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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: lashy

😲

Waise Bond and I are safe... we never give 1 word comment.. hai na, Bond? 😆

Haan di.. but we should proof read our comments before posting. Say Stuti posted a teaser and we say 'interesting update' by mistake..she'll scold us for that too! 😆

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Sayantoni Basu

@sayantonibasu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Like of ur other story, this one also started wonderfully.. the description of home architecture was awesome.. jalal & jodha's professions r interesting.. the disclosure of each character also becoming suspecious.. but I could not understant that why u named this story " the riddle of death" ?? what is the connection of death here?? The name itself is a riddle😉.. continue soon... we r waiting to get update soon..

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Such an amazing start 👏

Woah! Jo dared to bring her 'muslim' boyfriend toh meet her orthodox family!!

Ooppss there's a cold war between jo and her father..

He accepted jalal without a fuss!! How is it possible?

There's surely something running in his cunning mind.

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Very interesting start,Stuti! But please put up a list of all the characters..it's lil difficult to remember the relations,for me!😆
thanks 😃 Yes, I too was thinking of putting the list of characters. As with the progress of the story a lot of new characters will be introduced and there is a chance that I myself will forget the relations. 🤣

So our Jo is a criminal lawyer and Jalal is in intelligence department and both of them together are gonna solve the riddle of death!😉

😃😉

Your description of Jalal..OMG,such a lengthy and detailed one it is!😆 For me too,Dadi is the favorite character of this family!

I think this one is the longest description of Jalal I have written ever in any of my stories. 😆 Yes, Dadi is my favourite too. 😉

And I have a question..why do you love to kill Sujamal always..?😭😆

🤣 🤣

Continue sooon pls..😳

I will. 😃

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: lashy

Stuti bitiya... if Bond ka haalat ye hai... then I'll need a proper family tree... which I can look at, every time... I'm sure you understand why 😆

Family tree! 😆

I will put a list of characters. 😳

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: haya_gorgeous
intrsting start dear..
luv all ur writings..
update nxt part soon
nd thnx for pm

Thanks. Stay tuned. 😉

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Awesome story dear
You must continue it😊
Will read chap 1 soon

Will be waiting for ur views. Thank you. 😊

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Super duper introduction. I can imagine what the real story would be. You have a huge responsibility now, coz intro is mindblowing. each and every character is superb, especially ja and jo😳

OMG! I am more nervous now. 😆 Thank you so much.😳😳😳 Glad to see that you liked the characters. 😃

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: sweety992
Woow police lawyer combination joja 😊
Supurb I love it 👏
Continue updating 😊
Jodha is too carefree brave the way she say we marry eachother ohu 😛 Jalal super man 😛
Thanku
Waiting for next chappy 😊

Wow! So happy to see your excited comment. 😃 Thank you so much. 😳