NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 53 - CHAP 58 (Pt 1&2)- 4th - Page 40

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

C58

I honestly don't know how to tell what I'm feeling after reading C58.

And I can't tell you how I feel after reading your review

If I know then I'll be a writer like you. 😆 It's like a magical moment. I only know to feel and admire it. ❤️

Awww how sweet, Chellam ❤️

Be it from the moment. .. Khalil's entry who brought the darkness along with him and his complaint about unfairness...😡

Noticed that? Yes... he's the kind of evil who brings darkness with him even on a beautiful spring morning 😡

He always had plenty of evil tricks up his sleeve..

Always🤢

And the way he made Ustaad to accept the challenge and when Ustaad accepted it.. 😲😲

Yes da... what could be done.. he's holding his wife's safety ransom... and everyone knows how unpredictable the Shehzaade is what if he burst out in anger and did something to Heera? Everything finishes in one second then😭

OMG what tensed moments ... And Ustaad you surely know to take our breath away and at the moment I couldn't help recall his night practices in the woods.. Uffo..

You saying you recalled his night practises?🤔 yes, his eyes would be more accustomed to darkness (more rod cells - it takes time though and army/snipers practise this today too)

😲 and true, he had to think on his feet.. eventually, he was able to see enough to save himself

the duel...😲😲 even Mughal heir couldn't control his emotions but I'm a mere Baisa...😕 And the way you brought the flashback... hats off to you Chellam..👏 👏

Awww😳 and Thankyou for mentioning the flashbacks. It was like a very important/pivotal point for the story - brought an actual change in Shehzaade's conscience (growing momentarily stronger) I am delighted to know it left a mark...

And when Ibrahim Mirza found out that he can see now and at the same moment I also knew that knalil end is no far.

But the way he waited for khalil to run for his life for sometime made me happier than the last stance to finish him off. 👍🏼

Really? 🥳Ustaad means thalaivar (literally) ille? Summa vaa..

And Azeez's stance and Chota's eagerness to learn..😆

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And then ammijaan's secret plan and Shehensha's entry... What a timing...👏

Thank you.. again it was difficult to introduce such an important personality (both , ammijaan and Shehenshah) in such short parts and leave impact without feeling rushed (I was nervous) but I think it worked out!

And Shehzaade inner turmoil... What a greatest protective wall he just lost just to satisfy his ego.. I really pity him.😡

I swear🤢

So ammijaan was there during Heera's humiliation too...😲 I really have to go back and read again...

Yes!😉 she must have wanted to see her DIL na?

And the way Heera decoded everything even at the happiest moment.😲 She didn't ignore anyone. And the thought of gifting the maid who brought the good news.. she's such a darling...😳

Darling, you say? Then wait for her in 59!

Then comes the magical reunion.. Uffo Chellam it's truly an utopia.❤️

☺️

And the way both avoiding the details to not to spoil the moment..

I was re- editing that part till 3:30 am😕 but you said it in one line👏

And the way Heera checking his wounds and the way he found her crown of pride..😭 Uffo.. these two.. let me admire them forever. And when Heera said let me take you home...*** Chellam wiping away her happy tears ***😭 😭

Awww I can wipe them for you 😭

Chellam, what to say about your writing.. It's beyond my words than saying 'I love You, Chellam' ❤️

I love you too darling and wish all happiness for you 🤗 in future

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Good morning, everyone! 🤗