Wonderful update, di!👏 Loved the conversation between Jaimal and Jalal. I don't know how well our lil Jalal can understand what his Mamu said but it felt good reading it!
Your description of the group of men was fantastic. I could imagine everything!I felt Jalal is too mature for his age. But Jo-Ja part shows he's still a child and it's natural for them to make mistakes! Jodha's innocence is portrayed brilliantly with one question!Looking forward to the next part. Thanks for the PM! 😊
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