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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22


You also started to worry about lengths??!!! 😡 😆

Yeah...Why?...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Selvi why are you dukhi seeing me sukhi?? 😭 You are admonishing KS of missing the chance to blast me!!?? 😔 Dukhi mann mere, yehan nahi rahena...!!! 😒 My tree trunk where are you? 😆


@ underline...read that...but the nervousness and worry on your face when you went before him...said somethingelse...Now how can we afford the slip up from our Hero...

And Madamji...remember...right after Rose's post was mine...echoing her views...

And see ...here also I'm helping you..,...though you're mistaken...Provided a reason to go to your tree trunk...😎


Edited by selvi1275 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

A tunic embroidered by heera.. I think will be something he would cherish and would be decent and loving at this juncture of the story 😳

And as of proposing ahem ahem... It's no tough job
Heera would just have to sneak in his room at night
Which he would obviously become aware of once she steps in
And then being the eye reader he is,
He would obviously get a glimpse of what she wants
But keeping in mind the last intimate scene he would probably not take a step first
And that first step is what heera needs to take...
A simple kiss or a passionate hug maybe would do the magic
☺️

☺️Lovely...👍🏼
Edited by selvi1275 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Teaser for Chapter 42


Lashy After reading the teaser this is what came to my mind. Just within this short teaser script that you gave us, I found the Navarasam' the nine expressions listed below. How wonderfully you managed to pool them together for us & capture us within it.👏
They are;
1. Sringara Love
2. Hasya Comic
3. Karuna Compassion
4. Raudra Anger
5. Veera Valor
6. Bhayanaka Fear
7. BhiBhatsa Disgust
8. Adbhuta Wonder
9. Shanta Tranquility






Teaser for Chapter 42
9.Shanta Tranquility
The first reflection he saw was the image of the face that was capable of dispelling the darkness of his thoughts. HER radiant face.
8.Adbhuta Wonder
And on that face was the most captivating mix of expressions he'd witnessed at the terrace - the challenge in those long eyes, the coquettish smile upon those lips. Not to mention the mischief it stirred in his own psyche.
1.Sringara Love
Mashallah!' A wilful smile curved the corner of his mouth, the blood in his veins running warm and fast. Those were the images of him and her from an hour ago, embroiled in the most enticing collection of silent exchanges yet.
3.' Karuna Compassion
And now...' he observed the steady return of sobriety in his eyes.
And now, he'd be taking it all away, wouldn't he? By giving her two troubling updates.
One, that he'd decided to leave on this short assignment to chase up this lead in the Chota Faizan case. The intelligence officer in him knew it wouldn't be wise to put it off, though he wasn't certain how she would take it.
6.Bhayanaka Fear
Worse however, was the second update - the more unpleasant news of the two. That he was going to have to give the orders to have her messengers in the safe-house silenced. Forever. The Sahiba would understand. But, she would be very upset. 'Understand' since hundreds of lives were at stake, but 'upset' since it was HER bidding that they assumed they were stubbornly sticking to.
7.' BhiBhatsa Disgust
Darn!' he agitatedly ran both palms down the stubbled rim of his jawline thrice. It felt somehow immoral - almost cruel - to take away the radiance from the face that brightened his days. He hated it.
5.Veera Valor
But it was a choice he HAD to make - today, and possibly during many instances in future too!
4.' Raudra Anger
Fine... FINE' A frustrated voice in him eventually yelled back - as the loving husband went about setting aside those soft sentiments, to make way for the steely grit of the Ustaad. To strap on the blade-proof vest and get moving.
His palms dropped down to rest on his collarbone as he stretched both sides of his neck a few times.
And then dropped further down to the of collar of his tunic.
One. Two. Three. Four. He flicked open the knots that held his snug-fitting tunic in place. Next moment, he shuffled the top off. Adjusting the Taveez against his bare-chested body, he reached for the trunk sitting by his feet - to hunt for the blade-proof vest stored at one of its bottom compartments.
'Oh!' Heera lowered her eyelids at once, her breath caught in her throat quite awkwardly as she held the binoculars aside. She hadn't quite expected that.
'What happened baisa?'
'Did you spot something interesting?'
2.Hasya Comic
'Baisa...' whined Bindiya 'you've had it for so long... as promised, can I have my turn with the magic lens now?'
'NO!' - covers all 9 rasas 😆😆

...

