NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

AND YOU ARE RIGHT, IT WAS MAGICAL ALL THROUGH AND IT FLOWED DIRECTLY I TO MY HEART
MUCH LIKE TODAYS CHAPTER 😳

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COMING TO COVER THE OF THE BOOK, TO ME THE RESEMBLANCE DOES NOT STRIKE AT ONCE

KHAN SAHIB'S TENDER EXPRESSIONS ARE MISSING. HE SEEMS TO HAVE A STERNER LOOK

Waise Lavanya that cover encompasses a lot of different parts of different chapters... it primarily shows their wedding... he is trying to protect her... she however, sees him as an aggressor.. and feels cornered though she refuses to lower her eyes to him!

But, for this chapter -

Read this following part and see the cover again...

'Sahiba...' It'd taken him a short lull to deal with the initial damage of the turbulence tearing through his body and heart just then. But he made sure he dealt with it, before confronting her face to face 'I have forced you, and will force you, when it's a matter of life and death... when it's a matter of your own safety...' he paused, deliberately. She might not be able to see his features. But this way, she would get the message for sure. 'BUT... I did not force you to come to the races or bet on my horses... I did not force you to giggle or laugh... I do not force your beats to quicken whenever I approach you... and I did not forcefully hold you captive in my arms now either!' His jaw was taut and his voice low from soberness - this was going to be embarrassing, but he DID want to spell it out to her today 'Similarly, I would never force you to lie with me solely because we're wedded by law... if THAT is what you're afraid of!'

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: lashy
Btw, Harshu wanted to tell you... I tried my absolute hardest to get this ready by 27th... sat for hours and hours on end... but couldn't manage it...
2 hours earlier and it would've been 27th... hope you dont' feel bad 🤗

Aww its ok... i can undrstd 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: lghosh
God had gifted her a pot with a bouquet, chosen specially for her. It had the most beautiful flowers. But it had plenty of sharp painful thorns too. She toppled the pot since she didn't want the pain, the thorns. But now, she was left with no beauty to behold either!

If God had gifted her a pot of beautiful flowers he had also send her a tender who not only tends to the flowers but her as well to ease her off from the pain of the thorns! Not only he trims the thorns but puts the bouquet back in the pot with utmost care bringing the life and beauty back in its natural form. She will get back her beautiful pot of flowers along with the realisation that the tender is there to make things better for her, plucking the thorns out of her bouquet of life making it smoother, richer and fragrantful by his touch and care. The voice echoed in her ears, 'I'll protect you... never let you suffer... trust me, Heera'! The tender whispers, bringing the bouquet of flowers back to its original life gifting it to her!! God has not only gifted the bouquet but a nurturer for it as well taking the tears, pains and thorns away!

Awww...

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

But Lana... Akbar is the pot here... not the nurturer.. 😳

Even I wrote that analogy with the pot, the flowers, the thorns - all of it being Akbar - a gift from God, specially chosen for her.. 😃

Lana has added another dimension to it... and now, I do understand why she feels so!

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: lghosh
specially his promise to her here made me feel so!! He rose high and above to me from being the pain giver to pain reliever!!

It reminded me of the potted rose plant outside her room which in spite of being poked and prodded came back to life!! 😃

Which promise, Lana? The 'I will protect you... not let you suffer, Heera?'

It was more of a reassurance to her after her brief 'choking' episode... in truth, that's what he's been doing all along protecting her... thus not letting her suffer...

How unfortunate that it was those very words which reminded her of the times she feels (and rightfully so) that he's made her suffer! 😭

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
My first thought also same!! But second thought told me as It's from Sandy's Mahendar!! 😡 😆

Sandy's Mahendar!😆

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: lghosh

How can I do that Lashy?? 😕 It will be unethical!! He has just gotten a taste of his first desire from his ladylove and how can I ask him to appease my spinning that has started because of his arousing actions!! 😆 Moreover, he is not happy now to please anyone else! Nope can't do, have to undergo this spinning unless and until I can quieten it myself!! 😃

😆

Reins are made for his Bahadur... not for imaginations with him, LS😉

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

The journey was quiet and long,

the silence was poignantly strong!

She wanted him to converse with her,

Feelings in her heart longed him to stir!

He kept going, keeping a hold on her,

He walked aside on foot, not going afar!

He could have ridden on a mare but he did not,

He wanted her safety and that is what he got!

She broke the silence, he had a smile,

expecting her questions now for a while!

Curiosity broke its spell, she probed his whim,

He was surprised at her estimation of him!

He showed her the valley and his plan was told,

She asked for a blueprint to feel the map unfold!

Once satisfied she probed for some more,

to know about him, to feel his core!

