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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: lashy



Oh yes... I wanted to use shades of grey because it's night, because they both don't know each other (dark/mysterious), they're not meant to be attracted to one another (sorta forbidden - she's engaged, he knows she's engaged) and plenty more reasons...

>>> Ofcourse...that's why I said na...perfect for the concept!
Thoughtfull one ! 👍🏼

I so so so wish for your sake that you get someone like this, Bindup...

>>> That's really sweet of you...you know na !
Thank you so so so so so much ! 🤗
Love you loads! ❤️


I might not think it is common, but I do believe it is there... especially after reading a lot of quora and other online forums where people have spoke about their love at first sight connections! And the instant spark...


>>> Ohok ! 😳
Ofcourse your believes show in your stories...most important one is Happy ending...no matter how much they have to fight and go through...they will win in the end !

Edited by binduprasad41 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#72
LIKE LASHY I TOO HOPE YOU GET SOMEONE LIKE THIS IN YOUR LIFE BINDUP


HAVING SAID THAT I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO ADD THAT IT IS NOT NECESSARY EVERYTHING WILL START WITH A SPARK AND REMAIN THAT WAY EVER AFTER. THE SPARK CAN APPEAR AT ANY TIME.

IN STORIES THE WRITER REVEALS THIS SPARK TO THE READERS AND IN OUR LIVES WE NEED TO LOOK FOR IT OURSELVES

AND THE IMPORTANT THING IS TO CONSTANTLY AND ACTIVELY LOOK FOR GOOD QUALITIES IN YOUR PARTNER. AND THIS, ALONG WITH OPEN AND CLEAR LINES OF COMMUNICATION SHOULD BE A CONTINUOUS PROCESS

A RELATIONSHIP OR A MARRIAGE IS A VERY LONG DURATION THING AND IT IS A WORK IN PROGRESS AT ALL TIMES

ONE HAS TO WORK AT IT EVERY DAY 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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The Edit...Lashy...The Girl is not the regular one you use for Heera, right?... I think she looks like Pari...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: selvi1275

The Edit...Lashy...The Girl is not the regular one you use for Heera, right?... I think she looks like Pari...


Hain? 😲It is very much Heera

Having said that Heera is a combination of Paridhi and Aishwarya Rai!

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

LIKE LASHY I TOO HOPE YOU GET SOMEONE LIKE THIS IN YOUR LIFE BINDUP


HAVING SAID THAT I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO ADD THAT IT IS NOT NECESSARY EVERYTHING WILL START WITH A SPARK AND REMAIN THAT WAY EVER AFTER. THE SPARK CAN APPEAR AT ANY TIME.

IN STORIES THE WRITER REVEALS THIS SPARK TO THE READERS AND IN OUR LIVES WE NEED TO LOOK FOR IT OURSELVES


I agree!

AND THE IMPORTANT THING IS TO CONSTANTLY AND ACTIVELY LOOK FOR GOOD QUALITIES IN YOUR PARTNER. AND THIS, ALONG WITH OPEN AND CLEAR LINES OF COMMUNICATION SHOULD BE A CONTINUOUS PROCESS

Coming from the expert herself...😉
I'd add one more thing... the current age and social media presents us with so many opportunities where we end up comparing one's spouse with another.
Unless the (negative) quality is an absolute deal-breaker, it's better not to do so... constantly comparing one's better-half with someone else will lead to disappointment... because we end up highlighting on the negatives while forgetting that there'll be qualities in our spouses that might not be there in the other...

A RELATIONSHIP OR A MARRIAGE IS A VERY LONG DURATION THING AND IT IS A WORK IN PROGRESS AT ALL TIMES
ONE HAS TO WORK AT IT EVERY DAY 😉

Agree! ❤️ After all, romance is about finding beauty in what surrounds you...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

LIKE LASHY I TOO HOPE YOU GET SOMEONE LIKE THIS IN YOUR LIFE BINDUP

>>> Aww...I know this, di ! 🤗

I know you and lashy di really mean it so much !
Thank you so much for always wishing for me ! 😳
Something I feel gratefully to know this...atleast this much I achieved here ! 😊


HAVING SAID THAT I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO ADD THAT IT IS NOT NECESSARY EVERYTHING WILL START WITH A SPARK AND REMAIN THAT WAY EVER AFTER. THE SPARK CAN APPEAR AT ANY TIME.

IN STORIES THE WRITER REVEALS THIS SPARK TO THE READERS AND IN OUR LIVES WE NEED TO LOOK FOR IT OURSELVES

AND THE IMPORTANT THING IS TO CONSTANTLY AND ACTIVELY LOOK FOR GOOD QUALITIES IN YOUR PARTNER. AND THIS, ALONG WITH OPEN AND CLEAR LINES OF COMMUNICATION SHOULD BE A CONTINUOUS PROCESS

A RELATIONSHIP OR A MARRIAGE IS A VERY LONG DURATION THING AND IT IS A WORK IN PROGRESS AT ALL TIMES

ONE HAS TO WORK AT IT EVERY DAY 😉


Coming from someone who has great experience in this...great to know! 👏

Ofcourse little bit of compromise, adjustment and understanding!😳

Nothing much to add on this...

It's really great to know...both lashy di and Lavanya di views... like my two big sister's!
One has pure arrange marriage and other one has pure and totally opposite... love marriage...that too saying literally after spending blissfull of 20 years of marriage!

Gosh...what a platform is this...where we can read real life of experience and teaches us lot !
Love or arrange...we have to work on it ! 👍🏼
Thank You both of you ! 🤗



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lashy this is so beautiful!! After seeing the edit I can say this is Heera and AMK in the modern era! 6'2, black eyes, intense voice, Heera divine, amber eyes, long luscious hair...
It's deja Vu, just like AMK and Heera's first encounter at the canal!! Instant attraction, let's see what happens in the 2nd shot!!

Loved this surprise in between HBAS updates. Edit is superb as well 🤗

I guess it's Lavanya's words that inspired you to write this.

Thank you Lavanya dear!! 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: lashy


Hain? 😲It is very much Heera

Having said that Heera is a combination of Paridhi and Aishwarya Rai!

Maybe the shadows have given a lot more dimension to Her Face...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Maybe the shadows have given a lot more dimension to Her Face...


Jewellery makes a massive difference too... when you always see someone with jewellery, bindi etc they look very different without it all! 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey Rekha... how's your FIL doing? How's everyone at home?🤗

Originally posted by: Testmytest

Lashy this is so beautiful!! After seeing the edit I can say this is Heera and AMK in the modern era!

Thank you so so so much🤗... glad it took your fancy!

6'2, black eyes, intense voice, Heera divine, amber eyes, long luscious hair...

>>>

It's deja Vu, just like AMK and Heera's first encounter at the canal!!
Instant attraction,

>>> Is it now? 😉

let's see what happens in the 2nd shot!!

Loved this surprise in between HBAS updates.

Thank you so so so much... mwah!

Edit is superb as well 🤗

Thank you da! 🤗

I guess it's Lavanya's words that inspired you to write this.

Thank you Lavanya dear!! 👏

>>> Lavanya... 😎

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