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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 7 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

You look through the windows of my poetry
Deep into the bedroom of my heart
You watch me undress
Button by button
It slowly slips down
You adjust the focus
Of those binoculars on your screen
Reading my poetry
Seeing my naked soul
You watch
For free
At a distance
At a safe distance...
With your binoculars!

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KK.

Omg this is perfect for the teaser 👏

Wonderful patti ⭐️

Thank you 🤗

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#422

Episode - 8

The roof-top meeting

Khan Sahib stepped forward to say something but his face clouded at the sight of her anxiety wrought face.

"Are you alright Ms.Peanuttaker? You look worried."

"I'm fine, thankyou...did you retrieve the papers."

"Not yet. We combed through five rooms and were at the last that held a safe. It contained many papers and documents and were searching for our paper when you signalled us to quit." Khan Sahib's face resumed its seriousness.

Lana swallowed hard. "Actually...perhaps i was wrong to..."

"No, you were absolutely right. There was someone on the other side and we just had time to close the safe and move out. It was a close call. I was surprised that

you managed to see him from where you stood. I looked up as i moved down the stairs and understood that you must have spotted his shadow. You alerted us just on time. Azeez has always called you most dependable and trustworthy. I now see that he is right."

Khan Sahib smiled genially at her and added, " Even in future, if i require an efficient dependable person, i can count on you."

Lana felt weak in her knees. She simply wanted to run forward towards the man into his arms and thank him for not taking her to task for her folly.

She just managed a meek "The pleasure is mine Khan Sahib. May i leave..." She was struggling to control her tears that threatened to break dam at any moment.

"A moment please madam. Since we now know the exact location, we would retrieve the paper soon enough. Sayyid and i may leave to Parnagarh soon after. But i would request that Azeez and you stay till the day after tomorrow till the festival ends, and further if your uncle insists. Azeez i gather has rather become quite popular here and his absence will be sorely missed and doubted upon. And i wouldn't deprive him of the festive food for another day, for his services. That is of course if it is okay with you."

Lana simply nodded, finding it hard to find her voice. And ran down the stairs as fast as her weak legs would take her.

At Kuki's house

Kuki stared out of her windows. The trees and flowers that seemed very beautiful only this afternoon looked revolting now. She recollected the various times Azeez's behavior had been strange and she had overlooked. The quick shoving of papers into his pouch and laughing it off, the cancellation of promised meetings only to be spotted somewhere else, the sudden disappearance for days on end and appearing with flowers or her favorite laddus. He worked for the Mansabdar at the haveli. The Mansabdar was a horse trader and ran races. Then why the secretive behavior? Could they all be related to that lady of the mansion. She had to find out. This cannot go on. This time she will see for herself what he was upto.

Kuki fought angry tears. "No Shah Sahib, you cannot take me for a ride again and again. I'm leaving the first thing in the morning." She was decided.

In Lana's room

Lana was fighting her tears too, but they were tears of relief. Relief that her folly rather than disrupt Khan Sahib, actually helped him. Relief that the grave looks were not because of his anger towards her, but because he had made an nth hour exit. Relief that she had not fallen in his eyes. Relief that she had ended up helping him inadvertently. She recollected his warm smile and fresh tears made way. What a gallant man! How lucky she was to be inhis company! He trusted her now and counted upon her. What if he gives her another important responsibility and she fumbles as was her habit! The tension slowly crept back into the girl.

The next morning at the Haveli

The sunrays were struggling with the stubborn curtains to enter the grand chamber to have a glimpse of the ethereal beauty that adorned the ornately designed four poster bed. The lady who stirred even the toughest hearts stirred slightly in her sleep and slowly opened her eyes to the wonders of the day!

But what was that! She thought she heard an unusual noise!

Edited by Sandhya.A - 7 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

You look through the windows of my poetry
Deep into the bedroom of my heart
You watch me undress
Button by button
It slowly slips down
You adjust the focus
Of those binoculars on your screen
Reading my poetry
Seeing my naked soul
You watch
For free
At a distance
At a safe distance...
With your binoculars!

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KK.

Wah wah... seeing my naked soul... that's excellent line... So lovely poem,Periamma!! 👏

Edited by Kalgi22 - 7 years ago

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

You look through the windows of my poetry
Deep into the bedroom of my heart
You watch me undress
Button by button
It slowly slips down
You adjust the focus
Of those binoculars on your screen
Reading my poetry
Seeing my naked soul
You watch
For free
At a distance
At a safe distance...
With your binoculars!

