NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 27~CHAPTER 32 -upd 20 APR - Page 74

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu.


Lashy di, thanks for the explanation!🤗 Shows how involved and dedicated you are to the story,Writer-e-Khaas!⭐️

Though you are physically present here,I think your mind is always in the 17th century imagining the life at that time!



@ Underlined - Which is Mr.Lashy's biggest complaint!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago


Originally posted by: karkuzhali




Chapter 32.

Image result for painting of a rajasthani princess on the balcony


Gosh we've missed this... haven't we?
Beautiful picture of ponnu maapillai!

The Story so far...

Three cheers to the author who is a clever weaver
And has woven the silk for the consumer's pleasure..
She has made ready the silk to be sent to the showroom
Ready for purchase to make the garment for the bridegroom
I wove AMK's silk ☺️ but I love the way you've connected the two
But the effort that went before the final product was made
She has explained in the role that the fate had played
The danger "She" had to face on her way back
And "His" deal with the Shezaadi without any crack...
Yes... through the speech!

Flashback takes us to the plight of the poor heiress
Who was confronted by the general so very heartless
Flashback takes us to His tactful agreement with the prince
Who exchanged the faarman for Mansabdar without a wince
His desire to protect Parnagarh and her people together
Was foremost in his mind when he went in search of her
He never wasted a moment to reach her in time
With his men and horses that prevented the imminent crime
Periyamma covered all the chapters she's missed through the flashback.. what a novel way of doing it!👏
Flashback tells us about his revelation to her
The "Ustaad", whom she couldn't connect with the trader,
The one who came for her help as a stranger
He on the other hand tried to convince her
That to protect Parnagarh , he, the Mansabdar, should marry her..
The poor girl had to face the double shock
Since the proposal was purely like a business talk.
She had to yield for the sake of her people
Though she felt as though she was climbing a steep hill..

This whole para is amazing!!! It's come out extremely well...

Today she reaches her Haveli and meets her folk
Waiting to see what her announcement will evoke
Look at the way she puts forth the proposal without any effort
"He provides the protection, while I provide the support.."
In his mind he appreciates the diplomacy of her speech
Her promise to her people he could never think to breach
Seemed to him that the people have accepted a Mughal
To safeguard their lives , without much hurdle
👏 Masterpiece!

The Great event is fixed just a week hence
The author describes how all the arrangements commence
While her heart is still heavy with the turn of events
He is worried about his commitments and becomes tense
She wants to be alone in her jiji's room
To have a heart to heart talk with her all alone
He thinks about his Sahiba and understands her sorrow
Whether he could rectify the reality after tomorrow...
>>>
😭
What is in store for our leads in the future
We readers can guess with our imaginations not fewer
But it is the author who raises our heartbeats so high
And brings it down with the solution that we always enjoy
Her style of presentation gets polished in each chapter
The proof is seen in the comments posted thereafter
We are lucky to be part of the HBAS family, I can say
Our Best Wishes to her is the most we could convey!
Ok for reasons that are not hidden... this is my favouritest... can I give you a mega-chella hug, Periyamma...🤗
Love love love this and love you



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Beautiful review diya 😳
I totally agree with you about khan sahib and kal di
Yup one day everyone agree khan sahib is best for heera
And kal di is something else altogether after all
Most positive and cheerful person
Who can make her surrounding cheerful with her presence only 😳

Khan Sahib and Me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
🤗
Yes dream land I'm already in.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali




Chapter 32.

Image result for painting of a rajasthani princess on the balcony


The Story so far...

Three cheers to the author who is a clever weaver
And has woven the silk for the consumer's pleasure..
She has made ready the silk to be sent to the showroom
Ready for purchase to make the garment for the bridegroom
But the effort that went before the final product was made
She has explained in the role that the fate had played
The danger "She" had to face on her way back
And "His" deal with the Shezaadi without any crack...