He admired her regal beauty and poise,

Both wanted to muse, away from all noise!

He revealed his passion of riding at night,

His preference for solitude came to her sight!

He was intrigued, at her interest for him,

Is her heart thawing? His heart went to beam!

On his query she started to laugh,

Riding at night for her is very tough!

To stop her laughter she bit her lip

Seeing this, his heart swelled to take a dip,

In that ocean of nectar, her lips offered,

To taste them fully his heart long suffered!

He gazed at her cheek, her tresses and nape,

He couldn't control his desire that took shape!

Both of them got carried away,

the awkward pause made its way!

She laughed at her own self all upbeat,

Then she was all thirsty from the heat,

He offered his water bag to quench her thirst,

She choked on the water, coughing aburst!

He helped her to regain her normal breath,

But he lost his control and his self-faith!

Her eyes showed admiration luring him in,

did it reflect a belonging to him from within?

He needed to hold her face and tresses,

grazing her cheek and beholding her graces!

He made the promise to protect his Heera,

Never to let her suffer...was it a chimera?

He asked her to trust him over and over,

Pledge made, his jawline on her's went rover!

Finally he gave into his demanding desire,

to taste those lips that aroused his inner fire!

It was heaven when he first pressed a kiss,

He felt in paradise enveloped in a bliss!

He lingered more in his first act of passion,

He wanted to continue in that fashion!

But he wanted a peek to see how she felt,

He saw more tears and his heart then melt.

After the passionate stupor, mistrust grew,

reality dawned, her heart leapt and she knew,

What will happen to her heart? Her feelings?

Will she be shattered with Ustaad's dealings?

The mistrust and doubts crept crawling back,

half-hearted words uttered! He was taken aback!

She wanted to clarify but could not do so!

He cleared his point of view feeling very low!

He freed her from the marital corporal ties,

But she could not tell him where her heart lies!

He knew she was not wrong to think of him so,

He has not been a true soul from the get-go!

Quickly he forgave her, letting go of his ire,

He can't remain angry on her, even if he so desire!

He pledged not to be carried away again,

by temptations, till her trust is regained.

When she accepts her marriage and him,

he will fancy in his desire and his whim!

Till then he sets his way apart from her,

the third point was to be away and afar!

On business, he leaves her in pain and tears,

She longs, he longs but none of them hears!

After high comes the low, everyone knows,

Readers are floating on air and it shows!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Now back to

😆

Srange.. I thought I'll get tomato men after the misunderstanding 😆

... never expected, I'd so many dreamy Pandas instead...

Waise... Kookie... took you back to your stream-side rendezvous, kyaa?😆

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

My dear emotion queen lashy, no one can describe the emotions of the characters like the way you do. Time and again i have always said that we can always expect the unexpected from you, and again with this chapter you did the same. I had expected some sweet moments between sahib and sahiba, but not that kiss. Also found the way heera's mind was wavering from one thought to another very funny. And the way sahib was trying to supress his smile. I was through out imagining parijats expression in this situation😳.

And regarding the msg in the upcoming chapter, mahendars thought came into my mind, but as usual i know you might have thought something else😆.

Thank you for some beautiful moments between our lovely couple, this will keep them restless during the brief seperation(hope so).

Will desperately wait for next chapter

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: harshu27
On an impulse, his palm then slid from the sides of her face to sink itself into the thick loose tresses, as though punishing them for having toyed with him so long. And from there, his fingers traced their way back, towards the soft nape of her neck. Never had he laid his hands upon anything so delicate, so silken, in his life before. 'I'll...' he spoke quietly near her ears as he cradled her neck, his body having reached a point from where there was no easy return 'I'll protect you... never let you suffer... trust me, Heera'

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Slightly different... but... still as '☺️'

Originally posted by: harshu27
Enticed by the fresh feverishness in her breath warming his features, he unleashed a few of the rising urges by resting his forehead against hers 'Heera... I...'

This was the BEST... PERFECT... her expressions and especially his!

Originally posted by: harshu27
Slapping the mud off his hands, Akbar stood up, running a palm through his hair in silent frustration twice.

Hee hee... Poor AMK!❤️

Waise Harshu what did you do for your special day yesterday?

🤗

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: lashy

☺️

Slightly different... but... still as '☺️'

This was the BEST... PERFECT... her expressions and especially his!

Hee hee... Poor AMK!❤️

Waise Harshu what did you do for your special day yesterday?
🤗

🤗yest nothing much just d rains poured water on my plans😆had cousin at my place and we decided to go fr hangout but dn whole day der were no rains and aftr she arrived it strtd pouring so heavily wid strong winds and alll dt all d plans failed😳and we had to sit at home do chit chatting and all😆

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