Now I'll go catch up with 50+ posts 😲and connect tomorrow. Good Night all B&B's 😃

Edited by Vmanoh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

👏

4... Because even if bindiya wants binoculars
She will definitely glance at that intruding sight which made her sahiba gasp
And obviously the possessive wife would not allow someone else to have a glimpse of her husband in that avtaar 🤣

Fantastic Haikus ...Talented Periyamma...👏

Exactly...Muskaan...Can't take risk...🤣🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22


The last one??!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 Awesome set of Haiku, Periamma!! 👏

Kal..😡...ellorum oru thadava kooda pakkala...you second time pakkanuma...😡😡
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Posted: 7 years ago

Simply wonderful! A beautiful comparison Vatsy..
👏👏👏



Originally posted by: Vmanoh


Lashy After reading the teaser this is what came to my mind. Just within this short teaser script that you gave us, I found the Navarasam' the nine expressions listed below. How wonderfully you managed to pool them together for us & capture us within it.
They are;
1. Sringara Love
2. Hasya Comic
3. Karuna Compassion
4. Raudra Anger
5. Veera Valor
6. Bhayanaka Fear
7. BhiBhatsa Disgust
8. Adbhuta Wonder
9. Shanta Tranquility






Teaser for Chapter 42
9.Shanta Tranquility
The first reflection he saw was the image of the face that was capable of dispelling the darkness of his thoughts. HER radiant face.
8.Adbhuta Wonder
And on that face was the most captivating mix of expressions he'd witnessed at the terrace - the challenge in those long eyes, the coquettish smile upon those lips. Not to mention the mischief it stirred in his own psyche.
1.Sringara Love
Mashallah!' A wilful smile curved the corner of his mouth, the blood in his veins running warm and fast. Those were the images of him and her from an hour ago, embroiled in the most enticing collection of silent exchanges yet.
3.' Karuna Compassion
And now...' he observed the steady return of sobriety in his eyes.
And now, he'd be taking it all away, wouldn't he? By giving her two troubling updates.
One, that he'd decided to leave on this short assignment to chase up this lead in the Chota Faizan case. The intelligence officer in him knew it wouldn't be wise to put it off, though he wasn't certain how she would take it.
6.Bhayanaka Fear
Worse however, was the second update - the more unpleasant news of the two. That he was going to have to give the orders to have her messengers in the safe-house silenced. Forever. The Sahiba would understand. But, she would be very upset. 'Understand' since hundreds of lives were at stake, but 'upset' since it was HER bidding that they assumed they were stubbornly sticking to.
7.' BhiBhatsa Disgust
Darn!' he agitatedly ran both palms down the stubbled rim of his jawline thrice. It felt somehow immoral - almost cruel - to take away the radiance from the face that brightened his days. He hated it.
5.Veera Valor
But it was a choice he HAD to make - today, and possibly during many instances in future too!
4.' Raudra Anger
Fine... FINE' A frustrated voice in him eventually yelled back - as the loving husband went about setting aside those soft sentiments, to make way for the steely grit of the Ustaad. To strap on the blade-proof vest and get moving.
His palms dropped down to rest on his collarbone as he stretched both sides of his neck a few times.
And then dropped further down to the of collar of his tunic.
One. Two. Three. Four. He flicked open the knots that held his snug-fitting tunic in place. Next moment, he shuffled the top off. Adjusting the Taveez against his bare-chested body, he reached for the trunk sitting by his feet - to hunt for the blade-proof vest stored at one of its bottom compartments.
'Oh!' Heera lowered her eyelids at once, her breath caught in her throat quite awkwardly as she held the binoculars aside. She hadn't quite expected that.
'What happened baisa?'
'Did you spot something interesting?'
2.Hasya Comic
'Baisa...' whined Bindiya 'you've had it for so long... as promised, can I have my turn with the magic lens now?'
'NO!'

...

Now I'll go catch up with 50+ posts 😲and connect tomorrow. Good Night all B&B's 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Kal..😡...ellorum oru thadava kooda pakkala...you second time pakkanuma...😡😡

Yes!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vmanoh


Lashy After reading the teaser this is what came to my mind. Just within this short teaser script that you gave us, I found the Navarasam' the nine expressions listed below. How wonderfully you managed to pool them together for us & capture us within it.👏
They are;
1. Sringara Love
2. Hasya Comic
3. Karuna Compassion
4. Raudra Anger
5. Veera Valor
6. Bhayanaka Fear
7. BhiBhatsa Disgust
8. Adbhuta Wonder
9. Shanta Tranquility






