NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th - Page 7

Originally posted by: melovesja

Two hours journey was to say everything without word and a say of absulate care and the planning no less .

So you liked what AMK wanted to 'show' Heera?

Showing different side of each other was excellent but in all small para of choking was par excellence of writing 👏

Really da? You liked the way the choking part had been written so much?

it was showing up most care, spot on thinking, one moment eyes got moist as she got relief and other moment butterflies in stomach and next moment smile on lips as their emotions flow boundless.

Aww thanks

Feeling of their intimacy and hinding of it and surfing of not so farm surity.

☺️

Perfect reading of everything of her then also a momentary wave of beat hurt. And most beautiful thing was to let go it with as a learning lesson.

Yes... he realised she wasn't ready and he wasn't going to take the first step again... 😒 yes... he's a little hurt too...

and she's in turmoil too!

How beautifully wrote the scan of their carried away in all this confusion of feelings of Heera and his remembered of how he took time was ⭐️

He took time☺️ you mean for the kiss? Yes they both got carried away...

and the last part of realisation of what she gifted with was heart touching. ❤️

She already wishes he didn't have to go... like when you have a small tiff with a good friend and they've left without having matters sorted out... you know the sinking feeling...

I like the attitude of shahib and move is👏🤗

🤗 thanks so so so much da

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

Lashy - a Superb update ! The element water seems to bind the leads from the very beggining. Starting when water was traded for 4 Dhams , to their encounters in the Canal & the tears she shed & gave away the clue. Now in showing the plan of building a canal to get water to the folks & then sharing the water bottle leads to a brief but sweet interlude. While the folks of Parnargah watch for the rains to come down we will eagerly wait & watch for the next chapter !!!

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Right.. On second thought I had Bansi kaka and edited my post.. you caught me off guard by quoting it 😆

Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

Lashy di, what do I say? Except that this is UNDOUBTEDLY the best chapter for me. I loved it.

Oh my God... I was wondering if the readers weren't going to like it very much... thank you so much for putting me out of my misery!

🤗

Correct me, if I'm wrong, but I think that one of the very first emotion khan sahib felt for her was protectiveness. He is always so protective of her.

That is EXACTLY the first feeling he had for her... he was meant to spy on her... instead, he started feeling protective of her! Ever since their canal encounter...

Where is AMK is going? Going for business as a horse trader or as ustaad?

Hmmm wait and watch!😈

I could not help but remember, one of my most favourite song as the chapter ended and as khan sahib was going away.

Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho

Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho.

the pangs of separation!

I also got it,why last chapter was short and why that tantalising teaser could not be included in the last chapter. it was worth the wait. Take care and rest well.🤗

hayooo last chapter wasn't short 😆

Oh yes.. it would've gone on and on...

that's why it became 2 chapters😳

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

LASHY, OH MY GOD

WHAT THE HELL SHOULD I SAY ABOUT THIS UPDATE 😳

TWO THINGS

🤗

AND

❤️

Really? Thank you so so so so much!🤗

I AM REELING UNDER THE AFTER EFFECTS 😆😉

Hee hee... ☺️

THANKS FOR THE AWESOME UPDATE 👏

I am so glad you liked it... I had serious doubts... I started editing it yesterday morning at 8 am... almost posted it at 1 am last night.. again had doubts and was editing between 1 to 2... 😕

AND LANA I LOVED YOUR TAKE. IT WAS JUST WHAT I WANTED TO WRITE, JUST WORDED MUCH BETTER 👏

she's amazing!

YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY RIGHT WHEN YOU SAY THAT AS READERS WE CAN FEEL EACH URGE, EACH DESIRE, EACH LONGING!!! UFFF

☺️ Wishing we were back in college...

LEAVING YOU ALL WITH A COUPLET THAT SUITS THE SCENE, THE LEADS, AND US

WO ANJAANA SA WAQT THHA

TUMHARE MERE DARMIYAAN

BANA THA IK PAL KE LIYE SOCH KAR...

PALKEIN KYUN NUM HUIN

SAANSEIN KYUN THAM GAYEEN

( LOOSELY TRANSLATED - THAT WAS AN UNKNOWN TIME THAT WE SHARED. IT WAS BUT MADE FOR A MOMENT. WONDER WHAT GOT THE EYES TO MIST AND THE BREATHING TO HALT)

>>>>>

Thank you so so so much dearie... thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: lghosh

OMG Lavanya, you love Yanni too! 😲 I do too and I saw him here in Rockefeller Center in NYC performing on a blend of instruments that created magic! I agree our author Sahiba is no less a magician to blend in several emotions to amalgamate into a fine surreal feeling of love, passion and desire!!

And today author Sahiba's book cover in her siggie does complete justice! Look at the posture of the two and this is what it represents! He leans and she faces up!!

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

My state now!!

Body!!

Mind!!