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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

u r in college right..😛

i already finished next part in MFS .. i writing one more part ..it almost finishing stage..i think tonight..i will update

wow Di excited for ur update. I'm in bus.returning to home.yipee update is coming 😊 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: avishimishra

wow Di excited for ur update. I'm in bus.returning to home.yipee update is coming 😊 😊


updating dear

sorry for late 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: avishimishra

I'm so glad that I got one more lovely elder sister. Enjoying study alot 😊


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Thanks for liking and comments dearies, if any grammatical mistakes in this part ..i am sorry..

Part 37

Jalal:Jodha, why u bring them to every place , u never come alone to found me while rolling eyes.

Jodha: I am not bring them, they only follow me with irritating face..

Masti gang: oyie, Mr and Mrs Mohammed.we worried about u..so we follow u people..but u both thought we disturbing u with angry face.

Akdha unison: u have any doubt, u all r Kabab mein haddi with teasing tone..

Masti gang: Kabab mein Haddi..with shocking face even their mouth jaws touched to ground..

Akdha laughed seeing their face expression..

Jalal: Jodha, lets go from here before they come back from statue state..

Jodha with big open eyes: yes with naughty face.

Asad smirked face: oyie, first we need go back farmhouse ,Dadi worried about u ..

Jalal remembering Dadi as his body become stiffened and Jodha sensed their stiffed body..Jodha held his palm tightly and give little smile to him..Jalal reply weak smile to Jodha.

Jodha: lets go Jalal..Jalal nods his head..

Farmhouse ..


Akdha standing infront of farmhouse ..and Jalal cupped Jodha hand tightly while walking inside the house.Jalal leg forward each step as his heart have more pain like someone pinning thousand needle in his heart as heart bleeding . Jalal body start shivering seeing every corner in hall and his mind imagine , his father throw out his mother outside..Jalal eyes moist and Jodha know that what Jalal mind thinking and how much pain he handling seeing his past life in front of him..

Jodha: Jalal , closed ur eyes..(Jalal look at Jodha with moist eyes)...plz...Jalal closed his eyes

Jodha: Jalal, don't imagine ur bitter past , just imagine ur mother playing with u in ur childhood , just felt ur mother soul in air, just felt she talk with u, just feel only ur sweet memories with mother..she always with u..dont forgot...

Jalal imagine Pari talk with him and hearing Pari lubbly voice & twisting his ear with scolding face ..Jalal lips crept little smile...Jalal open eyes look at Jodha with eyes guestered to thanks..

Jodha placed her head in Jalal chest and cuddled hand to his stomach as Jalal one hand held her head and other hand placed her back

Jalal: thanks Jodha..

Jodha: Jalal, why u saying thanks to ur life..my happiness only around u..without u ,I cannot alive..plz don't run away from me..i cannot tolerate..with painful voice..

Jalal cupped her cheeks: sorry Jo..

Jodha: I love u so much..

Jalal: I love u lot..with so much emotional running their face

Salima choked insake of chips strucked in her throat..Akdha head turning to Salima side..

Akdha eyes popped ..

Jalal rolled his eyes : my crazy family, what is this..why everyone starring us..

Jodha: why everyone sitting like u all r in threatre..with snacks hands..with fuming face

Yeah guys masti gang sitting in sofa as starring Akdha moments with snacks and cool drinks like seeing some movie in threathre..

Mir with murmuring voice: Salima bhabhi, because of u..they found out our daily entertainment..

Salima: sorry..with puppy face.

Jodha: what daily entertainment..

Choti hit Mir head : hey duffer, shut ur mouth..

Jalal: what s going on..if anyone explain me clearly..with fold his hand in chest..

Masti gang sheepish smile and thinking how to escape from Akdha

Asad: Jalal, Dadi..waiting for u ..first see her..she worried about u so much..with sheepish face.

Jalal glare to Asad: I deal with u all later guys..and where is Dadi..

Asad: downstairs left room..

Jalal enter in Dadi room and Dadi sitting in rocking chairs as her eyes closed ..

Jalal placed his head in Dadi lap and Dadi open her eyes as look at Jalal..Dadi caring his hairs softly..

