In the Vale of a Myriad Flowers: A FF (On Hold)

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

My comments are in bold.

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Shailu di,(hope you don't mind the way of addressing!)

My pleasure!

You have an awesome style of narration..it kept me hooked till the end and I wanted to read more..👏👏

Thank you.

I'm glad you've chosen this issue as the story line..it's heart wrenching to read the plight of innocent people and also invokes great loathing for the religious fanatics!

I am happy the theme appealed to you.

The characters of lil Jo and Jalal are opposite to what we were shown in the show.Here,it's Jo who experienced the worse at a tender age and has turned bitter.She can't trust people easily now.Whereas Jalal is the cheerful guy with lots of love for humans and other species..interesting!😃

Yes, it will be a role reversal from the show.

Looking forward for the next chapter and thanks for the PM!🤗

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Sorry for the late reply

Thank you Kavya.

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Avantika1115
It was nice!1 I loved The Jodha and jalal here.
Sister was helpless as she cannot explain the jodha the problem.
Jodha is too little to see this

Yes, Jodha is too young to understand the harsh reality but she has actually seen it.

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: rajatshweta
Hmmm... Role Reversal of Akbar and Jodha, unlike the show !
Here, Akbar is soft, helpful, playful and fun loving.
And Jodha is facing all hardships in life at a very young age.
Interesting start. Let's see how these two turn out in their future.

Yes, it is a role reversal from the original show. Both of them will become friends now. Thank you for responding Sangeeta.

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: duhasaad
This is awesome
I liked the idea so much
Jodha is an refugee in Hamida bano place
She is also suffering because she is scared
She is orphanage as well
Poor child
Jalal is a pure soul who likes to save others
Precap is interesting
The first met of them
Continue soon dear

I am glad you liked the idea and concept of this FF. Thank for this beautiful response.

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Just reading the news clippings about the atrocities happening in Kashmir was very disturbing -can't imagine the sufferings of the people who lived though it. 😭

What a contrast - a little girl who has withdrawn from the world after a traumatizing experience and a little boy who is so carefree and living life to its fullest. 😃

A gripping first chapter, an endearing precap. 👏

Thank you Shailaja for this FF and hugs also for the translated parts since I don't know Hindi (except for a smattering of it ). 🤗

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Amazing plot
Whatever Jo saw in such a small age will break even the mature
It will take time for her to live back again
Ja is very kind
Waiting for the first interaction between Jo and ja
continue soon and thanks for pm

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
Just reading the news clippings about the atrocities happening in Kashmir was very disturbing -can't imagine the sufferings of the people who lived though it. 😭

What a contrast - a little girl who has withdrawn from the world after a traumatizing experience and a little boy who is so carefree and living life to its fullest. 😃

A gripping first chapter, an endearing precap. 👏

Thank you Shailaja for this FF and hugs also for the translated parts since I don't know Hindi (except for a smattering of it ). 🤗

Yes, the kind of incidents I read while reading the background for this FF were literally regurgitating at many points. It is really difficult to imagine what they must have felt to leave their ancestral homes for generations together at one stroke like that. Their world must have turned upside down.

Jo-Ja will go on to transform this world by their positive and constructive actions. But all that will come gradually. It is my personal opinion that if there is an antidote to hatred and terror, it is only love, love for yourself, love for humanity, love for your own, love for those who are not your own, a love which includes everyone in this wide universe.

Only such love can heal the world. Problems will be there but such love shows the path and gives the solutions to these problems. So that is my overall vision for the kind of love Akdha will have for each other and how they will change the little world around them.

I usually translate dialogues because not everyone understands Hindi well. For that matter, when I have to write dialogues in Hindi, I too keep searching for my words.

Thank you for that long and beautiful review. I loved reading it.

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Well it's such an amazing start and intriguing as well. 👏 And a kudos to Poem.

Totally withdrawn Jodha and totally Carefree careful Jalal with the background of not so peaceful Kashmir. I hope Jalal can take her out and show still there's something that beautiful and peace about this world. 😳 I don't know why I'm feeling bad for Jaimal. 😕 Let's wait and see.

BTW thanks for translation. 🤗

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993
Amazing plot
Whatever Jo saw in such a small age will break even the mature
It will take time for her to live back again
Ja is very kind
Waiting for the first interaction between Jo and ja
continue soon and thanks for pm

Yes, very true. What Jodha saw at that age is enough even to break the old and matured. Jalal will bring back a semblance of normality in Jodha's disrupted life. Thank you for sharing what you felt about the story.

Edited by shailusri1983 - 8 years ago