Short story*~Tread quietly upon the tracks~* Complete - Page 5

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Modern take of HBAS, I am loving it.😳

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

It's quite late for you, di !

Please go to sleep!

Good night ! 🤗

Followed the orders as soon as I rec'd em, Ma'am!

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Oh yes my 6' 2 handsome I'm also impatience like you to pass the comment 'Pretty' on the prologue..

You've gotta tread quietly, Chellam!😉 Impatient aanaa velai nadakaadhu!😆

It's something else altogether.. Uff Chellam what divinely feeling it is.. ❤️ Sigh!!

Really?😲

I never ever thought I would miss London tubes this much.. 😒 🤓 😆

Come here... I'll take you on them! 😆

I don't know why but I love this line 'What opinion must he have of her? Well, he'd hardly got past the 'Divine' yet.' ❤️ read it several times.. Still it's so intoxicating.. ❤️ 🤪

Thank you so so so much! ☺️

When the automated alarm warned them 'Mind the gap', I was like 'Don't mind the gap' and let the eyes talk.. 😉 😆

😆... so cute 🤣

Uff Chellam, can't wait to know what is waiting for our alluring couple.. 🤪 Please update the next part soon ..

Will do will do... 🤗 mwah!

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Nice Start...Lashy...

And the story happens in your place... 😉😆...And they've come from India, I think, to star in your place...😳👏...

>>>😎 Yes!

Rose...Hop off the tracks...The train has arrived...

>>>😆

The Divine Girl ...uninterested in her own Engagement and Fianc ...

Wonder why?😉

is attracted to the voice of Our Hero...Good😳...

>>> How can one not?😉

And not just to his voice...but his physical attributes too...and to his Taveez like NJAPA Jodha...☺️

>>>☺️

Aiyooo ...should they come of their Dream land...Habe left us high and dry...Lashy...Waiting...

Will update soon, da!🤗

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

SO OUR DIVINE DAMSEL, A BIT IN DISTRESS 😉

Well from life, I guess...🤔

IS UNHAPPY WITH HER RAICHAND FIANC 😕

Why the confused face, da? She's have those 'little' voices in her head asking her if this'll work out... whether they're made for each other or not... she's too grief-stricken to be happy about anything... when she meets Mr. Midnight-Blue and she hasn't thought of di much!😉

AND THIS 6'2 WHISPERING STRANGER IS GIVING HER TE WARM AND FUZZIES 😆

She's gracefully returned the feeling too!😉

UNDER THE TIE AND SHIRT TOO (I AM ASSUMING) SHE HAS SPOTTED HIS TAVEEZ 😳

Of course!

LOVE AND FIRST SIGHT 😉

Ohhh love? That's quite a leap, no?

WHAT A WONDERFUL PART 1 LASHY...👏👏 WAITING FOR YOU TO CONTINUE

THE NEXT PART WILL BE THE CONCLUSION I GUESS 😃

Thanks da... sorta... yes! 😳

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: Kalgi22