Dadi: Jalal beta..Jalal raise his face and his moist eyes look at Dadi..

Dadi wiped his tears : Jalal, ..i hided about ur mother details from u but I did everything for ur wellness only..i did it for u ..forgive ur Dadi..in guilty face..i am so..Jalal closed her mouth through his palm..

Jalal: plz don't ask sorry .. plz forgive ur Jalal..i rudely talk with u..i am sorry..in my frustration only , I shout u..i am sorry Dadi ..i am wrong with teary face.

Dadi: no , u never wrong beta, ur angry right..its my mistake , I hided about Pari..

Jalal cupped Dadi palm : No Dadi, u did it right otherwise, I never got any success in my life..u r my backbone Dadi..u did everything for goodness only..u give me mother love..Jalal kissed Dadi palm..

Dadi wiped her own tears: ok..forgot everything, u want see ur childhood photos and mom photos.

Jalal eyes twinkling : mom photos , Dadi..with excited voice.Dadi kissed Jalal forhead and nods her head.

Jalal stand up from kneel down and Dadi got up from chairs..

Dadi: come with me..

Dadi walk out from room and Jalal walking behind her..

Dadi stop infront of huge room and Dadi pushed room door..

Dadi enter room and turn Jalal stand in door with moist eyes..

Dadi: Jalal beta, this is ur parents room even its ur room also..u never sleep alone .u sleep and cuddled with Pari waist only..so u have no any separate room..

Jalal: maa room ..with teary face..Dadi nod her head...and Jalal enter in slow steps.

Jalal eyes scanned whole room , one side wall full of Jalal childhood photos..Jalal hand touched his childhood photos..

Jalal: Dadi..its me with smiling face..

Dadi: yes, after u birth to till ur second birthday photos placed in this wall. Ur father not forgot capture ur single smile pictures.he always behind u through his camera as captured ur every naughtiness..he crazily love with u..

Jalal close eyes while contol his anger about his father ..he wont hurt Dadi once again..

Dadi pickup one photos from wall and show to Jalal : see , Pari dressed u to Little Krishna costume for Krishna janmashtami


Jalal take his photo from Dadi hand and gang enter in Pari room..Mir snatched photos from Jalal hand..

Mir: wow, u r so cute in little Krishna costume .u r smile ..omg Jodha bhabhi see ur hubby smiling face..

Jodha take photos from Mir hand and caring photos with lovely face..

Zoya: Jodha bhabhi, we don't mind,if u want kiss ur hubby photos with teasing tone..

Jodha blushed ..

Choti placed her arm in Zoya shoulder :even we don't mind, if u kiss Jalal jiju instead of his photos with smirked face.

Jodha glare to choti and Jalal smirked look at Jodha..

Jodha : acha ji..i kiss his photos only..see how much he cute in his photos but now he changed ravan..ten head ravan...

Jalal confused face: who is ravan..even ten head ravan..how its is possible ten head ..

Jodha chucking face: Dadi, u r grandson don't know anything about epics..he asking who's ravan..plz I give good suggestion..plz change MD to our company ..its good for our company with dramatic way..with winked eyes to Dadi without Jalal noticed her wink

Dadi smiled: yes, u saying right..

Jalal grinned teeth: Dadi..i am owner of MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES not employee..

Jodha :u just employee of MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES not owner..i am right Dadi...

Dadi: yes, Jodha beta..u saying right..he just employee with calm way

Masti gang hard to control his laugh..

Jalal: Jodha, u crossing ur limit..with raising his index finger in front of Jodha face..Jodha also did same with Jalal..

Dadi: Jodha beta better, u become MD of MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES..

Jalal laughed loudly : what..Jodha ..MD..omg I cannot control my laughter..she is woman, how she can handle MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES...MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES not any small company , its huge empire ..with laughing face without thinking anything Jalal said ..opps Jodha fuming seeing Jalal laughing and underestimate about woman power

Asad : yes, Jalal I am also accept, woman not handle MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES..even he don't know how many branches in whole world with smirking face..Asad added ghee in fire ..Jodha anger raised ..

