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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Point no 1: It's not a chapter. The main story has not started yet. 😆

Point no 2: Yeh "Wonderfully written/ update soon" se kaam nehi chalega. 😆 I need proper views about the every updates particularly in this story. 😛

😲

You've become so strict 😔

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Very interesting start,Stuti! But please put up a list of all the characters..it's lil difficult to remember the relations,for me!😆

So our Jo is a criminal lawyer and Jalal is in intelligence department and both of them together are gonna solve the riddle of death!😉

Your description of Jalal..OMG,such a lengthy and detailed one it is!😆 For me too,Dadi is the favorite character of this family!

And I have a question..why do you love to kill Sujamal always..?😭😆

Continue sooon pls..😳

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: lashy

😲

You've become so strict 😔

Yes..😲

Thank God,I gave lil detailed comment!_/\_

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Awesome nd interesting update dear
Plz continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Thank God,I gave lil detailed comment!_/\_

🤣

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Please put up a list of all the characters..it's lil difficult to remember the relations,for me!😆

Stuti bitiya... if Bond ka haalat ye hai... then I'll need a proper family tree... which I can look at, every time... I'm sure you understand why 😆

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Hermione Granger

@misspotter

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

intrsting start dear..
luv all ur writings..
update nxt part soon
nd thnx for pm

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Awesome story dear

You must continue it😊

Will read chap 1 soon

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Awesome story dear
You must continue it😊
Will read chap 1 soon

Thanks for the pm n sorry for the late reply

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Super duper introduction. I can imagine what the real story would be. You have a huge responsibility now, coz intro is mindblowing. each and every character is superb, especially ja and jo😳

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