(Copied and Edited..)
KK.

Fantastic Poem, that was...Periyamma...⭐️👏..

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#425

OMG Lana!! This is so unbelievable!! 😲 🤣 Just thank your lucky stars... or actually your uncle... 😆 Next time, please be cautious, ma'am!! 😃 😆

And Kuki... 😲 You don't know about Azeez secret life... 😲 and now going to knock his door and awakening him from food-festival... Poor him.. 😲 😆

And Is that same Jaswaant making noise and waking our Heera??!! 😡 He's going to dead by my hand before I die by Ustaad hand.. 😡 😆

Kudos, Sandy Begum!! Wonderful!!👏

Edited by Kalgi22 - 7 years ago

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

OMG Lana!! This is so unbelievable!! 😲 🤣 Just thank your lucky stars... or actually your uncle... 😆 Next time, please be cautious, ma'am!! 😃 😆

Rosejaan being the personification of positivity guessed this twist and refused to be swayed even at the sight of tear filled teaser!😎

And Kuki... 😲 You don't know about what Azeez doing... 😲 and now going to knock his door and awakening him from the festival of foods... 😲 😆

Vehem ka saagar andha saagar jiska nahin kinaara hai
Vehem ne jag mein sabko dubaya kisko paar Utara hai...

(The ocean of doubt is a blind ocean that has no banks
It has only drowned people, spared none)

And Is that same Jaswaant making noise and waking our Heera??!! 😡 He's going to dead by my hand before I die by Ustaad hand.. 😡 😆

W@W.😆

Kudos, Sandy Begum!! Wondeful!!👏
😊

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#427

Wonderful update...Sandy...👏😊

So Lana escaped...ok...she did what she was supposed to do, if someone turns up...But how did Khan Sahib read the situation completely wrong...

Waiting for next episode to see, if Khan Sahib feels something doesn't add up...CIO, he is...can't afford this slip up...

Concentrate Lana...😃😆

KS returning ...why? ...all of a sudden...did he suspect about things at Haveli.😲..

Azeez to finish the job...by staying back...Thats not going to go good with his Love...Waiting to see what Kuki will do...

What did Heera see😲...KS?...😳

Sandy...Superb story...

And you stop at very intriguing point...every character's next move is held a suspense...👍🏼

Edited by selvi1275 - 7 years ago

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#428

Good morning Baisas😊

Gosh pages are flying .

lashy dear hope your all plan got successful and have a great time.😛 and always it be so🤗

@patti

poem on teaser is so dreamy. 😛

Adab to Khan shahib janmdin ki bahot bahot badhaiya. May God bless you the time to balance between two life.

Edited by melovesja - 7 years ago

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#429

Lashy...Hope your plans came to fruition...and had a Wonderful time...😛😉

Mitu...🤗

That was a thoughtful wish for Khan Sahib...

Lavanya...🤗...Kal...🤗...Sandy...🤗

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: selvi1275
Wonderful update...Sandy...👏😊

So Lana escaped...ok...she did what she was supposed to do, if someone turns up...But how did Khan Sahib read the situation completely wrong...

Waiting for next episode to see, if Khan Sahib feels something doesn't add up...CIO, he is...can't afford this slip up...

Lana was extremely lucky this time. What Khan Sahib saw was that the signal was given on time and the entry of a man. If he had reason to suspect Lana's efficiency or her drooling he might have doubted. But even the best CIOs can't analyze the workings of a woman's heart.😆

Concentrate Lana...😃😆

KS returning ...why? ...all of a sudden...did he suspect about things at Haveli.😲..

W@W. 😆 Well, nothing secretive about that. Mirza had informed him the arrival of the builder. And he wouldn't wish to extend his stay unnecessarily lest he be spotted or recognized. Remember, swine's man was to collect the paper on the third day. But Khan Sahib wouldn't explain all that to Lana. Would he?

Azeez to finish the job...by staying back...Thats not going to go good with his Love...Waiting to see what Kuki will do...

What did Heera see😲...KS?...😳

It was next morning. The paper was not retrieved yet. So not KS.

Sandy...Superb story...
And you stop at very intriguing point...every character's next move is held a suspense...👍🏼

I had intended to complete the scene. But the episode was already long enough.😕

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