Jalal: Mir u accept or not ..( Jalal not noticed fuming Jodha and yeah other girls also)

Mir seeing Jodha and other ladies fuming face: bhai..oh..i am..

Jalal glare to Mir: why u stammering..say yes or no..

Mir : yes bhai..with fear face.

Jalal look at Jodha face and Jodha glaring Jalal with hand in both waist as hiccup

Jalal: I think , I cross my Border with murmuring voice.


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PART 38


Jodha showing her index finger in front of Jalal : what u said, woman not handle to MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES..u think woman is not stronger than man..

Jalal nods his head randomly..

Choti: Jodha di, They accept woman nothing infront of man right..Let them prove , they r great than us..with smirked face.

Mir: u shut ur mouth , moti..

Jodha glare to Mir: u shut ur mouth Mirza mohammed khan ..u also ur bhai side right..

Mir pout face: Bhabhi..

Zoya: Bhabhi, how we can forgot Mr.Ahmed said, we don't how many branches in MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES..i am right na, Mr.Ahmed with killing look to Asad.

Asad gulped saliva : Shona darling..with slow voice..

Salima : Arhhh, we all forgot one more person also..i am right Abdul ji..with grinned teeth.

Abdul sheepish face: what I did it even I am not open my mouth..with puppy face.

Salima: yeah..that is ur mistake..u support Jalal jiju without open ur mouth...u not said anything against Jalal jiju words.

Jodha: leave them guys..they said right..man r stronger and woman r weak person..today they doing whole mansion work without help of servant.Dadi , my decision right or wrong.

Dadi: My badi bahu always correct..they doing whatever we saying otherwise everyone throw out MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES..

Asad smiled (mind) : Thank god, I escaped ..i am not MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES employee like them.

Zoya: Bhabhi, Mr.Ahmed thinking he escape house hold work because he is not in MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES employee right with smirked look at Asad

Jodha: how can he escape , shona ..Dadi, Mr Ahmed signed contract recently with MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES right..if u cancel, that contract..after what happen..

Asad eyes popped and Other man giggling seeing Asad face.

Jalal: Jo, stop ur playing..Dadi never throw out us from MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES and cancel contract also..with smiling face.

Dadi: Acha..Jalal beta..u think like that..u said woman not handle MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES..how can u forgot after Dadaji in Paralysis and he died..that time I am one handled whole MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES ..with angry face..after u finish ur studies , I handover whole company to U.its not mean I have no power in MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES..i have full power ..i dismissed anyone in MOHAMMED INDUSTRIES ..u too Jalal Mohammed khan..with Angry face..

Mir murmur Jalal ears: bhai, u talked too much..surreder to Bhabhi legs otherwise no one escape from devils..

Jalal : u think, Jalal Mohammed khan fallen to My Jo legs..never.i cannot with same murmuring voice

Mir: then no one save us with crying face.

Jodha: Salima, plz type dismissed letter and contract cancel document..with bossy tone.

Salima : yes, boss..

Jodha: u r sound so cool, Salima..

Jalal: Jo..with puppy face.

Jodha: u want ur dismiss letter or one day u all doing House hold work..

Jalal look at every man : ok..we accept ..

Jodha smirked : what for dismiss..

Jalal: no..we do house hold work and what u all saying, we do..with grinned teeth.

Jodha patted Jalal cheeks : Good Boy..go bring coffee for Dadi and snacks for girls..i am hungry plz made any food for me.

Jalal : yes..i am going..Jalal left the place with fuming face.

Jodha : Girls, u all decide what work they do..girls smirked look at Boys.

Zoya come infront Of Asad : Mr.Ahmed, u mapping whole floor..go do it fast..later I tell u what u will do..

Asad fuming ..: I see u later with slow voice.

Salima come to Abdul : Abdul, u bring our luggage to our room and serve our food and snack to us.

Choti come infront of Mir with smirked face: wow, what a great chance..u all made for us..thank u Monkey sorry Mir..today, u dusting whole farmhouse and u r our entertainer piece..whenever we get boring u entertaining us..if we not satisfy ur entertainment. We give severe punishment .u do without asking anything..

