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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



Chellam... & Selvi (your conversation/fight over the binoculars was hilarious... reminds me of Bindiya-Dhani) 😆 But, Chellam I'm still confused about what notty thoughts you could possibly have that I poured water over! 😲

>>> What kind of naughty thoughts??? 😲 Me confused!! 😲

Can someone give me links for TIP episodes 7&8 😳



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Looking forward to who is has disturbed Heera Chellam di's flower shower 😆
Waiting 😃


My flower shower??!! 😲 Yeah that teaser released long before.. still we're waiting!! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22


You also started to worry about lengths??!!! 😡 😆

😆

😳

Lavanya di... Have patience!! For how long 😭😭
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Teaser for Chapter 42.

Buy Prints of Lovers (2), a Oil on Canvas by Jarek Puczel from Poland. It portrays: Love, relevant to: pink, romantic, woman&man, emotions, feelings, love Lovers create a common space in love... Representing a soul has nothing to do with the topical and ordinary representation. That's why I avoid sketching every detail, minimizing my creation as much as I can. For some aspects, my work comes from the union of matter and spirit: "The Polish artist wanted to represent in a realisti...



Haikus:

1. Her radiant face
Drove the darkness of his thoughts
"Mashallah" tells all!😳

2.Two troubling updates
One is unpleasant to her
How will she take it?😲
3. What would be his choice?
Loving husband or Ustaad?
He's in dilemma..😕

4. It's Binoculars
Not Khan Sahib Bindya wants
Then why "NO!"?😕

😆😆😆


Karkuzhali..



Mashallah Haikus ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Good evening, lovely Periyamma!🤗

Good afternoon , lovely Sahibas - Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi, Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Vrinda, Shivangi, Divyavm, Anindita , Lavanya, Selvi , Avika , Muskan, Amita and 6Bs!🤗

Good morning, lovely Lashy Sahiba, Lana, Vathsy, Pallavi, Aparna!🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22


Wow wow...excellent post, Vathsy!! 👏 👏 👏


And is there any 10th rasam for your last line??!! 😉😆 Good night! 😳


Amazing Vasthy di 👏👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Page 45 (16 pages) <<<<<😊

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Good Evening, Rose!! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Image result for painting of a young manwriting

You look through the windows of my poetry
Deep into the bedroom of my heart
You watch me undress
Button by button
It slowly slips down
You adjust the focus
Of those binoculars on your screen
Reading my poetry
Seeing my naked soul
You watch
For free
At a distance
At a safe distance...
With your binoculars!

(Copied and Edited..)
KK.


I like the analogies you've used here... windows of my poetry, bedroom of my heart... such a beautiful twist on the words!

She does watch for free... at a safe distance... doesn't she? 😆

Cookie I think Patti edited the words to suit the teaser! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22


You also started to worry about lengths??!!! 😡 😆

At least now you'll understand my problems too! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vmanoh


Lashy After reading the teaser this is what came to my mind. Just within this short teaser script that you gave us, I found the Navarasam' the nine expressions listed below. How wonderfully you managed to pool them together for us & capture us within it.👏
They are;
1. Sringara Love
2. Hasya Comic
3. Karuna Compassion
4. Raudra Anger
5. Veera Valor
6. Bhayanaka Fear
7. BhiBhatsa Disgust
8. Adbhuta Wonder
9. Shanta Tranquility






Teaser for Chapter 42
9.Shanta Tranquility
The first reflection he saw was the image of the face that was capable of dispelling the darkness of his thoughts. HER radiant face.
8.Adbhuta Wonder
And on that face was the most captivating mix of expressions he'd witnessed at the terrace - the challenge in those long eyes, the coquettish smile upon those lips. Not to mention the mischief it stirred in his own psyche.
1.Sringara Love
Mashallah!' A wilful smile curved the corner of his mouth, the blood in his veins running warm and fast. Those were the images of him and her from an hour ago, embroiled in the most enticing collection of silent exchanges yet.
3.' Karuna Compassion
And now...' he observed the steady return of sobriety in his eyes.
And now, he'd be taking it all away, wouldn't he? By giving her two troubling updates.
One, that he'd decided to leave on this short assignment to chase up this lead in the Chota Faizan case. The intelligence officer in him knew it wouldn't be wise to put it off, though he wasn't certain how she would take it.
6.Bhayanaka Fear
Worse however, was the second update - the more unpleasant news of the two. That he was going to have to give the orders to have her messengers in the safe-house silenced. Forever. The Sahiba would understand. But, she would be very upset. 'Understand' since hundreds of lives were at stake, but 'upset' since it was HER bidding that they assumed they were stubbornly sticking to.
7.' BhiBhatsa Disgust
Darn!' he agitatedly ran both palms down the stubbled rim of his jawline thrice. It felt somehow immoral - almost cruel - to take away the radiance from the face that brightened his days. He hated it.
5.Veera Valor
But it was a choice he HAD to make - today, and possibly during many instances in future too!
4.' Raudra Anger
Fine... FINE' A frustrated voice in him eventually yelled back - as the loving husband went about setting aside those soft sentiments, to make way for the steely grit of the Ustaad. To strap on the blade-proof vest and get moving.
His palms dropped down to rest on his collarbone as he stretched both sides of his neck a few times.
And then dropped further down to the of collar of his tunic.
One. Two. Three. Four. He flicked open the knots that held his snug-fitting tunic in place. Next moment, he shuffled the top off. Adjusting the Taveez against his bare-chested body, he reached for the trunk sitting by his feet - to hunt for the blade-proof vest stored at one of its bottom compartments.
'Oh!' Heera lowered her eyelids at once, her breath caught in her throat quite awkwardly as she held the binoculars aside. She hadn't quite expected that.
'What happened baisa?'
'Did you spot something interesting?'
2.Hasya Comic
'Baisa...' whined Bindiya 'you've had it for so long... as promised, can I have my turn with the magic lens now?'
'NO!'

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Now I'll go catch up with 50+ posts 😲and connect tomorrow. Good Night all B&B's 😃


Vathsy this is simply superb...👏 I think it's the first time someone's dissected one of my teasers in this detail... thank you so much for it... I definitely did not plan it this way... nor did it strike me the way it did you... but glad you noticed a similarity and highlighted it with such depth.. my heartfelt thanksfor the compliments... 🤗

And even as I read it, I knew it was right up Periyamma's alley! As analogies go, three are her favourite kinds - music's Ragam Thanam Pallavi, dance bhavas and the brocade embroidery of silk artisans... 😳 isn't it, Periyamma?

@ Rasam for last line? 😆 Chellam!!!

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