Short story*~Tread quietly upon the tracks~* Complete - Page 6

Kash ki main palat jaon,

Bachpan ki wadi main.

Koi aayat... koi jaadu... koi taweez laa do,

Yaad uski bahut aati hai!

'If only I could turn back time

To days of childhood's peace and serenity.

Someone, please get me a Holy verse, a spell, or a talisman (Taveez)

Forever lingers in my mind, her memories'

Now can you see the connection, Chellam? 😳

ETA: my Urdu/Hindi scholar-baisas, please correct me if I am wrong... 😊

Originally posted by: lashy

Bindup I want my dancing guy...I'm outside 😭

Originally posted by: lashy

Kash ki main palat jaon,

Bachpan ki wadi main.

Koi aayat... koi jaadu... koi taweez laa do,

Yaad uski bahut aati hai!

'If only I could turn back time

To days of childhood's peace and serenity.

Someone, please get me a Holy verse, a spell, or a talisman (Taveez)

Forever lingers in my mind, her memories'

Now can you see the connection, Chellam? 😳

ETA: my Urdu/Hindi scholar-baisas, please correct me if I am wrong... 😊

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Omg...awesome starting!

Beautiful and simple concept ...most important things is everything happens in My lashy di place...beautiful London!😳

6.2 handsome Mr midnight blue met divine and pretty girl!

Both helped each other without even asking...both saved each other in their own way .

Aww so much of curiosity to know each other!

Both are figuring out each other...scrutinising very closely!

Aww Miss pretty noticed his hidden taveez too .😆

And he notice her partial blindness or...🤔

So basically divine girl is going through lot ...it's been only 6 month she lost her only family and best friend...her di...look like both were pretty closed to each other...like a any typical Indian girl she said yes to marriage and met Mr Raichand...

Everything is going perfect but still there is something was missing in all this...she was surrounded by many but she still missing her di ...😭

But irony is that when Mr midnight blue is around her...she forget everything but only curiosity to know him more is there!

I love the way both reading and observing each other little little movements too...and both are behaving unlike their true nature!

Let's see what this small meeting store for both ...😳

Beautiful first part...few lines are so different yet beautiful I wanna read again and again !

Love it ! ❤️

Waiting eagerly for next part ...

Thank You lashy di for beautiful surprise ! 🤗

Special thank you to Lavanya di too ! 🤗

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Yes I can see now. So I'm impatient when I claimed 'It's divinely feeling' 😉 😆 🤗

Our divine girl has a lot on her plate but she is willing to go with the flow of what fate has in store for her as dictated by the Indian way.😊

But London has its own plan for her.👍🏼

Leaving Abheer who is a bit too fond of his beers, oops, Martinis, to his friends, our girl is at the train station for a safe and quick trip back to the hotel and possibly a lifelong journey with her true soul mate.😳

A good turn deserves another - Mr MB( Midnight Blue) might have come off as a bit brusque but he has a heart after all, when he realizes her handicap/ shortcoming.

Her help in loaning her cellphone was reciprocated when he guided her as she boarded the train and ensured she had a good hold on the metal pole.

And thus began the one-minute affair of their gazes!

Lashy Sahiba, only you can write such an intense scene to make us lose ourselves as did the pair.

Oh, why did the taveez and the henna have to smash our dreamy bubble?😭

Don't count on being let off after three stations, Miss Divine Girl and Mr MB ,not if our author has anything to say about it.😉

Lashy Sahiba, Part 1 was just Lashy-licious. When it comes to romance, no one serves it better than you, dear author!👏 👏 👏

So very curious to know what is in Part 2.

Lashy Sahiba, how did you stumble upon the London Tube as the platform for their romance?😉

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Lashy Sahiba, how did you stumble upon the London Tube as the platform for their romance?😉