Mir mouth open widely : I cannot..with angry face.

Choti: Jodha di..with dragging...voice..

Mir: why u calling bhabhi..i will do..with angry face.

Choti: then ok..dusting whole farmhouse..if we get boring then we call u...

Girls enjoying movie in main hall while sitting and chatting with each other..

Asad mopping floor , Mir dusting photo in wall, Abdul serving snacks to Girls..Jalal cooking food in kitchen..

Girls enjoying seeing their works..

Salima : Abdul, we need Hot samosa..bring it soon..

Abdul murmur : now only I served tea and biscuit them..with in few minutes..they want samosa..and enter in kitchen..

Jalal cooking pasta for Jodha and Abdul enter kitchen in murmuring way as put tray in table with heavy sound..

Jalal: Abdul, what happen..

Abdul: they want Somasa with angry face..Jalal they doing so much..

Jalal smiled : Abdul cook samosa and I come back after give pasta to Jo..

Abdul irritating face: but I don't know cooking ..

Jalal: even I don't know..i cook only pasta...Abdul try until u success ..left the kitchen as leave Abdul in shocked face.

Jalal come to Jodha room and Jodha look at Jalal childhood in Album and kissing every photos ..

Jalal clear his throat and Jodha head turned as look at Jalal while she hide album behind her back.

Jalal come infront of Jodha and placed food in side table..

Jodha : great Jalal Mohammed khan take more time cook for simple pasta ..too bad..with nod her negatively

Jalal smiled : sorry mam..sorry for delay..let eat ur food with polite way

Jodha : yeah sure..Jodha take plate from table and get spoon of pasta to near her mouth but she stopped in mid of air..

Jalal: what happen mam..u need someone feed u..with smirked face..

Jodha: why someone, I have my hubby and pulled Jalal hand and sit next with her and now feed me with smirked face.

Jalal smiled and feed her through spoon..but Jodha stopped him..

Jodha take spoon from Jalal and she tried to feed him..

Jalal: Jo, u r hungry..u eat first.

Jodha: no, u eat, I know u did not eat last day itself..

Jalal: no u..

Jodha : ok..both eat randomly..first I feed u..Akdha feeding each other..

Jalal : thank u.

Jodha: why Jalal..

Jalal: u fight, punishment everything, u want distract my mind right..i am lucky got angel in my life

Jodha avoid his eye contact: oh...not like that..emotional face not suitable for ur devil face..with smirked signed.

Jalal raised his eye brow: I show what devil do..Jalal body leaning over to Jodha body..as Jodha tried move from him while her body backward to bed ..Jalal half body above her and Jodha tried to push him and Jalal held her hand to avoid her push..

Jodha: Jalal, leave my hand and get up from me..with slow face..

Jalal : no I am not ..his hand teasing her neck to cheeks..

Jodha moaning his name : Jalal...please..leave me..with closed eyes.

Sudden bang sound...Akdha jerkup their position and went outside the room..everyone stand in Kitchen with tensed face..

Akdha enter in kitchen..and look at Abdul face ..

Jodha laughed : Oh my god, what happen Abdul jiju, why stand like statue ..

Salima : Jodha, ur jiju even don't know how to handle pressure cooker.. after marriage how to handle me with grinned teeth..

Choti: Jodha di, Abdul jiju..blast pressure cooker..with chuckling face.

Jalal: Abdul, what u did it with glaring eyes..

Abdul pout face: u only said, try to cook..i just tried boil Potato in Pressure cooker suddenly it blast in air ..my heart beat one sec stopped hearing bang sound timegod I stay away from stove ..otherwise pressure cooker hit on my face only.

Jodha: suddenly how cooker blast in air..Are u added less water in cooker?

Abdul hit his forhead: I forgot add water in cooker..with sheepish face.

Salima : oh god , Dadi..what my fate ..he did not how to boil potato also..with puppy faces.

Dadi: hmm..so sad dear..with dramatic ways.

Zoya: Asad, now clean kitchen floor..after u go clean outside floor..

Asad glare to Abdul : stupid Abdul, because of u, she dominating me more..