Flashback takes us to the plight of the poor heiress
Who was confronted by the general so very heartless
Flashback takes us to His tactful agreement with the prince
Who exchanged the faarman for Mansabdar without a wince
His desire to protect Parnagarh and her people together
Was foremost in his mind when he went in search of her
He never wasted a moment to reach her in time
With his men and horses that prevented the imminent crime

Flashback tells us also about his revelation to her ...

The "Ustaad", whom she couldn't connect with the trader,
The one who came for her help as a stranger
He on the other hand tried to convince her
That to protect Parnagarh , he, the Mansabdar, should marry her..
The poor girl had to face the double shock
Since the proposal was purely like a business talk.
She had to yield for the sake of her people
Though she felt as though she was climbing a steep hill..
...

Today she reaches her Haveli and meets her folk
Waiting to see what her announcement will evoke
Look at the way she puts forth the proposal without any effort
"He provides the protection, while I provide the support.."
In his mind he appreciates the diplomacy of her speech
Her promise to her people he could never think to breach
Seemed to him that the people have accepted a Mughal
To safeguard their lives , without much hurdle

The Great event is fixed just a week hence
The author describes how all the arrangements commence
While her heart is still heavy with the turn of events
He is worried about his commitments and becomes tense
She wants to be alone in her jiji's room
To have a heart to heart talk with her all alone
He thinks about his Sahiba and understands her sorrow
Whether he could rectify the reality after tomorrow...

What is in store for our leads in the future
We readers can guess with our imaginations not fewer
But it is the author who raises our heartbeats so high
And brings it down with the solution that we always enjoy
Her style of presentation gets polished in each chapter
The proof is seen in the comments posted thereafter
We are lucky to be part of the HBAS family, I can say
Our Best Wishes to her is the most we could convey!
>>>👍🏼👍🏼

Karkuzhali.
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Don't for how long we have waited for this... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Thank you so so much, Patti 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Exactly... Shruthi has been up to hanky panky.. which is why Azeez hasn't even resurfaced once during the wedding arrangements😆

You're asking me?! 😲
I would never ever meet Azeez without your all permissions, after all you are my elder sisters... I am very sanskari that way, you see😳



Harshu di... Waise hi my grinning mode is on after update and your musings are not helpful at all 😈... they are❤️

Thank you Bindup, Mitu di 🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Good evening, dearest Periyamma! 🤗

Good afternoon lovely Sahibas - Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi, Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Sherry, Vrinda, Ashu, Shivangi, Diya, Anusha, Divya,Lana, Anindita and 6Bs! 🤗

Good morning, sweet Lashy Sahiba! 🤗

Straight to the update and 17 pages ( soon to increase ) of homework to complete. 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


Good evening, dearest Periyamma! 🤗

Good afternoon lovely Sahibas - Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi, Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Sherry, Vrinda, Ashu, Shivangi, Diya, Anusha, Divya,Lana, Anindita and 6Bs! 🤗

Good morning, sweet Lashy Sahiba! 🤗

Straight to the update and 17 pages ( soon to increase ) of homework to complete. 😃


Good afternoon rose 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


Good evening, dearest Periyamma! 🤗

Good afternoon lovely Sahibas - Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi, Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Sherry, Vrinda, Ashu, Shivangi, Diya, Anusha, Divya,Lana, Anindita and 6Bs! 🤗

Good morning, sweet Lashy Sahiba! 🤗

Straight to the update and 17 pages ( soon to increase ) of homework to complete. 😃

😆

Good evening, Rose!😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivangi28


For me its on- time only 😆 Otherwise like always..I used to keep waiting for the PM and would appear after 2-3 days in search of the update and realize that ...update nahi..hum late the !😕 😆
GOOD NIGHT AKKA as Hamari toh ALMOST AMAZING NIGHT HO GAYI AFTER READING IT. 🤗


Awww thank you...
🤗

And how come you're late... don't you get notification on FB... because I put it up there?
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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