Teaser for Chapter 42
9.Shanta Tranquility
The first reflection he saw was the image of the face that was capable of dispelling the darkness of his thoughts. HER radiant face.
8.Adbhuta Wonder
And on that face was the most captivating mix of expressions he'd witnessed at the terrace - the challenge in those long eyes, the coquettish smile upon those lips. Not to mention the mischief it stirred in his own psyche.
1.Sringara Love
Mashallah!' A wilful smile curved the corner of his mouth, the blood in his veins running warm and fast. Those were the images of him and her from an hour ago, embroiled in the most enticing collection of silent exchanges yet.
3.' Karuna Compassion
And now...' he observed the steady return of sobriety in his eyes.
And now, he'd be taking it all away, wouldn't he? By giving her two troubling updates.
One, that he'd decided to leave on this short assignment to chase up this lead in the Chota Faizan case. The intelligence officer in him knew it wouldn't be wise to put it off, though he wasn't certain how she would take it.
6.Bhayanaka Fear
Worse however, was the second update - the more unpleasant news of the two. That he was going to have to give the orders to have her messengers in the safe-house silenced. Forever. The Sahiba would understand. But, she would be very upset. 'Understand' since hundreds of lives were at stake, but 'upset' since it was HER bidding that they assumed they were stubbornly sticking to.
7.' BhiBhatsa Disgust
Darn!' he agitatedly ran both palms down the stubbled rim of his jawline thrice. It felt somehow immoral - almost cruel - to take away the radiance from the face that brightened his days. He hated it.
5.Veera Valor
But it was a choice he HAD to make - today, and possibly during many instances in future too!
4.' Raudra Anger
Fine... FINE' A frustrated voice in him eventually yelled back - as the loving husband went about setting aside those soft sentiments, to make way for the steely grit of the Ustaad. To strap on the blade-proof vest and get moving.
His palms dropped down to rest on his collarbone as he stretched both sides of his neck a few times.
And then dropped further down to the of collar of his tunic.
One. Two. Three. Four. He flicked open the knots that held his snug-fitting tunic in place. Next moment, he shuffled the top off. Adjusting the Taveez against his bare-chested body, he reached for the trunk sitting by his feet - to hunt for the blade-proof vest stored at one of its bottom compartments.
'Oh!' Heera lowered her eyelids at once, her breath caught in her throat quite awkwardly as she held the binoculars aside. She hadn't quite expected that.
'What happened baisa?'
'Did you spot something interesting?'
2.Hasya Comic
'Baisa...' whined Bindiya 'you've had it for so long... as promised, can I have my turn with the magic lens now?'
'NO!'

...

Now I'll go catch up with 50+ posts 😲and connect tomorrow. Good Night all B&B's 😃


Superb Vathsy di 👏

Good night!
Sweet dream 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vmanoh


Lashy After reading the teaser this is what came to my mind. Just within this short teaser script that you gave us, I found the Navarasam' the nine expressions listed below. How wonderfully you managed to pool them together for us & capture us within it.👏
They are;
1. Sringara Love
2. Hasya Comic
3. Karuna Compassion
4. Raudra Anger
5. Veera Valor
6. Bhayanaka Fear
7. BhiBhatsa Disgust
8. Adbhuta Wonder
9. Shanta Tranquility






Teaser for Chapter 42
9.Shanta Tranquility
The first reflection he saw was the image of the face that was capable of dispelling the darkness of his thoughts. HER radiant face.
8.Adbhuta Wonder
And on that face was the most captivating mix of expressions he'd witnessed at the terrace - the challenge in those long eyes, the coquettish smile upon those lips. Not to mention the mischief it stirred in his own psyche.
1.Sringara Love
Mashallah!' A wilful smile curved the corner of his mouth, the blood in his veins running warm and fast. Those were the images of him and her from an hour ago, embroiled in the most enticing collection of silent exchanges yet.
3.' Karuna Compassion
And now...' he observed the steady return of sobriety in his eyes.
And now, he'd be taking it all away, wouldn't he? By giving her two troubling updates.
One, that he'd decided to leave on this short assignment to chase up this lead in the Chota Faizan case. The intelligence officer in him knew it wouldn't be wise to put it off, though he wasn't certain how she would take it.
6.Bhayanaka Fear
Worse however, was the second update - the more unpleasant news of the two. That he was going to have to give the orders to have her messengers in the safe-house silenced. Forever. The Sahiba would understand. But, she would be very upset. 'Understand' since hundreds of lives were at stake, but 'upset' since it was HER bidding that they assumed they were stubbornly sticking to.
7.' BhiBhatsa Disgust
Darn!' he agitatedly ran both palms down the stubbled rim of his jawline thrice. It felt somehow immoral - almost cruel - to take away the radiance from the face that brightened his days. He hated it.
5.Veera Valor
But it was a choice he HAD to make - today, and possibly during many instances in future too!
4.' Raudra Anger
Fine... FINE' A frustrated voice in him eventually yelled back - as the loving husband went about setting aside those soft sentiments, to make way for the steely grit of the Ustaad. To strap on the blade-proof vest and get moving.
His palms dropped down to rest on his collarbone as he stretched both sides of his neck a few times.
And then dropped further down to the of collar of his tunic.
One. Two. Three. Four. He flicked open the knots that held his snug-fitting tunic in place. Next moment, he shuffled the top off. Adjusting the Taveez against his bare-chested body, he reached for the trunk sitting by his feet - to hunt for the blade-proof vest stored at one of its bottom compartments.
'Oh!' Heera lowered her eyelids at once, her breath caught in her throat quite awkwardly as she held the binoculars aside. She hadn't quite expected that.
'What happened baisa?'
'Did you spot something interesting?'
2.Hasya Comic
'Baisa...' whined Bindiya 'you've had it for so long... as promised, can I have my turn with the magic lens now?'
'NO!'

...

Now I'll go catch up with 50+ posts 😲and connect tomorrow. Good Night all B&B's 😃


Wow wow...excellent post, Vathsy!! 👏 👏 👏


And is there any 10th rasam for your last line??!! 😉😆 Good night! 😳
Edited by Kalgi22 - 7 years ago

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