Choti: ufff, everyone so tensed because of Abdul jiju adventures ..so Mirza ji , come entertain us..with ur great talent with chuckling face.

Girls sitting in sofa and Mir standing infront of Girls..

Mir : yes mam, plz tell me what entertainment u want..with grinned teeth.

Choti smirked face : now I say tongue twister line..u repeat my tongue twister without breathe..hmm just three times u repeat this tongue twister continuously..ok listen.

Mir looking choti curiously as waiting for her tongue twister..choti said tongue twister one go

Betty Botter bought some butter

But she said the butter's bitter

If I put it in my batter, it will make my batter bitter

But a bit of better butter will make batter better

So twas better betty botter bought a bit of better butter

Choti : Now , ur turn..Mir Khusamir..

Mir eyes popped out: oh..say it once again..

Choti : why Mir khusamir , u accept girls not stronger person..now what happen to ur men power..with teasing tone.

Mir : Jodha Bhabhi..plz forgive ur devar..with innocent child face..

Jodha: Today, u all cross ur limit..this is ur punishment..do what choti saying..with bossy tone.

Choti: Thanks di..ok once again..i am saying listen carefully.

Betty Botter bought some butter

But she said the butter's bitter

If I put it in my batter, it will make my batter bitter

But a bit of better butter will make batter better

So twas better betty botter bought a bit of better butter

Mir take long breathe : betty boter brought some bitter..

But ...Mirza stammering in second lines..

Mir : I forgot ..with shame face.

Salima:choti leave him..let watch new movie in TV..

Choti: yeah di, we waste our time to this monkey rather than we watch Movie..but punishment sure..u just run three round to whole farmhouse.

Mir: what , three round.with popped eyes.

Choti: less punishment right..i increase count Mir with smirking face..

Mir : No..i am going with cursing choti in murmur voice left outside for doing his punishment

In kitchen , Asad cleaning floor and Jalal & Abdul cleaning stove slab..and Mir enter in fuming face..

Mir: bhai, because of u..they doing so much..i got insult from moti ..with angry face.

Mir hit cupboard through his hand with angry face and flour box drop down to cupboards..every flour drop to four of them head..( everyone standing near to cupboard just imagine their state guys )

Jalal shout : Mir ..with grinned teeth..

Girls hearing Jalal shout as enter in kitchen..everyone blast their laughter seeing white flour spread in whole head ..their face covered with flour.

Whats going on..with heavy voice. Sound come from Girls behind..
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PART 39


Girls hearing Jalal shout as enter in kitchen..everyone blast their laughter seeing white flour spread in whole head ..their face covered with flour.

Whats going on..with heavy voice. Sound come from Girls behind..

Girls unison: now we r gone, Mohammed boys ka saviours came...

Girls turned with innocent face : when u came mom,

Janu angry glare to girls: what happening yaar..why they standing in flour bath..

Girls: we did not anything mom..they only said that they doing whole house hold works ..we saying right, Dadi.

Dadi: yes, janu beta..

Mir shout :they saying Lie Janumaa..with crying face..Girls glare to Mir

Janu maa rolled her eyes and pointed to boys : u people go take shower ..girls come with me with angry face..janu left the place.

Mens winning smile to girls while girls fuming seeing their winning smile

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After everyone freshup come to Hall..and Girls already cleaned Kitchen mess did by Boys.

Both boys and girls stand infront of Janumaa..and Dadi sit next with Janu.

Janu: few minutes, I come late, u all hungama in house..Girls , u did it so much with angry face.

Dadi : Janu beta, they only started, they said Girls weak person..so we did it..with supporting girl side.

Janu: Maa, u r elder to them but u also joined to my crazy Girls..and boys u all handling big companies..but u people dominating Girls strength..is it right?

Jalal: sorry maa..with guilty face.

Asad, Mir And Abdul: Sorry maa..with pout face.

Janu : They asked sorry right, now ur turn Girls..with little harsh tone.

Jodha:why we ask sorry Maa..we cannot...they did wrong, we r not with stubborn face.

