. And like as if you can see all the hbasians seated in front of you, holding their chins in the palms saying,""Then what happened Lashy"". A wonderful treat indeed.!! The flashback was another beautiful dreamy interlude.Thanks Rupinder

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Sabdabhala

@Sabdabhala

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#428

HOLA PEOPLE

HAPPY TO REPORT THAT UTSAV'S MATHS EXAM HAS BEEN REASONABLY GOOD. ALSO THAT MOM H HER SIBLINGS HAVE REACHED VARANASI SAFELY AND BEGUN THEIR SIGHTSEEING THERE 😉

DID A LARGE PART OF THE HW

LASHY THE DOVES ARE FABULOUS ⭐️ AND SO WONDERFULLY THEY FIT INTO THE SCENES 👏

APPU YOUR EFFORT FOR NATURAL COLOURS FOR AADHYA IS PRAISEWORTHY 👏 WOW!!!

REKHA ENJOY YOUR TEMPLE TRIP DEAR AND HAVE A GREAT DARSHAN ⭐️ THE ICICLES PICS WERE SO BEAUTIFUL

BINDUP AND KAWSI SUPER REVIEWS 👏 👏

SELVI LOVELY PICS 👏 AND LASHY AWESOME LINES 👏 AND THE WARRIOR POEM TOO IS FANTASTIC 👏

KUKU TUMMY ACHE 😭 TAKE CARE. MIXING ALBAR AND AZEEZ TEA 😆 😆 WAH WAH!! BHABHIJAAN SEEMS TO HAVE INSPIRED MANY A IMPRESSIONABLE BAISAS HERE 😆 😉 WHILE SHE HERSELF SITS PRETTY, COMPLETELY ASSURED ABOUT THE MANY RAKHIS ON BHAIJAAN'S WRIST 😆

RUPINDER NICE TO SEE YOU DEAR AND LOVELY REVIEW 👏

NAMS THOSE ANAGRAMS CERTAINLY LOOKED TOUGH 😲 KUDOS KUKU

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
C58

I honestly don't know how to tell what I'm feeling after reading C58. If I know then I'll be a writer like you. 😆 It's like a magical moment. I only know to feel and admire it. ❤️

Be it from the moment. .. Khalil's entry who brought the darkness along with him and his complaint about unfairness...😡 He always had plenty of evil tricks up his sleeve.. And the way he made Ustaad to accept the challenge and when Ustaad accepted it.. 😲😲 OMG what tensed moments ... And Ustaad you surely know to take our breath away and at the moment I couldn't help recall his night practices in the woods.. Uffo.. the duel...😲😲 even Mughal heir couldn't control his emotions but I'm a mere Baisa...😕 And the way you brought the flashback... hats off to you Chellam..👏 👏

And when Ibrahim Mirza found out that he can see now and at the same moment I also knew that knalil end is no far. But the way he waited for khalil to run for his life for sometime made me happier than the last stance to finish him off. 👍🏼

And Azeez's stance and Chota's eagerness to learn..😆

And then ammijaan's secret plan and Shehensha's entry... What a timing...👏 And Shehzaade inner turmoil... What a greatest protective wall he just lost just to satisfy his ego.. I really pity him.😡

So ammijaan was there during Heera's humiliation too...😲 I really have to go back and read again... And the way Heera decoded everything even at the happiest moment.😲 She didn't ignore anyone. And the thought of gifting the maid who brought the good news.. she's such a darling...😳

Then comes the magical reunion.. Uffo Chellam it's truly an utopia.❤️ And the way both avoiding the details to not to spoil the moment..
>>>❤️
And the way Heera checking his wounds and the way he found her crown of pride..😭 Uffo.. these two.. let me admire them forever. And when Heera said let me take you home...*** Chellam wiping away her happy tears ***😭 😭

Chellam, what to say about your writing.. It's beyond my words than saying 'I love You, Chellam' ❤️