NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 27~CHAPTER 32 -upd 20 APR

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1471

Originally posted by: SomeoneloveJA
Amazing chapter dear.

thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
DI!
First of all a very very very biiiggg apology to you for being so late. The burden of assignment had got on head, and besides something happened which often keeps my mood off, so did not post my comment. 😔 I know this is too late, and again I am very sorry...
Oh dear.. hope our lovely Stuti's mood is better now..
it's not late dear.. it's just fine 🤗

Coming to the chapter, it was a very soothing and decent chapter. With the starting of the 3rd part, we have the most auspicious point of the whole novel, that is the marriage ceremony of our dreamy couples...
Soothing, she says!

But the situation is not so dreamy, and the relationship status of Heera and Akbar is tremendously complex than anything...

Exactly!

And also the small sketch of Parnagarh that you've drawn after marriage announcement is very interesting one to read.
Thanks da😳

The entry of Heera in the fort was simple, but so heart-touching... Loved how you played with the adjectives 'good' and 'unpleasant' at the same time. The description of that scene, followed by the whole conversation with her men is so realistic that I can see everything in front of eyes and also Heera's unsaid feelings are not hidden from us.
Thank you so much for noticing these small details, dear 🤗

I liked our blabber-mouthed Bindiya's small presence here which conveyed a lot in this scene. 😳
😆

The whole announcement part was great!👏 And I am also awed with Heera's dignity and skill of addressing publicly like Khan Sahib; Her commendable talent in diplomacy is so well explained in a simple speech. 👏⭐️
That part struck a chord with a few readers and I am glad..
it was tough to plan that speech

The glimpses of the bride and the groom was soothing, and I can't wait to see how their relationship evolves from this current status. Liked the hearty conversation between Akbar and the older guardians of Heera, and again in this chapter Gauri shines as a perfect friend of Heera...
🤗 thank you so so so much darling ...thanks a lot!

Waiting for the marriage ceremony like everyone.. Update soon. 😃😃

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1472

Chapter 32
It's fantastic
Finally heera back to her people her land her Home but nothing changes came too with her
Finally she made the announcement but as sahib said speech was in favour if sahib showing her hearty consent to marriage but alas not all agree with her this decision
Sahibs no to heeras father chamber was relief for heera after so much agony and his not visiting to jijus chamber was another relief but neither these acts of sahib help him in making his place in her heart again
Poor both suffering sahib choosed not so lavish chamber expected from him
Finally got Wedding day about to came but both condition was from would be bride and groom
Both only pretending more over like heera feared people divided into two
Neither of them wants to participate in celebration but had to smile
Hope betterment begins soon want to see happiness

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sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1473

Originally posted by: sho123
Chapter 32
It's fantastic
Finally heera back to her people her land her Home but nothing changes came too with her
Finally she made the announcement but as sahib said speech was in favour if sahib showing her hearty consent to marriage but alas not all agree with her this decision
Sahibs no to heeras father chamber was relief for heera after so much agony and his not visiting to jijus chamber was another relief but neither these acts of sahib help him in making his place in her heart again
Poor both suffering sahib choosed not so lavish chamber expected from him
Finally got Wedding day about to came but both condition was from would be bride and groom
Both only pretending more over like heera feared people divided into two
Neither of them wants to participate in celebration but had to smile
Hope betterment begins soon want to see happiness

thank you di
Love you

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1474

Originally posted by: sho123
Chapter 32
It's fantastic
Finally heera back to her people her land her Home but nothing changes came too with her
Finally she made the announcement but as sahib said speech was in favour if sahib showing her hearty consent to marriage but alas not all agree with her this decision
Sahibs no to heeras father chamber was relief for heera after so much agony and his not visiting to jijus chamber was another relief but neither these acts of sahib help him in making his place in her heart again
Poor both suffering sahib choosed not so lavish chamber expected from him
Finally got Wedding day about to came but both condition was from would be bride and groom
Both only pretending more over like heera feared people divided into two
Neither of them wants to participate in celebration but had to smile
Hope betterment begins soon want to see happiness

thank you di
Love you 😊