Janu rolled her eyes: Jodha because of u , they also follow ur path..ur elder and u become roll model to them ,not spoiling them with ur naughtiness.

My princess not spoiling them (girls), they (girls) teach good lesson to ur lovely sons..

Girl tuned :Papa..with smiling face.

Janu: u r the main reason day by day , their naughtiness increase with angry face.

Rajaram : what I did it..ok leave.. important person come to see u guys..Rajaram move away from side..

Girls and boys shout : Lakshu patti..with excited face..Akdha stand in slient ways.

Lakshmi chuckling face: don't call me Patti (granny ), just address me to Lakshu..

Girls hugged Lakshmi and boys take blessing from her..Akdha starring them..

Lakshmi infront of Akdha: u both not happy , I came to ur home with fake sad face.

Jodha: no patti , not like that..Jodha gestured Jalal take blessing from granny..Akdha bend down touch granny foot ..

Lakshmi: pathinarum Petru peru vazhugu vazhuga .. Akdha stand in straight with smiling face.

Zoya and choti with horror face: Lakshu, u blessed , 16 child for them..

Lakshu: No beta, its not meaning of my blessing..pathinaurum (16) I mention for boons. My blessing meaning live long life acquiring 16 boons..

Mir: what 16 Boons , lakshu..

Lakshmi: fame, education,courage, success,progeny (child),daring, finance, Valued grain (abundance of food),well-being,enjoyments of pleasures,wisdom,beauty,unending honours,philanthropy,birth (lineage)and healthy long life.

Abdul: omg, lot of blessing in single lines ..

Lakshu : yes ..Rajaram, u talk with priest or not..

Rajaram : I already talked with him..he come evening to farmhouse.

Choti: why priest Lakshu..

Lakshmi: evening , u know all know about his visit..let start our chatting , I don't anything about u all..

Without us, u start chatting session lakshu, with angry coarse voice

Lakshmi take breath: they come behind me..

Everyone turn look at entrance..four person standing in angry face ..

Lakshmi : why u all standing here.come inside..

Zoya: lakshu, they r..


Girl : we intro ourself..iam Deepti, daughter of Sivaram and radha chakravarthy.. 20 yrs old , I am Pursing third year in college.


Next girl: iam ishana , daughter of sivaram and radha chakravarthy..iam 17 yrs..old..iam studying 12 std.


Next girl: Iam sara ..daughter of Jairam and Madhura chakravarthy. Iam 11 yrs old..yeah ofcousre iam youngest to all..so very pampering child to our elders.iam doing 6 th std.


Next boy : hi guys , this is ur bharath.son of Jairam and Madhura chakravarthy..iam 14 yrs old..i am studing 9 std ..i know karate, martial arts very well with attitude voice..yesterday itself, I thought, I am only boy in Varman chakravarthy..now I heared my aunty son came from delhi ..so I come to see him..where is that little boy..

Jalal cleared his throat : I am ..with raised his eyes brow..

Bharath: I am not asking u, Young man..i asking about My aunty son..he only 10 yrs old .

Deepti chuckled face: Bharath, he is our bua son..

Bharath: but deeps, u said he only 10 yrs old but he ..

Deepti: yes , I just prank with u..with smirked facw

Bharath: u and ur stupid prank.with angry face ..hi with sheepish smile..

Mir: our family going big one..with popped eyes..

Deepti come infront of Mir: so u r Jalal jiju ka brother, Mir.

Mir : yes , deeps with flirting tone.

Choti rolling her eyes: flirt ..with murmuring in angry face.

Everyone intro with each other...and lot of fun and chatting , teasing with each other..

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Evening..

Priest doing work with panchagam (astrological calendar)..

Bharath: priestji, how many times u count ur fingers ..with little mood off face.

Lakshmi: Bharat shut ur mouth, he doing his job.

Choti: Lakshu, why priest come to our home..

Dadi: for Di and Jiju marriage date fixing..

Jodha shyly look at Jalal and Jalal smiled seeing his sherni in shy face.

Priest: this months last date good for marriage or after two months one date for marriage or after 6 months only two good date for marriage.

Choti: this month not fix the date. Next weeks I have exam..i need concentrate ..

Deepti, ishana also said same things..

Jodha face fell down..

Priest: then after 2 month..we will fix their marriage..

Jalal: no after 6 months, u will fix..

Jodha mouth open widely even every one..everyone thought, he only urgent for marriage but he saying fix after 6 month for wedding..

Jodha murmur: are u mad..6 month , Jalal...with almost crying face.

Jalal: I know Jo..wait for few seconds..

Jalal: priestji..say date for after 6 month ..

Priest: 14 and 22 sept ..

Jalal : fix 22 sept ..

Jodha : Jalal, why 22 sept..

Jalal: don't say u forgot our Marriage day..our first meeting..Marriage at First Sight, u remember it or not..

Jodha Blushing face: opps , how can I forgot our wonderful day...thanks Jalal for everything..both eyes caught..

Zoya clear her throat: Love birds, we also here..

Masti gang: Bhai /Jalal why marriage date after 6 months..

Jalal: because that day very special day for us..while starring Jodha blushing face.Akdha eyes locked with somuch of love.

Mastigang: why..22-sept-2017


Akdha: our First anniversary..that day only, we got married in Pollachi..

Masti gang : then its very special day for u guys.

Lakshmi: so Jodha beta stay in chennai right till their marriage.with teasing tone

Jalal : No..

Everyone laughed and Jodha blushing

Deepti: why jiju, u cannot stay away from di with teasing tone.

Jalal: single minute, I cannot but 6 months, no way..with slow murmuring voice

Lakshmi: Rajaram, This marriage will arrange very grandly..afterall this gerneration ka first marriage in Varman chakravarthy..

Dadi: Not all Chakravarthy family..and Khusamir family also..this is first marriage in this generation..we have less time doing every work..

Choti , Zoya, deepti ,Salima, ishana and sara : yeah less time for shopping with sad puppy face.

Mir : what 6 months time less for ur shopping..with horror face.

Choti: yeah...shopping to select dress for every ritual, jewels and arrange beautian, we start rehearsal for sanJodha dance, first we need select good song..we need choose game for teasing groom side .

Mir: we also do same with bride side.

Deepti: we also bride side..now we r more members in bride side.

Mir smirked: My AKDHA college member also come to Bhai marriage ..we also huge members than u all.

Rajaram: both stop ur fighting..u all decide later..u have more time decide.

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PART40


DELHI..

Ayesha Room

Ayesha sitting in bed while held picture frame in her hand.

I hate u Pari,I hate u so much. because of u ,he not look at me..i never thought i broke his trust from u easily .he said that he love u more than his life but in midnight time,he throw out his love through his own hand because of me..everything happened u( Pari) because of me and My brother (Ruqz and Adham father).first Rano father fix his marriage with me..i left London with bhai..after I come back..Samir already married with u , even u both have child also..u think..i leave u peacefully and blessing u..whereever u happily love with ur love..i rentry in ur life insake of Ur Jalal birthday..i heared ur word , u trust ur hubby so much ..so I did not play with u but I played with him..first we used ur stupid groom( who Pari Parents selected groom for Pari ) ..he very angry with u and Samir. We brainwashed his mind..he did it what we saying through his men..first we spread gossip u r characterless person then we send men as talk with u closely..but ur foolish hubby.trust his eyes more than his love..yes, I killed u..Pari..we record samir voice in his angry time.he shout I want kill u Pari..how many times I hearing his angry voice..u don't know...My heart got peace hearing his voice everytime through Taperecorder. My Bhai men hitted u through car but u not died even I want ur dead big painful one..my bhai snapped u though knife in ur stomach..after u r died only I knew that u r Three pregnant also.so sad..we killed ur child in ur womb itself.and bhai played samir voice infront of u..but still u trust ur hubby..wow what a love. Ur bhai Rajaram tried to save u but we also in Hospital, how we can allowed save u.we already managed doctor and said don't say anything to anyone but u said everything to ur Bhai..time god , god with us only..after u r death, he went away from village with his family..after few days I enter in Km mansion with innocent face..i acted as I caring and loving to ur son..but when in his childhood age , how much smartness..he never mingled with me..samir parents saw my fake love with ur Akku ..they decided samir second marriage with me..but idiots samir denied as said he love Pari only in his life time.how can I leave him..bhai mix drugs his drink..he drank state , he misbehaved with me. After samir parents knew about he misbehaved with me..they trust my fake tears..parents orders him and marry to me..after marriage , he drank more .after few months I faints..doctor confirmed iam pregnant..i want kill his child ..because this child not mine..in that night also..he saw ur face in my face..he thought he love making with u..how can I think..they r my children..i want abort in my womb itself but my stupid bhai stopped me ..my womb child thrumb card for Mohammed property..so I accepted his decision. After I delivered Twins children..i never feel they r my children..i hate them like Jalal. I don't know why they r my blood but they attached more with Jalal.even Jalal sentimental Idiots, he also unconditional love with my Twins.. Samir rejected everytime...my revenge increased more because of samir rejection...samir run out mansion, I thought Now I am ruler whole empire..but clever old couple.that samir father write every property in Jalal name and Hamida become guardian of Jalal..even he did not write single penny to my children..i planned if Jalal marry my niece , whole property come under my name..no no..once again my plan failed because of ur niece, Jodha she already married with Jalal without know anyone..i tried many time kill her but every time Jalal saved her .u think I will allow , ur niece happily married life with ur son..no ..its never happen in their dreams..they deciding their Marriage right..before Their marriage I separated them like I did separated u from samir..wait and watch in heaven..how ur Niece and ur son get torturing by me and Ur son throw out ur Niece ( Jodha) in my mansion..it will be happen before their marriage otherwise I will kill her through my hand..with evily and angry face..

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Jalal room

Asad: Jalal, why tensed ..and any other reason , u postponed ur marriage after 6 months.

Jalal : yes, Asad..i postponed marriage because..with tensed face..

Abdul: what Jalal..why tensed so much..

Jalal take one parcel and give to Abdul..

Abdul opened and after he shocked ..: she ...

Asad snatched parcel from Abdul hand..and after seeing parcel things ..Asad give same reaction..

Asad : who send her photo with shocked face..

Jalal: even I confused, our college day ufff..with pushing his hairs to backward ..

Asad: I think that mystery man related to her..insake only he doing everything with us..

Jalal: me too thinking same way like u..if he harm my Jo and my family..what we will do..then only I postponed my marriage date..we have less time ,we need to capture mystery man before marriage date..

Abdul: Jalal, increase security with ladies more..

Jalal: hmmm..

Part end

Next parts teaser Continues

Man: Jalal Mohammed khan and Asad u both play with me..not bad guys..Jalal , nowdays u r very happy with ur lady love..only few days ,how much u want happy.u happy with ur lady love after u just cry.No one with u wipe ur tears.u snatched my life ka two important person from me..everyday I crying for them but u happy with ur family .u think I leave u soon..i will make ur life to hell..u beg for ur die infront of me..iam coming Jalal...😲😲😲

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Dadi :U both not romance in office and both not stay in lonely place also..Jodha stay in Outhouse but Jalal never enter outhouse even he not look at outhouse side also until urs official marriage.

Jalal: if I am not accept ur condition with attitude voice.

Dadi: simple, I transferred Jodha to Chennai branch..nahi, i dismissed her from office.with same attitude face.

Jodha pout look at Jalal..

Jalal : Dadi with grinned teeth..

Dadi patted his cheek: don't for got iam ur Dadi..

Mastigang: u both deserve it with laughing voice.😆😆😆

Back to delhi..more office work pending and Akdha Office room romance also pending .. ( yeah Dadi put condition but Akdha follow Dadi condition..is it possible for Akdha mainly Jalal.😛😛😛.)

New persons entries..


Guys, if u want next parts with in two days or ..some other day..😉😉😉

If anyone mind stricked out why I splited into four parts .its just only more than 5000 words post.. ..ok guessing. Let see who saying correct guess .🤔🤔

For Pm buddy me😳

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kutty..what r u doing here 😲
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kutty..what r u doing here😲



😲 Can't I came here diduu 😲 🤢

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